Oh, Patricia, what did you *DO*!!!?!?!!??
First, let's start with the cover. See that enormously huge CHRISTMAS TREE covered in tinsel and ELECTRIC LIGHTS?!?!?! That's forbidden, remember? Amish don't allow X-mess trees.
Then there's the child with her hair all neatly tucked in a bonnet. Joy's hair is too short to tuck into a bonnet, and wisps around her face THE ENTIRE BOOK. Oh, and the girl on the cover? SHE DOESN'T HAVE DOWN SYNDROME.
I can't believe you let that hit the shelves.
And that's not even hitting the story.
In this one, Caleb is a roughneck oil-rigger in Texas who's never around. Just came off a four week stint at sea... so HOW exactly does his ex-girlfriend from NINE YEARS AGO know when to show up, there? She doesn't complain about having to wait for him, so we're left to believe the timing just happens to be right?
She's bone thin, haggard from drugs and alcohol, been living in who-knows-what mud puddle, and shows up to shove an eight-year old kid at him and tells him it's his. Thing is, he DOESN'T DENY IT OR DEMAND A PATERNITY TEST, shoving her out the door? Hello, it could be *ANYBODY'S* kid, but he doesn't even contest it? She LEFT him and stole all his money - you would take her word, seriously?!?!!
Then she 'steps outside for a cigarette' - and like he didn't see this coming - takes off. He waits THREE HOURS before deciding she isn't coming back. ?!?!? He should be taking the child to the cops and telling them she's apparently an abandoned child. If he wanted to seek paternity tests at that point, it would've been fine, but... ?!?!?!?! Where did he check his brain?
Instead, he takes 'Joy' (an only child, spoiled brat, I-don't-care-WHAT-syndrome-she-has, unloved, uneducated eight year old) to Pennsylvania. Because HE doesn't want her, either - he's going to dump her at his parent's house. So he basically tucks her under his arm and lugs her to Amish Country to dump at the home of people he crapped all over. Who also crapped all over him. Because *LUVVVV*... inspired!
They get to AmishWorld, and 'Joy' that she is, she gets out of the car while he's in a store and runs off screaming for her mommy... then pitches a tantrum, kicking and screaming on the pavement. And it's here we meet Leah, the Amish woman who takes one look at her and says, "What a sweet, darling child!"
Say WHAT?!?!?!
"I've seen a temper tantrum or two in my time," Leah assures him. WHERE? She has no children of her own, and while she's a TEACHER, if the Amish kids are acting like that in school...???? What the farts?!?!?! I thought they were raised to sit through THREE HOUR services with no problem. This whole thing stinks of BS. But Leah is charmed by Joy's antics, apparently.
Meanwhile, there's the underlying history plot that has to be addressed. Caleb had a car (frowned on, but during rumspringa not unheard of, but Davids weirdly treats it as a 'sin' in this book, even though young boys drive, have cellphones, play video games, etc. all the time) as a teenager. He took his (also teenaged/rumspringa) brother to a party (GASP!), then gave him the keys (HORROR!) and dared him to try driving (UNHEARD OF! Wait, actually, not.)
Naturally, the brother hits a buggy and disfigures the face of a girl in their district in the accident. Caleb took the fall for the incident so his perfect brother could remain 'perfect', since he was the 'hellion' brother, anyhow.
Then the girl that got disfigured claims Caleb knocked her up. Now THAT he wouldn't take the blame for, but everyone took her word over his because 'poor maimed girl' vs. hellion's word... amIright? That's why he took off, angry, and didn't come back for a decade. BTW, the girl is Leah's sister, now married to Caleb's brother. And everyone HATES Caleb. Wayne, because of guilt/secrets, Sister, because of lies/secrets/self-loathing, and Leah, because hurt sister.
Except NONE OF THIS is Amish behavior. They immediately forgive all - or so the true story goes. Yet here we have NONE of that. Wayne can't stand Caleb, is hating him to his face in front of everyone, spitting vitriol. Sister won't even look at him, refuses to let her son near him. That... doesn't sound like forgiveness to me. Yet these are the *upstanding* Amish that are backed by the congregation, and not Caleb, who's there facing everyone, seeking truth/honesty/forgiveness.
NO. JUST. N.O. That's NOT how the Amish work.
It gets WORSE. Joy jumps out of a moving buggy because temper tantrum. ((Which begs the question 'how did she get to PA from TX without jumping out of a moving car???')) She wouldn't DO that - it's not in the character of a child NOT to be afraid of something like that. And yeah, she has Downs, but she's 'polite, chrischun' Downs, because she has no learning disabilities (they're all blamed on Englisch Granny not teaching her to read or write - and she learns the ENTIRE alphabet in two weeks in the book, so... no mental stunting, here), she knows she looks different/has Downs, and she doesn't follow patterns or rely on people to help her - she just takes off pell-mell at the store, from the school, from her grandparents. That's NOT Downs behavior. Downs pretty much ensures mental delays, but we don't see that, here. It's all wrong.
Then comes the REALLY fun part. The X-mess pageant at the school. Amish don't believe in Santa or Frosty or trees with presents... so the *ONLY* story they would perform is the X-mess Pageant. ((And I say X-mess, because it's NOT Biblical in any way, shape or form, and it's fellowshipping darkness mixed with light, as all chrischuns do.)) Anyhow, the Amish only perform once a year, because only once a year is 'hochmut' allowed (Hochmut = pride/showcasing).
This book takes it six notches higher, because Joy showed up at the beginning of December, and there wasn't time to add her to the pageant they already cast, so the kids wrote an 'extra' play so she could be in it. And what is that play? (((wait for it...))) THE X-Mess Pageant!! A-gain!!!
Because imagination, right, Davids? Only let's call it the JOY pageant!
Because THIS time, "Behold, I bring you tidings of great Joy" becomes, "Hey, everybody! I'm JOY!! That's MY name!!" Seriously? I'm the GREAT JOY? Can you say 'hochmut on steroids'?! They wouldn't be smiling and encouraging that, I'm sorry. Amish are against self-elevation, and Joy is *ALL* about that. And indulged, which is utterly distasteful.
Worse, she and her dad have only been in town a few weeks, Leah *just* fell for him, they aren't Amish, Caleb's still an outsider and unbaptised, and they haven't even talked to the elders about anything, and JOY is up there, telling the ENTIRE community that "my daddy is gonna marry the teacher and I'm gonna have a new mommy!"
Um, your daddy hasn't completed *anything*, hasn't spoken to *anyone*, and this would NOT be an announcement anyone would accept, especially considering the gossip that her daddy is a man-ho who knocked up one of their innocents and then fled for nine years, during which time he knocked up ANOTHER woman and had *YOU*. Maybe - we don't even know THAT. He's been to ONE service, still has a job and a place elsewhere...
How. About. NO!
I'm utterly NOT impressed. This was garbage.
And hugely disappointing.