Ok, I'll start with some negative stuff. This issue was too short and for the price, I felt like I did not get my money's worth, especially since I live abroad and have to pay for shipping on top of the price. It was less than 200 pages, including the title pages on each of the ten stories. Two of the "stories" were glorified advertisements for recently released McSweeney's books (in previous issues, these teasers were often in bonus pamphlets, not a part of the journal itself). I love Bob Odenkirk, but I didn't find his writing in this collection to be funny at all; they didn't even get a chuckle from me.
Now, that aside, there was a lot of good writing in here. My favorites:
"The Lie" by Shirley Jackson about a woman returning to her home town to correct a past wrong.
"The Sea and the Glass" by Bill Cotter, a hilarious story about a childhood's pyromaniac phase.
"Steps" by Mona Simpson about a woman visiting her long lost step father.
"Fingerprints" by Justin Bigos, a surreal, swirling collection of anecdotes about a troubled father figure.
And my favorite, "Mr. Hope" by Lynn Coady, telling of a teacher/student relationship. This story had me hee-hawing in few points, even though it's not really a comedic story.
Also, Ben Greenman's letter was fantastic; it had so much narrative in such a short space. So, it was a good McSweeney's overall, I just hope the next is a bit longer.