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Poisoned Waters
Bloody mistakes, ugly scars, and beautiful lies. A tale of corruption.
Helen Gardener is murdered on a trans-Atlantic cruise. The Diamond Royale sails from Southampton to New York with her murderer aboard. Set in the 1950s, Poisoned Waters follows the stories of seven unfortunate characters and how they are affected by her death. Was it merely an accident? Mr Phillips, the owner of the ship, and sponsor of the cruise, rules with an iron fist, in search of something or someone.
Lies spiral out of control as the suspects try to survive the final days on board. Conflicted by their sense of morals, greed, and lust, they realise what kind of people they really are. Who will rise? Who will fall? Who was Helen's murderer?
Helen Gardener is murdered on a trans-Atlantic cruise. The Diamond Royale sails from Southampton to New York with her murderer aboard. Set in the 1950s, Poisoned Waters follows the stories of seven unfortunate characters and how they are affected by her death. Was it merely an accident? Mr Phillips, the owner of the ship, and sponsor of the cruise, rules with an iron fist, in search of something or someone.
Lies spiral out of control as the suspects try to survive the final days on board. Conflicted by their sense of morals, greed, and lust, they realise what kind of people they really are. Who will rise? Who will fall? Who was Helen's murderer?
233 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 27, 2013
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About the author
Ermisenda Alvarez
3 books58 followersAlong with numerous solo works, Ermisenda began writing on role play sites at fourteen and completed her first crime novel at fifteen. Driven by the desire to evoke the kaleidoscope of emotions her favorite authors are able to, she kept writing. Growing up bilingual amongst her Spanish family in Australia, she found a love and deep appreciation for language and the power it wielded.
Now she's working on a joint project with coauthor Eliabeth Hawthorne. Ermisenda has written Leocardo's perspective of Blind Sight #1, the first book in an urban fantasy series that changes depending on whose perspective you're reading. So the question is, "whose eyes will you read through?"
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Writing with my lovely American, spending time with my flying Dutchman, and living with my Spanish family in the Australian culture.
Now she's working on a joint project with coauthor Eliabeth Hawthorne. Ermisenda has written Leocardo's perspective of Blind Sight #1, the first book in an urban fantasy series that changes depending on whose perspective you're reading. So the question is, "whose eyes will you read through?"
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Writing with my lovely American, spending time with my flying Dutchman, and living with my Spanish family in the Australian culture.
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November 30, 2014
The cruise ship, The Diamond Royale was sailing to New York from Southampton with the owner, Mr Phillips and his wife on board. It was a seven day cruise, very opulent with luxury food and drink for all except the staff. Set in the 1950s, the women of class with their beautiful gowns and sparkling jewellery were easy to visualise as they dressed for dinner each evening.
Mid-cruise, with secret liaisons occurring, gossip flowing freely and racial prejudice everywhere, a woman was murdered out on deck in the late evening. Follow the characters as they tried to work out who the murderer was, being constantly on their guard with each other. Mr Phillips was determined to find the killer before the ship docked in New York. But was he after justice for the murdered woman, or something entirely different?
Suddenly another body was found and the race was on. With the clock ticking down, both for their arrival into New York and the finding of the killer, there was nowhere to escape. A vast ocean surrounded them; there was nowhere to hide. The tensions were rising, the passengers’ nerves were fraught.
The plot of this novel was great, the pace fast and the tensions gripping. But I couldn’t warm to the characters; in fact the only person I liked was Patricia (and you’ll have to read the novel to see who she is!) There is also an issue with editing, with a number of errors throughout the book. But all in all, an enjoyable suspense novel from an Aussie author.
With thanks to the author for my copy to read and review.
Mid-cruise, with secret liaisons occurring, gossip flowing freely and racial prejudice everywhere, a woman was murdered out on deck in the late evening. Follow the characters as they tried to work out who the murderer was, being constantly on their guard with each other. Mr Phillips was determined to find the killer before the ship docked in New York. But was he after justice for the murdered woman, or something entirely different?
Suddenly another body was found and the race was on. With the clock ticking down, both for their arrival into New York and the finding of the killer, there was nowhere to escape. A vast ocean surrounded them; there was nowhere to hide. The tensions were rising, the passengers’ nerves were fraught.
The plot of this novel was great, the pace fast and the tensions gripping. But I couldn’t warm to the characters; in fact the only person I liked was Patricia (and you’ll have to read the novel to see who she is!) There is also an issue with editing, with a number of errors throughout the book. But all in all, an enjoyable suspense novel from an Aussie author.
With thanks to the author for my copy to read and review.
April 19, 2014
This book is a good read. I thoroughly enjoyed the way the author writes in a way that allows the mind to follow and see in the minds eye, what is happening. It's a book with a little of everything. I liked being able to sorta feel what the characters were feeling, and understand their actions. The author threw in some philosophy as well. One example that got my attention was where, one of the characters thoughts was...... "while most men feared other men or great powerful beasts, Harold wished he could be saved from his own thoughts. The greatest tormentor was oneself; he or she would always know one's weaknesses and how to shatter them". I am thinking that might be , for me, one of the great all time philosophy quotes. And the positioning of this quote in the book is great. This book takes the reader across the sea, but also through the murky waters of deceit and love and love of riches that really never pays off the way we think it will. I recommend this book, and please allow yourself to really be immersed in the story to get the best experience of the read..... Grant
December 17, 2014
Vivid descriptions, intense scenes, intriguing story. Wading through deep emotions, the variety and complicated dreams people have for their lives. How our choices effect beyond who we think it does. I loved the insight to another time period with different rules but the same emotions. Down deep we all want the same basic things.
October 2, 2014
One of the best novels i have read in a long time. Has a bit of everything and in my favourite decade!! A 5 star really and a must follow author definetly.
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August 6, 2013
For some reason this book reminded me for Agatha Christie’s And Then There Were None. It’s not quite of the same calibre but it is dark and sinister and played upon that particular human nature which proved too great a temptation to many of us. It is mostly their settings which are somewhat similar in that they are isolated and outside assistance is not available.
Set in the 50s on a trans-Atlantic cruise ship, the scene first began with a dinner where the first class passengers are dressed to a t. I can just imagine the glamour, the backless shimmering dress, the bright red lipstick, the black & white contrast of the gents’ tuxedos, the tinkling of polished cutlery, the vivid redness or sparkling clearness of wine in glasses… what a beautiful world to be in! Unfortunately, things very quickly deteriorated as darkness descended upon these passengers. A woman was murdered, an investigation instigated, and no secrets can remain safe.
There were so many things happening and so many greatly flawed characters that it was hard to decide if there is one thing to focus on. I think the most amazing thing about this book was that each character from different walks of background was confronted with their own brand of temptation and was faced with a choice and for some, deadly choices. I wasn’t expecting this book to be so sinister, so heartbreaking (despite the blurb) because this is so much more than a murder mystery. It’s about the dark-side of human nature which comes to light when overcome with temptation.
Humanity was like any animal under pressure, whether it was for love, money, or life. When it counted, the dark monsters inside of ourselves, the part of us we denied, would shed our compassion, feast on blood, and consume our hearts.
Set in the 50s on a trans-Atlantic cruise ship, the scene first began with a dinner where the first class passengers are dressed to a t. I can just imagine the glamour, the backless shimmering dress, the bright red lipstick, the black & white contrast of the gents’ tuxedos, the tinkling of polished cutlery, the vivid redness or sparkling clearness of wine in glasses… what a beautiful world to be in! Unfortunately, things very quickly deteriorated as darkness descended upon these passengers. A woman was murdered, an investigation instigated, and no secrets can remain safe.
