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His Uncle's Favorite
“His Uncle’s Favorite”: A Pride and Prejudice tale that takes a divergent path after the Netherfield ball and its residents’ hasty departure.
Shortly after Christmas, their Aunt Gardiner persuades Jane and Elizabeth Bennet to spend time with her in London. There, the girls encounter familiar faces and intriguing new acquaintances. As fate would have it, their aunt’s Gracechurch Street home is frequented by intimate members of Mr. Darcy’s family, and Elizabeth discovers that she and Darcy’s uncle have more than one favorite in common.
This is a tale of wrong first impressions, mistaken pride and prejudice, rights and wrongs — a divergent but familiar story of the struggle for happiness of Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy.
Shortly after Christmas, their Aunt Gardiner persuades Jane and Elizabeth Bennet to spend time with her in London. There, the girls encounter familiar faces and intriguing new acquaintances. As fate would have it, their aunt’s Gracechurch Street home is frequented by intimate members of Mr. Darcy’s family, and Elizabeth discovers that she and Darcy’s uncle have more than one favorite in common.
This is a tale of wrong first impressions, mistaken pride and prejudice, rights and wrongs — a divergent but familiar story of the struggle for happiness of Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy.
360 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 23, 2013
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December 17, 2015
There are many interweaving storylines stitched together in this well written book. It centers almost as much on the Earl of Matlock (Darcy's uncle referenced in the title) as it does on an alternate version of the romance between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy.
Mrs. Gardiner has been a widow for 2 years. She still mourns her husband but has a faithful family friend in Lord Matlock, who owes much of his estate's profitability to Mr. Gardner's business acumen. Jane and Elizabeth come to her home in London for an extended visit after Mr. Bingley and his party have abandoned Netherfield. They meet Lord Matlock, his two sons, the Viscount and Colonel Fitzwilliam, and his daughter, Lady Selina Brightmore. Lord Matlock has a warm, outgoing personality and immediately takes a strong liking to the two young ladies, declaring only half in jest that he would be happy to promote a match between them and either of his sons. It's not long before Darcy and Georgiana are included in a gathering between the families, and Darcy is shocked to find himself face to face with Elizabeth when he thought he had left her behind in Hertfordshire. Miss Bingley and the Hursts also attend. The superior sisters are equally startled at the presence of Jane and Elizabeth and claim not to know where Mr. Bingley is.
Elizabeth and Jane become dear friends with both Lady Selina and Georgiana. As time goes by, Mr. Bennet comes to London and ends up the surprised recipient of Mr. Darcy's estate advice. But there are undercurrents of tension between Lord Matlock and the rest of his family regarding George Wickham, Elizabeth soon learns. Matlock seems pleased that she considers Wickham a friend, and he admits that Wickham has been in trouble in the past but considers them no more than youthful highjinks, trusting that he's now grown out of them.
Darcy doesn't believe the rest of his family, who realize that he's in love with Elizabeth but tell him it's obvious Elizabeth doesn't care for him. The relationship between those two progresses very rockily along. That's only one of several huge boulders thrown in the path of true love here. Lady Eve Sinclair is a nasty piece of muslin who's after Mr. Darcy. Lady Catherine works herself into a frenzy, leading to an amusing confrontation between her and Mr. Bennet, which Mrs. Bennet comes in on unexpectedly. The biggest obstacle, as in Pride and Prejudice, proves to be Mr. Wickham.
The author makes her characters feel real and gives them believable relationship issues. The truth about why Matlock is so partial to Wickham and how it has affected the rest of his family is painful to read, especially as it concerns their childhood with his obviously disturbed wife. Scenes of tenderness and anticipation between Darcy and Elizabeth as they fall in love are beautifully written.
I'm not as happy with the extensive sexual content in about the last 10% of the book, after they've married. Perhaps it's to give the reader the sense of the time that passes between the wedding and the next event that impacts the final resolution of the plot, but it feels unnecessarily excessive to me.
Those scenes can be skipped through, though, and the rest of the book is extremely satisfying. I would give this about 4.7 stars, which still rounds up to a 5.
Mrs. Gardiner has been a widow for 2 years. She still mourns her husband but has a faithful family friend in Lord Matlock, who owes much of his estate's profitability to Mr. Gardner's business acumen. Jane and Elizabeth come to her home in London for an extended visit after Mr. Bingley and his party have abandoned Netherfield. They meet Lord Matlock, his two sons, the Viscount and Colonel Fitzwilliam, and his daughter, Lady Selina Brightmore. Lord Matlock has a warm, outgoing personality and immediately takes a strong liking to the two young ladies, declaring only half in jest that he would be happy to promote a match between them and either of his sons. It's not long before Darcy and Georgiana are included in a gathering between the families, and Darcy is shocked to find himself face to face with Elizabeth when he thought he had left her behind in Hertfordshire. Miss Bingley and the Hursts also attend. The superior sisters are equally startled at the presence of Jane and Elizabeth and claim not to know where Mr. Bingley is.
Elizabeth and Jane become dear friends with both Lady Selina and Georgiana. As time goes by, Mr. Bennet comes to London and ends up the surprised recipient of Mr. Darcy's estate advice. But there are undercurrents of tension between Lord Matlock and the rest of his family regarding George Wickham, Elizabeth soon learns. Matlock seems pleased that she considers Wickham a friend, and he admits that Wickham has been in trouble in the past but considers them no more than youthful highjinks, trusting that he's now grown out of them.
Darcy doesn't believe the rest of his family, who realize that he's in love with Elizabeth but tell him it's obvious Elizabeth doesn't care for him. The relationship between those two progresses very rockily along. That's only one of several huge boulders thrown in the path of true love here. Lady Eve Sinclair is a nasty piece of muslin who's after Mr. Darcy. Lady Catherine works herself into a frenzy, leading to an amusing confrontation between her and Mr. Bennet, which Mrs. Bennet comes in on unexpectedly. The biggest obstacle, as in Pride and Prejudice, proves to be Mr. Wickham.
The author makes her characters feel real and gives them believable relationship issues. The truth about why Matlock is so partial to Wickham and how it has affected the rest of his family is painful to read, especially as it concerns their childhood with his obviously disturbed wife. Scenes of tenderness and anticipation between Darcy and Elizabeth as they fall in love are beautifully written.
I'm not as happy with the extensive sexual content in about the last 10% of the book, after they've married. Perhaps it's to give the reader the sense of the time that passes between the wedding and the next event that impacts the final resolution of the plot, but it feels unnecessarily excessive to me.
