I imagine this midnight moment’s forest;
Something else is alive
Beside the clock’s loneliness
And this blank page where my fingers move.
After an intermission, the living metaphor moves into the poem:
Cold, delicately as the dark snow,
A fox’s nose touches twig, leaf;
Two eyes serve a movement
The movement is completed in the last stanza:
Till, with a sudden sharp hot stink of fox
It enters the dark hole of the head.
The window is starless still, the clock ticks,
The page is printed.
‘The Thought-Fox’ depicts, in a tortuous or slanted manner, the progression by which a poem gets written.
What a poet needs to write a poem is encouragement. He waits for the onrush of an idea through his brain.
And, obviously, he also needs isolation around him.
Solitude and stillness are, however, only causative circumstances. They constitute a favourable milieu, while the poem itself comes out of the poet’s head which has been invaded, as it were, by an inspiration or thought.
The thought or consideration takes shape in his head like a fox entering a shadowy forest and then coming out of it unexpectedly.
That is why the phrase “The Thought-Fox” has been used as a title for this poem. The fox embodies the thought which a poet expresses in his poem.
The fox here serves as a representation.
This was one of the dazzling poems in the volume called “The Hawk in the Rain”. What is significant about this poem, apart from its figurative statement of the process of poetic composition, is its imagery.
We have here a succession of images in the poem, from the first line to the last; and every image is a flamboyant one.
The opening line contains the subsequent image:
“I imagine this midnight moment’s forest.”
Here the poet imagines that he is sitting in a forest at midnight.
Then follow the images of the forlorn clock, the blank page and the feeling that something else is also alive around the poet.
There are no stars in the sky; and then the poet recognizes something intruding upon his lonesomeness or privacy.
Next, a fox’s nose touches a twig and then a leaf.
The two eyes of the fox seem to be moving forward. The fox is leaving comprehensible footprints on the snow in the forest.
The imagery continues with the eye of the fox “brilliantly, concentrated,” coming about its own business till it enters the dark hole of the head with “a sudden sharp hot stink of a fox.”
The window is starless still; the clock ticks even now; but the page is no longer blank.
The page carries a poem written by its author in his own handwriting, even though the word “printed” has been used.
The word “printed” is not totally out of place because eventually the poem written by its author would get printed.
Truth be told, the poem does not have much of an appeal for the average reader. The poem contains an abstract idea which the poet has tried to concretize.
Average readers, cannot comprehend why a thought should be personified as a fox. To the lay reader, a fox symbolizes cunning. We have all heard the story of the fox who cheated a crow of a piece of cheese which the crow held in its beak. The fox employed sweet talk to make the crow open its beak so that the piece of cheese might fall from the beak for the fox to seize it.
But in this poem the fox has been elevated to the status of a poetic idea.
Nor can we affirm that this poem is outstanding because of its felicity of word and phrase.
The only noteworthy quality of this poem is its imagery.