This one, provided by netgalley was really difficult for me to review. There were parts of it that I really enjoyed, but there were also parts of it that made me struggle to finish it. Having said that, I'm really glad I did finish it.
So, what did I like?
- The writing, although a bit raw at times, needing a bit more polish, has a wittiness and freshness that I really liked. I liked how the author managed to convey not only how irrational emotions are, but also how people are perfectly aware of how irrational their emotions are. I also liked how the author isn't afraid to show that friends sometimes fall out, and even sometimes can hate each other with a vengeance (something which HRs are never very good at IMO, almost as though HR readers are incapable of reading a book set anywhere other than paradise). Also, the author doesn't overdo the wit and inadvertently turn the whole story into mush, or use pointless, fluffy banter.
- I also absolutely loved the basic premise of this story. A woman wants to retain her independence, pursue her dreams and absolutely does not want to get married. I was completely sucked into the injustice of the situation the heroine finds herself in - indeed, I think I was more pissed than she was... It's incredibly rare for an HR to really grapple with this subject in a remotely convincing way.
So, what didn't I like so much?
- I had a real problem with the heroine. She appears to have a backbone of steel, but at every step seems to just cave and do a pretty good impression of a doormat. It was actually extremely painful to read how she was such a shallow individual that with one glare at her boobs from the hero, but she basically forgot her name, her dreams, and indeed, her entire personality. It was cringeworthy. I wanted a spitfire! I wanted a heroine who was so angry at being trapped, that she was willing to shag her husbands brothers, all at once, or at least threaten to, to get out of a ridiculous marriage! I wanted a woman who had no problem walking out on her husband for being such a turd (see next), and could show him the bird on the way out the door! Alas, she was none of these things...
- I also had a real problem with the hero, although I do realize that he's supposed to be a complete prat, but I would have preferred him not to be on the Idiotic Oaf side and rather on the Intelligent But Arrogant Jerk side. Just personal preference I guess, but there were several times when I really felt that if the heroine wasn't doing to inflict bodily harm on him, then I'd do her a favor and beat him to a pulp with my kindle..
- There is a whole cast of secondary characters for whom I didn't care. They occupy far too much space in the book, spend the whole time treating the heroine like a cretin and have the most irritating names (Elllie, Mellie, Maddy...) I never like Peter or Penelope Perfects in my romances, and here there is a whole flock of them, and, worse still, they discuss subjects which I struggle to believe women would have discussed with anyone (I certainly wouldn't, and I obviously don't live in the considerably more straightlaced Regency period). They just felt unnecessary.
So, this book had some flaws, but I did like the basic premise and the writing in the last 15% of the story went a long way to redeeming it IMO. I'll probably wait to see other reviews before I decide to read the others in the series (it's not necessary to read the first book in the series BTW, which I do appreciate), but I'll certainly keep my eyes on this author.