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A Chance Eavesdropping: A Pride & Prejudice Variation
Can eavesdropping change Elizabeth Bennet’s future?
What is a young lady of the Regency to do when she overhears her own mother plotting against her? When the plot involves matching the lovely Elizabeth Bennet with her unpleasant cousin Mr. Collins, sudden and drastic steps are needed.
Elizabeth’s life is also complicated by the wealthy and haughty Mr. Darcy, a guest of Mr. Bingley, the neighbourhood’s most eligible bachelor and her sister Jane’s suitor. The prideful Mr. Darcy soon departs Hertfordshire along with the Bingley party. But Mr. Bingley returns for Jane’s hand, ignoring the opposition of his sisters.
When Elizabeth’s summer excursion to the North with her aunt and uncle leads to further surprises, including a chance encounter with the high and mighty Mr. Darcy, the travellers accept an invitation to lodge at his estate. Meanwhile, her sister Lydia causes a calamity that may destroy the reputation of the Bennet family.
The gentlemen band together to search for Wickham and Lydia, but can the Bennets’ good name be restored even if the errant couple is found? Is Darcy’s attraction to this country lass with neither fortune nor connections stronger than the voices in his head? Can the mere infraction of eavesdropping truly lead to such wildly unforeseen events?
Elizabeth’s life is also complicated by the wealthy and haughty Mr. Darcy, a guest of Mr. Bingley, the neighbourhood’s most eligible bachelor and her sister Jane’s suitor. The prideful Mr. Darcy soon departs Hertfordshire along with the Bingley party. But Mr. Bingley returns for Jane’s hand, ignoring the opposition of his sisters.
When Elizabeth’s summer excursion to the North with her aunt and uncle leads to further surprises, including a chance encounter with the high and mighty Mr. Darcy, the travellers accept an invitation to lodge at his estate. Meanwhile, her sister Lydia causes a calamity that may destroy the reputation of the Bennet family.
The gentlemen band together to search for Wickham and Lydia, but can the Bennets’ good name be restored even if the errant couple is found? Is Darcy’s attraction to this country lass with neither fortune nor connections stronger than the voices in his head? Can the mere infraction of eavesdropping truly lead to such wildly unforeseen events?
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383 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 22, 2023
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C.P. Odom
11 books76 followersBy training, I’m a retired engineer, born in Texas, raised in Oklahoma, and graduated from the University of Oklahoma. Sandwiched in there was a stint in the Marines, and I’ve lived in Arizona since 1977, working first for Motorola and then General Dynamics. I raised two sons with my first wife, Margaret, before her untimely death from cancer, and my second wife, Jeanine, and I adopted two girls from China. The older of my daughters recently graduated with an engineering degree and is working in Phoenix, and the younger girl is heading toward a nursing degree. I’ve always been a voracious reader and collector of books, and my favorite genres are science fiction, historical fiction, histories, and, in recent years, reading (and later writing) Jane Austen romantic fiction. This late-developing interest was indirectly stimulated when I read my late wife's beloved Jane Austen books after her passing. One thing led to another, and I now have three novels published: A Most Civil Proposal (2013), Consequences (2014), and Pride, Prejudice, and Secrets (2015). My fourth novel, Perilous Siege, was just published. I retired from engineering in 2011, but I still live in Arizona with my family, a pair of dogs (one of which is stubbornly untrainable), and a pair of rather strange cats. My hobbies are reading, woodworking, and watching college football and LPGA golf (the girls are much nicer than the guys, as well as being fiendishly good putters). Lately I’ve reverted back to my younger years and have taken up building plastic model aircraft and ships (when I can find the time).
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June 28, 2023
3.5 stars rounded up to 4 stars. I have now read all of this author's published stories as well as one unpublished story. I was disappointed in this one.
Overall this simply seemed like a retelling of P&P but with this author's own words for the most part. The title doesn't have much to do with the overall story. Elizabeth overhears her mother and Mr. Collins walking in the garden where she is sitting, unseen by them. Mrs. Bennet is helping Collins decide which daughter he should pursue. This is one thread that is different from canon, in that it is not Elizabeth nor, in turn, Charlotte who receive his attentions.
Therefore there is no trip to Hunsford where Darcy proposed in canon. Rather Elizabeth travels to Derbyshire with the Gardiners, which happens later in canon. There they tour Pemberley, meet Darcy and are invited to stay at Pemberley. Thus it is there that the news of Lydia's disappearing with Wickham is disclosed. Darcy, along with the Gardiners & E. travel back to Longbourn, where in turn Darcy now goes off to London to help in the search for the couple. (The Wickham matter takes up lots of page space.)
Elizabeth does not learn the truth about Wickham in a letter. However, as she observes and learns of Darcy's involvement in settling the matter of Lydia, she also learns how wrong she was about both men: Darcy and Wickham.
