Well it started off as a good plot and story idea but the further I read into it the more this story read like, I don't know, amateur-ish. The flow of this story seems choppy and somewhat not constructed very well. There were too many things that just didn't seem rational in here. Even though this story is fictional, paranormal, fantasy, there are always some "given" elements that bring us to see them as possible, even as they really are far-fetched in reality. Here in this story, those elements didn't fit in. They were off. Example would be a character who is a Rambo type person, wouldn't take four pages written of him cowering in tears behind his girlfriend, all because his plant had died. It just doesn't fit.
There are some places where the story changed from one scene to the next but they were too short and not written well. Take for instance; when they left to start tracking, they went from the house, to the store, to chasing in the forest, to bringing the guy back to the store, and then questioning the suspect all in a less than 10 sentence paragraph. It did not flow well. Very compacted together and it was hard to keep up the pace of it.
She's a cop and tracking her friend but the association with her ex seemed to dominate the story. Yes, I know this is that type of story but instead of blending together they went against the grain with each other. For the amount I paid for this story, I could have found five better stories for free.
Personally, I advise against investing in this story. I didn't make it to chapter 5 before chucking this one. If anything this book would only be good if it was free.