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Rain and Retribution
When Elizabeth Bennet's parents attempt to force her into a marriage of convenience for the sake of her family, she flees to make her own future. Will circumstances and their families conspire to keep Darcy and Elizabeth apart or will they unite to take them on together?
This story contains scenes with adult content.
This story contains scenes with adult content.
410 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 14, 2013
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L.L. Diamond
36 books183 followersAmazon best selling author L. L. Diamond is more commonly known as Leslie to her friends, and Mom to her three kids. A native of Louisiana, she has spent the majority of her life living within an hour of New Orleans until she followed her husband to the ends of the earth as a military wife. Louisiana, Mississippi, California, Texas, New Mexico, Nebraska, England, Missouri, and now Maryland have all been called home along the way.
Aside from mother and writer, Leslie considers herself a perpetual student. She has degrees in biology and studio art, but will devour any subject of interest simply for the knowledge. As an artist, her concentration is in graphic design, but watercolor is her medium of choice with one of her watercolors featured on the cover of her second book, A Matter of Chance. She is a member of the Jane Austen Society of North America. She also plays flute and piano, but much like Elizabeth Bennet, she is always in need of practice!
Aside from mother and writer, Leslie considers herself a perpetual student. She has degrees in biology and studio art, but will devour any subject of interest simply for the knowledge. As an artist, her concentration is in graphic design, but watercolor is her medium of choice with one of her watercolors featured on the cover of her second book, A Matter of Chance. She is a member of the Jane Austen Society of North America. She also plays flute and piano, but much like Elizabeth Bennet, she is always in need of practice!
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November 2, 2025
“I could be wrong,” he said, trying not to smile. “But I would hope that I am a small improvement over Mr. Collins.”
And thus begins the Darcy’s marriage!
This is one of my all-time favorite JAFFs.
I read it long, long before I ventured into writing reviews and this review is overdue.
Elizabeth’s crisis begins when her Father does not support her refusal of the Collins proposal and insists she agree to marry. ODG packs and slips away from Longbourn without anyone’s notice. Her escape route coincides with Darcy’s and she is persuaded to accept a ride to London.
The trip begins with communication and ends with an accepted proposal.
A beautiful portrayal of the early days of their marriage – with one exception of a family visit – the acknowledged friendship matures to acknowledged love.
The story darkens when the Darcys travel to Pemberley and encounter a bitter Georgiana who remains unable to see the truth about Wickham. The climax event is a tragedy but hope for the future beckons.
More marriages might survive if the partners realized that sometimes the better comes after the worse. ~Doug Larson
And thus begins the Darcy’s marriage!
This is one of my all-time favorite JAFFs.
I read it long, long before I ventured into writing reviews and this review is overdue.
Elizabeth’s crisis begins when her Father does not support her refusal of the Collins proposal and insists she agree to marry. ODG packs and slips away from Longbourn without anyone’s notice. Her escape route coincides with Darcy’s and she is persuaded to accept a ride to London.
The trip begins with communication and ends with an accepted proposal.
A beautiful portrayal of the early days of their marriage – with one exception of a family visit – the acknowledged friendship matures to acknowledged love.
The story darkens when the Darcys travel to Pemberley and encounter a bitter Georgiana who remains unable to see the truth about Wickham. The climax event is a tragedy but hope for the future beckons.
More marriages might survive if the partners realized that sometimes the better comes after the worse. ~Doug Larson
July 19, 2018
There is a great deal to enjoy in this book and I would dearly love to give it 5 stars, but I was disappointed in the author's choices in tying up many of her plot lines.
Starting with the positives, this is beautifully written with great character development. I was delighted with the "what if" deviations from the original, particularly in 3 areas: Mr. Bennet's determination that Lizzy must marry Mr Collins (not at all unbelievable, given the Regency times the story is set in), Jane's attitude toward Mr. Bingley being exactly as Mr. Darcy believes rather than heartbroken when he leaves Netherfield, and especially Georgiana's adolescent petulance and LACK of hero-worship of her big brother. Specifically addressing the last one, it made perfect sense that an over-sheltered orphan going through puberty with only a brother who has no parenting experience would have some issues being under his authority. Well done, Ms. Diamond!
However, this book is not for those looking for happily-ever-after endings. While not exactly a Hamlet, this is NOT a lighthearted Much Ado About Nothing. Not wishing to spoil the surprises in store for those who will read Rain and Retribution (which, honestly, is well worth reading), I will say that I was reveling in the author's skill at giving compelling motivations to all the characters for their actions, I was vicariously cheering for Darcy's and Elizabeth's strong marriage despite the challenges Georgiana presents throughout, I was immersed, I was enchanted, and I was anticipating that, just as in every P&P variation I've ever read (which number in the hundreds), all would be well in the end, when, all at once, I was startled to realize that all would NOT be well.
From roughly the time in the book where the news hits that Lydia has run off with Wickham, things get ugly. The plot goes from refreshingly believable to over-the-top melodramatic complete with a raging storm keeping our hero and heroine apart, and most particularly in the pivotal scene, where one character is exposed as dangerously insane and 2 major characters are killed. At the conclusion, families are still irrevocably broken apart and the Bennet family is more or less ruined. Not how one expects a feel-good romance story to end, is it?
I would still highly recommend it, as long as you are forewarned that there is as much tragedy as there is romance in the concluding chapters.
Oh, and yes, there's lots of sex throughout, but those scenes are as well written as the rest of the book and are only after they are married. There's perhaps more of it than is necessary, but that's a matter of personal taste. I know there are some who think ANY explicit sexual content is abhorrent, so, if you're one of them, this book isn't for you.
Starting with the positives, this is beautifully written with great character development. I was delighted with the "what if" deviations from the original, particularly in 3 areas: Mr. Bennet's determination that Lizzy must marry Mr Collins (not at all unbelievable, given the Regency times the story is set in), Jane's attitude toward Mr. Bingley being exactly as Mr. Darcy believes rather than heartbroken when he leaves Netherfield, and especially Georgiana's adolescent petulance and LACK of hero-worship of her big brother. Specifically addressing the last one, it made perfect sense that an over-sheltered orphan going through puberty with only a brother who has no parenting experience would have some issues being under his authority. Well done, Ms. Diamond!
However, this book is not for those looking for happily-ever-after endings. While not exactly a Hamlet, this is NOT a lighthearted Much Ado About Nothing. Not wishing to spoil the surprises in store for those who will read Rain and Retribution (which, honestly, is well worth reading), I will say that I was reveling in the author's skill at giving compelling motivations to all the characters for their actions, I was vicariously cheering for Darcy's and Elizabeth's strong marriage despite the challenges Georgiana presents throughout, I was immersed, I was enchanted, and I was anticipating that, just as in every P&P variation I've ever read (which number in the hundreds), all would be well in the end, when, all at once, I was startled to realize that all would NOT be well.
From roughly the time in the book where the news hits that Lydia has run off with Wickham, things get ugly. The plot goes from refreshingly believable to over-the-top melodramatic complete with a raging storm keeping our hero and heroine apart, and most particularly in the pivotal scene, where one character is exposed as dangerously insane and 2 major characters are killed. At the conclusion, families are still irrevocably broken apart and the Bennet family is more or less ruined. Not how one expects a feel-good romance story to end, is it?
I would still highly recommend it, as long as you are forewarned that there is as much tragedy as there is romance in the concluding chapters.
Oh, and yes, there's lots of sex throughout, but those scenes are as well written as the rest of the book and are only after they are married. There's perhaps more of it than is necessary, but that's a matter of personal taste. I know there are some who think ANY explicit sexual content is abhorrent, so, if you're one of them, this book isn't for you.