SPOILER: I was disappointed in the matter of Elizabeth and Darcy anticipating their vows. Too much like what all were condemning Wickham and Lydia about, much less that I just don't like that in my JAFF stories. End of SPOILER
Although this story was my least favorite of this author's stories, I have liked his other stories and will look forward to more from him.
Overall this simply seemed like a retelling of P&P but with this author's own words for the most part. The title doesn't have much to do with the overall story. Elizabeth overhears her mother and Mr. Collins walking in the garden where she is sitting, unseen by them. Mrs. Bennet is helping Collins decide which daughter he should pursue. This is one thread that is different from canon, in that it is not Elizabeth nor, in turn, Charlotte who receive his attentions.
Therefore there is no trip to Hunsford where Darcy proposed in canon. Rather Elizabeth travels to Derbyshire with the Gardiners, which happens later in canon. There they tour Pemberley, meet Darcy and are invited to stay at Pemberley. Thus it is there that the news of Lydia's disappearing with Wickham is disclosed. Darcy, along with the Gardiners & E. travel back to Longbourn, where in turn Darcy now goes off to London to help in the search for the couple. (The Wickham matter takes up lots of page space.)
Elizabeth does not learn the truth about Wickham in a letter. However, as she observes and learns of Darcy's involvement in settling the matter of Lydia, she also learns how wrong she was about both men: Darcy and Wickham.
SPOILER: I was disappointed in the matter of Elizabeth and Darcy anticipating their vows. Too much like what all were condemning Wickham and Lydia about, much less that I just don't like that in my JAFF stories. End of SPOILER
Although this story was my least favorite of this author's stories, I have liked his other stories and will look forward to more from him.
June 27, 2023
Eavesdropping is such a regular-person activity. ~ Franny Billingsley
“Instead, perchance, you might consider Lizzy. She is next to Jane in both beauty and seniority, and her manners are as excellent as Jane’s.”
Those two sentences, overheard purely by chance, change the direction of Pride & Prejudice.
Elizabeth Bennet is in the Longbourn garden on a morning soon after the Rev. William Collins arrives to visit his estranged cousins. Her mother and Collins take a walk through the garden and fail to notice Elizabeth sitting nearby. The secret is no longer a secret.
Rather than wait for the inevitable, Elizabeth takes action to show Collins how very unsuitable she would be as a clergyman’s wife and sometime companion to a noble patroness. Collins’ attention shifts to the next sister, Mary.
Any place is good for eavesdropping if you know how to eavesdrop. ~ Tom Waits
Elizabeth does not visit Hunsford in the spring, thus, no disastrous proposal occurs. Instead, her next meeting with Mr. Darcy is at Pemberley during her travels with the Gardiners.
Romance ensues, until … well, you know what.
Wait for it! Wait for it! Anticipation is half the fun, so I have been told. ~ Phil Collins
In Regency times, “anticipation” had a special meaning in reference to marriage vows. But what will happen if our young lovers do not “wait for it”? The entire episode seemed very out of character for Darcy and Elizabeth under the circumstances.
‘Nuff said.
I had read this years ago as an online story and I enjoyed this re-read. I always like this author but this book will not be my favorite.
Eavesdropping is a deplorable habit, but I have developed worse ones since. ~ Patrick Rothfuss
“Instead, perchance, you might consider Lizzy. She is next to Jane in both beauty and seniority, and her manners are as excellent as Jane’s.”
Those two sentences, overheard purely by chance, change the direction of Pride & Prejudice.
Elizabeth Bennet is in the Longbourn garden on a morning soon after the Rev. William Collins arrives to visit his estranged cousins. Her mother and Collins take a walk through the garden and fail to notice Elizabeth sitting nearby. The secret is no longer a secret.
Rather than wait for the inevitable, Elizabeth takes action to show Collins how very unsuitable she would be as a clergyman’s wife and sometime companion to a noble patroness. Collins’ attention shifts to the next sister, Mary.
Any place is good for eavesdropping if you know how to eavesdrop. ~ Tom Waits
Elizabeth does not visit Hunsford in the spring, thus, no disastrous proposal occurs. Instead, her next meeting with Mr. Darcy is at Pemberley during her travels with the Gardiners.
Romance ensues, until … well, you know what.
Wait for it! Wait for it! Anticipation is half the fun, so I have been told. ~ Phil Collins
In Regency times, “anticipation” had a special meaning in reference to marriage vows. But what will happen if our young lovers do not “wait for it”? The entire episode seemed very out of character for Darcy and Elizabeth under the circumstances.
‘Nuff said.
I had read this years ago as an online story and I enjoyed this re-read. I always like this author but this book will not be my favorite.
Eavesdropping is a deplorable habit, but I have developed worse ones since. ~ Patrick Rothfuss
June 25, 2023
Sadly, not a favourite.