Those scenes can be skipped through, though, and the rest of the book is extremely satisfying. I would give this about 4.7 stars, which still rounds up to a 5.
March 7, 2014
Reread 10/12/16
Enjoyed it just as much the second time around, though I did manage to force myself to spread it over a few days rather than binge-reading it.
Original read 2/11/16
I stayed up way too late last night reading this book. I blame it for the fact that I'm still droopy-eyed this evening, even after much caffeine. I often find it difficult to write reviews for books I loved beyond AJLJKLFEDJALJFDALDAOMGOMGOMGOMG <3 <3 <3, and especially when I've had too little sleep, but I will do my best.
One of my frequent complaints with variations is that Elizabeth and Darcy resolve their differences too quickly, and especially that Elizabeth decides she's in love with Darcy too easily. This book is a great example of the relationship progression done well. Darcy is still desperately resisting her for the first chunk of the book, and there's none of the gushy, sappy stuff even once they realize their feelings. They both realized their faults and sought to address them, and I felt they truly deserved one another by the time things were resolved between them.
As well as Elizabeth and Darcy were done, I think the secondary characters really make this book shine. Lord Matlock and Mrs. Gardiner, in particular, were fabulous. I found myself laughing aloud at something the earl said on more than one occasion, and I liked that there was an explanation for why he was ready to accept Elizabeth and Jane into his social circle despite their different spheres. I loved the interaction between Darcy and Mr. Bennet. I loved that Lydia I loved how lines from the original ended up (brilliantly) spoken by completely different characters.
In short, I loved it all.
Enjoyed it just as much the second time around, though I did manage to force myself to spread it over a few days rather than binge-reading it.
Original read 2/11/16
I stayed up way too late last night reading this book. I blame it for the fact that I'm still droopy-eyed this evening, even after much caffeine. I often find it difficult to write reviews for books I loved beyond AJLJKLFEDJALJFDALDAOMGOMGOMGOMG <3 <3 <3, and especially when I've had too little sleep, but I will do my best.
One of my frequent complaints with variations is that Elizabeth and Darcy resolve their differences too quickly, and especially that Elizabeth decides she's in love with Darcy too easily. This book is a great example of the relationship progression done well. Darcy is still desperately resisting her for the first chunk of the book, and there's none of the gushy, sappy stuff even once they realize their feelings. They both realized their faults and sought to address them, and I felt they truly deserved one another by the time things were resolved between them.
As well as Elizabeth and Darcy were done, I think the secondary characters really make this book shine. Lord Matlock and Mrs. Gardiner, in particular, were fabulous. I found myself laughing aloud at something the earl said on more than one occasion, and I liked that there was an explanation for why he was ready to accept Elizabeth and Jane into his social circle despite their different spheres. I loved the interaction between Darcy and Mr. Bennet. I loved that Lydia I loved how lines from the original ended up (brilliantly) spoken by completely different characters.
In short, I loved it all.
February 22, 2017
“My family is my strength and my weakness.” Aishwarya Rai Bachchan
There are many excellent reviews regarding this story. As stated in several, this was a long story. Also, it was not one where ODC [our dear couple] jump from disdain for each other, to sudden ardent love in the span of a few pages. At least the author did us that favor. We were taken on a journey as we began to feel the ice cracking, breaking and finally thawing in Elizabeth’s feelings toward Mr. Darcy. This was a journey and we had no choice but to ride it out.
We also encountered several story threads:
ODC: First and foremost, any credible JAFF focuses on the love story of D&E. What is the point otherwise? We should move through an evolution of their coming together in understanding each other, a courtship, an engagement and finally a marriage that moves toward that HEA. And we can always hope for an epilogue to round up the loose ends.
Lord Matlock and Wickham: Wickham had a friend in Lord Matlock who refused to see the true Wickham. His lordship had he reasons for this misplaced loyalty and it was not for the reason I [and our dear colonel] thought. I was rather surprised at the real reason for his affection, support and steadfast backing.
There were also several minor stories playing out:
Jane and Charles had their story time. It took forever for this to finally come to a conclusion. Although the following saying belonged to George Burns first, I believe it could also apply to Charles Bingley. “Happiness is having a large, loving, caring, close-knit family in another city.”
Caroline was given page time to show herself ridiculous along with her sister Mrs. Hurst. Lawd, will these two never learn? They would cut their nose off to spite their face and then complain about it. What Lord Matlock had to say to them… I’ve never heard before. OMG!!
As bad as Caroline was, we met someone that could give her lessons on being a b-witch. Lady Sinclair was the worst… and she was a Fitzwilliam cousin. She was a pistol even as a child and she had not changed. She had her sights zeroed in on Darcy and like a homing device… would not be deterred. Her husband was clueless. Her bold and brazen attempts to get Darcy backfired mightily in a way that she will never forget.
I loved the Fitzwilliam family. Lord Matlock was a hoot. He was irreverent, bold, brash and said whatever was on his mind. He could embarrass the socks off of anyone within a range of ten-paces and simply laugh at them. However, you did not want to cross him. Just ask his sister Lady Catherine when she attempted to lock horns with him over her daughter Anne de Bourgh. Anne was a whole other story thread.
The backstory of Lord Matlock was a sad one. In many JAFF stories we absolutely love and adore the character of Lady Matlock. She has always been a strong force in the lives of her sons the viscount and our dear Colonel. However, it was not that way in this story. The author wanted to take us in a different direction and I liked the way it worked out.
Lady Selina Brightmore was a delight. I would love to read about her story. She was her father’s daughter. Just like Lord Matlock, she was bold, brash and could tell you off just as easily as look at you. She could filet a social piranha in two seconds. And her mother-in-law was even better skilled at putting people in their place. They did not have any use for Lady Sinclair and didn’t hesitate in letting her know their opinion of her. What fun.
Mrs. Gardiner had her own HEA. It was a story that we hoped for throughout the book. I loved her. She loved her nieces and was a big influence in their lives.
Wickham and Lydia: what a mess. There was a scene where Mr. Bennet had Lydia write something for him. It would be a reminder to her of what she wanted more than anything. I thought this was so wise. I’ve never seen it used before, but it was pretty smart. She was too young to understand, too young to know what was in store for her, too young to reason with, and too silly to care. She thought she knew what she wanted and no one was able to deter her from her goal of being married before her sisters.
