The Visitor

by Kayla Lords

A mutual fantasy to fulfill, and a willing participant to make it a reality. She wants to be His good girl. He wants to take both of them to new heights of pleasure, so he invites the visitor over for a night of pleasure.

This short story contains adult themes including Dominance and submission, threesomes and dirty sex intended for a mature audience only.

Genres: BDSM, Menage

22 pages, Kindle Edition

First published June 15, 2013

About the author

I discovered my love of writing at age seven and my sexual fantasies long before I reached adulthood. Now instead of experiencing sexual daydreams, I write them down and publish them for others to enjoy.

I write BDSM-themed erotica with a focus on dominance and submission (D/s). I not only want to turn my readers on, but I want them to realize that D/s is more than just a kink and isn't scary or degrading.

As a blogger, tweeter, and talker, I love interacting with my readers as much as possible!

Reviews

[Sheila · Rating 5 out of 5]

Pet has a fantasy of being taken by a stranger and her Master. Her Master lets her have her fantasy. He invites a stranger into their home. The sex is hot! The writing is well done and realistic. The author knows her subject. It is a short read. I enjoyed it.

[Thom Swennes · Rating 1 out of 5]

Absolute power corrupts absolutely. This truism has been used by many people to describe many situations and I think it fits this story. Names aren’t mentioned as to do so would only add to the degradation of all characters portrayed in this tale of ultimate domination and degradation. A beautiful woman voluntarily submits herself totally to a man that treats her as an object. Why anyone would do this is beyond me but I assumed a passive role as reader and had no influence over the words of the narrative. This woman (thing) is presented to a well endowed stranger of few words. She performs her tasks as she feels her master would approve of. I wouldn’t actively seek or buy this book but as a lover of words and bargains I downloaded it free. This said (and the story read) I feel that it deserves a serious review. Some deep, dark sexual fantasies should stay hidden and not brought into and inspected in the light of day. This fantasy (in my opinion) falls under this heading. Some may have thought or even dreamed of something similar but most would keep it private and protected in their minds. Even I admit that the story didn’t leave me unscathed. When the last sentence was read I felt rather dirty and had a bad taste in my mouth.

[Franco Bolli · Rating 4 out of 5]

After only a few lines I thought 'wow, this is hot stuff' and when I finally finished the book I felt sad, I wanted to read more.

The story is quite straightforward, an intense sexual fantasy about sharing set in a BDSM lifestyle.

This tale is told from a submissive point of view, sharing her mental mechanisms of obedience and servitude to her Owner what makes this story even hotter as it is extremely well written and makes her a real person, one you could relate to.

After closing the book, well, shutting down the Kindle app, I felt a strong desire to learn more about this submissive, to read more, to get to know her better. Find out what makes her tick, maybe even why she found release in offering this incredible gift of submission.
Damn, she felt so real!

Highly recommended, this is not some sleazy blabla but fine erotic literature and very well written.

[C.P. Mandara · Rating 5 out of 5]

Plenty of sexual tension, a gripping story line and a delicious inside view to the world of BDSM...

Imagine belonging to another, to be used as he sees fit... that's what happens to our heroine as the story begins. Naked and awaiting instructions in the corner of the room, she is about to have the ride of her life and at the hands of a complete stranger.

Loved every aspect of this story, especially our heroine's complete devotion to her Dom.

Let's hope there is many more to come!

[Debra Presley · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 STARS

Again this is a short read but it really is quite steamy. I was intrigued by the relationship between Sir and his submissive. I would've liked to have known more about them. But knowing this was a short I didn't expect it to be filled with details. However, the fact that I wanted to know more and steam in this book made me give it 4 stars!

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[Littlebopeep · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was actually the second short story by this author I read, but I suspect the first short story from this author. I enjoyed this one, the scene is certainly very believable,I loev her portrayal of the visitor, sheesh, he must have thought he'd died and gone to heaven, and the sex is hot, as you would expect from Ms.Lords, so you won't be disappointed, but I gave it a 4 out of 5 for the ending, which I won't spoil, but doesn't provide me the closure I was looking for.

[John Brownstone · Rating 5 out of 5]

Have you ever wondered what it is like to be in a BDSM relationship and have one of your fantasies come to life?
pet is a good girl, she does whatever her Sir tells her to do and it leads her on a sexually charged fantasy.
This is it, while it is a short story it is full of sexual tension sure to get the blood pumping.
If your looking for a short read with some kink to it, here it is.

[Blushing Reader · Rating 4 out of 5]

I got this for FREE on Amazon and this is the PERFECT short story (takes about 20-30 minutes to read) if you are in the mood for a Dominant/Submissive vignette to get you up and running for the night :)

I can't wait to see what else this author writes, I would love a longer and more plot driven story!

[R-Cee*Jay · Rating 1 out of 5]

Seriously? Blegh.

[Rara Loves to Read · Rating 5 out of 5]

Sinfully good quickie.

[C.J. · Rating 1 out of 5]

BDSM short story. Too impersonal for me.