I was a little disappointed with this latest novel from Mr. Odom. With the majority of the storyline focused on Elizabeth’s negative attitude towards Darcy, and then a never-ending review of Lydia and Wickham’s perfidy, I had a difficult time getting through to the end. I hate to say that because I really really like this author, but unlike his past pleasing novels, this one just wasn’t interesting to me. There was sooooo much narrative. I appreciate a healthy balance between narrative and dialogue, and in this case, I felt that the narrative overshadowed the potential for engaging conversations. For me, dialogue acts as a window into the characters' personalities and motivations, and I would have enjoyed more opportunities to hear their voices.
Elizabeth’s steadfast refusal to acknowledge the faults of one man, and the virtues of another, displayed a blend of obtuseness and willful ignorance. Her unwavering loyalty towards Wickham, even after learning some of those faults was frustrating. It isn’t until Darcy reveals Ramsgate that she is finally overcome with mortification and sees what Wickham truly is.
While the detailed coverage surrounding the whole Lydia and Wickham affair was different, it’s not my favourite storyline. I got no enjoyment from reading about it and I just was ready for it to end.
I don’t mind a little steam in my P&P, but I don’t like hypocrisy. When Elizabeth presents herself to Darcy even without a marriage proposal yet, in my opinion she was no better than Lydia, or a Caroline who goes to Darcy’s room to compromise him. In this case, Darcy is a willing participant, but still. It was hard to like this Elizabeth throughout the book.
I can’t rate this more than 3.5 stars. Not quite a 4, but better than a three, so I will round up. There were quite a few proofreading misses as well as a couple of discrepancies that were also missed. Bottom line—this variation was just okay. I will still look forward to Mr. Odom’s next book.
I was a little disappointed with this latest novel from Mr. Odom. With the majority of the storyline focused on Elizabeth’s negative attitude towards Darcy, and then a never-ending review of Lydia and Wickham’s perfidy, I had a difficult time getting through to the end. I hate to say that because I really really like this author, but unlike his past pleasing novels, this one just wasn’t interesting to me. There was sooooo much narrative. I appreciate a healthy balance between narrative and dialogue, and in this case, I felt that the narrative overshadowed the potential for engaging conversations. For me, dialogue acts as a window into the characters' personalities and motivations, and I would have enjoyed more opportunities to hear their voices.
Elizabeth’s steadfast refusal to acknowledge the faults of one man, and the virtues of another, displayed a blend of obtuseness and willful ignorance. Her unwavering loyalty towards Wickham, even after learning some of those faults was frustrating. It isn’t until Darcy reveals Ramsgate that she is finally overcome with mortification and sees what Wickham truly is.
While the detailed coverage surrounding the whole Lydia and Wickham affair was different, it’s not my favourite storyline. I got no enjoyment from reading about it and I just was ready for it to end.
I don’t mind a little steam in my P&P, but I don’t like hypocrisy. When Elizabeth presents herself to Darcy even without a marriage proposal yet, in my opinion she was no better than Lydia, or a Caroline who goes to Darcy’s room to compromise him. In this case, Darcy is a willing participant, but still. It was hard to like this Elizabeth throughout the book.
I can’t rate this more than 3.5 stars. Not quite a 4, but better than a three, so I will round up. There were quite a few proofreading misses as well as a couple of discrepancies that were also missed. Bottom line—this variation was just okay. I will still look forward to Mr. Odom’s next book.
July 15, 2023
“The key to good eavesdropping is not getting caught.” –Lemony Snicket, The Blank Book
>>Rating: Mature: descriptions of sexual encounters. Anticipating vows with more than one couple.
>>Angst Level: frustrations and disgust: mostly over Lydia and Wickham and Mrs. Bennet and her nerves
>>Source: I received a promotional copy [6-25-23] from the publisher with no expectations of a review. I volunteered to voice my thoughts and opinions on this work. [4.5-stars]
“I shouldn’t have eavesdropped, but sometimes, that’s the only way to find out the truth.” –Jodi Picoult, Handle with Care
The cover art gives it away. Elizabeth overhears her mother and Mr. Collins discussing his intentions to marry one of her daughters. Elizabeth was stunned to hear that she, the second daughter, was her mother’s choice to save the family from the entail. Well, let’s just say that Miss Elizabeth Bennet was no fool and put the kybosh on her mother’s machinations. That was solved rather quickly in the story. After that, the story followed the cannon account with a few deviations.
I enjoyed the variation; however, I felt a disconnect between the title, the first few chapters, and the rest of the story. There was the sensation that the first part was a short story or a one-shot and the rest closely followed the canon account to include ODC. Yes, Collins picked his bride from the Longbourn daughters but what did it have to do with the rest of the story? They married and left for Hunsford.
The author missed an opportunity to have several occasions for eavesdropping. Thus, carrying the theme throughout the story. Mr. Darcy could have overheard something. Caroline was always known for skulking about listening at keyholes, etc. But that was not what happened. It just felt disconnected.