There were so many things happening and so many greatly flawed characters that it was hard to decide if there is one thing to focus on. I think the most amazing thing about this book was that each character from different walks of background was confronted with their own brand of temptation and was faced with a choice and for some, deadly choices. I wasn’t expecting this book to be so sinister, so heartbreaking (despite the blurb) because this is so much more than a murder mystery. It’s about the dark-side of human nature which comes to light when overcome with temptation.
Humanity was like any animal under pressure, whether it was for love, money, or life. When it counted, the dark monsters inside of ourselves, the part of us we denied, would shed our compassion, feast on blood, and consume our hearts.
August 2, 2013
So let's see how best to sum up this book? I would say Titanic meets Clue. This was a very suspenseful read. I really enjoyed how the author just kept you guessing throughout the entire book on who actually was involved in the murder and theft. The characters were well developed and likable. I found myself many times while I was reading this book visualizing a Titanic like ship with many guests like the ones that were on the Titanic.
The story takes you along with people from all walks of life as they sail on a special cruise held by the wealthy Mr and Mrs Phillips. What is to be a relaxing and enjoyable cruise turns tragically wrong with the murder of Helen. Once the murder is discovered there is a desperate hunt for the killer. Although there are many suspects they determine that Patricia is possibly guilty and hold her against her will until she will talk, since she was the one who was found with Helen holding her dead body. Throughout the story we are introduced to many characters who could potentially be the killer. When you think you have it figured out another is introduced as a possible suspect. This keeps you engaged throughout the book making it hard to put down. Also intermixed with the storyline of the murder is a developing love story between Sylvia and Benjamin who are like Rose and Jack, the forbidden love. (I know I keep comparing to Titanic but this helped me paint a vivid picture for myself) So who do you think is the murderer and the thief? Will it be the mistress to Mr. Phillips, Patricia? Or maybe Mary the galley hand or possibly Benjamin the galley hand? is the murderer the same person that steals the much sought after pocket watch or is it someone else? You must read to find out the answers to this delightfully, enticing, murder mystery.
This is a very good read I give it 5 stars!!! If you like suspense this is the book for you. So pick up a copy and sit back and take the cruise of your life.
The story takes you along with people from all walks of life as they sail on a special cruise held by the wealthy Mr and Mrs Phillips. What is to be a relaxing and enjoyable cruise turns tragically wrong with the murder of Helen. Once the murder is discovered there is a desperate hunt for the killer. Although there are many suspects they determine that Patricia is possibly guilty and hold her against her will until she will talk, since she was the one who was found with Helen holding her dead body. Throughout the story we are introduced to many characters who could potentially be the killer. When you think you have it figured out another is introduced as a possible suspect. This keeps you engaged throughout the book making it hard to put down. Also intermixed with the storyline of the murder is a developing love story between Sylvia and Benjamin who are like Rose and Jack, the forbidden love. (I know I keep comparing to Titanic but this helped me paint a vivid picture for myself) So who do you think is the murderer and the thief? Will it be the mistress to Mr. Phillips, Patricia? Or maybe Mary the galley hand or possibly Benjamin the galley hand? is the murderer the same person that steals the much sought after pocket watch or is it someone else? You must read to find out the answers to this delightfully, enticing, murder mystery.
This is a very good read I give it 5 stars!!! If you like suspense this is the book for you. So pick up a copy and sit back and take the cruise of your life.
November 17, 2014
I received this in e-book form from the author in exchange for an honest review. I really enjoyed this book. I had recently come across someone comparing this to the voyage of the Titanic with elements of the game Clue. And it really is exactly like that. It has an old Agatha Christie feel to the story. However it is not your normal mystery at all, it is quite different, so that was somewhat refreshing. A couple things were a bit predictable but also there were some surprising elements as well.
I liked the writing style of this author and her ability to make me feel like I was there. She had the imagery down perfect for the setting of 1955 from the description of the clothing worn to the way the characters spoke. All very authentic and real. And to top things off, a big beautiful ship that housed criminals galore. A first there seemed to be a lot going on, so in the very beginning it got a little confusing trying to keep all the characters straight. Once they were all introduced it got much easier to follow.
There was a lot of mystery to this tale and I really liked that. I like to be able to sleuth myself and try to figure things out, and I feel like this book really offers that. We also meet some great characters with lots of flaws both antagonist and protagonists alike. I loved the little tidbits of backstory that went with each of the characters too. It allows the readers to become a little more familiar with the characters and understand why they were the way they were.
I would definitely read more from this Author and I look forward to that opportunity. I can recommend this book to anyone who likes mysteries with that old timey feel to it. I am giving this book a 3.5 rating.
I liked the writing style of this author and her ability to make me feel like I was there. She had the imagery down perfect for the setting of 1955 from the description of the clothing worn to the way the characters spoke. All very authentic and real. And to top things off, a big beautiful ship that housed criminals galore. A first there seemed to be a lot going on, so in the very beginning it got a little confusing trying to keep all the characters straight. Once they were all introduced it got much easier to follow.
There was a lot of mystery to this tale and I really liked that. I like to be able to sleuth myself and try to figure things out, and I feel like this book really offers that. We also meet some great characters with lots of flaws both antagonist and protagonists alike. I loved the little tidbits of backstory that went with each of the characters too. It allows the readers to become a little more familiar with the characters and understand why they were the way they were.
I would definitely read more from this Author and I look forward to that opportunity. I can recommend this book to anyone who likes mysteries with that old timey feel to it. I am giving this book a 3.5 rating.
December 4, 2013
Normally, I share the problems with a story first, but I don't want to do that here. I read Poisoned Waters as a beta reader, and so some things are going to be fixed in the finished copy. I may come back and add a star later.
I'm not usually a big fan of whodunnits, but Poisoned Waters wasn't too long and it was mostly fast-paced, so it was just about right for me. It was done in a clever backwards fashion where instead of beginning with the usual cast of obvious suspects, the passengers aboard the Diamond Royale all present as innocent at the beginning of the story and grow more suspicious as it goes on. It's set in the 1950s with an international flavor that I enjoyed. The characters have a kind of stuffy old black and white movie feel about them, which I also enjoyed, especially in the shadier characters.
I don't want to include spoilers, so... I'll just say that there were some interesting twists and surprises. And there was no shortage of blood. The plot lulled a little bit for me at one point, but it picks up again and finishes strong so stick with it!
I'm not usually a big fan of whodunnits, but Poisoned Waters wasn't too long and it was mostly fast-paced, so it was just about right for me. It was done in a clever backwards fashion where instead of beginning with the usual cast of obvious suspects, the passengers aboard the Diamond Royale all present as innocent at the beginning of the story and grow more suspicious as it goes on. It's set in the 1950s with an international flavor that I enjoyed. The characters have a kind of stuffy old black and white movie feel about them, which I also enjoyed, especially in the shadier characters.
I don't want to include spoilers, so... I'll just say that there were some interesting twists and surprises. And there was no shortage of blood. The plot lulled a little bit for me at one point, but it picks up again and finishes strong so stick with it!
