Thanks to Netgalley for a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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It's not that I want to be mean. I understand and appreciate that someone has spent a lot of time and effort and energy writing this book. It's just that this book really irritated me, in many ways, and I wouldn't be a very good reviewer if I didn't tell you guys.
So, let's start with problem number 1: Raine, the main character. She could be really horrible. She was the representation of what people who don't like teenage girls think teenage girls are like. She judged everyone harshly. She'd introduce every new character with a big, long paragraph about their background and nicknames and generally be a little bit mean about them. She considered herself above these other people. She wasn't much of a character to be honest; other than being mean, I can't actually think of a defining characteristic for her.
Problem number 2: The information dump at the end. We literally spend 90% of the book having no clue what is going on, other than there is a tenuous link to Norse mythology, and then in the last couple of pages everything happens. It doesn't make me want to read on; it makes me regret reading the other 90% of the book. The mystery surrounding Torin was drawn out for too long, to the point where it got boring and frustrating. Some of the mythology didn't even make that much sense, to be honest. And, I don't know if it's a word taken from Norse mythology or it's made up, or what, but I don't like the word Norns to describe a certain mythological thingie (I wanted to say creature, but they weren't really creatures, as such). Anyway, I just don't think Norn sounds very good, but this is a minor thing really.
Problem number 3: Other than some horrible girls at school and a couple of near-death experiences, nothing actually happens for the majority of this book. It's mostly just Raine swooning over Torin, yet ignoring him at the same time. In fact, the romance factor of this book is quite badly plotted, because it's confusing. There's nothing wrong with having a main character that is confused over two boys, and who she wants to be with. That is fine. That is realistic. But the way this was written meant that Raine just came off as unlikeable. She refused to even be nice to Torin, then got angry when he was with another girl, and was really horrible abut her. It just... wasn't very nice to read.
And, speaking of the romance, I didn't understand Eirik and Raine and their relationship. At the beginning, she talks about them being in an unofficial relationship, and she fancies him, but he pushed Raine away, and I thought he liked Cora. Then all of a sudden, Raine dresses up and Eirik is confessing his love and kissing her and stuff. And saying he's always fancied her. So why didn't he kiss her when she asked? And then she decides she doesn't like her, but he's still declaring all sorts of undying love. And then, at the end, during all the action and info dump, she seems to realise he likes Cora. But all he's done for 80% of the book is talk about loving Raine! So why is one look suddenly evidence for his love for Cora? Where is the consistency?!
Problem number 4: Some of the reactions are just so unrealistic. Raine's dad returns after he's been missing for months? Quick hug, and then she saunters off with her friends. She accepts magic far too easily, but at the same time isn't overly curious. Nothing feels right. She overreacts about some things, and then under reacts about others. I just didn't understand Raine, or any of the other characters, really.
I got this as an ARC from Netgalley, and as such it contained quite a few typos and missed words and wrong tenses and stuff like that. I'm assuming the actual version of the book is not littered with these mistakes, and that they were picked up in a proof-read at some point.
Overall, I thought the idea for the plot was one that had some potential, but it didn't really go far. I actually enjoyed the first chapter or two, but nothing much happened and I began to dislike Raine more and more. It actually came off a bit tired and overused too; I considered it a terrible mix between Twilight, TMI (that rune drawer thing, for example), and the Lux series (mean boy next door? Sounds familiar. I was convinced for a while that Torin would be an alien).
This book was just a lot of things that I didn't want to read; I am tired of dangerous and mean boys with a secret and girls who do nothing but put each other down and confused love triangles. There might be something in this for other people; it has a lot of four star reviews. I can see why people might like this, but too much irritated me about this book, especially Raine.