The author dared to walk where Austen failed to tread. It also gave a male perspective that she was never able to provide. Yes, the bedroom was canvased and more than one couple anticipated their vows. I’m not crazy when that happens especially given the antics of the wayward couple. We had the recipe for disaster with the SBRB and the little tartlet that ran with him. This fiasco fell squarely at the feet of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet due to his indolence and her lack of restraint with the younger daughters. You could read the writing on the wall for this one. The reader knew just what would happen and it did. And yet, it still shocked me. I’ve not seen it go quite this far before. Poor Mr. Bennet will never remove that scene from his mind… ever. I cannot feel sorry for him, nope.
I enjoyed most of the story but there were parts where I didn’t approve of the trail the author took. However, that is what JAFF is all about. The different trails Jane Austen didn’t take. If you can handle adult themes, I recommend this as something different.
>>Rating: Mature: descriptions of sexual encounters. Anticipating vows with more than one couple.
>>Angst Level: frustrations and disgust: mostly over Lydia and Wickham and Mrs. Bennet and her nerves
>>Source: I received a promotional copy [6-25-23] from the publisher with no expectations of a review. I volunteered to voice my thoughts and opinions on this work. [4.5-stars]
“I shouldn’t have eavesdropped, but sometimes, that’s the only way to find out the truth.” –Jodi Picoult, Handle with Care
The cover art gives it away. Elizabeth overhears her mother and Mr. Collins discussing his intentions to marry one of her daughters. Elizabeth was stunned to hear that she, the second daughter, was her mother’s choice to save the family from the entail. Well, let’s just say that Miss Elizabeth Bennet was no fool and put the kybosh on her mother’s machinations. That was solved rather quickly in the story. After that, the story followed the cannon account with a few deviations.
I enjoyed the variation; however, I felt a disconnect between the title, the first few chapters, and the rest of the story. There was the sensation that the first part was a short story or a one-shot and the rest closely followed the canon account to include ODC. Yes, Collins picked his bride from the Longbourn daughters but what did it have to do with the rest of the story? They married and left for Hunsford.
The author missed an opportunity to have several occasions for eavesdropping. Thus, carrying the theme throughout the story. Mr. Darcy could have overheard something. Caroline was always known for skulking about listening at keyholes, etc. But that was not what happened. It just felt disconnected.
The author dared to walk where Austen failed to tread. It also gave a male perspective that she was never able to provide. Yes, the bedroom was canvased and more than one couple anticipated their vows. I’m not crazy when that happens especially given the antics of the wayward couple. We had the recipe for disaster with the SBRB and the little tartlet that ran with him. This fiasco fell squarely at the feet of Mr. and Mrs. Bennet due to his indolence and her lack of restraint with the younger daughters. You could read the writing on the wall for this one. The reader knew just what would happen and it did. And yet, it still shocked me. I’ve not seen it go quite this far before. Poor Mr. Bennet will never remove that scene from his mind… ever. I cannot feel sorry for him, nope.
I enjoyed most of the story but there were parts where I didn’t approve of the trail the author took. However, that is what JAFF is all about. The different trails Jane Austen didn’t take. If you can handle adult themes, I recommend this as something different.
June 24, 2023
"Books – oh! no. I am sure we never read the same, or not with the same feelings."
Parts of this will seem very familiar to you if you have read A Different Olive Branch.
The beginning of the story that gets Collins focusing on Mary is slightly altered (I thought it worked better in ADOB, tbh, Elizabeth comes across as less of a shrew) but the rest of it is similar enough that my review for ADOB works here
It was a well written, pleasant what-if. Collins set his mind on Mary so he did not ask Elizabeth for the first dance and Darcy did instead. Darcy saw some indications of special joy on Jane Bennet's face so he left Bingley to his own devices and there soon were two weddings at Longbourn. Mary did not invite Elizabeth to stay at Hunsford and there was never a Hunsford proposal. When Elizabeth travels to Pemberley she is somewhat wiser about Wickham but still pretty clueless about Darcy but he asks the Gardiner party to stay and she can change her mind somewhat. Then Wickham and Lydia do their thing.
I liked almost everything but the sex scenes. The acts are described rather briefly but ODC anticipated their vows in a way that seemed a little unlikely under the circumstances. Lydia had just been recovered unmarried and her fate was uncertain, and Lizzy was hopping mad at her and Wickham. Would Elizabeth really have taken the initiative to be the second Bennet daughter to have unmarried sex and take the risk of pregnancy and disgrace just then? I don't think so.
I feel like if they're so upset about other couples having unmarried sex it makes them a bit hypocritical when they do the same.
I guess you're supposed to think it was just lust and dishonor for Lyckham but love and commitment for Darzabeth. But later, when Lizzy has spent several nights in Darcy's room, she still tells Jane that she's not sure if she loves Darcy.