August 1, 2013
The strength of Poisoned Waters lies in its plot, which is complex yet easily navigated. The mystery surrounding Helen Gardener's death twists and turns forging a complicated path though a melange of deceit, greed and blackmail. As the wealthy and enigmatic cruise host, Mr Phillips, pushes his own agenda, Helen is not the only passenger to meet an untimely end aboard the Diamond Royale, and the identity of her killer not the only secret revealed.
The author's enthusiasm for writing is evident but not yet polished. This shows in Alvarez's overgenerous use of adjectives and the uneven rhythm of the narrative. Overall Poisoned Waters would benefit from a professional edit to reign in some of its excesses, though I think Alvarez does demonstrate talent, which still has plenty of time to mature.
October 8, 2013
Of all the books I have read this past month, the one that stands out the most is Poisoned Waters. I was just not expecting to be so blown away. It begins on an elegant cruise ship with the reader learning the ship’s occupants. Mid way across the Atlantic the murder occurs and everyone knows the murderer is still on board. It was a true murder mystery where the details were presented and the reader could solve the case if they were clever enough. The writing style was gorgeous. As gorgeous as the setting. It was a pleasure to read every page and cruise along with the cast of characters. They were all well developed and their personalities distinct. The book was well written and paced to please. The ending was satisfying. I could not ask for more from a murder mystery or any book. It was great from start to finish.
November 27, 2014
An unexpected murder that involves the guests on a cruise ship headed for New York.
Each person is described in detail and leaves the reader making suppositions as to who the murderer is.
Sylvia and Betty are two wives dissatisfied with their husbands. Sylvia is disheartened with her marriage to an older man and does a lot of flirting with young men. Betty instead must bear with her husband who betrays her. Are they, or their husbands, involved in the murder? And will the murders stop or are there others to die? .
Mr. Phillips is the mysterious wealthy man who is hosting guests on the cruise. Is he what he appears to be?
The story is complicated, as the author uses her characters to build up an intense drama and lead us finally to the resolution of the mystery
Mystery fans will surely enjoy this book.
Each person is described in detail and leaves the reader making suppositions as to who the murderer is.
Sylvia and Betty are two wives dissatisfied with their husbands. Sylvia is disheartened with her marriage to an older man and does a lot of flirting with young men. Betty instead must bear with her husband who betrays her. Are they, or their husbands, involved in the murder? And will the murders stop or are there others to die? .
Mr. Phillips is the mysterious wealthy man who is hosting guests on the cruise. Is he what he appears to be?
The story is complicated, as the author uses her characters to build up an intense drama and lead us finally to the resolution of the mystery
Mystery fans will surely enjoy this book.
July 31, 2014
This was gripping book. It first starts as a lavish tale of wealthy people on a ship, but those wealthy people are unhappy and have secrets. A woman is murdered and things really come out.
This was so good that I try to guess the murderer twice and got it wrong. I felt sympathy for every character except two. This author has such an insight to each character that no one seemed fake or like a cliche. These characters seemed true.
I was surprised by Sylvia's turn of events at the end. I really thought she was going to do something very different.
The ending got me. I didn't see it ahead of time even though the clues were there. I love how it came together.
I'm recommending this book to friends.
This was so good that I try to guess the murderer twice and got it wrong. I felt sympathy for every character except two. This author has such an insight to each character that no one seemed fake or like a cliche. These characters seemed true.
I was surprised by Sylvia's turn of events at the end. I really thought she was going to do something very different.
The ending got me. I didn't see it ahead of time even though the clues were there. I love how it came together.
I'm recommending this book to friends.
September 29, 2014
Poisoned Waters is about a cruise from England to the United States in 1955. The mystery starts when Helen, a dancer, is murdered. Mr. Phillips, the owner of the ship, requests that an employee of his finds the murderer. But does Mr. Phillips really care who the murderer is or does he have another agenda. The story weaves together the lives of several passengers and how any one of them may be the murderer. There are many twists and turns throughout this book and just when I thought I had it all figured out, I was surprised when the book took another turn. The ending is a real surprise as to who actually murdered Helen and why.
This book shows how people can be manipulated by power and greed.
I will be looking for other books by this author.
This book shows how people can be manipulated by power and greed.
I will be looking for other books by this author.
October 7, 2013
You know that feel you got from some of the first Agatha Christie you read? Before she started allowing coincidence to initiate and resolve everything in the plot? Well, Poisoned Waters has that same aged feel to it but, I swear, it is better. The mid-sea murder on a cruise liner could have been cliché but it was carried off brilliantly. The strength of the plot was on the characters and the author’s ability to bring them to life with few descriptions but their actions. It was one of the most delightful books, never mind mysteries, that I have read in a long time.
March 27, 2014
The story is set on an Atlantic cruise. A woman is murdered on deck, and one of the passengers is asked by the millionaire owner to help him find the culprit, who he thinks stole his very valuable watch. He is more interested in his watch than in finding the guilty. It reminded me of Agatha Crhristie's stories, where many characters appear and the author weaves the plot in such a way that everbody could be guilty. I found the plot presentation interesting, but the second half of the book turned to be quite boring and excitement decreased.
August 8, 2014
This mystery had you wondering who did it. The characters were delightful or despicable giving us a good run for our money. This was a very enjoyable Mystery, who I hope others read.
October 1, 2014
Favorite Quote: “Such a terrible fate it was to be a doctor and not be able to save yourself.”
The story is set in the 1950s.
The cruise ship Diamond Royale sets assail from Europe to New York with an ensemble of characters. Among the passengers on board, the most prominent are the ship’s owner Mr. Phillips, Michael who aspires to becomes Mr. Phillips partner in business, Sylvia a Dutch married woman, her husband and his accountant, Benjamin a black employee in the kitchen, Harold a crazy dude, Rodrigo a doctor with a good soul and Patricia. That’s a load eh? Nevertheless, the ship sailed and is to dock in a week. What happens on the ship between departure and arrival is the story.
On day-one, a dancer is murdered and Mr. Phillips wants to know who the culprit is. He is however more interested in something that was stolen from him. Michael is assigned the job. Will he solve the riddle? Who is the murderer?
The story travels over the time frame of seven days and seven nights with seemingly innocent characters revealing their true nature and we see how they fit the quote perfectly – A quote with which the book opens – “I trust everyone. I just don’t trust the devil inside them.” – Troy Kennedy Martin. Every character is a protagonist with the potential of turning an antagonist. The devil inside every character is revealed by the end of the journey.
What worked for me: I loved that the book started with one of my favorite quotes – It incited intrigue as I have my own versions of the quote. I loved the foreshadowing throughout the story. Very well done. I like how the author kept me hooked, looking for that one ‘thing’ that would change everything for every character. And there was one for each of them!
For example an omniscient narrator says about the Dutch married woman – ‘He was lying in the bed Sylvia and her husband slept in. They had been intimate within married sheets.’
While Harold wants to be with his wife, Michael is desperate to solve the mystery of the murder to impress Mr. Phillip. I liked Harold’ and Patricia’s character’s the best. They were carved well and his mind-dives were brilliant.
The transitions between past and present and the internal and external dialogue of the characters were seamless and solid. Enjoyed them.
Good use of formatting using bold and italics to emphasize.
‘Having to split the profits three ways angered her. She had planned the heist. It was her mother who needed saving. She had endured the soul-crushing poverty for decades. The profit difference of a two-way split as opposed to a three-way was sinfully enticing.
