Once again, I'm in the minority when it comes to reviewing a book.
Maybe I didn't give this book enough of a chance? Probably but by the 3rd chapter, I knew this wasn't the book for me. There are too many books out there to slog through a book that has you gritting your teeth and annoyed.
The concept of the book is, frankly, ridiculous. A guy, Wade, has to marry within three months and stay married for three months in order to keep his inheritance. This guy can't find any woman to marry him.....right. If he's as rich as this book claims, then I'm sure somebody out there would have jumped at the chance. He has three days left to find a wife. This author really likes the number three.
Enter Allie. A girl desperate for money. So desperate that she jumps at the chance to marry a complete stranger that could very well be a psycho or sociopath. Why does she need the money? Because her parents were in an accident, her dad died. Her mother is in a coma and needs to be moved to a long term care facility. She can't afford a nice one. Um..... this reason is so thin that you can practically see through it!
Allie is 24 but looks and acts 14.
Wade is 29 but looks and acts 19.
SIGH.
By the third chapter, the only thing we know about Allie and how she looks is that she's got gigantic cartoon sized blue eyes. Yes, we are told over and over and over about her big blue eyes. We don't know anything else about her. Well she wears her hair in a ponytail but have no idea about any other of physical characteristics. We know even less about Wade.
Then her friend Ginny enters the picture. She has all the personality that Allie lacks. She is blazing hot when she shows up to stop the wedding. I mean literally! Her temper and her looks and Wade notices them both. The author describes Ginny. I started to think that this book was actually about Ginny and Wade! WHY WOULD the author do this? Ginny and Wade had more chemistry than bland oatmeal Allie.
I deleted the book from my Kindle Unlimited at that point.
I have no interest in reading a book where the author can't be bothered to describe the main characters but paints the side kick in loving broad strokes. WTH?
Also, the dialogue and pace was stilted. It plodded along. I practically felt the tap tap tap of the words coming out in a halting manner. The word granddaddy was used so much that by the end of the first chapter, I was gritting my teeth in annoyance. A grown man just would not stop with this word! This did not read like a professional author had written it. It was amateurish and painful.
I may give this author another try because there was potential in the writing in this book. I just don't have the patience or desire to wade (haha) through chapters to find it.
I feel bad leaving a 1-star rating. However, according to the Good Reads rating system that means I don't like the book. Since I didn't like it enough to finish it? Anyways, others love it so give it a try. This is just my opinion.