I'm writing my review for this three book series as one review because it should have been a stand alone.
Apparently there's another series about this threesome but I won't be reading it.
This series is in desperate, desperate need of an editor. I'll say that again. It's in desperate need of an editor.
I repeated myself because there are chunks of these books that literally repeat themselves. For instance, there is a conversation about anal sex that happens for the first time, twice. Yes, you've read that correctly. A first conversation that happens, word for word, twice.
The beginning of book one is rushed as though it's overdosed on caffeine.
The endings of book three take so long it's like it's being dragged through treacle. Sticky and uncomfortable but not in a good way. I got angry. Not motivated by plot but by the repetition, lag and wastefulness of the plot.
I've read Julia Kent books before and they weren't as awful as this.
I've read multipartner books before and they weren't as unfocused or uncomfortably unbelievable as this.
Also, the hero worship of Fifty Shades of Grey is never ending in these books. It's extremely over the top and leans away from flattering, fangirling to stalker, obsessive, annoying territory.
It is far and away lazily written.
For instance, in book one the second guy, Jeremy, is introduced into the romance as Matt/Mike's friend who lifts weight with him. They don't do it in Mike's building because the building gym is like Barbie toys. Dinky weights that will do nothing. As Matt/Mike is in disguise, he can't be seen at their normal gym, so they go running instead.
Lazy plot leads us back to Jeremy and Mike doing heavy, full weight workouts in his Barbie like, building gym in book three. Cause, that's a thing now. Just annoying to read especially after seeing so much lazy editing throughout the three books.
I don't like this series and I may never read any more of her books because of it. Which is a pity because I quite liked her characterisations in previous ones.