Lady Catherine showed out all over the place. Wow! Her poor coachman and horses. She left Kent in a huff and stormed London, then Hertfordshire and back to London. The author at least didn’t attempt to have her do all that in one day. They managed to get her to bed at one point, but she left early the next day so she could storm Longbourn and still make it back to London to cause trouble. And cause trouble she did.
Rating: MA-X [Mature Audience X-rated]: soft porn: graphic, sexually explicit scenes:
We went the entire book, until the very last, with no problems. But then we hit scenes for a MA [mature audience]. For some reason, I did not enjoy this part. It actually did not seem credible. I do not consider myself a prude as I’ve read steamy scenes before. In fact, I’ve read scenes that were so steamy, it would peal the wallpaper off the walls, but this slid into soft porn. I did not like it. Here is the problem… we were supposed to believe that, Miss Elizabeth, an inexperienced virgin, someone who had barely touched a man’s hand, skin-to-skin, would suddenly become this vixen, allowing advances on her person, that would rival scenes from a porn movie? I don’t buy it.
The author took all this time to evolve Elizabeth’s feeling and emotions throughout the entire book just to the point of finally loving him. But after their wedding, she suddenly becomes this hot-momma and allows advances, that some women NEVER experience. That did not fly. Medically speaking…
There are many excellent reviews regarding this story. As stated in several, this was a long story. Also, it was not one where ODC [our dear couple] jump from disdain for each other, to sudden ardent love in the span of a few pages. At least the author did us that favor. We were taken on a journey as we began to feel the ice cracking, breaking and finally thawing in Elizabeth’s feelings toward Mr. Darcy. This was a journey and we had no choice but to ride it out.
We also encountered several story threads:
ODC: First and foremost, any credible JAFF focuses on the love story of D&E. What is the point otherwise? We should move through an evolution of their coming together in understanding each other, a courtship, an engagement and finally a marriage that moves toward that HEA. And we can always hope for an epilogue to round up the loose ends.
Lord Matlock and Wickham: Wickham had a friend in Lord Matlock who refused to see the true Wickham. His lordship had he reasons for this misplaced loyalty and it was not for the reason I [and our dear colonel] thought. I was rather surprised at the real reason for his affection, support and steadfast backing.
There were also several minor stories playing out:
Jane and Charles had their story time. It took forever for this to finally come to a conclusion. Although the following saying belonged to George Burns first, I believe it could also apply to Charles Bingley. “Happiness is having a large, loving, caring, close-knit family in another city.”
Caroline was given page time to show herself ridiculous along with her sister Mrs. Hurst. Lawd, will these two never learn? They would cut their nose off to spite their face and then complain about it. What Lord Matlock had to say to them… I’ve never heard before. OMG!!
As bad as Caroline was, we met someone that could give her lessons on being a b-witch. Lady Sinclair was the worst… and she was a Fitzwilliam cousin. She was a pistol even as a child and she had not changed. She had her sights zeroed in on Darcy and like a homing device… would not be deterred. Her husband was clueless. Her bold and brazen attempts to get Darcy backfired mightily in a way that she will never forget.
I loved the Fitzwilliam family. Lord Matlock was a hoot. He was irreverent, bold, brash and said whatever was on his mind. He could embarrass the socks off of anyone within a range of ten-paces and simply laugh at them. However, you did not want to cross him. Just ask his sister Lady Catherine when she attempted to lock horns with him over her daughter Anne de Bourgh. Anne was a whole other story thread.
The backstory of Lord Matlock was a sad one. In many JAFF stories we absolutely love and adore the character of Lady Matlock. She has always been a strong force in the lives of her sons the viscount and our dear Colonel. However, it was not that way in this story. The author wanted to take us in a different direction and I liked the way it worked out.
Lady Selina Brightmore was a delight. I would love to read about her story. She was her father’s daughter. Just like Lord Matlock, she was bold, brash and could tell you off just as easily as look at you. She could filet a social piranha in two seconds. And her mother-in-law was even better skilled at putting people in their place. They did not have any use for Lady Sinclair and didn’t hesitate in letting her know their opinion of her. What fun.
Mrs. Gardiner had her own HEA. It was a story that we hoped for throughout the book. I loved her. She loved her nieces and was a big influence in their lives.
Wickham and Lydia: what a mess. There was a scene where Mr. Bennet had Lydia write something for him. It would be a reminder to her of what she wanted more than anything. I thought this was so wise. I’ve never seen it used before, but it was pretty smart. She was too young to understand, too young to know what was in store for her, too young to reason with, and too silly to care. She thought she knew what she wanted and no one was able to deter her from her goal of being married before her sisters.
Lady Catherine showed out all over the place. Wow! Her poor coachman and horses. She left Kent in a huff and stormed London, then Hertfordshire and back to London. The author at least didn’t attempt to have her do all that in one day. They managed to get her to bed at one point, but she left early the next day so she could storm Longbourn and still make it back to London to cause trouble. And cause trouble she did.
Rating: MA-X [Mature Audience X-rated]: soft porn: graphic, sexually explicit scenes:
We went the entire book, until the very last, with no problems. But then we hit scenes for a MA [mature audience]. For some reason, I did not enjoy this part. It actually did not seem credible. I do not consider myself a prude as I’ve read steamy scenes before. In fact, I’ve read scenes that were so steamy, it would peal the wallpaper off the walls, but this slid into soft porn. I did not like it. Here is the problem… we were supposed to believe that, Miss Elizabeth, an inexperienced virgin, someone who had barely touched a man’s hand, skin-to-skin, would suddenly become this vixen, allowing advances on her person, that would rival scenes from a porn movie? I don’t buy it.
The author took all this time to evolve Elizabeth’s feeling and emotions throughout the entire book just to the point of finally loving him. But after their wedding, she suddenly becomes this hot-momma and allows advances, that some women NEVER experience. That did not fly. Medically speaking…
July 20, 2015
This is an endearingly warm and charming book, peppered with a host of double entendres that only serve to add to its overall beguiling qualities!
As we enter the world of Lizzy and Darcy, we are witness to the witty Lord Matlock whose attitude to the world he lives in is like a breath of fresh air.
We see the Darcy of canon who proposes to Lizzy...... and dear reader this proposal is one that you have to read for yourself. To call it a misunderstanding is simply an understatement.......it is so cleverly written-devastatingly so......
It almost broke my heart to see how he met Lizzy again shortly after........
