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I'm Sorry, Did You Say Mate?
When Sutton Collins moves to the middle-of-nowhere-Michigan, she's sure her life is over. She's sure she'll die of boredom, living in a small town surrounded by woods. However, her town just happens to be the base of the powerful Greenwood Pack. Her parents also just happen to be close friends with the packs Alpha. And the Alpha just happens to have a gorgeous son. Since her town is infested with werewolves, hunters are never far away. With Evan and the hunters around, Sutton sure isin't going to be bored.
- GenresWerewolves
118 pages, ebook
First published January 14, 2012
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February 22, 2018
it was good
May 5, 2015
Sutton and her family move to the quiet town of Marksgrove where there is a dominating supply of were people. Just about everyone she meets is were except for the three humans and few patrons in the quiet coffee shop mentioned throughout the entire book. This is due to the fact that one if the biggest packs happens to reside there, one of the reasons they're moving. Making friends really quickly, becoming popular, having everyone think she's hot and finding her mate almost instantly makes this book a bit to cliche for my liking. For a first draft from an inspiring author it was creative and kept me interested, however, there were a few filler chapters that you just kind of skimmed over, a need to be edited (not really an issue just forewarning for any grammar nazi's) and a somewhat overused plot line.
The characters were all kind of overly nice with only one "mean girl". Also, Sutton's little sister, taylor, was annoyingly territorial. Like she was strangely jealous of sharing Sutton which was a recurring theme through to it the entire book...
It would have been nice to see that it wasn't the alphas sons (for once) however I see the appeal. I also found there were a few subplots that just kind of fizzled out without any resolution to them. Also the timing of the piece jumps around a bit, we jump forward and back in time to see two parallel viewpoints to see both perspectives which gets a tad annoying after the third time, as well as skipping forward a few months, then the next chapter skipping forward another few months. I feel there should have been a better way of letting the reader know this, perhaps a flashback? Without mentioning in the comments as a side note that that was your intention. You shouldn't need to tell the reader, you should be showing through your work. Overall I think it needs a bit more work but after a bit of editing could turn our to be a good story :)
The characters were all kind of overly nice with only one "mean girl". Also, Sutton's little sister, taylor, was annoyingly territorial. Like she was strangely jealous of sharing Sutton which was a recurring theme through to it the entire book...
It would have been nice to see that it wasn't the alphas sons (for once) however I see the appeal. I also found there were a few subplots that just kind of fizzled out without any resolution to them. Also the timing of the piece jumps around a bit, we jump forward and back in time to see two parallel viewpoints to see both perspectives which gets a tad annoying after the third time, as well as skipping forward a few months, then the next chapter skipping forward another few months. I feel there should have been a better way of letting the reader know this, perhaps a flashback? Without mentioning in the comments as a side note that that was your intention. You shouldn't need to tell the reader, you should be showing through your work. Overall I think it needs a bit more work but after a bit of editing could turn our to be a good story :)
July 5, 2014
I found this book in Wattpad, this is a first try novel but after reading it I'm surprised that is hasn't been published yet, this book is better written than some published authors.
Sutton is an adopted werewolf and has moved into a new pack with her family but when she finds her mate he's not exactly what she hopes. It's not that he isn't good looking but he avoids her completely after refusing to be her mate.
Evan is worried about Sutton, after her incredibly creepy meeting with Luke (the hunter), he is worried that because he is an Alpha that the hunters will go after his mate Sutton.
There is also two other books to this series that I have read and both of them are at exactly the same standard simply amazing!! This book, I would be aim it at young teens maybe 11-15.
Book 2 and 3 in order:
I'm sorry, did you say mate?
I'm sorry, but we're not mates
Sutton is an adopted werewolf and has moved into a new pack with her family but when she finds her mate he's not exactly what she hopes. It's not that he isn't good looking but he avoids her completely after refusing to be her mate.
Evan is worried about Sutton, after her incredibly creepy meeting with Luke (the hunter), he is worried that because he is an Alpha that the hunters will go after his mate Sutton.
There is also two other books to this series that I have read and both of them are at exactly the same standard simply amazing!! This book, I would be aim it at young teens maybe 11-15.
Book 2 and 3 in order:
I'm sorry, did you say mate?
I'm sorry, but we're not mates
September 27, 2013
Ok so i looked for this book everywhere seems the reviews where good, finally found it for free on whattpad. So far iv read three chapters and well its to predictable. Already the mate has been found and already the girls know they are going to he the best of friends. I think this book will be more for the age of 12 and under, but for older readers :/ i think will be turned off at the same time i have. Sorry for whoever wrote this book i understand its not easy to write a book that captures older readers, but i couldn't even get past the third chapter.
August 9, 2017
When I first started to read this book I had high hope, but after the initial part, as the story went on I was a little annoyed at some of the character and how they behaved...but alls well what's end well, no? XD I actually liked this one as the story went on an developed :)
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