And it seemed a little off to have Elizabeth mad at Darcy for the Wickham living, straight after she's found out about the elopement. Girl, get a clue! It is possible that this is not a good guy.
Parts of this will seem very familiar to you if you have read A Different Olive Branch.
The beginning of the story that gets Collins focusing on Mary is slightly altered (I thought it worked better in ADOB, tbh, Elizabeth comes across as less of a shrew) but the rest of it is similar enough that my review for ADOB works here
It was a well written, pleasant what-if. Collins set his mind on Mary so he did not ask Elizabeth for the first dance and Darcy did instead. Darcy saw some indications of special joy on Jane Bennet's face so he left Bingley to his own devices and there soon were two weddings at Longbourn. Mary did not invite Elizabeth to stay at Hunsford and there was never a Hunsford proposal. When Elizabeth travels to Pemberley she is somewhat wiser about Wickham but still pretty clueless about Darcy but he asks the Gardiner party to stay and she can change her mind somewhat. Then Wickham and Lydia do their thing.
I liked almost everything but the sex scenes. The acts are described rather briefly but ODC anticipated their vows in a way that seemed a little unlikely under the circumstances. Lydia had just been recovered unmarried and her fate was uncertain, and Lizzy was hopping mad at her and Wickham. Would Elizabeth really have taken the initiative to be the second Bennet daughter to have unmarried sex and take the risk of pregnancy and disgrace just then? I don't think so.
I feel like if they're so upset about other couples having unmarried sex it makes them a bit hypocritical when they do the same.
I guess you're supposed to think it was just lust and dishonor for Lyckham but love and commitment for Darzabeth. But later, when Lizzy has spent several nights in Darcy's room, she still tells Jane that she's not sure if she loves Darcy.
And it seemed a little off to have Elizabeth mad at Darcy for the Wickham living, straight after she's found out about the elopement. Girl, get a clue! It is possible that this is not a good guy.
August 26, 2024
eavesdropping is the first what-if
SPOILERS
Lizzy overhears her mom scheming with Collins to marry her. Not a profound what-if. After all in the original Pride and Prejudice it is obvious Collins wants to marry her. But it leads to Mary wedding Collins which means no visiting Charlotte which lead to no awful proposal from Darcy.
The course of new love is full of Lizzy not understanding emotions of other people around her so both Darcy and Lizzy seem to be clueless and stumble away from each other and then stumble apart. This goes on way to long and I began to wander off also.
Worse… the episode with Lydia running away with Wickham is almost identical with Pride and Prejudice but told in excruciating detail.
So I thought it was a 3.5 star story.
SPOILERS
Lizzy overhears her mom scheming with Collins to marry her. Not a profound what-if. After all in the original Pride and Prejudice it is obvious Collins wants to marry her. But it leads to Mary wedding Collins which means no visiting Charlotte which lead to no awful proposal from Darcy.
The course of new love is full of Lizzy not understanding emotions of other people around her so both Darcy and Lizzy seem to be clueless and stumble away from each other and then stumble apart. This goes on way to long and I began to wander off also.
Worse… the episode with Lydia running away with Wickham is almost identical with Pride and Prejudice but told in excruciating detail.
So I thought it was a 3.5 star story.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 27, 2023
I found many of the plot choices in this variation to be somewhat puzzling, and I found the characterisation inconsistent. In particular, some of the choices made by ODC towards the end reeked of hypocrisy following the (many) rude comments Elizabeth made about Lydia and her reckless decisions. I don’t have anything against pre-marital intimacy in P&P variations - but I’m not interested in reading about characters who condemn others and then do the same themselves! Lydia never receives any sympathy for her choices in this variation, and yet we are supposed to root for Darcy and Elizabeth. At least Lydia believed she would be married. Elizabeth enters Darcy’s chamber and crawls into his bed before he has even said that he admires her, and no one condemns her for her decision whilst continuing to make snide comments about Lydia. It just didn’t add up.
I also noticed a few editorial errors in this book.
I also noticed a few editorial errors in this book.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 23, 2023
An entertaining variation
This variation diverges from canon in that there is no Hunsford visit or horrible Hunsford proposal. Bingley is more courageous and Mary latches onto Collins before Charlotte can. The 1st half of the book is very heavy in Narrative and internal dialogue versus the author's previous writing style. Lizzy is a very stubborn and resentful personality for much of the book, while Darcy seems to straighten up his behavior earlier than usual.
This variation diverges from canon in that there is no Hunsford visit or horrible Hunsford proposal. Bingley is more courageous and Mary latches onto Collins before Charlotte can. The 1st half of the book is very heavy in Narrative and internal dialogue versus the author's previous writing style. Lizzy is a very stubborn and resentful personality for much of the book, while Darcy seems to straighten up his behavior earlier than usual.
June 25, 2023
Absolutely delightful
Another absolutely delightful and slightly steamy variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by C. P. Odom. I enjoyed it very much.
