The Ultimate Forfeit

Femdom: The Game #3

by Sabrina Jen Mountford

This is a 25,000 word fantasy female domination erotika story. It is NOT supposed to be realistic, it is pure femdom fantasy.

'Femdom : The Game 3 : The Ultimate Forfeit' continues where 'Femdom : The Game 2 : High Stakes' left off. With Jessie and Marcy agreeing to another game, a game not reliant on dice rolls or chance but a game of endurance, pure endurance. The contest? To see which of them can 'please' more patrons of Matilda's fetish club on 'swingers night'. The forfeit for the loser? A whole year living as a chaste sissy maid and live-in sex slave for the dominant ladies Matilda, Grace and Lucy. Both Marcy and Jessie agree to the game, both 100% sure they are going to win, but one of the clubs patrons has an ulterior motive for ensuring their 'slave' loses the game and goes all out to make sure of it.

At the end of the twelve months, both Marcy and Jessie's lives have been turned upside down, can they ever go back to the fairly vanilla life they left behind? Even if they could - would they choose to? Or would they immerse themselves deeper and deeper into the fetish world of BDSM, dominance and submission, slavery, chastity, forced feminization and regular punishments?

Warning this 25,600 word novella is not suitable for under 18's, it contains very adult themes of:-

Femdom
Female Domination of Males and Female Domination of Females
Predicament Bondage
Punishment
Orgasm Denial
Chastity
Bi
Lesbian
Slavery
Fetish Torture

125 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 30, 2013

About the author

I enjoy writing about extreme, unrealistic scenarios... I like to write about female domination, male chastity, BDSM and forced feminization. I'm not a professional dominatrix or anything like that...

I have experimented with this sort of thing in the bedroom, don't get me wrong, I find nothing more amusing and satisfying than having my boyfriend wearing knickers, a bra and a suspender belt, his face plastered in make up, his hands hand-cuffed behind his back, over my knee recieving a good spanking... But I like to explore the unrealistic end of the scale in my writing.

Please don't read my stories expecting realistic scenario's, they are pure fantasy - products of my over-active imagination. I don't propose to be the greatest writer ever to grace paper, I do try my best though. Sometimes I accept it's perhaps not pulitzer prize material.

However, I do have a vivid and twisted imagination... And I think I understand the submissive male mind... (My boyfriend is about as submissive as they come.)

If you have enjoyed my stories, please, please write me a review - I know somebody out there likes them because they are selling briskly and people who buy one tend to buy at least two or three...

If you do write me a good, constructive review, include your email address, and I'll perhaps email you a free review copy of one of my new titles?

Lastly, thanks to everyone who's bought my work, I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. I apologise for any typing errors or similar, every so often I read and re-check my titles before republishing them, but it's difficult. I do my best but I don't have a copy editor so my best is my best I'm afraid. If you spot a mistake, please email me at sjm.author@yahoo.com and I will correct it in the next re-publish.

If you have any comments, you can contact me at sjm.author@yahoo.com

~Sabrina

PS: I've had lots of email requests for paper editions of my stories for non-Kindle owners. For the benefit of those people I've used createspace to make some paper editions.

There are now several paperback editions of my work available, please search amazon paperbacks and the createspace store for 'Sabrina Jen Mountford' if you're interested.

After a heavy re-working, I've managed to get 'The Clinical Trial' approved! Please find it on the Kindle Store.

On a final note, anyone who has read all of my current catalogue and wants more of the same, I strongly suggest reading Sarah Jameson's fiction, Tatania, Monaco and Stacy's game.

If you still want more - I suggest taking a look at Anne Michelle, Sara Desmarais, Sandy Thomas and Selene St. Claire

My full catalogue - have you read them all?

The Clinical Trial (With The Receptionist
The Tormentress and the Boss
Slavery: Part 1 : Captured!
Slavery: Part 2 : Operated on : Forced Transsexual.
The Male Bridesmaid
The Hypnotist
A Sissy Story : WPC Domination
A Sissy Story : Feminized For Her ‘How he became a lesbian’
Cross Dressing : Schoolgirl Domination
Samantha’s Tale : The Deal (Prequel to ‘The Tormentress & The Boss’)
Anita’s Tale : The Sperm Donor
The Harem Slave
Femdom : The Dressmaker
Femdom : The Ex’s Revenge
Femdom: The Beautician Trap
Tickle Torture : Tickled into Submission
Tickle Torture : Tickled until she wets herself
The Male Bridesmaid 2 : The Reluctant Cuckoldress
Corporal Punishment : A Study in Caning (The BDSM Studies)
Orgasm Denial : A Study in Chastity (The BDSM Studies)
Femdom : The Game
Femdom : The Game 2 : High Stakes
Gender Swap : Anita's Transgender Pill : A Gender Bender Story