I could continue to expound on the merits of this book but I won't!
Needless to say I loved it and highly recommend it to readers who love a tender love story centred,but not exclusive to Darcy and Lizzy!
As we enter the world of Lizzy and Darcy, we are witness to the witty Lord Matlock whose attitude to the world he lives in is like a breath of fresh air.
We see the Darcy of canon who proposes to Lizzy...... and dear reader this proposal is one that you have to read for yourself. To call it a misunderstanding is simply an understatement.......it is so cleverly written-devastatingly so......
It almost broke my heart to see how he met Lizzy again shortly after........
I could continue to expound on the merits of this book but I won't!
Needless to say I loved it and highly recommend it to readers who love a tender love story centred,but not exclusive to Darcy and Lizzy!
July 19, 2015
Although I have read and enjoyed this author's other books, the title of this one did not appeal to me. It was not until I read on Goodreads that a new book was being published that I decided to explore this author's page. I read Meredith's review and the Sample and was lured into wanting to read this story. I have to say that I like a long story. So I was not put off, as other reviews stated, by details and side stories. There are several romances going on and the one between the two older principle characters could have been a story in itself as there is a history of previous loves, previous marriages and even an offspring for the one love interest. (I am not mentioning names as it would be to SPOIL the discovery for readers who like to be kept in the dark and find out on their own.)
As the brief Book Description relates, shortly after the Netherfield Ball, Aunt Gardiner invites both Jane and Elizabeth to visit her in London. Jane is depressed and Elizabeth is angry and resentful (as in canon) due to Bingley and his abrupt departure from Netherfield and Caroline’s letter indicating his interest in Mr. Darcy’s sister, etc. Aunt Gardiner, a lovely, insightful and slightly manipulative wealthy widow doesn’t tell the sisters that in accepting an invitation to her friend’s dinner gathering that Darcy will be present. Although Mr. Gardiner has been deceased for two years, his very successful financial advice to many of the ton has created a host of close friends for his wife and family. Her one close friend, Lord Matlock, is also widowed but has the company of his two bachelor sons, his married daughter, Selina, and his niece and nephew, the Darcys, to keep his interests and activities very busy. (P.S. – Strangely, he also has a warm relationship with that rascal, Wickham. His family has cut all ties with the man - so why?) Additionally Lord Matlock plays the devil’s advocate in that he is as charmed and delighted to find Jane Bennet beautiful and demure as he is also enthralled by Elizabeth’s wit and intelligence and subsequently is not shy in stating he would be delighted to marry them to his own sons!
All JAFF readers know the infamous proposal scene from P&P. This author re-sets that scene in London. Darcy and Elizabeth have much the same roles and words here BUT I found it to have some even more harmful words/accusations throw out than in canon. And the cause for those additional words can be traced to a new villainess: a “lady”, married to an older lord, who is stalking Darcy.
We are treated to reading both views as Darcy and Elizabeth have to learn about and reconsider their roles and relationships with each other. I was amused by Elizabeth’s overhearing how well certain gentlemen’s clothing “fit” them and then her contemplation of just what that meant. This author does have a knack for the double entendre. And I was delighted to read of pert opinions and set-downs coming from people other than Elizabeth. Lady Brightmore is a new actress in this tale and she adds spice during her appearances while becoming a friend and advocate in bringing the Bennet sisters into society.
Georgiana’s relationship with Elizabeth broadens in Ms. Lilian’s book and we find her more open in such. Caroline Bingley, Lady Catherine and Anne de Bourgh and Mr. Collins all make appearances along with other familiar players. Mr. Bennet is a pleasant surprise here as well as the relationship he develops with Darcy. Lydia again has her part. And it is not completely as we might expect.
I enjoyed again reading a book in which Darcy and Elizabeth have to learn to reconsider their behaviors and opinions. And I have always loved reading of those looks, the touches, the thrills, the sexual chemistry coming into play as they fall in love. Yes, there are pages of bedroom scenes so beware if that is not your cup of tea. And we have a satisfying Epilogue to give us closure to the extended family’s finding of happiness in life and love.
I look forward to this author’s next publication.
As the brief Book Description relates, shortly after the Netherfield Ball, Aunt Gardiner invites both Jane and Elizabeth to visit her in London. Jane is depressed and Elizabeth is angry and resentful (as in canon) due to Bingley and his abrupt departure from Netherfield and Caroline’s letter indicating his interest in Mr. Darcy’s sister, etc. Aunt Gardiner, a lovely, insightful and slightly manipulative wealthy widow doesn’t tell the sisters that in accepting an invitation to her friend’s dinner gathering that Darcy will be present. Although Mr. Gardiner has been deceased for two years, his very successful financial advice to many of the ton has created a host of close friends for his wife and family. Her one close friend, Lord Matlock, is also widowed but has the company of his two bachelor sons, his married daughter, Selina, and his niece and nephew, the Darcys, to keep his interests and activities very busy. (P.S. – Strangely, he also has a warm relationship with that rascal, Wickham. His family has cut all ties with the man - so why?) Additionally Lord Matlock plays the devil’s advocate in that he is as charmed and delighted to find Jane Bennet beautiful and demure as he is also enthralled by Elizabeth’s wit and intelligence and subsequently is not shy in stating he would be delighted to marry them to his own sons!
All JAFF readers know the infamous proposal scene from P&P. This author re-sets that scene in London. Darcy and Elizabeth have much the same roles and words here BUT I found it to have some even more harmful words/accusations throw out than in canon. And the cause for those additional words can be traced to a new villainess: a “lady”, married to an older lord, who is stalking Darcy.
We are treated to reading both views as Darcy and Elizabeth have to learn about and reconsider their roles and relationships with each other. I was amused by Elizabeth’s overhearing how well certain gentlemen’s clothing “fit” them and then her contemplation of just what that meant. This author does have a knack for the double entendre. And I was delighted to read of pert opinions and set-downs coming from people other than Elizabeth. Lady Brightmore is a new actress in this tale and she adds spice during her appearances while becoming a friend and advocate in bringing the Bennet sisters into society.
Georgiana’s relationship with Elizabeth broadens in Ms. Lilian’s book and we find her more open in such. Caroline Bingley, Lady Catherine and Anne de Bourgh and Mr. Collins all make appearances along with other familiar players. Mr. Bennet is a pleasant surprise here as well as the relationship he develops with Darcy. Lydia again has her part. And it is not completely as we might expect.