March 6, 2018
This is one of Ms. Diamond's earliest published works that I have been wanting to read for some time. It is a 'what if' Mr. Bennet did not support Elizabeth in her refusal of Mr. Collins but in turn demands that she does. And what a painful reality this makes for Elizabeth.
"I am sorry, Papa, but I will not pay the price for your failure to provide for your family. It is too high," replied Elizabeth, attempting to remain calm. "You sit in here and read your books while you allow your steward to run Longbourn. You do not even do your part; that task has fallen to to me... Now I am to sacrifice my dreams so you can atone for the mistakes you made." (quote from the book)
With these words, Elizabeth will set herself on a journey that changes everything. One that brings her to the carriage door of Mr. Darcy in the rain. One where less pride and prejudice play a role, but outside forces try to wreak havoc with their relationship to gain retribution.
There are some compelling, heartbreaking and wonderfully romantic moments within this story. Choices and decisions have been made by certain characters that they must now live with. Choices they should have given more thought to.
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel and hated to put it down when life intruded. I kept needing to know what happens next. For this is one of those books that you just want to curl up and absorb the drama between the pages.
If I have any quibble with this story, is it left me wanting to know more. I would have loved an epilogue for what the future brought, and if not that, maybe a sequel to this book, for there are other characters that I wanted closure on. You have written sequels to some of your other delightful books...hint...hint!
December 8, 2025
Good, Different Story
I especially loved the beginning of the story and ODC’s time at the inn, discovering one another feelings. Darcy is wonderful and Elizabeth shows a side that is unexpected in light of her usual canon feelings about Darcy. The rest of the story flows well, and I read it within a day, among interruptions. Georgiana is definitely a surprise as is her result at the end of the story. Definitely recommend this book.
Mature content.
October 28, 2021 - Audiobook
The performance by Alexandra Lee Smith is very good. There is some mild audio noise in the recording.
I especially loved the beginning of the story and ODC’s time at the inn, discovering one another feelings. Darcy is wonderful and Elizabeth shows a side that is unexpected in light of her usual canon feelings about Darcy. The rest of the story flows well, and I read it within a day, among interruptions. Georgiana is definitely a surprise as is her result at the end of the story. Definitely recommend this book.
Mature content.
October 28, 2021 - Audiobook
The performance by Alexandra Lee Smith is very good. There is some mild audio noise in the recording.
December 19, 2017
I thought of Hamlet as I came to the end of this story - one of Shakespeare's tragedies! There were many things I liked in this book but I was not happy with the one major character's fate. It really came as a shock and I was not happy with it. I am not naming names so as not to spoil the story.
There are some significant differences in characters and behaviors in this variation of P&P. Mr. Bennet "stabs" his favorite daughter in the back by demanding she marry Mr. Collins. Oh, his "reasons" do come out later in the story (to the detriment of Jane's self esteem) but Elizabeth is no shrinking violet, as we know. So she is running away to London in the hopes that her aunt and uncle will support her decision and help her find employment in some way or other to support herself.
Fate, in the guise of a torrential rain storm, intervenes and, as they say, "the rest is history". Yes, the marriage between ODC occurs early in this tale but there are so many sigh-worthy thoughts and actions on Darcy's part that telling you of the marriage isn't half the story of how it did come about. Darcy is such a romantic in this book! His love for Elizabeth is realized early BUT he does have some lessons about trust and communication to learn. There are some scenes of passion and fulfillment so be warned (MA only) but they are after marriage. The author did have ODC exploring their sexuality.
I thought that Darcy and Elizabeth had few close friends or family members in this story. Jane became more and more resentful of Elizabeth and that was sad to read. I kept hoping that there was going to be a moment when Jane came to her senses and was happy for Elizabeth - didn't happen. Jane's unhappiness began before this story's onset and she somehow found more and more to blame Elizabeth for as the story progressed. Mr. Bennet became bitter and other than his usual sulking in his study with a book and now a bottle is a non entity after the first chapter. Darcy's only family friend is Col. Fitzwilliams. His aunt and uncle on his mother's side are the bitterest of foes to Darcy in learning of his marriage. Bingley remains a friend after a confrontation about the whole "you married a Bennet" fiasco but the others in his family are even worse than in canon. Fortunately, Elizabeth does find a friend in the neighborhood. The Grey family provides some new actors in our tale: one good friend for both Elizabeth and Darcy but also some of the family reminding Elizabeth (and us) of Caroline Bingley. Caroline is not-to-be-believed in one scene at Pemberley.
Georgiana was so different in this tale. Her background, the history of her relationship with her own father, and then with Darcy after the father's death, and the whole Wickham saga keep us wondering if she is ever going to have a major revelation about those around her and just who can and who can't be trusted. The conflict, the sneakiness, the utter disregard for others by Georgiana are behaviors which have not been painted in most other JAFF. And then there is her relationship with Wickham! It goes from bad to worse.
The best part of this book was reading of how Elizabeth's and Darcy's marriage came to be and how their love and relationship grew. Many happy moments were spent reading their thoughts and actions towards and for each other. BUT again, I was not happy with everything at the end...thus 4 stars.
There are some significant differences in characters and behaviors in this variation of P&P. Mr. Bennet "stabs" his favorite daughter in the back by demanding she marry Mr. Collins. Oh, his "reasons" do come out later in the story (to the detriment of Jane's self esteem) but Elizabeth is no shrinking violet, as we know. So she is running away to London in the hopes that her aunt and uncle will support her decision and help her find employment in some way or other to support herself.
Fate, in the guise of a torrential rain storm, intervenes and, as they say, "the rest is history". Yes, the marriage between ODC occurs early in this tale but there are so many sigh-worthy thoughts and actions on Darcy's part that telling you of the marriage isn't half the story of how it did come about. Darcy is such a romantic in this book! His love for Elizabeth is realized early BUT he does have some lessons about trust and communication to learn. There are some scenes of passion and fulfillment so be warned (MA only) but they are after marriage. The author did have ODC exploring their sexuality.
I thought that Darcy and Elizabeth had few close friends or family members in this story. Jane became more and more resentful of Elizabeth and that was sad to read. I kept hoping that there was going to be a moment when Jane came to her senses and was happy for Elizabeth - didn't happen. Jane's unhappiness began before this story's onset and she somehow found more and more to blame Elizabeth for as the story progressed. Mr. Bennet became bitter and other than his usual sulking in his study with a book and now a bottle is a non entity after the first chapter. Darcy's only family friend is Col. Fitzwilliams. His aunt and uncle on his mother's side are the bitterest of foes to Darcy in learning of his marriage. Bingley remains a friend after a confrontation about the whole "you married a Bennet" fiasco but the others in his family are even worse than in canon. Fortunately, Elizabeth does find a friend in the neighborhood. The Grey family provides some new actors in our tale: one good friend for both Elizabeth and Darcy but also some of the family reminding Elizabeth (and us) of Caroline Bingley. Caroline is not-to-be-believed in one scene at Pemberley.
Georgiana was so different in this tale. Her background, the history of her relationship with her own father, and then with Darcy after the father's death, and the whole Wickham saga keep us wondering if she is ever going to have a major revelation about those around her and just who can and who can't be trusted. The conflict, the sneakiness, the utter disregard for others by Georgiana are behaviors which have not been painted in most other JAFF. And then there is her relationship with Wickham! It goes from bad to worse.
The best part of this book was reading of how Elizabeth's and Darcy's marriage came to be and how their love and relationship grew. Many happy moments were spent reading their thoughts and actions towards and for each other. BUT again, I was not happy with everything at the end...thus 4 stars.
November 3, 2018
I really enjoyed this Pride and Prejudice variation. Starting the day after the Netherfield Ball we meet a besotted Darcy, a mercenary Jane and spoiled Georgiana. Mr. Bennet is forcing Lizzie to marry Mr. Collins, with Bingley gone from Herefordshire; never to return, she is the only hope to keep them from the hedgerows.
