Tentacle Pool

by Melanie Tushmore

Genres: Fantasy, M M Romance, Short Stories

1 pages, ebook

First published May 1, 2011

About the author

Writer of fiction including themes

Alternative subcultures: goths, punk rockers, rebels and outcasts

Contemporary
Horror
Fantasy
Erotic Fiction
Homoerotica
Male/Male
Slash
Gay
LGBTQ Fiction

and very British Humour

Reviews

[SheReadsALot · Rating 4 out of 5]

A young musician is stuck with an idiot older brother who can't navigate a ship properly. Aire, the musician, ends up on a deserted island in ancient Greece. It's mythology based which I like. Lots.

And Aire meets a tentacled deity named Sidian.

Tentsex commences.

Cute, quick, hot and free. Need I say more?

3.5 stars but I will round up.

[Crispy · Rating 3 out of 5]

The tentacle tale equivalent of dolphin-safe tinned tuna in springwater: no humans or creatures were harmed in the making of this story but it desperately needed some saltiness.

[Elizabetta · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars

Sweet boy summons up a very accommodating tentacle god. A sparkling little divertissement (and free). NIcely done for a ten minute read... I could read more...

[Trix · Rating 3 out of 5]

Cute and short.

Aire is a young musician in Greek times, forced to sail with his brother around the mainland when they reach a seemingly deserted island. He encounters a tentacle god within the depth of a small pond and is happy to serve him.

It was easy to get into the feel of the story, come to like Aire and enjoy his little tryst with Sidian. I would have wanted Sidian to keep Aire, not return him to the human world. But oh well.

[Neyjour · Rating 3 out of 5]

I enjoyed this one. Just wish it had been a little bit longer! :)

Sidian was really fascinating, and I would have liked to have known more about him. I also would have liked for the underwater scene to be longer. There's just something so sexy about sex underwater, while someone else breathes for you. :P

The ending made me chuckle, but I wonder what happens later? After they leave the island, will Aire never see him again unless he returns to the island? Is Sidian strictly a freshwater creature, or can he survive in the ocean? Could he even get to the ocean if he wanted to? And would he even do that for a mortal?

This is really just an erotic encounter, not romance, but I guess I'm always looking for the romantic, happily-ever-after side of things. :P

[Hc · Rating 3 out of 5]

Free Online read. Was actually a cute little read. Looking for water, he's pulled underneath for a sexual encounter. More detail and above water with some 'visible' noise would have made it better

[Curio Pun · Rating 2 out of 5]

short story
cute and hot

[Ayanna · Rating 4 out of 5]

:D It's adorable.