Entwined

by Lily Black

ENTWINED a new Deviant Desires Novella is live!
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ABOUT THE BOOK:
I tried to resist her,
to refrain from giving in.
I know what we’re doing is wrong,
and she does too.
But the allure of the forbidden is so fucking sweet.
Then she was ripped from me,
Four years I’ve spent waiting.
Biding my time.
Because once I find her,
I’m never letting her go again.
Available ONLY in Eden Books and Payhip

Genres: Novella, Smut, Erotica, Short Stories

42 pages, ebook

Published June 1, 2023

Reviews

[Angel · Rating 4 out of 5]

It is actually more common than you would think, that twins become attracted to each other.
Other than being very graphic, this is actually an interesting read.

[thebeespot72 · Rating 4 out of 5]

Lily Black is a new author to me. I might have been perusing the Eden website and select "Entwined" based on the trigger warning. That's normal ."Entwined" is very taboo and not for everyone. Sin and Bella are twins who "get together" after being apart for several years. Bella first initiates it and then proceeds mutually. For "Entwined," being a taboo novella, it did have some substance. It had a plot. Sin and Bella held my interest. Their scenes together were hot. Now I'm off to get a few more Lily Black books!

[kaleigh · Rating 3 out of 5]

Virgin heroine
Hero didn’t seem like a virgin and he’s played around with two girls before (at 15) but that’s all I remember
Twins

[Lisa Erica · Rating 1 out of 5]

Can I just say… WTF? No offence to the author, I liked her writing. Everything flowed, made sense. BUT… Where was the build up? Where was the actual story?
It felt like I read 5 chapters and BAM!, it randomly ends? 🥴The start didn’t make sense. It starts with the main characters having sex. It’s all sex. Ended with sex. No talking, no story whatsoever.
It was okay, don’t get me wrong. I was expecting a story, some understanding, some feelings.
Could of been better with some story plot! Some drama, some emotion!

Oh… Another problem… In two chapters, two whole massive paragraphs got repeated! I was reading… then I was reading the same thing over again. I thought I accidentally went back on a page. Nope. It repeated itself.
All in all… This book taken me about 30 minutes to read, start to finish with no breaks.
Was it worth the read? Nope. Sorry.
Would I read from the author again? Yes if the book was more than 5 chapters? 😂
1/5 stars ⭐️ 👎🏼

[♥ I’d Rather Be Reading ♥ · Rating 3 out of 5]

- FMC: Bella
- MMC: Sin
- POVs Included: Dual POVs (Bella, Sin)

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SUMMARY: (SPOILER WARNING)

Four years ago Bella's twin brother, Sin, was put in prison after their parents caught them having sex. Now he is out and he can't stay away. And Bella doesn't want him to. She has missed him like crazy.

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REVIEW:

Another taboo quickie by this new-to-me author. I liked it, but not quite as much as Illicit Ties.

Despite loving the taboo genre, I'm not a big fan of the fact that they got caught and he went to prison for it. Kind of puts a damper on things. I'm also a little confused about why he went to prison. Was it because of being caught or the car accident with their dad? It didn't seem like his parents were going to turn him in -- just kick him out -- so I don't understand that.

Still, the steam was hot and I liked the twins aspect. You don't see that very much with bro/sis taboo romance and it's actually my favorite taboo to read. So I liked that.

I liked the flashbacks as well so we could simultaneously see how things first happened and how they are together now.

I didn't like the ending, which seemed unfinished. How can they be together if he has to check in with his parole officer and such? I don't know. I would've liked an epilogue or something.

Overall it was a hot and steamy taboo quickie. I didn't love the getting caught stuff, but it was still hot and I liked them together.

[Jaci · Rating 4 out of 5]

How beautiful the love between brothers is! I really liked the book, despite the paragraph repetitions (I thought the problem was in my version). Usually, these short books don't go very deep into developing a story, but I liked to see that they were discovered, he was arrested, his father died... I found the hot scenes between them a bit rushed, however. It could’ve had fewer scenes with more details than 478 sex scenes that ended in less than four paragraphs.

[Nadia · Rating 3 out of 5]

twins
therefore, full blooded
fmc is a virgin
obsessed with each other
consensual abduction?
restraints
touch n' unalive
mmc went to prison
mmc has tattoos
fisting
9 incher
overstimulation
parents' bed

there's errors included in my copy from eden books (repetition of whole paragraphs, typos). not sure if it's the case with other copies.

[BRI · Rating 4 out of 5]

Love the tabooness if that’s a word but idk if I got a copy that had certain parts repeat it kinda got annoying for a bit there. Butttt other than that it was a great story and definitely something I haven’t ever read before.

[April · Rating 4 out of 5]

Would have been 5 stars but the constant errors in the book dulled the experience. But overall I did enjoy.

[Kim B · Rating 4 out of 5]

Blood related brother and sister. There is a lot going on in this one including death, prison, kidnapping and more. Truly a solid plot with your spice in this one.

[Nerina Belen · Rating 4 out of 5]

Buena historia muy bien narrada

[Ash · Rating 2 out of 5]

I wanted to like this but the pacing was horrible, the setups make no sense ie he would take his boxers off but then she would take his boxers off? Black, PLEASE get a proofreader for your work!

[sabrina grosso]

Descubriendo autoras, por lo menos tiene un poco de historia.

[María · Rating 4 out of 5]

Tabú PERO la trama y descripción de los sentimientos de los personajes te provocan empatía al amor, dolor y terror ala realidad .

[The Bodacious Bibliophile · Rating 4 out of 5]

Actually, pretty good and hot too

[Mojo_Mama · Rating 1 out of 5]

Don’t worry. I’m side eyeing myself.

👀👀👀👀👀👀

No plot…just yeah.

[Emily Zipper · Rating 2 out of 5]

i think i just read books like this because they are so funny and ridiculous to me. this is pure smut with zero plot.. just two freaky ass bitches getting it on.

[Valentina · Rating 3 out of 5]

2,5⭐️
Cochino, no esperaba que él estuviera medio loquito, pero normal para un libro taboo

[Maky Irigoyen · Rating 2 out of 5]

Hot? Yes. Would read it again? Nah.

[Regina Lopez · Rating 5 out of 5]

Peligroso.
O mejor dicho, las advertencias superan el libro