Lizzie flees to London, only to be undone by a rain storm and a broken wagon wheel. Mr. Darcy comes by and rescues her and offers to deliver her to London. Their trip is further waylayed by the storm.
This tale of less pride, Darcy is just so nice and considerate, and less prejudice, Lizzie knows Jane doesn't love Bingley and Wickham is a baddie, is a fun read. The twist on Georgiana was compelling; she is usually a thinly developed character just used to propel others but in this version she makes Lydia Bennet look naive.
What prevents me from giving it 5 stars are the detailed sex scenes.
Lizzie flees to London, only to be undone by a rain storm and a broken wagon wheel. Mr. Darcy comes by and rescues her and offers to deliver her to London. Their trip is further waylayed by the storm.
This tale of less pride, Darcy is just so nice and considerate, and less prejudice, Lizzie knows Jane doesn't love Bingley and Wickham is a baddie, is a fun read. The twist on Georgiana was compelling; she is usually a thinly developed character just used to propel others but in this version she makes Lydia Bennet look naive.
What prevents me from giving it 5 stars are the detailed sex scenes.
December 17, 2024
A new favorite! Loved it!
Reread: I just love this book. Love it. I need a sequel. Too much is left in the air.
Reread: Sequel?
Reread: Still love it.
Reread: Still love it.
Reread: Obviously, a fave!
Reread: Love.
Reread: I just love this book. Love it. I need a sequel. Too much is left in the air.
Reread: Sequel?
Reread: Still love it.
Reread: Still love it.
Reread: Obviously, a fave!
Reread: Love.
July 14, 2021
I loved it!
I would rate this within my topp 10 list of the hundreds JAFF books I have read.
I liked that ODC come together early and there are lots of lovely tender moments between them. That said it is not an easy ride...
I also liked that not everybody gets theire HEA but gets what they deserve... It gives it a more real feeling.
Loved this Elizabeth and Darcy, they feel real to theire character including flaws.
The only thing I did not like was that it ended.
I would love to read a sequal.
Heartily recommend this Worthwhile, Unputdownable book
I would rate this within my topp 10 list of the hundreds JAFF books I have read.
I liked that ODC come together early and there are lots of lovely tender moments between them. That said it is not an easy ride...
I also liked that not everybody gets theire HEA but gets what they deserve... It gives it a more real feeling.
Loved this Elizabeth and Darcy, they feel real to theire character including flaws.
The only thing I did not like was that it ended.
I would love to read a sequal.
Heartily recommend this Worthwhile, Unputdownable book
February 7, 2014
TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Alternate Path
TIME FRAME: Morning after the Netherfield Ball to almost a year later
MAIN CHARACTERS: Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Darcy, Georgiana Darcy, Mr. Bennet, George Wickham, Colonel Fitzwilliam
WHY I WANTED TO READ THIS NOVEL:
The inventive premise. Mr. Bennet desiring/forcing a marriage between Elizabeth and Mr. Collins + Elizabeth running away from Longbourn = a very intriguing premise that I was very curious to see play out.
WHAT I LOVED:
- Plausible Premise: Lizzy is very fortunate that both of her parents don’t force her to marry Mr. Collins in Pride and Prejudice. Considering their situation, the time period, and her lack of dowry, she is extremely fortunate! It isn’t really a stretch to imagine a Mr. Bennet, who is irresponsible, lazy, and has many shortcomings, pursing such a course. Having his favorite daughter help take care of his estate when he is gone? Selfishly and indolently letting someone else save his family from his mistakes? It makes sense.
- Alteration of Jane Bennet: What if Jane was already seriously disappointed in love when Mr. Bingley came to Netherfield? What if that gentleman that was “so much in love with her” when she was fifteen touched her heart and broke it? I enjoyed how L. L. Diamond explored this different path with Jane Bennet. Her heart is closed to Bingley when he comes, and Mr. Darcy is correct in his assumption about her feelings not being engaged. I like it when Jane isn’t portrayed as a perfect and serene angel, it can get too saccharine sometimes!
- A Tender and Devoted Darcy: While attempting to abscond to London, Lizzy gets caught in a downpour and catches a cold. Oh, how I loved witnessing Darcy tend to her! How he would read to her at her request, check her fever while she slept, and spend the night in a chair by her side. The time Darcy and Elizabeth spent sequestered alone together was just beautiful! I loved seeing Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship develop through frank conversations, selfless concern, and sweet smiles. :)
- A New Take of Georgiana: Watch out, readers! Georgiana is a bit of a villain in this story! Because her older brother was always away at school and her father never established a relationship with her (except for giving her trinkets), Georgiana has grown up into a very insolent and resentful young woman. She doesn’t look upon Darcy with any regard or respect, and she thinks he is a hypocrite for marrying Elizabeth when he wouldn’t let her marry George. It was interesting to see Georgiana portrayed in this darker and more defiant manner – no timid reserve here! Since Darcy and Elizabeth resolve their issues earlier on in the story, Georgiana created some conflict and tension that carries us through the rest of the tale. I was dying to know what would become of her and what was the nature of her relationship with Wickham…
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Some More Reconciliation, Please?: Darcy and Elizabeth have conflicts with not only Georgiana and Wickham, but also Mr. Bennet and Jane Bennet in this novel (albeit more passive). While we see a resolution of sorts with Georgiana and Wickham (which I sort of have ambivalent feelings about), there isn’t really one with Jane and Mr. Bennet. It felt like Elizabeth should have had a showdown, reconciliation, or something with her family – especially Jane.
WARNING:
Some intimate and romantic scenes (which were very tasteful and not overly frequent!) Thank you, L. L. Diamond, for not making Darcy have a raging libido!
CONCLUSION:
A very refreshing and thought-provoking alternate path to Pride and Prejudice! By removing some lightness and brightness and adding some darker personalities, L. L. Diamond creates a story that displays the fervent and fulfilling love two people can have for each other when everyone else in their lives hurts and disappoints them. If you don’t mind seeing some creative adjustments with Jane Austen’s characters and some intimate scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth, than I recommend you add Rain and Retribution to your TBR list!
TIME FRAME: Morning after the Netherfield Ball to almost a year later
MAIN CHARACTERS: Elizabeth Bennet, Mr. Darcy, Georgiana Darcy, Mr. Bennet, George Wickham, Colonel Fitzwilliam
WHY I WANTED TO READ THIS NOVEL:
The inventive premise. Mr. Bennet desiring/forcing a marriage between Elizabeth and Mr. Collins + Elizabeth running away from Longbourn = a very intriguing premise that I was very curious to see play out.
WHAT I LOVED:
- Plausible Premise: Lizzy is very fortunate that both of her parents don’t force her to marry Mr. Collins in Pride and Prejudice. Considering their situation, the time period, and her lack of dowry, she is extremely fortunate! It isn’t really a stretch to imagine a Mr. Bennet, who is irresponsible, lazy, and has many shortcomings, pursing such a course. Having his favorite daughter help take care of his estate when he is gone? Selfishly and indolently letting someone else save his family from his mistakes? It makes sense.
- Alteration of Jane Bennet: What if Jane was already seriously disappointed in love when Mr. Bingley came to Netherfield? What if that gentleman that was “so much in love with her” when she was fifteen touched her heart and broke it? I enjoyed how L. L. Diamond explored this different path with Jane Bennet. Her heart is closed to Bingley when he comes, and Mr. Darcy is correct in his assumption about her feelings not being engaged. I like it when Jane isn’t portrayed as a perfect and serene angel, it can get too saccharine sometimes!