*Slavery 1 & 2 are available together and separately

Coming soon:-
Femdom : The Game 3 : The Ultimate Forfeit

Planned Titles:-
A Study in Feminization (BDSM Studies)
The Clinical Trial : Phase 2
Forced Fem : His first ‘Girls Day Out’ (Based on Fact.)
Femdom : Utopia – The Female Dominated Society

Compilations by the same author:-
Feminization Stories First Collect

Reviews

[Maia Anne · Rating 4 out of 5]

This for me was the highlight of the series. It was sexy, fun, imaginative. I particularly liked the scene where Jessie and Marcy are competing against each other in the club. The actual forfeit itself was very enjoyable to read, some of the tortures were very, very, inventive. The installations in the night club were great! You had to suspend belief a bit in this story, this whole series really. I think my favorite scene in this story was actually one of the more realistic bits, near the start when he's at the office and he gets the young office junior turning the tables on him. It's a very, very sexy scene, more so somehow than the more extreme bits. When she's trying to bring him off orally while he's in the KTB, I would love to try that on my fella! I think Kim was possibly my favorite character. Sabrina should write her into more of her stories!

[Cbtok · Rating 4 out of 5]

Grace and Marcy quickly maneuver Jessie into a position of inferiority, with Grace firmly on top, Marcy beneath and Jessie practicing the subservient position he would have if he lost the game, to take place on Swingers Night at the club.

Meanwhile Kim, at Jessie’s office, discovers that Jessie, under his suit, is wearing ladies’ lingerie. She locks them in a room and orders him to disrobe, taking blackmail photos. She notices his Kali’s Teeth Bracelet and does everything she can to embed the teeth in his cock. Then she has him bring her off.

She knows about the club. She builds her power over him, despite his position of superiority over her at the office.

The fateful day arrives and Jessie and Marcy are identically dresses so that they cannot be identifiable. But that’s kind of laughable, people do know what external genitalia look like. Kim tried to put a finger on the scale.

She engineers a loss for Jessie/Jessica, who experiences pain “that was killing him,” a description that beggars belief, as he is missing two fingernails, had a judicial caning and was split open by a strap on mammoth dildo that caused him to bleed.

A completely unfair game is followed by a discussion of who gets him first. It is Matilda, owner of the Club. Jessica does a thorough cleaning of the club and drives Matilda home. For “sleep” Matilda places her in a suspended bird cage with an “alarm clock” consisting of electrodes. The author mistakenly has Matilda claiming that she did not tell Jessica that the electrodes were an alarm clock when she did.

Things get easier at Matilda’s, harder at work, under Kim.

He is used in Matilda’s club as an installation, then, on the following week is handed over to Lucy, and installed in another installation of her design. It was very popular.

Next, he is sent to Grace and Marcy. Grace’s slave, James, is in dominant mode and immediately takes advantage. The following day, Grace sets him on a treadmill to learn how to walk better in heels. This is dangerous, but the book is fantasy.

The author, finding herself in a length-of-time issue, writes her way out of the yearlong forfeiture, glossing over Jessica’s time with Lucy. At the end of the year, he is offered a choice and, having been trained as a slave to multiple dominant women and one man, requests continued servitude and submission. He is then sold at auction.

The author tries to wrap up this series with a couple of twists, one not very surprising, the other contrived. I had trouble with believability throughout, and my reviews note the dangerous and non-consensual aspects of the storyline. Apparently, in Ms. Mountford’s world, torture that would hospitalize most is recovered from within five minutes. One can snap out of deep subspace in a second with no need for aftercare. People who must smell to high heaven do not need to be bathed for 12 hours or more, and nobody around them seems to notice. It is, apparently, easy to play a piano missing two fingernails. Training a submissive seems to have no effect on instant compliance to an order and when one is in long-term chastity and offered a release, there is no desire for a quick wank.

I recommend this trilogy with these reservations. You kids do not attempt any of this at home.

[JW David · Rating 3 out of 5]

Read as part of Femdom: The Game: a Bdsm Trilogy Erotika

[Chester J. · Rating 5 out of 5]

Twisted, but loving it

I love your twisted imagination and the different, but similar scenarios that you put the men in your stories through. You are totally correct that sex is a very complicated thing that is mostly in the mind.