Delightful!! The story started with such a wonderful setting that I could visualize the things described. Very believable characters and a very diplomatic touch of reality to them. Almost complete story unfolded beautifully and created curiosity in the reader's mind about what possible end it could have.
I was little disappointed with the ending which I felt little premature, I was still thirsty for some more. However on the other hand, that's the strength of the story as well, being realistic.
Overall I loved the story and especially the artistic touch provided by the author was very commendable
I loved your story. When I started to read it, I was curious seeing that the character was a senior citizen. But as the story proceeded, I felt the same thrill in any teenage/village/traditional romance love story. It was timeless, just as love is. The feelings had remained the same,and so had the heart. And even though none of them said anything,we felt their words. And that final touch came with your poem, "Time and tide wait for none..." I always love poetry,I feel it has the power to describe more than a story does.And it was perfect! :) :D Great read and I hope you write another epic very soon! Good Luck! :)
I had that butterfly feeling in my stomach while reading it...specially the poem, it was lovely. I wished Sapna could stayed there with Aakash. Though i was curious to know how they broke up? For me it was beautiful and heartbreaking story..:)