Another absolutely delightful and slightly steamy variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by C. P. Odom. I enjoyed it very much.
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July 14, 2023Darcy and Elizabeth have been separated for 40% of the book. I may come back to it but I’m just not enjoying it.
July 31, 2023
Disappointing
I love this author, and have enjoyed his other JAFF offerings. Unfortunately, although his writing is as wonderful as always, I felt that this book fell short in that there wasn't that much new. As the title suggests, something is overheard, and that something is Elizabeth overhearing her mother and Mr Collins talking about how Elizabeth would be a good candidate for his wife. Elizabeth is appalled by this idea, so she makes sure to make herself as unappealing as possible in Mr Collins' eyes. As a result, Collins settles on Mary, who is not unwilling, and this one change from the original P&P has a ripple effect on many other outcomes.
Some of these outcomes are that there is no opposition from Darcy to Jane and Bingley's relationship, there is no trip by Elizabeth to Hunsford in the spring, and therefore, there's no disastrous proposal at the Hunsford parsonage, and no subsequent letter spelling out Wickham's faults. As a result of this, Lady Catherine is taken out of the picture as a villain. Everything else is pretty much the same, including the other usual villains and annoying characters, Elizabeth's extreme acrimony towards Darcy, and Mrs Bennett's almost cartoonish stupidity and silliness. There's also quite a bit of text lifted directly from the original P&P, which is disappointing.
I don't like it when Elizabeth is depicted as so stupidly prejudiced against Darcy that every little positive action on his part causes her to gasp and disbelieve. This kind of reaction goes on way too many times, and still she can't give up her attitude. Then the story went completely off the rails for me when (**SPOILER ALERT**) one moment Elizabeth is arguing with herself about whether Darcy is a nice guy, and the next moment she seduces him and they anticipate their vows. Wait, WHAT!?!?? I don't like it when Elizabeth suddenly becomes Lydia, and does something so stupid. And Darcy allows it!!!
I have to give credit for very good writing and storytelling. This author is a master. However, I just can't recommend this book.
I love this author, and have enjoyed his other JAFF offerings. Unfortunately, although his writing is as wonderful as always, I felt that this book fell short in that there wasn't that much new. As the title suggests, something is overheard, and that something is Elizabeth overhearing her mother and Mr Collins talking about how Elizabeth would be a good candidate for his wife. Elizabeth is appalled by this idea, so she makes sure to make herself as unappealing as possible in Mr Collins' eyes. As a result, Collins settles on Mary, who is not unwilling, and this one change from the original P&P has a ripple effect on many other outcomes.
Some of these outcomes are that there is no opposition from Darcy to Jane and Bingley's relationship, there is no trip by Elizabeth to Hunsford in the spring, and therefore, there's no disastrous proposal at the Hunsford parsonage, and no subsequent letter spelling out Wickham's faults. As a result of this, Lady Catherine is taken out of the picture as a villain. Everything else is pretty much the same, including the other usual villains and annoying characters, Elizabeth's extreme acrimony towards Darcy, and Mrs Bennett's almost cartoonish stupidity and silliness. There's also quite a bit of text lifted directly from the original P&P, which is disappointing.
I don't like it when Elizabeth is depicted as so stupidly prejudiced against Darcy that every little positive action on his part causes her to gasp and disbelieve. This kind of reaction goes on way too many times, and still she can't give up her attitude. Then the story went completely off the rails for me when (**SPOILER ALERT**) one moment Elizabeth is arguing with herself about whether Darcy is a nice guy, and the next moment she seduces him and they anticipate their vows. Wait, WHAT!?!?? I don't like it when Elizabeth suddenly becomes Lydia, and does something so stupid. And Darcy allows it!!!
I have to give credit for very good writing and storytelling. This author is a master. However, I just can't recommend this book.
July 23, 2023
Warning Editing Mistakes are within!
The expectation when reading previous Odom's novels that they are well written, scrupulously edited/proofread and carries the reader through the well plotted storyline. I didn't find this novel to be to his standards! A lost part of a sentence, paragraph, thought in Chapter12 or 13 (highlighted by a number of readers, if a follow up editing should happen. Or just publish the lost portion of this story!) left poor Jane and the reader hanging.
I thought the story dragged. The author is so clever in writing of Col. Richard Fitzwilliam (team Richard!) and in this story he is merely mentioned a time or two, where instead he might have enlivened the story. Just go read/reread "Determination" by this author it will be time better spent!
The expectation when reading previous Odom's novels that they are well written, scrupulously edited/proofread and carries the reader through the well plotted storyline. I didn't find this novel to be to his standards! A lost part of a sentence, paragraph, thought in Chapter12 or 13 (highlighted by a number of readers, if a follow up editing should happen. Or just publish the lost portion of this story!) left poor Jane and the reader hanging.