- A Tender and Devoted Darcy: While attempting to abscond to London, Lizzy gets caught in a downpour and catches a cold. Oh, how I loved witnessing Darcy tend to her! How he would read to her at her request, check her fever while she slept, and spend the night in a chair by her side. The time Darcy and Elizabeth spent sequestered alone together was just beautiful! I loved seeing Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship develop through frank conversations, selfless concern, and sweet smiles. :)
- A New Take of Georgiana: Watch out, readers! Georgiana is a bit of a villain in this story! Because her older brother was always away at school and her father never established a relationship with her (except for giving her trinkets), Georgiana has grown up into a very insolent and resentful young woman. She doesn’t look upon Darcy with any regard or respect, and she thinks he is a hypocrite for marrying Elizabeth when he wouldn’t let her marry George. It was interesting to see Georgiana portrayed in this darker and more defiant manner – no timid reserve here! Since Darcy and Elizabeth resolve their issues earlier on in the story, Georgiana created some conflict and tension that carries us through the rest of the tale. I was dying to know what would become of her and what was the nature of her relationship with Wickham…
WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:
- Some More Reconciliation, Please?: Darcy and Elizabeth have conflicts with not only Georgiana and Wickham, but also Mr. Bennet and Jane Bennet in this novel (albeit more passive). While we see a resolution of sorts with Georgiana and Wickham (which I sort of have ambivalent feelings about), there isn’t really one with Jane and Mr. Bennet. It felt like Elizabeth should have had a showdown, reconciliation, or something with her family – especially Jane.
WARNING:
Some intimate and romantic scenes (which were very tasteful and not overly frequent!) Thank you, L. L. Diamond, for not making Darcy have a raging libido!
CONCLUSION:
A very refreshing and thought-provoking alternate path to Pride and Prejudice! By removing some lightness and brightness and adding some darker personalities, L. L. Diamond creates a story that displays the fervent and fulfilling love two people can have for each other when everyone else in their lives hurts and disappoints them. If you don’t mind seeing some creative adjustments with Jane Austen’s characters and some intimate scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth, than I recommend you add Rain and Retribution to your TBR list!
January 28, 2023
What a page turner!! I could hardly put this book down to sleep! From the moment Elizabeth runs away rather than be pushed into marriage to the odious Mr Collins by both her parents. I was shocked at this Mr Bennet! Surely not the loving actions of father toward a favorite daughter! I enjoyed being free of the usual canon misunderstandings. They get old after you have read dozens and dozens. lol.
I liked the rescued in the rain plot and that Lizzy was very well cared for by Darcy when she fell ill. Jane's attitude was just as much a disappointment as Mr Bennet. The dramatic confrontations were written exceptionally well! From Lady Catherine, Lord Matlock and Anne to the dastardly Wickham! Georgiana's personality was a huge surprise but blended well into the story line.
The sex scenes were not salacious or terribly graphic and added to the normality of a newly married couple. I am not a fan of the new "super clean" versions of novels so popular today. People in these stories should be seen as real and not fairy tale versions of characters! My only disappointment was that there was no apology from Mr Bennet to his favorite daughter.. as it really seemed the only thing missing which would have made for a much more satisfying ending:)
I liked the rescued in the rain plot and that Lizzy was very well cared for by Darcy when she fell ill. Jane's attitude was just as much a disappointment as Mr Bennet. The dramatic confrontations were written exceptionally well! From Lady Catherine, Lord Matlock and Anne to the dastardly Wickham! Georgiana's personality was a huge surprise but blended well into the story line.
The sex scenes were not salacious or terribly graphic and added to the normality of a newly married couple. I am not a fan of the new "super clean" versions of novels so popular today. People in these stories should be seen as real and not fairy tale versions of characters! My only disappointment was that there was no apology from Mr Bennet to his favorite daughter.. as it really seemed the only thing missing which would have made for a much more satisfying ending:)
December 31, 2022
I really liked this book. The different character development of Mr. Bennet, Fitzwilliam, and Georgianna. I read this book in two days. When I finished the book I was so surprised at the end. I had to read it al over again. The sex scenes where nicely done. Her first book written. I would read from this author again.
June 7, 2020
Very non-canon, very good
Just a great book. First 42% of the book is a tremendous love story and the rest of it an amazing after marriage story.
This is the third time I’ve read it. The first half is like seeing your favorite romance movie over and over. Always nice to revisit.
Edited
The last two chapters and the Georgiana plotline are very moving. Unlike most variations.
Just a great book. First 42% of the book is a tremendous love story and the rest of it an amazing after marriage story.
This is the third time I’ve read it. The first half is like seeing your favorite romance movie over and over. Always nice to revisit.
Edited
The last two chapters and the Georgiana plotline are very moving. Unlike most variations.
June 11, 2023
Good story, long at times and very non-canon.
Impressions:
Georgiana is definitely not the typical young lady that we have often read about and know. She is mean, spoiled and unfriendly. She has been completely taken in by Wickham and does something terrible in order to try and separate Darcy and Elizabeth. Fortunately our dear couple eventually realize what’s happened but it damages their relationship a little.
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Jane is uncharacteristically mercenary and does not marry Bingley. She goes so far to tell Elizabeth that she does not love him and would only marry him in order to get out of Longbourn.
Mr Bennet is particularly an ass of a father, forcing Elizabeth to marry Mr Collins in order keep Lizzy at Longbourn so she can continue to manage the estate.
Caroline behaves terribly during the Bingleys’ visit to Pemberley. Needless to say, Darcy gives her the boot.
Wickham not only hates Darcy but portrayed as a little unhinged. There’s a showdown at Pemberley at the end of the book where Darcy & Richard have pistols drawn on Wickham who has Elizabeth as his hostage and has his gun trained on her very pregnant belly. Georgiana performs the ultimate sacrifice for her family when she realizes too late that Wickham has used her all this time.
A little unrealistic that Georgiana would sacrifice herself to save Darcy after she professes how much she hates him all throughout the book; nevertheless, it was a very sad moment.
There was a lot of sex in this one! 🍆 💋 😮
It doesn’t bother me at all. Mentioning it more as an observation.
This took me a while to read. Sometimes I fly through JAFF in 2-3 days but this one took a while. It was a little long but I don’t mind long books at all.
Regardless, I will read Ms Diamond’s other books and look forward to more from her.
Impressions:
Georgiana is definitely not the typical young lady that we have often read about and know. She is mean, spoiled and unfriendly. She has been completely taken in by Wickham and does something terrible in order to try and separate Darcy and Elizabeth. Fortunately our dear couple eventually realize what’s happened but it damages their relationship a little.
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Jane is uncharacteristically mercenary and does not marry Bingley. She goes so far to tell Elizabeth that she does not love him and would only marry him in order to get out of Longbourn.
Mr Bennet is particularly an ass of a father, forcing Elizabeth to marry Mr Collins in order keep Lizzy at Longbourn so she can continue to manage the estate.
Caroline behaves terribly during the Bingleys’ visit to Pemberley. Needless to say, Darcy gives her the boot.
Wickham not only hates Darcy but portrayed as a little unhinged. There’s a showdown at Pemberley at the end of the book where Darcy & Richard have pistols drawn on Wickham who has Elizabeth as his hostage and has his gun trained on her very pregnant belly. Georgiana performs the ultimate sacrifice for her family when she realizes too late that Wickham has used her all this time.
A little unrealistic that Georgiana would sacrifice herself to save Darcy after she professes how much she hates him all throughout the book; nevertheless, it was a very sad moment.
There was a lot of sex in this one! 🍆 💋 😮
It doesn’t bother me at all. Mentioning it more as an observation.
This took me a while to read. Sometimes I fly through JAFF in 2-3 days but this one took a while. It was a little long but I don’t mind long books at all.
