Stranger Delight

by Tabitha Levin

Claire moved to the side of the house, watching her best friend Samantha make love to her boyfriend. Mesmerized by the scene, she didn't notice the stranger behind her.

When he began to caress and fondle her, she didn't ask him to stop, in fact she begged him for more.

After having the most intense sex she ever had, she turned to find the stranger gone.

Who was he? Would she ever see him again? And why did she feel so guilty?

Genres: Romance, Erotica, Short Stories, Smut, Adult, Friends To Lovers, Ebooks

18 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 31, 2011

Reviews

[Bea · Rating 3 out of 5]

Well, it needed a copy editor, but the story was okay. I was expecting steamier sex scenes but what we got was decent. The story could have used more fleshing out, even with it's short length. I didn't feel like I knew Luke or Claire. In fact, not five minutes after finishing the story I'd already forgotten Claire's name and had to look it up. I got it for free, and that's what it was worth.

[Dragana · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars - I even contemplated giving it 4, but it wasn't that good...

Another Kindle freebie. I was attracted by a description of this short story. I was wondering what more can happen since story is just 15 pages long, and I can tell you - a lot. There is a lot of action, events and development packed into this. It missed that special something to make me really feel chemistry between main characters, but as far as erotic short stories go, this is one of the better ones I read.

[Milena · Rating 3 out of 5]

Like many other short stories in this category, this was another fast and sexy read. I wouldn't go as far as saying it was "romantic" but i can't classify the character's actions as "rape" either like other reviewers have said. For it to be rape, the female character would have had put up some kind of a struggle and be non responsive - which as turned out was quite the opposite. I like it that the author created a mysterious scenario and the story flowed well.

[Kathryn Parry · Rating 3 out of 5]

It started out great but was a little dull in the middle. It was still a good read and I would be happy to read more from this author. A little predictable but I found no problems with the writing. I'm not bothered by correct grammar as long as it reads well and this does. Maybe a good beta reader could offer some ideas to liven up the middle because I think there is a good potential in the story

[Amanda · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was short and to the point....the story started out hot, and ended hot. Though I though Joel was a pansy ass for slapping a girl. Someone should have bitch slapped him for that one.
Other than that I enjoyed reading this.

[Sónia Tigol · Rating 3 out of 5]

This story like many other short stories in this category, was a fast and sexy read. It was only 15 pages but it had a pretty good plot. It would have been nice to have a little more backstory on Luke and Claire but over all a good read.

[Tina · Rating 3 out of 5]

Very short erotic story. It was only 15 pages but it had a pretty good plot. I would read more from this author.

[Shelly · Rating 3 out of 5]

I actually did not think this was hot, too quick, but I liked the plot. A bit short.

[Jill · Rating 3 out of 5]

A very sexy quick read!

[Imane Belcaid tang · Rating 3 out of 5]

The book was mkay..! Nothing more or less

[Laura · Rating 3 out of 5]

It was a good short read!!!

[Patty Presley · Rating 4 out of 5]

I obviously read this, but it was a while ago, and I don't really remember reading it. I am only giving it a 4 because I can't remember it, but if I'd not liked it, I wouldn't have finished it.

[Dre · Rating 2 out of 5]

This shirt story just didn't work for me. I knew who it was from page 1, and I didn't understand why Sam told Luke that Claire was dating the actor. They had one date... does that mean they are dating?! The people in this story seemed very immature, and while I enjoy drama in my fiction the drama these characters created was ridiculous. Glad it was free and only a couple if pages; otherwise, it would have ended up on my DNF shelf.

[Angel **Book Junkie** · Rating 2 out of 5]

I think I am finally figuring this out....
When an author writes a short story they leave out any and all back story.

Why? Why not write a longer story and give the readers everything then have someone walk away wondering what the heck they just read. This book was good and I felt like I was going to like it in the beginning it fizzled and all I remembered was the first scene with the stranger. I have already forgotten the rest of the story.

[T.M. Williams · Rating 1 out of 5]

I feel like the person who wrote this (I don't even want to use the word author) did it on her lunch break out of boredom and decided to publish it on Amazon and her only experience is writing emails prior. It was awful. I get that erotica is about the sex... but I'm pretty sure the first scene was the only thing she had in mind and didnt' know what to do with the rest of the story so threw something together. Read the blurb, that's pretty much it.

[Melissa · Rating 2 out of 5]

Not great...extremely short read about a girl who lets some stranger have sex with her while she's watching her best friends get it on in their bedroom. Kinda creepy...I mean, who does that? She doesn't even turn around to see who she just had sex with...OUTSIDE! Outrageously rediculous.

[**Danielle** Kindle Lover · Rating 3 out of 5]

Interesting short story.

[Djg · Rating 3 out of 5]

Stranger Delight by Tabitha Levin

It was very short and it would have been nice to have a little more backstory on Luke and Claire but over all a good quick read.

[Clarke · Rating 2 out of 5]

Sexy short story. Would have been better without the drama btw. Didn't much care for the writing but interesting concept.

[Gerri · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short n hot.

[Heather · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was okay. It was predictable, but that is a hallmark of a so-so short story.

[Shiela · Rating 2 out of 5]

Not really into short stories.

[Marye · Rating 1 out of 5]

Freebies from Amazon are a hit & miss. This one was a Huge Miss!!

[***J***]

Amazon freebie...only 18 pages and still couldn't finish it.

[Gem · Rating 1 out of 5]

lame

[Winfield · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short and sweet

[Denise Koopman · Rating 5 out of 5]

Short story but ok I guess. I need to pay more attention to how many pages are in the book.

[Ellie Potts · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a fun sexy story. I wish that it had been a little longer.

[Raine · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short, but an ok read.

[Zoey · Rating 3 out of 5]

Good. Her best friend. Watching her friend. Chooses him instead of popular dude. Claire and Luke