Fucked in the Night Club Toilets

by Conner Hayden

WARNING: This is an erotic short story for ADULTS ONLY! All characters are over the age of eighteen and the story contains scenes of oral sex and penetration
Featuring erotic juicy scenes, this lesbian erotika story is guaranteed to keep you glued to your Kindle like nothing else!

Description: A young woman on a night out finds herself the focus of attention of a beautiful older woman. She is flattered and lets the woman play with her pussy under a table and then take her into a toilet cubicle to lick and finger her to an orgasm.

Extract:

The woman leaned across to Susie’s, close enough that she could feel the hot breath on her ear. “Spread your thighs a little,” the woman whispered softly. The excitement coursing through her made Susie do as she was told straight away. She felt the fingers sliding along the smooth skin of her inner thigh, moving ever higher. As the fingers reached her panties, a slight moan escaped her lips and the woman grinned.

“Feel good?” she asked and Susie could only nod her head, afraid that if she opened her mouth she would let out a louder moan. She closed her eyes at the gorgeous sensation of the fingers stroking onto her panties. As the woman worked them along the outline of Susie’s pussy lips she could feel the material getting wetter. It made her stroke harder and a soft moan escaped Susie’s lips again as the pleasure flowed through her body. She suddenly opened her eyes and looked around, wondering if what was happening to her was obvious to anyone. Her friends remained on the dance floor, so no one was really sitting close and those around Susie and the woman seemed to be absorbed in their own little worlds. As far as she could tell, no one was aware of the woman playing with her, so Susie relaxed to enjoy the feel of the fingers stroking over her panties.

The woman slid her fingers up and down the outline of the pussy lips, forcing her fingers harder and harder onto the material. Susie could feel her panties being forced into her pussy and her breathing got heavier still. The woman suddenly wanted more and eased the pressure of her fingers. Susie wondered if the fun was over, but her excitement grew as she felt the woman move her fingers to the side of her panties and work them underneath.

16 pages, Kindle Edition

First published June 29, 2012

Reviews

[Akshay · Rating 1 out of 5]

Fucked in the Night Club Toilets by Conner Hayden

Conner Hayden’s title is deliberately confrontational, signaling transgression before the first page is turned. Yet beyond the shock value, this short erotic work reveals both the strengths and the limitations of ultra-brief, premise-driven fiction.

Premise & Narrative Focus

At its core, the story is structured around immediacy: fleeting connection, anonymity, and the claustrophobic intensity of a nightclub setting. Rather than building a layered plot, the narrative prioritizes sensation and mood. This approach can be effective in micro-erotica, but here it results in a story that feels more like a vignette than a fully realized piece of fiction.

The setting — cramped, chaotic, overstimulating — is the strongest element. Hayden uses the environment to communicate urgency and disorientation, which functions as a metaphor for impulsive desire. Unfortunately, the characters themselves are not given enough interiority to make the experience emotionally resonant.

Characterization

The protagonist and partner are sketched in broad strokes. They exist more as functions of the scenario than as psychologically distinct individuals. This is not uncommon in short-form erotica, but it limits the reader’s ability to invest in the encounter beyond surface-level titillation.

There is an opportunity here for deeper exploration of themes such as:

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Anonymity vs intimacy
Impulse vs agency
Public space as private rebellion

These ideas are hinted at but never meaningfully developed.

Writing Style

Hayden’s prose is clean and direct. The sentences are functional, paced for quick consumption, and generally free of unnecessary ornamentation. However, the minimalism occasionally crosses into flatness. Without stylistic risk or thematic depth, the story reads as competent but disposable.

The biggest weakness is repetition: emotional beats and descriptive patterns recur without escalation, creating the sense that the piece ends not because it has reached a conclusion, but because it has exhausted its single idea.

Genre Context & Comparison

Compared to stronger contemporary short erotica, the piece lacks narrative ambition. Writers in this space who stand out often incorporate:

Distinct character psychology
A subtext beyond the encounter itself
A sense of transformation, however subtle

Here, the work delivers exactly what the title promises — but little more. That honesty will satisfy readers seeking immediacy, while leaving others underwhelmed.

Final Verdict

Fucked in the Night Club Toilets is a fast, functional piece of erotic microfiction that relies heavily on premise rather than craft. It succeeds as a momentary experience but fails to linger in the mind. With deeper characterization and thematic intent, it could have been far more than a provocative title attached to a fleeting scene.

It shocks quickly, entertains briefly, and fades almost immediately — a literary equivalent of the environment it portrays.

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– A comparative analysis with other Conner Hayden works
– A breakdown of recurring themes across Hayden’s erotica
– A structural critique of short-form erotic fiction
– A discussion on shock titles vs literary substance