Regardless, I will read Ms Diamond’s other books and look forward to more from her.
May 24, 2025
I first read this a a book and am now finishing up the Audiobook.
It is an interesting story, with ODC marrying fairly early on and most of the story covering their early marriage. Lots of mature content with newlywed love scenes.
Georgiana has maintained her connection to Wickham and is quite the spoiled child, with terrible consequences.
This story also has a Not-so-nice Jane and a seriously selfish Mr. Bennet.
I will hold on to the paperback book (easier to skim past all the sex scenes) and pass on future listens to the Audiobook. While I do appreciate the interesting interpretation of the narrator, I find the editor and producer did not do a good job in regards to all the breaths the narrator took and did not get spliced out. Leaving some in can definitely enhance dramatization, needing to hear all the quick breaths over and over again left me listening out for that as opposed to tracking the story.
It is an interesting story, with ODC marrying fairly early on and most of the story covering their early marriage. Lots of mature content with newlywed love scenes.
Georgiana has maintained her connection to Wickham and is quite the spoiled child, with terrible consequences.
This story also has a Not-so-nice Jane and a seriously selfish Mr. Bennet.
I will hold on to the paperback book (easier to skim past all the sex scenes) and pass on future listens to the Audiobook. While I do appreciate the interesting interpretation of the narrator, I find the editor and producer did not do a good job in regards to all the breaths the narrator took and did not get spliced out. Leaving some in can definitely enhance dramatization, needing to hear all the quick breaths over and over again left me listening out for that as opposed to tracking the story.
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February 18, 2023I struggled with this one. The beginning was my favorite part when circumstances throw Darcy and Elizabeth together and they get to know each other better. There is a caring side of Darcy rarely seen by the world and Elizabeth is the recipient. Things take a turn for the worse when the couple goes to Pemberley where a unrepentant Georgiana is manipulative, bratty, and just plain mean. The ending is tragic, I knew a little of what to expect going in but there was definitely a twist. There is also adult content and a descriptive birthing scene. It ends on a hopeful note, but getting there was a struggle.
February 22, 2024
I reread this every year. Sometimes twice.
May 12, 2018
I barely know what to make of this book.
Of some parts of it, anyway.
I always greet variations that explore Jane and Georgiana's personalities beyond that placid, beautiful and smiling exterior. People are so much more complex than what they show us to be on our comfort zone!
Changes are usually the triggers that'll show who we really are.
In Rain and Retribution it came in the form of a sycophantic, simpleton, bed-breathed silly excuse of a Parson, that was determined to marry Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Of course, our heroine declined most vehemently.
But, contrary to Canon, Mr. Bennet didn't stand by her daughter. When she came to his study (after rambling in the woods - for the vexation of her mother), the letter of Miss Bingley had reached Jane already. There was no chance for an arrangement with Mr. Bingley.
There was no chance of security for the Bennet sisters in sight.
So, as Mr. Bennet said, Elizabeth should marry Mr. Collins - and keep managing Loungbourn as she always did, making sure all her family'd be safe the day her father passed.
This small alteration - a walk she should'n've taken - brought forth her running from home, and, quite by chance, stumbling on Mr Darcy while stuck on the side of the road.
Completely drenched.
As it always happens, things started quickly to arrange themselves, not only between Darcy and Lizzy, but also for both their sisters. Georgiana was an insufferable excuse of a girl, and sometimes I simply wished someone shook some sense into that head of hers.
Colonel Fitwilliam was a charming, dear friend - as usual - even though some unexpected developments will rise his rank "just a bit".
Even though we have Wickham again as the degenerate, crazy villain, he aint the only one perpetrating some very dangerous mistakes in this book.
Lydia's destiny was sad... To put it blandly. I didn't like to read of it, even for a foolish girl as she was.
All in all, it was a very good book, with a fast-paced plot and some interesting twists and turns.
Of some parts of it, anyway.
I always greet variations that explore Jane and Georgiana's personalities beyond that placid, beautiful and smiling exterior. People are so much more complex than what they show us to be on our comfort zone!
Changes are usually the triggers that'll show who we really are.
In Rain and Retribution it came in the form of a sycophantic, simpleton, bed-breathed silly excuse of a Parson, that was determined to marry Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Of course, our heroine declined most vehemently.
But, contrary to Canon, Mr. Bennet didn't stand by her daughter. When she came to his study (after rambling in the woods - for the vexation of her mother), the letter of Miss Bingley had reached Jane already. There was no chance for an arrangement with Mr. Bingley.
There was no chance of security for the Bennet sisters in sight.
So, as Mr. Bennet said, Elizabeth should marry Mr. Collins - and keep managing Loungbourn as she always did, making sure all her family'd be safe the day her father passed.
This small alteration - a walk she should'n've taken - brought forth her running from home, and, quite by chance, stumbling on Mr Darcy while stuck on the side of the road.
Completely drenched.
As it always happens, things started quickly to arrange themselves, not only between Darcy and Lizzy, but also for both their sisters. Georgiana was an insufferable excuse of a girl, and sometimes I simply wished someone shook some sense into that head of hers.
Colonel Fitwilliam was a charming, dear friend - as usual - even though some unexpected developments will rise his rank "just a bit".
Even though we have Wickham again as the degenerate, crazy villain, he aint the only one perpetrating some very dangerous mistakes in this book.
Lydia's destiny was sad... To put it blandly. I didn't like to read of it, even for a foolish girl as she was.
All in all, it was a very good book, with a fast-paced plot and some interesting twists and turns.
October 29, 2024
4.5 rounded to 5
This has a lot of mature content between a married D&E.
This has a lot of mature content between a married D&E.
July 6, 2024
It's a re-read, and before I rated it 4 stars but now 5 stars. Wow.
Elizabeth is getting forced to marry Mr. Collins by Mr Bennet and Mrs Bennet, but she ran away and who does she encounter? Fitzwilliam Darcy. While staying at an Inn, mostly because our heroine is sick and due to the weather, ODC get to know each other better. It is not a Forced marriage Scenario, something which I liked for a change. Darcy's and Elizabeth's love story is so sweet. Of course there are Darcy's relations who doesn't approve at all to the match, Lady Catherine de Bourgh for one instance.. Who would have guessed that? Miss Anne de Bourgh was also under the impression that she's the rightful future Mrs. Darcy.
Lord Matlock (LCdB's Brother) also counts among the ones who disapprove.
Even in their Sanctuary (Pemberley) both don't always find peace because of Georgiana or other matters.
I liked that we do get to know a little bit about the situation at Longbourn after Elizabeth left. How Mr Bennet fared, her sisters, etc..
All in all it's a very good book though the ending was a bit abrupt. I enjoyed every minute.
The narrating was totally fine too. She did a good job.
-Mature Content
-Angsty
-Third Person
Elizabeth is getting forced to marry Mr. Collins by Mr Bennet and Mrs Bennet, but she ran away and who does she encounter? Fitzwilliam Darcy. While staying at an Inn, mostly because our heroine is sick and due to the weather, ODC get to know each other better. It is not a Forced marriage Scenario, something which I liked for a change. Darcy's and Elizabeth's love story is so sweet. Of course there are Darcy's relations who doesn't approve at all to the match, Lady Catherine de Bourgh for one instance.. Who would have guessed that? Miss Anne de Bourgh was also under the impression that she's the rightful future Mrs. Darcy.
Lord Matlock (LCdB's Brother) also counts among the ones who disapprove.
Even in their Sanctuary (Pemberley) both don't always find peace because of Georgiana or other matters.
I liked that we do get to know a little bit about the situation at Longbourn after Elizabeth left. How Mr Bennet fared, her sisters, etc..
All in all it's a very good book though the ending was a bit abrupt. I enjoyed every minute.