I thought the story dragged. The author is so clever in writing of Col. Richard Fitzwilliam (team Richard!) and in this story he is merely mentioned a time or two, where instead he might have enlivened the story. Just go read/reread "Determination" by this author it will be time better spent!
July 3, 2023
I feel three stars are generous.
Having said that, I must had, I have a lot of respect for anyone having the fortitude to write a book, and the courage to publish and expose it to the world. Therefore, well done Mr Odom, please keep writing, as readers and reviewers opinions are just that, opinions.
Here is my humble one:
A lot of it made no sense. And the whole part about Wickham and Lydia was way longer than they deserved especially when neither really received their comeuppance.
And, the Mr. D/Elizabeth’s wedding… I could understand what the author was doing there, but it does not mean I could like it.
Having said that, I must had, I have a lot of respect for anyone having the fortitude to write a book, and the courage to publish and expose it to the world. Therefore, well done Mr Odom, please keep writing, as readers and reviewers opinions are just that, opinions.
Here is my humble one:
A lot of it made no sense. And the whole part about Wickham and Lydia was way longer than they deserved especially when neither really received their comeuppance.
And, the Mr. D/Elizabeth’s wedding… I could understand what the author was doing there, but it does not mean I could like it.
July 8, 2023
Delightful story with a delicious surprise at the end
Longbourn is the scene of the usual chaos (there is no normal at Longbourn) with Mr. Collins having arrived to look over his future inheritance and offer an olive branch to heal the breach in their family relations.
It is fortunate that Elizabeth inadvertently overhears -- a chance eavesdropping -- a conversation in the garden which concerns her future. This enables her to take steps to change the course of her expected future.
The story is quite similar to canon in many respects but is woven into a new adventure by this talented author.
10
Longbourn is the scene of the usual chaos (there is no normal at Longbourn) with Mr. Collins having arrived to look over his future inheritance and offer an olive branch to heal the breach in their family relations.
It is fortunate that Elizabeth inadvertently overhears -- a chance eavesdropping -- a conversation in the garden which concerns her future. This enables her to take steps to change the course of her expected future.
The story is quite similar to canon in many respects but is woven into a new adventure by this talented author.
10
July 20, 2023
More like 3.75
Technically well written with some good dialogue. But a choice EB makes and her reasons therefore, upon which the last third of the book hinges, do not ring emotionally true. Nor is it supported by the previous two thirds of the book. Nor does it seem that FD would eschew all propriety while in the midst of the struggle to effectuate Wickham and Lydia's marriage.
While I was intrigued by the first parts of the book, my investment was lost. It also seems as if ODC could have married in Meryton using the common license with Mr.Bennet present but without Mrs.Bennet's presence.
Technically well written with some good dialogue. But a choice EB makes and her reasons therefore, upon which the last third of the book hinges, do not ring emotionally true. Nor is it supported by the previous two thirds of the book. Nor does it seem that FD would eschew all propriety while in the midst of the struggle to effectuate Wickham and Lydia's marriage.
While I was intrigued by the first parts of the book, my investment was lost. It also seems as if ODC could have married in Meryton using the common license with Mr.Bennet present but without Mrs.Bennet's presence.
July 23, 2023
Thorough Book
If you ever wondered what happened between the events Jane Austen has in P&P or the events or conversations she summarizes in a couple of sentences, this book is for you. It describes in detail all of the above, sometimes at great length. It doesn't slavishly follow canon and has creative changes to the plot line over and above those mentioned above. Like his other books that I have read, it isn't all sweetness, but it is a good, thorough story!
If you ever wondered what happened between the events Jane Austen has in P&P or the events or conversations she summarizes in a couple of sentences, this book is for you. It describes in detail all of the above, sometimes at great length. It doesn't slavishly follow canon and has creative changes to the plot line over and above those mentioned above. Like his other books that I have read, it isn't all sweetness, but it is a good, thorough story!
July 29, 2023
Elizabeth is coming to understand that her opinions are always correct about Mr. Darcy .
Lies uncovered and a revealing of the character of Wickham open the eyes of Miss Elizabeth Bennet and her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner leading to a favorable view of Mr. Darcy and New perspective of his past actions. Of course, touring Pemberly, a pleasant meeting Mr. Darcy and meeting Miss Darcy only add to confusion on the part of Miss Bennet but not her relatives.
Lies uncovered and a revealing of the character of Wickham open the eyes of Miss Elizabeth Bennet and her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner leading to a favorable view of Mr. Darcy and New perspective of his past actions. Of course, touring Pemberly, a pleasant meeting Mr. Darcy and meeting Miss Darcy only add to confusion on the part of Miss Bennet but not her relatives.
February 20, 2025
When overhearing a conversation is beneficial
When Elizabeth accidentally overhears a conversation she sets out to foil some plans for the better. This story has a more decisive Bingley. Darcy has his wake up call over time as he attempts to analyze Elizabeth and others around him. Thankfully when he does come to a conclusion he’s all in. Oh poor Mr Bennet on a few occasions! Overall a good story.