What didn’t work: First, by the time I read 15 pages, I was completely confused as to who was who. I was introduced to roughly 15 characters in that little time and space. Added to my fate, they all had names to remember!
I could not place myself in 1950 as descriptions and dialogue fell shot to achieve that. Expressions that didn’t work – ‘Maroon eyes’ Seriously? ‘The glittering red gown hugged Sylvia’s body as if it was her second skin.’
Benjamin suspecting Sylvia was a little out of place as she was with him when the murder happened. They even whisper when the actual scene was taking place. It was out of place and felt unnecessary.
Repetition of words such as ‘well-manicured’ (twice on the same page), ‘his back like a turtle,’ ‘metallic taste of blood,’ ‘shot of adrenaline’ and the worst was the use of ‘lavatory’ (used too many times).
Conclusion: There are too many bad people in the story with not one redeeming themselves. That is unwelcome. Also, the story starts off slow and is confusing in the beginning but halfway along it picks up pace and ends with a convincing climax.
Rating: 3 Stars
The story is set in the 1950s.
The cruise ship Diamond Royale sets assail from Europe to New York with an ensemble of characters. Among the passengers on board, the most prominent are the ship’s owner Mr. Phillips, Michael who aspires to becomes Mr. Phillips partner in business, Sylvia a Dutch married woman, her husband and his accountant, Benjamin a black employee in the kitchen, Harold a crazy dude, Rodrigo a doctor with a good soul and Patricia. That’s a load eh? Nevertheless, the ship sailed and is to dock in a week. What happens on the ship between departure and arrival is the story.
On day-one, a dancer is murdered and Mr. Phillips wants to know who the culprit is. He is however more interested in something that was stolen from him. Michael is assigned the job. Will he solve the riddle? Who is the murderer?
The story travels over the time frame of seven days and seven nights with seemingly innocent characters revealing their true nature and we see how they fit the quote perfectly – A quote with which the book opens – “I trust everyone. I just don’t trust the devil inside them.” – Troy Kennedy Martin. Every character is a protagonist with the potential of turning an antagonist. The devil inside every character is revealed by the end of the journey.
What worked for me: I loved that the book started with one of my favorite quotes – It incited intrigue as I have my own versions of the quote. I loved the foreshadowing throughout the story. Very well done. I like how the author kept me hooked, looking for that one ‘thing’ that would change everything for every character. And there was one for each of them!
For example an omniscient narrator says about the Dutch married woman – ‘He was lying in the bed Sylvia and her husband slept in. They had been intimate within married sheets.’
While Harold wants to be with his wife, Michael is desperate to solve the mystery of the murder to impress Mr. Phillip. I liked Harold’ and Patricia’s character’s the best. They were carved well and his mind-dives were brilliant.
The transitions between past and present and the internal and external dialogue of the characters were seamless and solid. Enjoyed them.
Good use of formatting using bold and italics to emphasize.
‘Having to split the profits three ways angered her. She had planned the heist. It was her mother who needed saving. She had endured the soul-crushing poverty for decades. The profit difference of a two-way split as opposed to a three-way was sinfully enticing.
What didn’t work: First, by the time I read 15 pages, I was completely confused as to who was who. I was introduced to roughly 15 characters in that little time and space. Added to my fate, they all had names to remember!
I could not place myself in 1950 as descriptions and dialogue fell shot to achieve that. Expressions that didn’t work – ‘Maroon eyes’ Seriously? ‘The glittering red gown hugged Sylvia’s body as if it was her second skin.’
Benjamin suspecting Sylvia was a little out of place as she was with him when the murder happened. They even whisper when the actual scene was taking place. It was out of place and felt unnecessary.
Repetition of words such as ‘well-manicured’ (twice on the same page), ‘his back like a turtle,’ ‘metallic taste of blood,’ ‘shot of adrenaline’ and the worst was the use of ‘lavatory’ (used too many times).
Conclusion: There are too many bad people in the story with not one redeeming themselves. That is unwelcome. Also, the story starts off slow and is confusing in the beginning but halfway along it picks up pace and ends with a convincing climax.
Rating: 3 Stars
May 4, 2015
Book – Poisoned Waters
Author – Ermisenda Alvarez
Star rating – ★★★★☆
Would I read it again – yes.
Plot – very well executed, intriguing and easy to follow
Characters – varied, entertaining, unique, well developed
Movie Potential – ★★★★☆
Ease of reading – easy.
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Let’s start with the blurb -
“Bloody mistakes, ugly scars, and beautiful lies. A tale of corruption.
Helen Gardener is murdered on a trans-Atlantic cruise. The Diamond Royale sails from Southampton to New York with her murderer aboard. Set in the 1950s, Poisoned Waters follows the stories of seven unfortunate characters and how they are affected by her death. Was it merely an accident? Mr Phillips, the owner of the ship, and sponsor of the cruise, rules with an iron fist, in search of something or someone.
Lies spiral out of control as the suspects try to survive the final days on board. Conflicted by their sense of morals, greed, and lust, they realise what kind of people they really are. Who will rise? Who will fall? Who was Helen’s murderer?”
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Now to the analysis :
The plot is one of intrigue, murder and mystery. The entire story revolves around the death of dancer, Helen and the subsequent hush up of her murder. Only few people were there when she died, and therefore, they have to be kept quiet. The problems start when some are not as quiet as others. And then there’s the complication that two people, on deck at the time of the murder, know who the killer is. But no-one knows that they know.
The story is very well thought out, it’s not throwing everything at you at once, but it doesn’t drag things out too long either. The characters are very varied in talk, style, class and mannerism. There’s something here for everyone.
I know that some people are put off with the various POV (point of views) but I love it. I know when a character is important, by how well we get to know them. In this case, there are four main characters who take over the story. Four characters who know things about Helen’s murder that even they don’t realise.
The fact that this is a murder/crime, mystery/thriller puts it right in my favourite genre. The fact that it is well written and the plot kept me interested the entire way through, also makes it a rare gem. Murder mysteries are rarely done well anymore, to my finding, and it’s such a relief to find one that can be humorous without being a comedy, serious without boring you and intriguing without being overly complicated.
I like and dislike all the characters for one reason or another, as all good books should. I also had my suspicions about anyone and everyone until the very end, which all murder mysteries should. If you’re looking for an entertaining read that will keep you hooked right from the first, then pick up this book. The only comparison I’ve found with any other book/movie out there, is to say that it’s vaguely similar to Ghost Ship and yet not at all. This book is unique and a must read!
Author – Ermisenda Alvarez
Star rating – ★★★★☆
Would I read it again – yes.
Plot – very well executed, intriguing and easy to follow
Characters – varied, entertaining, unique, well developed
Movie Potential – ★★★★☆
Ease of reading – easy.
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Let’s start with the blurb -
“Bloody mistakes, ugly scars, and beautiful lies. A tale of corruption.
Helen Gardener is murdered on a trans-Atlantic cruise. The Diamond Royale sails from Southampton to New York with her murderer aboard. Set in the 1950s, Poisoned Waters follows the stories of seven unfortunate characters and how they are affected by her death. Was it merely an accident? Mr Phillips, the owner of the ship, and sponsor of the cruise, rules with an iron fist, in search of something or someone.
Lies spiral out of control as the suspects try to survive the final days on board. Conflicted by their sense of morals, greed, and lust, they realise what kind of people they really are. Who will rise? Who will fall? Who was Helen’s murderer?”