The narrating was totally fine too. She did a good job.
-Mature Content
-Angsty
-Third Person
May 22, 2023
This is more like two books. The first half is an adorable fluffy story about getting married in haste and falling in love, and the second half adds darker themes.
The book contains violence, sexual content and major character death.
The page numbering in my Kindle version is seriously messed up.
Reread May 2023 I had read this previously but for some reason it showed up as unread on my Kindle so I started reading it again, and breezed through. Still amazing. It's like Darcy and Elizabeth Against the World. Her family is against them, his family is against them, most of the ton and the neighbors are catty, and most of these feuds are not resolved in any great manner, but they have each other and that's somehow enough.
The book contains violence, sexual content and major character death.
The page numbering in my Kindle version is seriously messed up.
Reread May 2023 I had read this previously but for some reason it showed up as unread on my Kindle so I started reading it again, and breezed through. Still amazing. It's like Darcy and Elizabeth Against the World. Her family is against them, his family is against them, most of the ton and the neighbors are catty, and most of these feuds are not resolved in any great manner, but they have each other and that's somehow enough.
February 10, 2014
I loved this book, I think I may have read an earlier version on one of the JAFF websites, just can't think which one. Anyways it was a great read, very interesting way for Elizabeth and Darcy to come together, can't stand Lizzy's family in this one, but these versions make the story work better. It had enough angst to not be too strenuous for my heart. ;)' I thought it was well written and drew me so into the book that I had such a hard time putting it down, read so late into the night/morning that the birds and sun were rising!!! I would definitely recommend this book and keep it so I can re-read again.
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June 17, 2021DNF 45% no star rating. I really wanted to love this story, based on so many positive reviews. This is just not the Elizabeth or Darcy I’ve come to know. Everyone talks about their feels extensively, even the men when they’re having bro time. I’m not offended by a well done intimate scene that fits the story, but these sex scenes were totally unrealistic.
Everything happens so easily, things are always talked out so there are no misunderstandings, and at 45% I’m out because this is very boring.
Everything happens so easily, things are always talked out so there are no misunderstandings, and at 45% I’m out because this is very boring.
December 21, 2021
Crazy romantic, well written, and you will adore ODC, they make a great team.
Synopsis:
Indolent Mr Bennet has backed himself and his family into a tight corner by neglecting his duties as father and master.
His sacrificial lamb to secure the future of his family is Lizzy
Mr Bennet won't back Lizzy's right to chose and is ready to force her hand
Even her sister Jane is of no support, her heart long before broken by a Mr Graham is cold and untouched by Bingley, and she has turned mercenary. She also insists her sister marries Collins. Though Jane did volunteer to marry Collins in her place but Mrs Bennet wants the beauty reserved for greater things.
Jane, her father and mother all insist it's her duty and she must marry the halfwit Collins
Lizzy doesn't hesitate and acts with haste, she masterfully packs light, locks her room, takes the key and sneaks through the servant quarters.
Mrs Hill the kind housekeeper who loves her more than her parents helps her by having Mr Hill stow her away on a cart and take her to a neighboring post station. Her intention is to spirit away to London hoping for sanctuary by the Gardiners in procuring a governess position perhaps abroad.
Inclement weather renders the roads hazardous and the cart breaks down. As fate and plot would contrive who should come upon the scene than our favorite taciturn gentlemen, Mr Darcy.
He is ridding alone separate from the Bingley party and brooding over a pair of fine eyes
Who says wishes don't come true? For who should he find but a damsel in distress, newly cut from her unsuitable connections- Elizabeth herself!
Recognizing Lizzy's light and pleasing figure, he offers assistance and conveyance to London.
They exchange confidences and misunderstanding are set to rights, though Lizzy is still weary of the proud man, his actions speak volumes especially when they must share a suite at an inn due to the weather.
They take up a married aliases and Lizzy takes the single bed. She develops a fever and he nurses her single handedly, reads to her and they spend pleasant evenings in conversation. Knowing he can't have her go off as a governess he proposes.
She will reach her majority the next day and he has a license, a romantic touch.
Darcy, not wanting to show his hand that he was in love and make her feel forced, cites that he needs a wife with good qualities like hers, he doesn't want a typical ton lady like Miss Bingley
Lizzy accepts. She has enjoyed his company and thinks they would be good friends at the very least.
Of course there are some cute scenes, they share a bed just to sleep for two night, really cute waking up cuddling
Lizzy has plenty fine gowns at the ready in Darcy house that need little alteration, thanks to Georgiana’s shopaholic tendencies that buoy her daddy issues
Darcy gets her jewelry for their wedding, he knows she is still warming to the changes but is very attentive and playful with her
Darcy never had love except perchance fraternal affection from Bingley and Colonel. Sadly his parents has a typical ton marriage and were largely absentee, his aunts and uncles look to him with dollar sign eyes
Tragically even our usually sweet Georgie here is a baddie
Georgiana is upset he has curtailed her spending and married beneath him, she feels it is a hypocrisy after he foiled her elopement. She is in cahoots with the scoundrel and plants a letter from Wickham on Lizzy’s desk to make it seem she is in cahoots with him.
Darcy in a jealous rage and with insecurities having grown in an environment largely devoid of genuine affection accuses Lizzy
Wickham plans extend well past causing misunderstandings, he has much more planned in store..
Georgiana is indifferent to all of Lizzy's, Darcy's and the good Colonel's attempts at breakthrough.
Thus Georgie is kept on a tight leash and grows increasingly difficult;
What I Enjoyed:
❀ Lizzy taking responsibility for the management at Longbourn meeting with steward in her fathers insolent stead. Lizzy is brilliant and I enjoy when that is reflected in her capabilities and initiative.
❀ Darcy and Lizzy almost immediately thrown together, so plenty of screen time of ODC together, no separations.
❀ Miss Grey friendship
❀ Endings I usually hate; they are corny or they often have epilogues that are depressing, but I found it tender and perfect. No epilogue, thank gad!
❀ Darcy admitted to Lizzy he had made thoughtless comments so that Miss Bingley woudn't catch her unawares which I thought was brave and mature;
❀ It's Lizzy & Darcy vs. The World
Everyone one else might have bad intentions but what I loved most of this story is the reprieve of Darcy vs Lizzy constant misunderstandings. Here they are the one thing right in a world of wrong. They develop a very open, honest and healthy marriage.
What Displeased Me:
Verdict:
It was such a tender, bittersweet, lovely read! Every variance was so well explained Jane being cold out of heartbreak, Georgie being emotionally stunted out of never knowing love not even from family, and the events all seemed plausible. I even enjoyed the climax and Wickham's gambit, they were fresh and different, I am so sick of Lydia's elopement being recycled. I highly recommend it.
I love L.L. Diamond and think her one of the most capable JAFF authors, I also enjoyed Particular Intentions, Undoing and An Unwavering Trust. She writes Lizzy and Darcy perfect each time! Brava!
I would be pleased to revisit in future.
I measure the quality of a JAFF by three factors, as follows;
1. Did I feel the characters acted true to Austen's character framework (allowing for changed circumstance and scenario to offer some leeway)?Yes
2. Was I engaged during the reading and not bored?Yes
3. Was the writing compelling/ intelligent and was there sufficient interaction/dialogue between the main characters? Yes
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Synopsis:
“I am sorry, Papa, but I will not pay the price for your failure to provide for your family. It is too high.”
Indolent Mr Bennet has backed himself and his family into a tight corner by neglecting his duties as father and master.
His sacrificial lamb to secure the future of his family is Lizzy
“She had always been her father's favourite, and hoped he would never force her into a marriage as unfulfilling as his own, yet he was attempting to do that very thing—worse actually—at least her mother did not smell.”