I enjoyed again reading a book in which Darcy and Elizabeth have to learn to reconsider their behaviors and opinions. And I have always loved reading of those looks, the touches, the thrills, the sexual chemistry coming into play as they fall in love. Yes, there are pages of bedroom scenes so beware if that is not your cup of tea. And we have a satisfying Epilogue to give us closure to the extended family’s finding of happiness in life and love.
I look forward to this author’s next publication.
May 23, 2014
I'm always fascinated by the many ways Jane Austen's Pride & Prejudice story can be retold. New characters, new scenes or in this case add a mixing up of the order of the scenes to create a gentle, warm story that goes well beyond the romance.
This story is based in the fact that there is an additional connection between Darcy and Lizzy that didn't exist in the original. To name it, the Gardiners, Lizzy's aunt and uncle, were good friends with Lord Matlock, Darcy's uncle. Mr. Gardiner is gone now for five years and the story begins just after Bingley and his party from Netherfield decamp for London and for the holiday scene Mrs. Gardiner has invited her oldest nieces to keep her company as she re-enters society since the death of her husband. Madeleine Gardner keeps a secret of her own from the niece who despairs of lost love and the other niece who hotly disparages the man she feels is responsible. She has a feeling that she can do her part to bring about some happiness for Jane and Lizzy.
Darcy takes a breath of relief when he arrives in London, but relief is fleeting because distance doesn't take his thoughts off Miss Elizabeth Bennet and a part of him is still uncomfortable in his part of separating his friend from Miss Bennet. It is not long before he learns that he has not escaped Elizabeth because she is now safely planted in the bosom of his Fitzwilliam relations who all find her and her sister delightful. Darcy starts to question why he ever tried to fight his fate as he is more enchanted than ever by Elizabeth.
Elizabeth doesn't know what to think of this vastly different picture of the disdainful, arrogant man she met in Hertfordshire. This Darcy is so different in his family group and different with her and her visiting family group too. But there are still the things like his treatment of Wickham and his interference with her sister's chance at happiness with Bingley that still count against him.
The road to love is just as difficult for Darcy and Lizzy as in the original even with the changes to the story. He is still proud and she is still prejudice. Others factor more strongly in the story and there are even a couple of extra side romances going on that were enjoyable. I enjoyed the fact that this was not a romance told in isolation or even just a romance, but almost a saga of two families. There is just so much going on and so many characters that the reader definitely gets their money's worth in this one when it comes to storytelling.
This version of Darcy and Elizabeth were great. I loved that they were both characters who bore some wonderful traits, but also some flaws to make them human. This Lizzy is parts pert and parts insecure. Her insecurities lead her to form conclusions without all the facts and it causes her a world of hurt. Darcy has a high opinion of himself when things get started and he gets knocked down a peg or two, but after he has time to work through his hurt, he owns to his issues and shows Lizzy a better man. Their scenes with Georgiana were lovely particularly that first sleigh ride they all take together.
The story was overall on the enjoyable side and as I said, I really liked the creative changes that offered some fresh storyline. A weak area was the pacing for me though for some who see my reasons this will be an actual plus and not a minus to them. There are tons of sweet or warm family life or romantic scenes that were piled on top of each other. I hate to complain because taken individually they were adorable vignettes, but all of them included didn't advance the story at times being unnecessary or redundant in fact. A prime example for me was the time at Hunsford. As much as I love its place in the original story, other than introducing the characters who were at Hunsford, this part no longer served its purpose since Col. Fitz, the stormy proposal scene, Darcy's letter and all the stuff leading up to it and away from it were in earlier scenes.
Now the fresh parts of the story were intriguing:
-The Gardiner/Fitzwilliam connection which was the dynamic that really made this story,
-Lord Matlock/Wickham connection which offers the biggest area of tension outside the romance,
-The wicked Lady Sinclair who is a very obvious black hatted villainess,
-Subtle changes to original characters like Mr. Bennet who's a bit more active, just a bit though,
-More time with certain secondary characters like Colonel Fitzwilliam and Anne deBourgh
-Spicier romance for Darcy and Lizzy
Lizzy has a rival in this one other than Caro Bingley though its not one the reader is meant to take very seriously. I was a tad disappointed in this version of Charles and Jane because they weren't very three dimensional even though they occupied several scenes. I loved the little mystery of not knowing until near the end what the extra connection Wickham has to the Fitzwilliam family is.
So to bring it altogether, I overall liked this story and think of it as the extended edition version of the story with all the extra scenes and explanations put in. I found the fact that it continues the story past the weddings a huge plus because I always love to know what happens after the happily ever after.
I would recommend it to anyone who loves Pride & Prejudice variations and doesn't mind a little spice within the marriage context. It's not necessary to have read the original story to enjoy this one.
This story is based in the fact that there is an additional connection between Darcy and Lizzy that didn't exist in the original. To name it, the Gardiners, Lizzy's aunt and uncle, were good friends with Lord Matlock, Darcy's uncle. Mr. Gardiner is gone now for five years and the story begins just after Bingley and his party from Netherfield decamp for London and for the holiday scene Mrs. Gardiner has invited her oldest nieces to keep her company as she re-enters society since the death of her husband. Madeleine Gardner keeps a secret of her own from the niece who despairs of lost love and the other niece who hotly disparages the man she feels is responsible. She has a feeling that she can do her part to bring about some happiness for Jane and Lizzy.
Darcy takes a breath of relief when he arrives in London, but relief is fleeting because distance doesn't take his thoughts off Miss Elizabeth Bennet and a part of him is still uncomfortable in his part of separating his friend from Miss Bennet. It is not long before he learns that he has not escaped Elizabeth because she is now safely planted in the bosom of his Fitzwilliam relations who all find her and her sister delightful. Darcy starts to question why he ever tried to fight his fate as he is more enchanted than ever by Elizabeth.
Elizabeth doesn't know what to think of this vastly different picture of the disdainful, arrogant man she met in Hertfordshire. This Darcy is so different in his family group and different with her and her visiting family group too. But there are still the things like his treatment of Wickham and his interference with her sister's chance at happiness with Bingley that still count against him.
The road to love is just as difficult for Darcy and Lizzy as in the original even with the changes to the story. He is still proud and she is still prejudice. Others factor more strongly in the story and there are even a couple of extra side romances going on that were enjoyable. I enjoyed the fact that this was not a romance told in isolation or even just a romance, but almost a saga of two families. There is just so much going on and so many characters that the reader definitely gets their money's worth in this one when it comes to storytelling.