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Now to the analysis :
The plot is one of intrigue, murder and mystery. The entire story revolves around the death of dancer, Helen and the subsequent hush up of her murder. Only few people were there when she died, and therefore, they have to be kept quiet. The problems start when some are not as quiet as others. And then there’s the complication that two people, on deck at the time of the murder, know who the killer is. But no-one knows that they know.
The story is very well thought out, it’s not throwing everything at you at once, but it doesn’t drag things out too long either. The characters are very varied in talk, style, class and mannerism. There’s something here for everyone.
I know that some people are put off with the various POV (point of views) but I love it. I know when a character is important, by how well we get to know them. In this case, there are four main characters who take over the story. Four characters who know things about Helen’s murder that even they don’t realise.
The fact that this is a murder/crime, mystery/thriller puts it right in my favourite genre. The fact that it is well written and the plot kept me interested the entire way through, also makes it a rare gem. Murder mysteries are rarely done well anymore, to my finding, and it’s such a relief to find one that can be humorous without being a comedy, serious without boring you and intriguing without being overly complicated.
I like and dislike all the characters for one reason or another, as all good books should. I also had my suspicions about anyone and everyone until the very end, which all murder mysteries should. If you’re looking for an entertaining read that will keep you hooked right from the first, then pick up this book. The only comparison I’ve found with any other book/movie out there, is to say that it’s vaguely similar to Ghost Ship and yet not at all. This book is unique and a must read!
August 5, 2013
The characters in this book are written in such a way as to make them become more realistic and makes the reader want to find out more about them; however, as their true emotions and personal agendas surface you find yourself shying away from them. In developing the characters in this manner, the Author has provided an additional dimension to this book, and turns it into something more than a murder mystery, it is this extra aspect that will keep you wanting to read on. The use of some of the characters native languages really contributed to the overall makeup of them, and helped them become more alive. There is a great deal of character swapping in this book, but not enough that the reader would become confused and lose track of what was going on.
Set on a 1950’s cruise ship, the Author takes us there with ease, managing to instil the feelings of an era that was still reeling from the horrors of war. In this novel, the Author manages to bring out the rules, prejudices and class society boundaries that were prevalent at this time, without sounding preachy or judgemental about some of the points of view expressed, Obviously a lot of research in the 1950’s, and the cruise lines in particular, was carried out when writing this novel, and it shows in the descriptions of the ship. However this novel is about more than murder and the mystery that surrounds it; it is about the dark, unspoken side of human nature, and the questioning of that nature when temptation rears its ugly head. Like many of the readers of this novel, I like to have faith in humanity, but know deep down that it is flawed in an irreparable way; the Author is well aware of this too, and manages to convey this through their writing.
The fun part of reading this book for me was, the impression I got that I was reading a round of the board game Cluedo (Clue). Just when I thought I had figured it all out and was about to make my call, there came a twist that had me wondering all over again. This is a nicely paced little book, with lots of these twists and turns that brings you to a very surprising conclusion.
I would recommend it to all lovers of the mystery/murder/thriller genre, and even lovers of the board game might find this an enjoyable read.
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Set on a 1950’s cruise ship, the Author takes us there with ease, managing to instil the feelings of an era that was still reeling from the horrors of war. In this novel, the Author manages to bring out the rules, prejudices and class society boundaries that were prevalent at this time, without sounding preachy or judgemental about some of the points of view expressed, Obviously a lot of research in the 1950’s, and the cruise lines in particular, was carried out when writing this novel, and it shows in the descriptions of the ship. However this novel is about more than murder and the mystery that surrounds it; it is about the dark, unspoken side of human nature, and the questioning of that nature when temptation rears its ugly head. Like many of the readers of this novel, I like to have faith in humanity, but know deep down that it is flawed in an irreparable way; the Author is well aware of this too, and manages to convey this through their writing.
The fun part of reading this book for me was, the impression I got that I was reading a round of the board game Cluedo (Clue). Just when I thought I had figured it all out and was about to make my call, there came a twist that had me wondering all over again. This is a nicely paced little book, with lots of these twists and turns that brings you to a very surprising conclusion.
I would recommend it to all lovers of the mystery/murder/thriller genre, and even lovers of the board game might find this an enjoyable read.
Originally reviewed on: http://catesbooknuthut.wordpress.com/...
This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.
August 2, 2015
Poisoned Waters sells itself as a tale of corruption. This is an apt description.
Not just from the character's POVs either. The writing style is one of the worst I've seen in recent months. It is written in a completely removed way. Passive voice alert! Not to mention the use of adjectives was abused almost as much as some of the characters in the story.
The amount of typos and issues in the text outside of the passive voice issue, were, thankfully minor. If they'd been more prominent I'd have had to stop reading.
Strike One!
My issues with the writing style and editing aside, the story was certainly complex. Everyone was screwing everyone else. Many people hit, punched, stabbed or just down right abused the female characters and when we did find a reasonably decent male character amongst the rabble, they were from a racial minority and pigeon-holed into the completely racist societal norms from the era this book is set.
Strike Two
I did not like any of the characters. I did not like the story very much and, that synopsis... Don't bring Helen into it. She's barely even in the story, she's not important. Hell, finding her murderer isn't even important.
The convoluted plot read more like an episode of Days of our Lives than a respectable novel. This needs a serious edit to cull the problems mentioned above and the seriously out of hand storyline and character arcs.
Now, the ending... This is where I was hoping to find some redeeming quality. Alas I was mistaken. I don't want to spoil the ending for any of you who are still to read this, but really... it was so unbelievable that I think I may have strained myself from rolling my eyes in disgust too much!
Strike Three - you're outta there!
Things I noticed:
4% - humbly stood (beside) him.
27% -'pleasure pearl' really?!
39% - She disliked being made (to) wait.
The man was no(ne) other than...
50ish% - since when did they know she had the pocket watch?
65% - "If (delete if, add Is) this all you wanted?"
66% "You're (delete You're, add Your) memory isn't...
74% - desolate desert... Desolate is redundant
88% - Several dozens (either several dozen, or just dozens)...
91% - amassed should be 'surrounded' or something similar.
**Note: I was provided an electronic copy of this book in return for an honest review**
Not just from the character's POVs either. The writing style is one of the worst I've seen in recent months. It is written in a completely removed way. Passive voice alert! Not to mention the use of adjectives was abused almost as much as some of the characters in the story.
The amount of typos and issues in the text outside of the passive voice issue, were, thankfully minor. If they'd been more prominent I'd have had to stop reading.
Strike One!
My issues with the writing style and editing aside, the story was certainly complex. Everyone was screwing everyone else. Many people hit, punched, stabbed or just down right abused the female characters and when we did find a reasonably decent male character amongst the rabble, they were from a racial minority and pigeon-holed into the completely racist societal norms from the era this book is set.
Strike Two
I did not like any of the characters. I did not like the story very much and, that synopsis... Don't bring Helen into it. She's barely even in the story, she's not important. Hell, finding her murderer isn't even important.
The convoluted plot read more like an episode of Days of our Lives than a respectable novel. This needs a serious edit to cull the problems mentioned above and the seriously out of hand storyline and character arcs.
Now, the ending... This is where I was hoping to find some redeeming quality. Alas I was mistaken. I don't want to spoil the ending for any of you who are still to read this, but really... it was so unbelievable that I think I may have strained myself from rolling my eyes in disgust too much!
Strike Three - you're outta there!