Mr Bennet won't back Lizzy's right to chose and is ready to force her hand
“But at what cost? To be miserable for the rest of my life, to endure my marriage as you do yours?”
“It is not so bad as that. Your mother provides a source of amusement as Mr. Collins will do for you,” he quipped.'
Even her sister Jane is of no support, her heart long before broken by a Mr Graham is cold and untouched by Bingley, and she has turned mercenary. She also insists her sister marries Collins. Though Jane did volunteer to marry Collins in her place but Mrs Bennet wants the beauty reserved for greater things.
Jane, her father and mother all insist it's her duty and she must marry the halfwit Collins
Lizzy doesn't hesitate and acts with haste, she masterfully packs light, locks her room, takes the key and sneaks through the servant quarters.
Mrs Hill the kind housekeeper who loves her more than her parents helps her by having Mr Hill stow her away on a cart and take her to a neighboring post station. Her intention is to spirit away to London hoping for sanctuary by the Gardiners in procuring a governess position perhaps abroad.
Inclement weather renders the roads hazardous and the cart breaks down. As fate and plot would contrive who should come upon the scene than our favorite taciturn gentlemen, Mr Darcy.
He is ridding alone separate from the Bingley party and brooding over a pair of fine eyes
“ ..but also brought with her a ridiculous family. If there were a way to take her as his wife without acquiring her feather-brained mother and ill-mannered younger sisters, he would most certainly offer for her.”
Who says wishes don't come true? For who should he find but a damsel in distress, newly cut from her unsuitable connections- Elizabeth herself!
Recognizing Lizzy's light and pleasing figure, he offers assistance and conveyance to London.
They exchange confidences and misunderstanding are set to rights, though Lizzy is still weary of the proud man, his actions speak volumes especially when they must share a suite at an inn due to the weather.
They take up a married aliases and Lizzy takes the single bed. She develops a fever and he nurses her single handedly, reads to her and they spend pleasant evenings in conversation. Knowing he can't have her go off as a governess he proposes.
She will reach her majority the next day and he has a license, a romantic touch.
“What had possessed him to actually send a letter to his solicitor in London requesting him to acquire a special license and settlement papers while she stayed at Netherfield to nurse her sister?”
Darcy, not wanting to show his hand that he was in love and make her feel forced, cites that he needs a wife with good qualities like hers, he doesn't want a typical ton lady like Miss Bingley
Lizzy accepts. She has enjoyed his company and thinks they would be good friends at the very least.
Of course there are some cute scenes, they share a bed just to sleep for two night, really cute waking up cuddling
Lizzy has plenty fine gowns at the ready in Darcy house that need little alteration, thanks to Georgiana’s shopaholic tendencies that buoy her daddy issues
Darcy gets her jewelry for their wedding, he knows she is still warming to the changes but is very attentive and playful with her
Darcy never had love except perchance fraternal affection from Bingley and Colonel. Sadly his parents has a typical ton marriage and were largely absentee, his aunts and uncles look to him with dollar sign eyes
“As horrible as the thought was, he was looking forward to the peace and quiet which would come from alienating them.”
Tragically even our usually sweet Georgie here is a baddie
Georgiana is upset he has curtailed her spending and married beneath him, she feels it is a hypocrisy after he foiled her elopement. She is in cahoots with the scoundrel and plants a letter from Wickham on Lizzy’s desk to make it seem she is in cahoots with him.
Darcy in a jealous rage and with insecurities having grown in an environment largely devoid of genuine affection accuses Lizzy
“Did he somehow plan our meeting, or even our marriage? How do I know you have not been deceiving me this entire time?”
Wickham plans extend well past causing misunderstandings, he has much more planned in store..
Georgiana is indifferent to all of Lizzy's, Darcy's and the good Colonel's attempts at breakthrough.
“..he would have her come out in society when she turned seventeen, she would marry, and that would be it. His family would be the one he created with Elizabeth. That was to be his top priority, and by maintaining Georgiana's reputation at the present time, he was preserving the reputation of the Darcy name for the benefit of his children. That was all that mattered.”
Thus Georgie is kept on a tight leash and grows increasingly difficult;
What I Enjoyed:
❀ Lizzy taking responsibility for the management at Longbourn meeting with steward in her fathers insolent stead. Lizzy is brilliant and I enjoy when that is reflected in her capabilities and initiative.
❀ Darcy and Lizzy almost immediately thrown together, so plenty of screen time of ODC together, no separations.
❀ Miss Grey friendship
❀ Endings I usually hate; they are corny or they often have epilogues that are depressing, but I found it tender and perfect. No epilogue, thank gad!
❀ Darcy admitted to Lizzy he had made thoughtless comments so that Miss Bingley woudn't catch her unawares which I thought was brave and mature;
“I wish I could protect you from the things Miss Bingley or Mrs. Hurst might say to you, but I fear they may employ anything I have said in the past in an attempt to drive a wedge between us,” he confessed. “They are extremely spiteful. In fact, I would not put it past them to fabricate something.”
❀ It's Lizzy & Darcy vs. The World
Everyone one else might have bad intentions but what I loved most of this story is the reprieve of Darcy vs Lizzy constant misunderstandings. Here they are the one thing right in a world of wrong. They develop a very open, honest and healthy marriage.
“he consulted Elizabeth about the letters he had written, as well as the tentative plans he had made. She approved of his arrangements, and smiled brightly when she thanked him for thinking of and including her. Right then and there, he decided he would definitely have to find something to ask her opinion about every day, if only to have her look at him the way she was now.”
What Displeased Me:
Verdict:
It was such a tender, bittersweet, lovely read! Every variance was so well explained Jane being cold out of heartbreak, Georgie being emotionally stunted out of never knowing love not even from family, and the events all seemed plausible. I even enjoyed the climax and Wickham's gambit, they were fresh and different, I am so sick of Lydia's elopement being recycled. I highly recommend it.
I love L.L. Diamond and think her one of the most capable JAFF authors, I also enjoyed Particular Intentions, Undoing and An Unwavering Trust. She writes Lizzy and Darcy perfect each time! Brava!
I would be pleased to revisit in future.
I measure the quality of a JAFF by three factors, as follows;
1. Did I feel the characters acted true to Austen's character framework (allowing for changed circumstance and scenario to offer some leeway)?Yes
2. Was I engaged during the reading and not bored?Yes
3. Was the writing compelling/ intelligent and was there sufficient interaction/dialogue between the main characters? Yes
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February 28, 2025
Status: Read February 24-28, 2025 via audible edition
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐
My Library Notes:
Rain & Retribution
by L.L. Diamond, Alexandra Lee Smith (Narrator)
Audible Audio, Unabridged, 13 pages
Published October 8, 2021 by LL Diamond (first published June 15, 2013)
ASIN: B09HY3K7Y9
What if Elizabeth fled Longbourn?
When Elizabeth Bennet's parents attempt to force her into a marriage of convenience for the sake of her family, she flees to make her own future.
Will circumstances and their families conspire to keep Darcy and Elizabeth apart or will they unite to take them on together?
Listening Length: 12 hours and 58 minutes
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐
My Library Notes:
Rain & Retribution
by L.L. Diamond, Alexandra Lee Smith (Narrator)
Audible Audio, Unabridged, 13 pages
Published October 8, 2021 by LL Diamond (first published June 15, 2013)
ASIN: B09HY3K7Y9
What if Elizabeth fled Longbourn?
When Elizabeth Bennet's parents attempt to force her into a marriage of convenience for the sake of her family, she flees to make her own future.
Will circumstances and their families conspire to keep Darcy and Elizabeth apart or will they unite to take them on together?