This version of Darcy and Elizabeth were great. I loved that they were both characters who bore some wonderful traits, but also some flaws to make them human. This Lizzy is parts pert and parts insecure. Her insecurities lead her to form conclusions without all the facts and it causes her a world of hurt. Darcy has a high opinion of himself when things get started and he gets knocked down a peg or two, but after he has time to work through his hurt, he owns to his issues and shows Lizzy a better man. Their scenes with Georgiana were lovely particularly that first sleigh ride they all take together.
The story was overall on the enjoyable side and as I said, I really liked the creative changes that offered some fresh storyline. A weak area was the pacing for me though for some who see my reasons this will be an actual plus and not a minus to them. There are tons of sweet or warm family life or romantic scenes that were piled on top of each other. I hate to complain because taken individually they were adorable vignettes, but all of them included didn't advance the story at times being unnecessary or redundant in fact. A prime example for me was the time at Hunsford. As much as I love its place in the original story, other than introducing the characters who were at Hunsford, this part no longer served its purpose since Col. Fitz, the stormy proposal scene, Darcy's letter and all the stuff leading up to it and away from it were in earlier scenes.
Now the fresh parts of the story were intriguing:
-The Gardiner/Fitzwilliam connection which was the dynamic that really made this story,
-Lord Matlock/Wickham connection which offers the biggest area of tension outside the romance,
-The wicked Lady Sinclair who is a very obvious black hatted villainess,
-Subtle changes to original characters like Mr. Bennet who's a bit more active, just a bit though,
-More time with certain secondary characters like Colonel Fitzwilliam and Anne deBourgh
-Spicier romance for Darcy and Lizzy
Lizzy has a rival in this one other than Caro Bingley though its not one the reader is meant to take very seriously. I was a tad disappointed in this version of Charles and Jane because they weren't very three dimensional even though they occupied several scenes. I loved the little mystery of not knowing until near the end what the extra connection Wickham has to the Fitzwilliam family is.
So to bring it altogether, I overall liked this story and think of it as the extended edition version of the story with all the extra scenes and explanations put in. I found the fact that it continues the story past the weddings a huge plus because I always love to know what happens after the happily ever after.
I would recommend it to anyone who loves Pride & Prejudice variations and doesn't mind a little spice within the marriage context. It's not necessary to have read the original story to enjoy this one.
February 22, 2014
In Lory Lilian’s third and much anticipated Pride and Prejudice tale she explores what would happen if characters like Mrs. Gardiner and Lord Matlock were more involved in the lives of their respective neice and nephew. She asks several what if questions: What if Mr. Gardiner passed away two years ago leaving Mrs. Gardiner a young, wealthy mother of two children? What if Mrs. Gardiner invited not only Jane, but Elizabeth to spend some time with her in Cheapside after the Netherfield Ball? What if Mrs. Gardiner and Lord Matlock were dear old friends and as a result the Bennet sisters spent a lot of time in his company?
Oh, how I ADORED Lord Matlock! Brava, Lory Lilian! Brava! Original characters that are delightfully eccentric, precocious, and overflowing with personality seem to be a staple in Lory Lilian’s novels. Similar to the unforgettable and vibrant characters Georgette Heyer creates, Lory Lilian has fashioned some very memorable and lovable creations of her own – sweet little Becky Gardiner from Rainy Days, daring and charismatic Lady Cassandra from Remembrance of the Past, and now we get to meet outspoken, mischievous, and impertinent Lord Matlock in His Uncle’s Favorite!
And yet…Lord Matlock isn’t the only original character introduced to us! (Oh happy day!) We also meet Lord Matlock’s daughter Lady Selina, who clearly has inherited her father’s forthright manner, Lady Brightmore, Lady Selina’s mother-in-law who is known to possess peculiar notions, and Lady Sinclair, who, even after marrying a man with wealth and title is still trying to catch Darcy in her traps! One my favorite aspects of this novel was seeing these new creations interact with Jane Austen’s beloved characters. I loved it when Lord Matlock teased Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley about the Bennet sisters, when Lady Brightmore issued thinly-veiled insults to Caroline Bingley, and when Elizabeth deftly redirected Lady Sinclair’s barbs!
Another area where Ms. Lilian’s talent truly shines is illustrating the ardent love and tender attachment between Elizabeth and Darcy. Darcy’s struggle and perseverance and Elizabeth’s discovery and growing affection were beautifully and exquisitely rendered. I loved Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s sweet moments together – on a horse-drawn sleigh in the snow, on Darcy’s horse Thunder, and on their private walks. (Note: in the last forty pages or so the embraces between Darcy and Elizabeth become a good deal more intimate and amorous and for that reason I’d recommend this novel for Mature Audiences only.)
As can be expected, Wickham comes onto the scene at the most inconvenient time to wreck havoc. But in this variation, things looked like they may take a different course…(Yes! Some new developments of Wickham’s character!) [POSSIBLE SPOILER AHEAD] I loved learning more about Wickham’s past relationship with Lord Matlock; it plausibly explained why Wickham was weak, why he had a sense of entitlement, and why he was so obsessed with the Darcy family. I was thrilled to see Lord Matlock become involved and I loved seeing Wickham finally receive the dressing down he deserves! (Go Lord Matlock!) However, I was disappointed that this change in course didn’t last…Not more than a few hours after having his demands denied and told he will receive no help from anyone (Yes! Good! Take that, Wickham!) Wickham is informed that his debts will be paid, a new commission bought, and a special license purchased so he can marry Lydia. (Gahhh!!)
Any disappointment I felt about Wickham’s fate was far exceeded by my delight in Lord Matlock and his fate! He almost stole the show away from Darcy and Elizabeth! Well done, Lory Lilian!
Oh, how I ADORED Lord Matlock! Brava, Lory Lilian! Brava! Original characters that are delightfully eccentric, precocious, and overflowing with personality seem to be a staple in Lory Lilian’s novels. Similar to the unforgettable and vibrant characters Georgette Heyer creates, Lory Lilian has fashioned some very memorable and lovable creations of her own – sweet little Becky Gardiner from Rainy Days, daring and charismatic Lady Cassandra from Remembrance of the Past, and now we get to meet outspoken, mischievous, and impertinent Lord Matlock in His Uncle’s Favorite!
