Obedience

by Cari Waites

To pay for his father's gambling debts, 18 year old Danny has sold himself to Peter Archer. Now Archer intends to share him with a business associate.

This 4800 word short includes explicit content, including: m/m, dubious consent, voyeurism and BDSM. All characters are 18 years or over.

Genres: BDSM, M M Romance, Dark, Erotica

20 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 10, 2013

Reviews

[Julio Genao · Rating 4 out of 5]

So gross.

And so good.

Not even sexy. Just fucking good.

Like watching a documentary about a grisly disaster can be good.

It went like this:

boner
analclench
boner
revulsion
boner
MURDEROUS RAGE
dull resentment
boner (semi-chub)

Part 5 is not just going to read itself, now, is it.

[Elizabetta · Rating 4 out of 5]

The blurb says it all. Oh, except for the very good writing and the savvy ploy of dragging this out over several follow ups that you'll just have to have on hand. Put this on the hot tamale train.



Gamble Everything
part 1/Sold = 3.5 stars
part 2/Punishment = 3.5 stars
part 3/Preparation = 4 stars (enemas! oh my!)
part 4/Obedience = 4 stars (candy caning)
part 5/Submission = 4.5 stars (sssssounding)
part 6/Pain = 4 stars (fisting gesticulating)
part 7/Rebirth = 4.5 stars

[Don Bradshaw · Rating 4 out of 5]

Archer shares Daniel with a friend and breaks the boy even further. I like that Daniel has been brought down to his most animalistic thoughts but the daddy bit is a turn off. A big ouch to getting dry fucked.

[LenaRibka · Rating 4 out of 5]

I've read it as a complete compilation of all 7 volumes of the series.

My review.

[Lilia Ford · Rating 4 out of 5]

Daniel spends more time in "the chair." Crazy stuff.

[Em · Rating 4 out of 5]

I'm just loving all the daddy kink in these books. DAMN HOT!!!

[Lelyana's Reviews · Rating 3 out of 5]

Review in a newest compilation edition.
Still I have no idea how to rate this one.