Listening Length: 12 hours and 58 minutes
March 25, 2015
I did enjoy reading this new version of our favorite couple. I like the fact that the couple was together early on but I do wish it would have had more excitement. The book didn't have the on your edge plots like others in this class have had. The main focus being shone on the couple, which I did enjoy but I love more outside friction of sorts. I read another review which almost gave me pause to purchase this book simply stating that it was porn and a waste of time. I am glad I followed my own gut because I did not see it as such. What the author chose to show us behind closed doors was natural and, in my opinion, necessary to make the characters more human. I love P&P but I have read others who knock on writing about any kind of intimacy between Darcy and Elizabeth. I don't get it we fall in love with Austen's characters but fault those who continue the story and don't portray the couple as frigid. Yes, JA didn't write them as so but in any relationship there should be a healthy sexual side. They weren't having orgies for the love of god just doing what a couple would naturally do in the next stage of their relationship. My main difficulty in the book was accepting the lack of brother and sister bond with Darcy and Georgianna on the other hand I loved Col. Fitzwilliam and how he,Lizzy and Darcy got along. The ending left alot of unanswered questions surrounding Bingley, the col. and even E&D. The excitement that did appear at the end did not at all end the way I would have liked and that is why it got 4 stars.
April 7, 2021
I absolutely adored LL Diamond's other book "An Unwavering Trust," so I had high expectations for this one. Unfortunately, this book did not capture my imagination in the same way. I greatly enjoyed the first half of this book, but the second half did not live up to my expectations.
In the first half, the moments with Elizabeth and Darcy in that small country inn were beautifully written, and their early days of marriage were very romantic. Once they left for Pemberley though, the tone of the book shifted and I just did not connect with it as much. Some of the plot lines were undercooked in my opinion. Colonel Fitzwilliam's inheritance seemed random. His courtship with Miss Grey was never fully resolved. And Wickham's machinations were never fully explained - was he expecting replies to his letters? Shouldn't he have been suspicious once Georgiana stopped replying? I enjoyed moments in the second half but the plot did not quite come together for me. Reading it felt like eating chili before all the flavors had coalesced in the slow cooker. There were great ingredients, but the overall experience was not quite there.
BUT, I will say...I did still enjoy this book and would happily re-read the earlier sections of the novel. The book was written before LL Diamond's other works, and you can definitely see the potential in her style and voice. It is interesting to see how that voice evolved over time. I will keep reading her other books to be sure.
In the first half, the moments with Elizabeth and Darcy in that small country inn were beautifully written, and their early days of marriage were very romantic. Once they left for Pemberley though, the tone of the book shifted and I just did not connect with it as much. Some of the plot lines were undercooked in my opinion. Colonel Fitzwilliam's inheritance seemed random. His courtship with Miss Grey was never fully resolved. And Wickham's machinations were never fully explained - was he expecting replies to his letters? Shouldn't he have been suspicious once Georgiana stopped replying? I enjoyed moments in the second half but the plot did not quite come together for me. Reading it felt like eating chili before all the flavors had coalesced in the slow cooker. There were great ingredients, but the overall experience was not quite there.
BUT, I will say...I did still enjoy this book and would happily re-read the earlier sections of the novel. The book was written before LL Diamond's other works, and you can definitely see the potential in her style and voice. It is interesting to see how that voice evolved over time. I will keep reading her other books to be sure.
March 5, 2015
Rain and Retribution
The relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth is wonderful. So many good qualities in Fitzwilliam come to light immediately in this story, he just needed a little push in the right direction. When Fitzwilliam leaves Netherfield, just outside of Meryton, he finds Lizzy standing in the rain and cannot leave her there. Mr. Hill was talking her to the next stage station when the cart broke a wheel. Stalled because of the weather at the inn, Lizzy gets sick and Darcy takes care of her. During the days at the inn, Darcy discovers why she was on the road, and his plan is an answer to the problem she ran away from. The way Darcy sets Lady Catherine, Anne de Bourgh, and Lord Matlock down was spectacular. They all had it coming. When Lady Catherine and Lord Matlock find out that George Darcy had in his will a contingency that Fitzwilliam would lose his inheritance if he married Anne de Bourgh. Boy did the feathers fly upon finding the out. What I didn't like was the characterization of Mr. Bennet, Jane, and Georgiana. My word, they were as bad as Wickham and Caroline combined. Was a great story, and Lizzy is saved from Mr. Collins.
The relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth is wonderful. So many good qualities in Fitzwilliam come to light immediately in this story, he just needed a little push in the right direction. When Fitzwilliam leaves Netherfield, just outside of Meryton, he finds Lizzy standing in the rain and cannot leave her there. Mr. Hill was talking her to the next stage station when the cart broke a wheel. Stalled because of the weather at the inn, Lizzy gets sick and Darcy takes care of her. During the days at the inn, Darcy discovers why she was on the road, and his plan is an answer to the problem she ran away from. The way Darcy sets Lady Catherine, Anne de Bourgh, and Lord Matlock down was spectacular. They all had it coming. When Lady Catherine and Lord Matlock find out that George Darcy had in his will a contingency that Fitzwilliam would lose his inheritance if he married Anne de Bourgh. Boy did the feathers fly upon finding the out. What I didn't like was the characterization of Mr. Bennet, Jane, and Georgiana. My word, they were as bad as Wickham and Caroline combined. Was a great story, and Lizzy is saved from Mr. Collins.
October 3, 2017
If I had a top 20, this would be on it
One of my favorite reviewers spoke very highly of this novel, so I made sure to buy it. I have seen many things become of the major supporting characters, but this novel in particular was a very dark but refreshing twist. That, paired with the wonderful relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth presented here, made for such an enthralling read that I had dreams about what would happen next when I finally made myself go to bed last night!
I am very impressed with the writer and plan to read the rest of her stories as well.
One of my favorite reviewers spoke very highly of this novel, so I made sure to buy it. I have seen many things become of the major supporting characters, but this novel in particular was a very dark but refreshing twist. That, paired with the wonderful relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth presented here, made for such an enthralling read that I had dreams about what would happen next when I finally made myself go to bed last night!
I am very impressed with the writer and plan to read the rest of her stories as well.
October 9, 2021
Good Book
Liked it good plot and Jane was a mess. Caroline crazy Wickham insane. The Bennets stupid . Mr Collins oh well can't describe him. Loved the Colonel
Liked it good plot and Jane was a mess. Caroline crazy Wickham insane. The Bennets stupid . Mr Collins oh well can't describe him. Loved the Colonel
May 31, 2020
Elizabeth Bennet is rescued from the rain by Fitzwilliam Darcy as she tries to escape from her home. Her cousin has proposed, she has refused, but both her mother and father will not take no for an answer. She is about one week from gaining her majority and chooses to run.
The rain forces Elizabeth and Darcy to stop at an inn and pose as a married couple. The storm allows them to stay hidden and learn about each other without interruption. Darcy has never had a happy life and loves how he feels around Elizabeth. She has never felt so cared for. Our dear couple takes those feeling and start a life together.
That life, the obstacles, the selfish and ridiculous family, the obnoxious sisters, the earning of trust, the learning to be a couple make this book what it is. The characters are wonderful and so full of emotion. The presence of rain at key points in a clever way that the parts of the story fit together.
The rain forces Elizabeth and Darcy to stop at an inn and pose as a married couple. The storm allows them to stay hidden and learn about each other without interruption. Darcy has never had a happy life and loves how he feels around Elizabeth. She has never felt so cared for. Our dear couple takes those feeling and start a life together.
That life, the obstacles, the selfish and ridiculous family, the obnoxious sisters, the earning of trust, the learning to be a couple make this book what it is. The characters are wonderful and so full of emotion. The presence of rain at key points in a clever way that the parts of the story fit together.
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