Personally for me I find ‘his & her POV’ books a bit on the redundant side, a tad bit repetitive within thoughts & in actions. This one kind of went like that…although that wasn’t my biggest problem here. Here, I didn’t quite get the whole marriage arrangement thing. It plays like an arrangement made at convenient as convenience. If that makes sense…
Basically, MCs has been “engaged” for years but not officially? So, was it even acceptable or not? Because at the beginning we also have the hero’s big bro going on convincing the hero to end the arrangement as it was never made official. Not to mention arrange marriages are so out of date, too. But, of course, the hero refused his brother, because he’s in love with the heroine or something like that.
Despite that, neither the hero nor heroine seem to sought out each other company over the course of their “engagement.” In fact, it appears to be that they barely know each other. They have had very limited interactions throughout the years. Really? It was unbelievable that for two people who found each other attractive, as they do, in their ready made shoes, neither party bothered to really get to know one another as potential lovers before all this. Like what’s going on here?
They do genuinely like each other, I think. Indeed, both party are satisfied with the engagement (as we learned through their POV) so why is there no courting in between? Now, we have the hero claiming he wants to marry her soon. Thus, she asked him how soon. He says he doesn’t know. Really, dude? You’re a let down! So here we go, the precise moment the heroine in turn asked for time (space); and further prolonging their endless unofficial engagement for all eternity. Just kidding, for a year-ish. (Now, are we to presumed that during this one year the hero never took the time to officially court her still?) Because at one year up, she officially cut the ties. She said bye to the unfaithful you, aka the hero who affirmed his unfaithfulness during the past years. It was unfair of her in his defense. But again, all in all, as attracted as he was to her, as they were kind of engaged already, why not seek each other out instead of having him laying with other women in between? Sigh, another let down. Dude is forever a let down. Indeed, this marriage arrangement was made at convenient as convenience.