Things I noticed:
4% - humbly stood (beside) him.
27% -'pleasure pearl' really?!
39% - She disliked being made (to) wait.
The man was no(ne) other than...
50ish% - since when did they know she had the pocket watch?
65% - "If (delete if, add Is) this all you wanted?"
66% "You're (delete You're, add Your) memory isn't...
74% - desolate desert... Desolate is redundant
88% - Several dozens (either several dozen, or just dozens)...
91% - amassed should be 'surrounded' or something similar.
**Note: I was provided an electronic copy of this book in return for an honest review**
September 13, 2014
Poisoned Waters by Ermisenda Alvarez promises an Agatha Christie-type mystery. The ingredients are all there in the blurb…a motley gathering of the rich and the ordinary on a luxury cruise liner, set in the 1950s, a murder mystery to be solved and several suspects to chose from. The appetite is whetted.
Unfortunately, there the similarity to Christie ends. The writing lacks Christie’s sharp crispness, the characters lack depth, there is no detective making clever deductions and there are no clues or red herrings scattered about to keep the reader guessing. Instead the reader is presented with, for the most part, the inner reflections of a number of detestable characters few of whom seem to have any redeeming features. Worst of all, their reflections are repetitive, they provide no new insights as the book progresses and they border, I am sorry to say, on the boring.
I realise that the author deliberately depicts her characters as flawed and in this she succeeds admirably but I believe she would do better to realise that readers will find it difficult to empathise with, or even care about, characters whom they find obnoxious or grossly self-centred.
I really wanted to like this writer’s work. She has a useful concept here, has a carefully constructed plot, and is prepared to experiment with her writing. Her chapter headings, obscure though they might be, are indicative of an attempt to be original as is her approach to flash-backs and the characters’ back stories. But the reader’s attention is drawn continuously to an excessive use of adjectives and adverbs, to inappropriately chosen verbs, and to a wordiness that results in dreary long-windedness. Clichés abound, similes and metaphors that seek to impress miss their mark, descriptions over-reach themselves and fall flat. The author searches too hard for the mot juste, the felicitous phrase, the memorable quote. And in the attempt, as Shakespeare might say, she comes tardy off. The story’s the thing but this writer tries too hard to be a writer rather than a story-teller…and unfortunately it shows and it distracts. Good writing, as Chris Roerden says, should stir excitement in the heart.
I am sorry to be critical of a work into which so much effort was poured. Perhaps next time this author will focus on grabbing the reader’s heart rather than trying to impress his mind.
Unfortunately, there the similarity to Christie ends. The writing lacks Christie’s sharp crispness, the characters lack depth, there is no detective making clever deductions and there are no clues or red herrings scattered about to keep the reader guessing. Instead the reader is presented with, for the most part, the inner reflections of a number of detestable characters few of whom seem to have any redeeming features. Worst of all, their reflections are repetitive, they provide no new insights as the book progresses and they border, I am sorry to say, on the boring.
I realise that the author deliberately depicts her characters as flawed and in this she succeeds admirably but I believe she would do better to realise that readers will find it difficult to empathise with, or even care about, characters whom they find obnoxious or grossly self-centred.
I really wanted to like this writer’s work. She has a useful concept here, has a carefully constructed plot, and is prepared to experiment with her writing. Her chapter headings, obscure though they might be, are indicative of an attempt to be original as is her approach to flash-backs and the characters’ back stories. But the reader’s attention is drawn continuously to an excessive use of adjectives and adverbs, to inappropriately chosen verbs, and to a wordiness that results in dreary long-windedness. Clichés abound, similes and metaphors that seek to impress miss their mark, descriptions over-reach themselves and fall flat. The author searches too hard for the mot juste, the felicitous phrase, the memorable quote. And in the attempt, as Shakespeare might say, she comes tardy off. The story’s the thing but this writer tries too hard to be a writer rather than a story-teller…and unfortunately it shows and it distracts. Good writing, as Chris Roerden says, should stir excitement in the heart.
I am sorry to be critical of a work into which so much effort was poured. Perhaps next time this author will focus on grabbing the reader’s heart rather than trying to impress his mind.
August 27, 2014
Review. Poisoned Waters by Ermisenda
Ermisenda sent me a copy of her book in exchange for an honest review. The synopsis: this writer has talent, passion, dedication and needs to brush up on techniques.
This author demonstrates many qualities of a good writer such as attention to physical details. The opening of Chapter 16 called Cut Ruby demonstrates her ability to take us into the simple scene of one protagonist’s morning shave so deeply the reader almost smells the shaving cream scent wafting on warm, humid air. The reader is also given the detail of a shining blade, important since this book is a murder mystery and blades play a dominant role.
Another strength is driving action. The author creates action in every moment; however as the story progresses the action reads with less and less control.
This is a difficulty in the writing as is the repetition. Getting a handle on what needs to be written, and what readers already know delineates skill in terms of the craft of writing.
A strength in the story involves some characterization, and in this ensemble piece, the sheer number of characters pose a challenge.
One who stands out is the one who is mentally challenged. His dementia revolves around the early death of his dear wife. We are led to believe her death may not have been an accident as was first revealed.
Trying to round the bend of giving information in a timely manner and then deepening that information, such as revealing how this character with dementia lost his wife and then encouraging readers to believe he may be the killer, takes a good deal of skill.
Unfortunately, it seems in this case the excitement of the moment overcame the writer’s best intentions. Instead of feeling as though she’s watching a skilled runner, the reader begins to believe the movement is spontaneous, unintentional, purely spur of the moment. As a result some of the writing suffers from a sense of being made up on the spot, rather than carefully and intentionally crafted. Punctuation irregularities and some inconsistencies with italics create distance and weaken the overall effect. The book is a three star.
Ermisenda sent me a copy of her book in exchange for an honest review. The synopsis: this writer has talent, passion, dedication and needs to brush up on techniques.
This author demonstrates many qualities of a good writer such as attention to physical details. The opening of Chapter 16 called Cut Ruby demonstrates her ability to take us into the simple scene of one protagonist’s morning shave so deeply the reader almost smells the shaving cream scent wafting on warm, humid air. The reader is also given the detail of a shining blade, important since this book is a murder mystery and blades play a dominant role.
Another strength is driving action. The author creates action in every moment; however as the story progresses the action reads with less and less control.
This is a difficulty in the writing as is the repetition. Getting a handle on what needs to be written, and what readers already know delineates skill in terms of the craft of writing.
A strength in the story involves some characterization, and in this ensemble piece, the sheer number of characters pose a challenge.
One who stands out is the one who is mentally challenged. His dementia revolves around the early death of his dear wife. We are led to believe her death may not have been an accident as was first revealed.
Trying to round the bend of giving information in a timely manner and then deepening that information, such as revealing how this character with dementia lost his wife and then encouraging readers to believe he may be the killer, takes a good deal of skill.
Unfortunately, it seems in this case the excitement of the moment overcame the writer’s best intentions. Instead of feeling as though she’s watching a skilled runner, the reader begins to believe the movement is spontaneous, unintentional, purely spur of the moment. As a result some of the writing suffers from a sense of being made up on the spot, rather than carefully and intentionally crafted. Punctuation irregularities and some inconsistencies with italics create distance and weaken the overall effect. The book is a three star.
August 6, 2013
I was given an ePub copy of this work by the author in exchange for a fair and honest review. It was because it is a thriller/crime/mystery novel that I had decided to accept this piece of work as I do enjoy that genre.