And yet…Lord Matlock isn’t the only original character introduced to us! (Oh happy day!) We also meet Lord Matlock’s daughter Lady Selina, who clearly has inherited her father’s forthright manner, Lady Brightmore, Lady Selina’s mother-in-law who is known to possess peculiar notions, and Lady Sinclair, who, even after marrying a man with wealth and title is still trying to catch Darcy in her traps! One my favorite aspects of this novel was seeing these new creations interact with Jane Austen’s beloved characters. I loved it when Lord Matlock teased Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley about the Bennet sisters, when Lady Brightmore issued thinly-veiled insults to Caroline Bingley, and when Elizabeth deftly redirected Lady Sinclair’s barbs!
Another area where Ms. Lilian’s talent truly shines is illustrating the ardent love and tender attachment between Elizabeth and Darcy. Darcy’s struggle and perseverance and Elizabeth’s discovery and growing affection were beautifully and exquisitely rendered. I loved Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s sweet moments together – on a horse-drawn sleigh in the snow, on Darcy’s horse Thunder, and on their private walks. (Note: in the last forty pages or so the embraces between Darcy and Elizabeth become a good deal more intimate and amorous and for that reason I’d recommend this novel for Mature Audiences only.)
As can be expected, Wickham comes onto the scene at the most inconvenient time to wreck havoc. But in this variation, things looked like they may take a different course…(Yes! Some new developments of Wickham’s character!) [POSSIBLE SPOILER AHEAD] I loved learning more about Wickham’s past relationship with Lord Matlock; it plausibly explained why Wickham was weak, why he had a sense of entitlement, and why he was so obsessed with the Darcy family. I was thrilled to see Lord Matlock become involved and I loved seeing Wickham finally receive the dressing down he deserves! (Go Lord Matlock!) However, I was disappointed that this change in course didn’t last…Not more than a few hours after having his demands denied and told he will receive no help from anyone (Yes! Good! Take that, Wickham!) Wickham is informed that his debts will be paid, a new commission bought, and a special license purchased so he can marry Lydia. (Gahhh!!)
Any disappointment I felt about Wickham’s fate was far exceeded by my delight in Lord Matlock and his fate! He almost stole the show away from Darcy and Elizabeth! Well done, Lory Lilian!
August 15, 2013
This is a wonderful, wonderful book. This alternate reimagining of Pride and Prejudice begin at Christmas time following the Ball at Netherfield. Lizzy and Jane are traveling to London with Aunt Gardiner and her children to spend some time in London.
Aunt Gardiner is a widow, as her loving husband died two years earlier. Immediately after the Bennet ladies arrival at Gracechurch street they are visited by the Earl of Matlock and his daughter Lady Selina. The Earl is a long time friend of the Gardiner family and an irreverent gentleman prone to teasing all in his company.
Thus begins numerous dinners, parties and balls where Lizzy and Jane will interact with many members of the ton making mostly favorable impressions, as well as being thrust into the company of Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy.
What I love most about this book is that there are few cases of miscommunication. Too many other P & P versions rely upon an overheard conversation or rumor that send Darcy and Lizzy fleeing one another.
Yes there is one example of this but it makes a good plot point because they both learn from and don't allow it to happen again. So as you read through the lengthy book you will encounter an incident of potential misunderstanding which in a lesser book would send the character off in a huff, but then the issue is immediately resolved and they continue on having discussed the problem.
The title refers to George Wickham who is favored by Lord Matlock in spite of his children's and nephew's reservations and distrust. It is a very intriguing subplot to the story Lizzy and Darcy.
Further fun occurs when Caroline Bingley is called out on her spite and venom by members of the nobility in public; generally in a humorous way. This Lizzy is not at all afraid to speak her mind and has several delightful verbal sparring matches with both Miss Bingley and another Lady attempting to put her down publicly.
One of my favorite scenes in the book has Lady Catherine confronting Mr. Bennet instead of Elizabeth and it is quiet well written and fun.
This is not a tale of true love facing no obstacles but the trials and tribulations are reasonable and resolvable. It is one of my favorites and would be a joy to read again,
Aunt Gardiner is a widow, as her loving husband died two years earlier. Immediately after the Bennet ladies arrival at Gracechurch street they are visited by the Earl of Matlock and his daughter Lady Selina. The Earl is a long time friend of the Gardiner family and an irreverent gentleman prone to teasing all in his company.
Thus begins numerous dinners, parties and balls where Lizzy and Jane will interact with many members of the ton making mostly favorable impressions, as well as being thrust into the company of Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy.
What I love most about this book is that there are few cases of miscommunication. Too many other P & P versions rely upon an overheard conversation or rumor that send Darcy and Lizzy fleeing one another.
Yes there is one example of this but it makes a good plot point because they both learn from and don't allow it to happen again. So as you read through the lengthy book you will encounter an incident of potential misunderstanding which in a lesser book would send the character off in a huff, but then the issue is immediately resolved and they continue on having discussed the problem.
The title refers to George Wickham who is favored by Lord Matlock in spite of his children's and nephew's reservations and distrust. It is a very intriguing subplot to the story Lizzy and Darcy.
Further fun occurs when Caroline Bingley is called out on her spite and venom by members of the nobility in public; generally in a humorous way. This Lizzy is not at all afraid to speak her mind and has several delightful verbal sparring matches with both Miss Bingley and another Lady attempting to put her down publicly.
One of my favorite scenes in the book has Lady Catherine confronting Mr. Bennet instead of Elizabeth and it is quiet well written and fun.
This is not a tale of true love facing no obstacles but the trials and tribulations are reasonable and resolvable. It is one of my favorites and would be a joy to read again,
February 16, 2015
I want to thank Meryton Press and Christina Boyd, as I won this book during an event for another book. This book fell between a four and five star read for me; however, as a reader, I know there were quite a few "coincidences" to believe and obstacles for me that were a little too easily overcome by our characters. Yet, I read the book within a day and had a smile on my face frequently throughout this story.
I agree with Sheila, that yes, I love a long read. They keep my mind really moving along and the heart pumping with anticipation. And here, Lory Lilian does create quite a tale of twists, turns and tears for our characters. "His Uncle's Favorite" really has a surprise meaning for readers… I know who I think was really his uncle's favorite, but I don't want to give anything away here.
I loved how the events in this book took place mainly in London, with sweet, memorable scenes occurring between our beloved couple. The angst and tension were good… Lots of description regarding Darcy and Elizabeth's growing attractions and feelings… This is really where Lilian shines in her writing. The touches, the sensations, and the inner dialogues all contribute to giving the reader an intimate feeling amongst the love growing between ODC.