When Elizabeth accidentally overhears a conversation she sets out to foil some plans for the better. This story has a more decisive Bingley. Darcy has his wake up call over time as he attempts to analyze Elizabeth and others around him. Thankfully when he does come to a conclusion he’s all in. Oh poor Mr Bennet on a few occasions! Overall a good story.
July 5, 2023
Left me with a smile
A very enjoyable variation. Elizabeth makes a sensible plan to deal with Mr Collins. Wickham is dastardly as usual. Lidia is an idiot and Mrs Bennet deserves a slap. All the good stuff! With a lovely fun little vignette to finish.
A very enjoyable variation. Elizabeth makes a sensible plan to deal with Mr Collins. Wickham is dastardly as usual. Lidia is an idiot and Mrs Bennet deserves a slap. All the good stuff! With a lovely fun little vignette to finish.
July 20, 2023
Delightful read
Always enjoy this author! Interesting variation with well written storyline. Mrs Bennet is basically a "villain" in this variation since she is so antagonistic to Elizabeth. Enjoy.
Always enjoy this author! Interesting variation with well written storyline. Mrs Bennet is basically a "villain" in this variation since she is so antagonistic to Elizabeth. Enjoy.
July 25, 2023
struggled
The beginning was rough. I truly thought our Lizzy was as brainless as Lydia
BUT…it gets so good. The ending is fabulous although I’m never satisfied when the villains get more than they deserve.
The beginning was rough. I truly thought our Lizzy was as brainless as Lydia
BUT…it gets so good. The ending is fabulous although I’m never satisfied when the villains get more than they deserve.
July 28, 2023
Brilliant as usual from this author
As soon as I see this author as published another book it is a must buy for me . His books are always do interestingly good you need to Read it yourself as to really experience this fun living book.
As soon as I see this author as published another book it is a must buy for me . His books are always do interestingly good you need to Read it yourself as to really experience this fun living book.
August 8, 2023
Explicit scenes
The grammar, punctuation, and spelling are fine but I don't like the characters. Elizabeth is wanting in quickness and sense. I choose Regency novels specifically to avoid explicit sex scenes and upheld morals, so I did not enjoy this book much at all.
The grammar, punctuation, and spelling are fine but I don't like the characters. Elizabeth is wanting in quickness and sense. I choose Regency novels specifically to avoid explicit sex scenes and upheld morals, so I did not enjoy this book much at all.
June 19, 2025
I decided to listen to this book to honor C. P. Odom, as he has recently passed away.
I enjoyed the story, though it did not make it to a favorite by this author.
If you are new to this author I would recommend to start with:
Determination or Pride, prejudice and secrets.
I enjoyed the story, though it did not make it to a favorite by this author.
If you are new to this author I would recommend to start with:
Determination or Pride, prejudice and secrets.
August 18, 2023
1.5/5
February 20, 2024
2.5 rounded to 3
I struggled to keep engaged with the story.
I struggled to keep engaged with the story.
November 20, 2024
Slow to get going but got there in the end.
I liked the slight tweeking of characters in this book.
Quite enjoyable.
I liked the slight tweeking of characters in this book.
Quite enjoyable.
August 6, 2023
A conflict of interest prevents a full review of this novel.
August 5, 2025
I really like this author, and he has written some of my favorite variations (Consequences, Determination, and Perilous Siege). Unfortunately, this one was a disappointment. I read it when it was first released, and I just finished listening to the audiobook.
Neil Roy McFarlane is one of my favorite narrators, and he rescued the story for me. The parts that bothered me when I read it were less annoying while listening.
My biggest complaint about the story is the hypocrisy of Darcy and Elizabeth anticipating their vows multiple times leading up to their wedding. Elizabeth had no shame about what she was doing and even discussed it with a somewhat horrified Jane. I was horrified too. This part of the story was so unnecessary. I think I might have rated it 4- or 5-stars, but I just couldn’t get past the idea that Lydia was considered a wanton for what she did, but it was okay for Darcy and Elizabeth to behave nearly the same way. Consider that Lydia believed she was engaged. Darcy and Elizabeth’s first encounter was before he proposed
Neil Roy McFarlane is one of my favorite narrators, and he rescued the story for me. The parts that bothered me when I read it were less annoying while listening.
My biggest complaint about the story is the hypocrisy of Darcy and Elizabeth anticipating their vows multiple times leading up to their wedding. Elizabeth had no shame about what she was doing and even discussed it with a somewhat horrified Jane. I was horrified too. This part of the story was so unnecessary. I think I might have rated it 4- or 5-stars, but I just couldn’t get past the idea that Lydia was considered a wanton for what she did, but it was okay for Darcy and Elizabeth to behave nearly the same way. Consider that Lydia believed she was engaged. Darcy and Elizabeth’s first encounter was before he proposed
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