As the Diamond Royale Cruise ship makes it way from Europe to New York some unfortunate incidences occur. A woman is stabbed on the deck; another woman comes to her aid to try to help her. A gentleman hears the attack happen, but is unable to see who is involved as he has his own accident. Another couple is on the deck, but they do not want to get caught doing what they were doing, so they both run off in different directions as they were forbidden by society to be together.
The woman who was stabbed, Helen, dies. The woman who came to her aid, Patricia, is detained for questioning. The gentleman who had his own accident, Harold, turns out to be a crazy man. And the other couple, Sylvia and Benjamin, tries to keep their secret love affair just that…a secret.
Mr. Phillips, the owner of the ship and banker, had requested for Michael, one of his current employees and one that desperately wanted to be a partner in the bank, to investigate the murder of Helen, and to retrieve something stolen from him that was very valuable. And, he wanted the investigation completed by the time they docked in New York.
During the investigation, other murders and attempted murder occur and someone is detained. Michael believes that he has caught the murder. Mr. Phillip wants the thief caught as well. Michael catches the thief. He has completed his tasks…or has he?
I cannot lie; the start of this book was a little difficult to follow. I had come very close to putting this into my CNF (could not finish) pile. But, I am glad that I stuck to it. I gave it 3 stars because of how confusing and difficult the start was, and because I didn’t feel that “connection” that I look for when reading. Once I got past chapter 6, though, it all seemed to flow together and was quite an enjoyable read.
As the Diamond Royale Cruise ship makes it way from Europe to New York some unfortunate incidences occur. A woman is stabbed on the deck; another woman comes to her aid to try to help her. A gentleman hears the attack happen, but is unable to see who is involved as he has his own accident. Another couple is on the deck, but they do not want to get caught doing what they were doing, so they both run off in different directions as they were forbidden by society to be together.
The woman who was stabbed, Helen, dies. The woman who came to her aid, Patricia, is detained for questioning. The gentleman who had his own accident, Harold, turns out to be a crazy man. And the other couple, Sylvia and Benjamin, tries to keep their secret love affair just that…a secret.
Mr. Phillips, the owner of the ship and banker, had requested for Michael, one of his current employees and one that desperately wanted to be a partner in the bank, to investigate the murder of Helen, and to retrieve something stolen from him that was very valuable. And, he wanted the investigation completed by the time they docked in New York.
During the investigation, other murders and attempted murder occur and someone is detained. Michael believes that he has caught the murder. Mr. Phillip wants the thief caught as well. Michael catches the thief. He has completed his tasks…or has he?
I cannot lie; the start of this book was a little difficult to follow. I had come very close to putting this into my CNF (could not finish) pile. But, I am glad that I stuck to it. I gave it 3 stars because of how confusing and difficult the start was, and because I didn’t feel that “connection” that I look for when reading. Once I got past chapter 6, though, it all seemed to flow together and was quite an enjoyable read.
March 6, 2015
POISONED WATERS is a novel that takes place in the 1950s, a time of supposed innocence. I was a child in the 50s, but I was already reading books, some beyond my years. I enjoy going back in time by reading books from those eras where vulgarity in print was not just rare, but almost impossible to find. Although this book is contemporary, it hearkens back to the time in which the action takes place. Although in the description on Amazon there is this warning "Book contains mild adult themes: violence, death, and sex scenes. Nothing explicit," the words 'nothing explicit' tell it all. It is a book you can share with your aging mom or granny.
It takes a certain skill to create a cast of characters that can and do interact on multiple levels in a closed-room mystery setting. The closed room in this novel is a cruise ship, so to be accurate, it is a closed-rooms mystery. There is, of course, the requisite murder, rich men making shady deals, and the potential low-lifes scrabbling for more than their current lot in life provides.
As I have stated before in reviews, I don't give anything away, I just give my opinion of the book or story under scrutiny. I fully realize that this might not be a book for everyone. Perhaps it is not on a par with the greats, who I see as Raymond Chandler and Dashiell Hammett, but there is enough character development within a noir setting to make this book highly appealing to me.
I must add a note of apology to the author who sent me a copy of this book in July 2014 to review. I had every intention of reading it as soon as I had finished one or two others for which I promised a review. Really, I do not read as slowly as the time lapse between receiving the book and posting a review would suggest. In August 2014 I had a devastating personal loss; my son, aged 33, with a wife and two babies, drowned. I've still not recovered from this loss, but I am trying to get back to reading those books for which I have promised a review.
It takes a certain skill to create a cast of characters that can and do interact on multiple levels in a closed-room mystery setting. The closed room in this novel is a cruise ship, so to be accurate, it is a closed-rooms mystery. There is, of course, the requisite murder, rich men making shady deals, and the potential low-lifes scrabbling for more than their current lot in life provides.
As I have stated before in reviews, I don't give anything away, I just give my opinion of the book or story under scrutiny. I fully realize that this might not be a book for everyone. Perhaps it is not on a par with the greats, who I see as Raymond Chandler and Dashiell Hammett, but there is enough character development within a noir setting to make this book highly appealing to me.
I must add a note of apology to the author who sent me a copy of this book in July 2014 to review. I had every intention of reading it as soon as I had finished one or two others for which I promised a review. Really, I do not read as slowly as the time lapse between receiving the book and posting a review would suggest. In August 2014 I had a devastating personal loss; my son, aged 33, with a wife and two babies, drowned. I've still not recovered from this loss, but I am trying to get back to reading those books for which I have promised a review.
July 31, 2013
POISONED WATERS is a thrilling mystery set on an Atlantic cruise travelling from the UK to the USA where a mid-cruise murder means that the murderer still on board.
A lot of characters are introduced early in the book which I found to be very confusing – I just jotted down the names and the relationships and was then easily able to keep track of everyone.
The story is set in the 1950s and author, Ermisenda Alvarez, has recreated the period very well. With all the characters demonstrating, and living, the prevailing social views of the time. One of the male characters even musing that as a group women seemed to coming out publically and demanding rights and this was not healthy! Helen Gardner is not the first murder victim by a long shot, the body count mounts up, blood is shed, and beatings occur as the story twists and turns. Some characters take advantage of the situation, others are bullied, a few are injured, more than a few killed, there are muggings, sets up and by the end of the book you are just gasping for breath both pleased and sorry that the ride is over. The killer of Helen is finally revealed – but wait there is more and it will surprise you! There are quite a few back stories and they all have endings that will surprise! Sometimes you have no idea who to trust – who is a victim and who is a manipulator.
The pace is fast after the slow introduction; the tension had me sitting on the edge of my seat. One thing you can be sure of you will be surprised at some of the outcomes and I recommend this to any whodunit reader.
A lot of characters are introduced early in the book which I found to be very confusing – I just jotted down the names and the relationships and was then easily able to keep track of everyone.
The story is set in the 1950s and author, Ermisenda Alvarez, has recreated the period very well. With all the characters demonstrating, and living, the prevailing social views of the time. One of the male characters even musing that as a group women seemed to coming out publically and demanding rights and this was not healthy! Helen Gardner is not the first murder victim by a long shot, the body count mounts up, blood is shed, and beatings occur as the story twists and turns. Some characters take advantage of the situation, others are bullied, a few are injured, more than a few killed, there are muggings, sets up and by the end of the book you are just gasping for breath both pleased and sorry that the ride is over. The killer of Helen is finally revealed – but wait there is more and it will surprise you! There are quite a few back stories and they all have endings that will surprise! Sometimes you have no idea who to trust – who is a victim and who is a manipulator.
The pace is fast after the slow introduction; the tension had me sitting on the edge of my seat. One thing you can be sure of you will be surprised at some of the outcomes and I recommend this to any whodunit reader.
March 11, 2015
The begining of this novel is a bit slow. This may be a good thing. It gives you a chance to get a bit more familiar with a few of the characters a circumstances. as you get deeper into the story more characters and events pop into the story. Things are never what they seem to be.
The storyline has people involved from all walks of life, murder, infidelity, intrigue and greed. In this whodunit, you will be sure you have the mystery solved but watch out because you don't.
I started and after the first few chapters I grabbed a notepad and treated this as a game...a logic puzzle. I wrote down the name of the character and who thye were in relation to other characters and or occupation. I checked them off as possible or not for being a murderer. I am very good at logic puzzles and clue. Humph! That turned out to be a disaster. The plot kept proving me wrong. My list looked more like a chinese checkerboard than a logic puzzle. Now that is a good mystery.
I was not reading this as an editor or proofreader. Nor, was I reading it as a literature professor. I was reading it for the fun and love of a good mystery. It had me. Therefore I am giving the author a 4 star review. Why not 5? That is only because the begining was just a bit slow. No one is perfect all the time, as were the charaacters in this great novel.
I would recommend this book to anyone who loves murder mysterys. It is a great novel.
August 27, 2013
I WAS OFFERED A FREE E-COPY OF THIS BOOK IN EXCHANGE FOR PROVIDING A REVIEW.
This was an easy read, read over a weekend in between chores and engagements. Overall, I'd rate it no more than three stars. I wanted to like it more than I actually did.
The good: It's a mystery, my favorite genre. The author did a good job of general character development and setting the stage/clues for solving the mystery of who the murderer(s) was.
The not-so-good: The book needs serious editing and a general re-write keeping some basic Writer 101 concepts in mind. For example, the author tells vs. shows what is happening and, as a result, uses way too many adjectives and adverbs to describe characters and action. And often those descriptions were used inappropriately: "the malicious knife", "the cigarette crashed to the floor". This became distracting and took away from the story itself. In addition, the book did not adequately describe the context early enough to set the stage for the story. It took a long time into the book to find out the year or era that the story takes place and a description of the ship itself and the reason for the passengers to be on the ship was not disclosed in the beginning as it probably should have been.
I think with some major editing and some re-writes, the book has potential.
This was an easy read, read over a weekend in between chores and engagements. Overall, I'd rate it no more than three stars. I wanted to like it more than I actually did.
The good: It's a mystery, my favorite genre. The author did a good job of general character development and setting the stage/clues for solving the mystery of who the murderer(s) was.
The not-so-good: The book needs serious editing and a general re-write keeping some basic Writer 101 concepts in mind. For example, the author tells vs. shows what is happening and, as a result, uses way too many adjectives and adverbs to describe characters and action. And often those descriptions were used inappropriately: "the malicious knife", "the cigarette crashed to the floor". This became distracting and took away from the story itself. In addition, the book did not adequately describe the context early enough to set the stage for the story. It took a long time into the book to find out the year or era that the story takes place and a description of the ship itself and the reason for the passengers to be on the ship was not disclosed in the beginning as it probably should have been.
I think with some major editing and some re-writes, the book has potential.
August 19, 2014
Poisoned Waters- rating is 5 stars
by Ermisenda Alvarez (Goodreads Author)
Passenger Helen Gardener is murdered while traveling on a trans-Atlantic cruise aboard The Diamond Royale . It sails from Southampton to New York. Setting is in the 1950s. It tells the stories of characters and how they are affected by her death. Was it murder or could it have been merely an accident?
Seven people. I enjoyed the way the author writes . I could follow each character and see them, see what was going on,etc. I liked being introduced to the characters right away. Knwoing who they were so that I could picture what each one may have thought about the victim.
I've read Agatha Christie books and this one reminded me of reading one of her books. I highly recommend this book as one to read. It has a great plot, wonderful writing and makes you feel as if you are on board with them.
Poisoned Waters- something will happen -- the murder --and it will affect each of the players as the book progresses. Imagine being on board the ship as it sails and all of the sudden a murder happens. Find out by reading this book.
by Ermisenda Alvarez (Goodreads Author)
Passenger Helen Gardener is murdered while traveling on a trans-Atlantic cruise aboard The Diamond Royale . It sails from Southampton to New York. Setting is in the 1950s. It tells the stories of characters and how they are affected by her death. Was it murder or could it have been merely an accident?
Seven people. I enjoyed the way the author writes . I could follow each character and see them, see what was going on,etc. I liked being introduced to the characters right away. Knwoing who they were so that I could picture what each one may have thought about the victim.
I've read Agatha Christie books and this one reminded me of reading one of her books. I highly recommend this book as one to read. It has a great plot, wonderful writing and makes you feel as if you are on board with them.
Poisoned Waters- something will happen -- the murder --and it will affect each of the players as the book progresses. Imagine being on board the ship as it sails and all of the sudden a murder happens. Find out by reading this book.
June 16, 2013
I read this book as a beta reader and have to say I truly enjoyed reading it.
The book is about the murder of a person on a ship and the way the story is written makes you doubt who is the real killer. The very good aspect of this book is that more than just the murder keeps you hooked. The side stories and backgrounds of the characters are all very realistic and are written in such a way that it is enjoyable to find out more. It also makes the characters come alive more and it adds to the potential motives of the killer.
Reading phrases in different languages, namely Dutch, Spanish and German, was a nice touch to the story. It contributed to the fact that the characters all had different backgrounds and were from different countries.
One thing to note is that there is swapping of characters, however this never made me confused while reading. If anything this added depth to the story and added to the mystery. At times I had the idea I was reading about the murderer, but then later on I doubted if I was.
The book is about the murder of a person on a ship and the way the story is written makes you doubt who is the real killer. The very good aspect of this book is that more than just the murder keeps you hooked. The side stories and backgrounds of the characters are all very realistic and are written in such a way that it is enjoyable to find out more. It also makes the characters come alive more and it adds to the potential motives of the killer.
Reading phrases in different languages, namely Dutch, Spanish and German, was a nice touch to the story. It contributed to the fact that the characters all had different backgrounds and were from different countries.
One thing to note is that there is swapping of characters, however this never made me confused while reading. If anything this added depth to the story and added to the mystery. At times I had the idea I was reading about the murderer, but then later on I doubted if I was.
September 12, 2016
Once on board a ship until destination is reached there is not much place to wonder off. That is what one would think at least before taking a peek into Poisoned Waters where it is indeed revealed that not only there is a place to hide from murderous accusations and dubious investigation on what would seem a tedious ocean trip, but a bit of room for dangerous liaisons also, in addition of theft. One certainly doesn't seek attention of vessel personnel when murder takes place, especially with number of accidents growing and suspects being treated at some times with promises of bruises and at other with anxiety colored isolation.
Solidly paced, with intriguing plot and writing which could perhaps use some toning down in favor of character development, Poisoned Waters makes a pleasant reading.
Solidly paced, with intriguing plot and writing which could perhaps use some toning down in favor of character development, Poisoned Waters makes a pleasant reading.
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