I loved Darcy's uncle and how he really served as the cornerstone of their families. His sense of humor was pleasant, as well as his teasing and assertive manner. He was also so caring and thoughtful… yet full of secrets that followed his actions throughout the story. I really felt his sense of despair when "He was in the chapel. He said he couldn't leave him alone." It was the first time I really felt such sadness reading about this circumstance.
The relationship between the Darcys was really well developed, especially once they were married… Special moments shared between a newly married couple that felt simple, yet so endearing… No need for flashy gifts and tangible items… Their love was built on the times, feelings and secrets they shared that enabled them to build a relationship full of trust, respect and most of all, deep love.
I look forward to reading Lilian's next book on my TBR pile, "Sketching Mr. Darcy!"
I agree with Sheila, that yes, I love a long read. They keep my mind really moving along and the heart pumping with anticipation. And here, Lory Lilian does create quite a tale of twists, turns and tears for our characters. "His Uncle's Favorite" really has a surprise meaning for readers… I know who I think was really his uncle's favorite, but I don't want to give anything away here.
I loved how the events in this book took place mainly in London, with sweet, memorable scenes occurring between our beloved couple. The angst and tension were good… Lots of description regarding Darcy and Elizabeth's growing attractions and feelings… This is really where Lilian shines in her writing. The touches, the sensations, and the inner dialogues all contribute to giving the reader an intimate feeling amongst the love growing between ODC.
I loved Darcy's uncle and how he really served as the cornerstone of their families. His sense of humor was pleasant, as well as his teasing and assertive manner. He was also so caring and thoughtful… yet full of secrets that followed his actions throughout the story. I really felt his sense of despair when "He was in the chapel. He said he couldn't leave him alone." It was the first time I really felt such sadness reading about this circumstance.
The relationship between the Darcys was really well developed, especially once they were married… Special moments shared between a newly married couple that felt simple, yet so endearing… No need for flashy gifts and tangible items… Their love was built on the times, feelings and secrets they shared that enabled them to build a relationship full of trust, respect and most of all, deep love.
I look forward to reading Lilian's next book on my TBR pile, "Sketching Mr. Darcy!"
November 25, 2014
His Uncle's Favorite
Very interesting variation in which Lord Matlock and Edward and Madeleine Gardiner were good friends. When Edward Gardiner died at a young age and left Madeleine with two children to raise, the Earl was there to help her. She didn't need money, since Gardiner had made not only himself wealthy, but increased the coffers of many peers of the realm because of his astute business sense. When the Earl met the Bennet nieces, he falls under their charms immediately, especially Elizabeth, as did his daughter, Selina. Sad story where two wealthy men, George Darcy and Lord Matlock, over indulged one child not related family, and seem to have ignored his profligate ways. Giving him an extensive education and money, but requiring nothing in return for their generosity. Their children were taught to work and be proud of their heritage, but young man only knew how to beg for more. The horrible part of this travesty is that all their children knew what he really was: a cheat, a gambler, a scoundrel, and degenerate that seduced young girls, including his daughter and beloved niece. The whole of his desire was to marry into one of these two families. The Earl, completely smitten with Elizabeth, has her Aunt Gardiner and two nieces to his home for a Christmas family dinner. Unbeknownst to the Bennet girls and Matlock's favorite nephew, they again were thrown together. By the time he arrives, the Earl's sons are both paying a lot of attention to the Bennet girls. The Earl is somewhat of a jokester in this story which I liked him a lot. When he says out loud that the Bennet girls are available to his sons and would not mind to have either one or both for daughter-in-laws, Darcy's jealousy kicks in rather rapidly during dinner. The fact that their group left Netherfield without as much as a wave goodbye, has Elizabeth and Jane barely speaking to him. However, Salina and Georgiana are captured by their charms, especially Elizabeth's outgoing, teasing nature and witty responses to the Earl's remarks and they were already calling each other by their first names. Darcy has been in a funk ever since returning to London, and as dinner progresses, becomes even more so especially since Elizabeth is mostly ignoring him. That's what he gets by running away to escape her arts and alluring self, even though he first thought her tolerable. Mr. Darcy of London is different from the Mr. Darcy of Meryton. She decides that she likes this Mr. Darcy. The next week on New Years Day, Lady Selina and Lady Brightmore (Selina's mother-in-law) their annual Ball. Robert Fitzwilliam claimed Elizabeth's first dance, and Darcy's jealousy is eating away at him. Darcy is waylaid by Lady Eve Sinclair, a real *itch. She's worst than Caroline Bingley if one can imagine. After dancing with her and walking away to claim Elizabeth's hand for the next dance, their smiles are for each other. Dinner is called and he walks her to her chair, but he's at another table. During the after dinner separation, she is bored, and walks to the music room. As she steps to the door, she hears Lady Sinclair discussing with another evidently about Elizabeth. Shocked, she walks outside and decides that she wants to leave. Mrs. Gardiner and her nieces make their excuses and leave. Th roo room m was not Hunsford next day they were to go to tea at Lady Selina's house. When Darcy saw that she wasn't with them, he called at Gracechurch Street. Mrs. Gardiner's drawing room wasn't Hunsford, but a close second. The argument that follows was very hateful remarks thrown towards Darcy from Elizabeth. Not that he didn't deserve some of it, but Elizabeth could not control her anger. Darcy leaves Lone and takes his shattered heart to Pemberley. Two weeks have passed and after getting Georgiana's letter telling him Elizabeth had been sick and hasn't left her room for a week, Darcy realizes that was the day of his terrible proposal. After reviewing every time they met in Hertfordshire, he realized her refusal and hurtful words were justified. Mrs. Gardiner and her children, Elizabeth and Jane are invited to a hunting party at the Earl's estate. Unfortunately Lord and Lady Sinclair were invited also, because the Earl and Lord Sinclair are friends and both are avid hunters. Eve Sinclair is still a hateful *itch, and with Caroline Bingley continues to be mean. Of course with Elizabeth's sharp mind and wit, she gently insults both without them understanding the insult. That night Lady Sinclair sneaks into Darcy's room. Unknowingly she attacked who she thought was Darcy, but Darcy was with Elizabeth and Georgiana, and when they headed towards her room, he stayed long into the early morning. In the morning his valet, Miles, tells him what happened. When confronted by Darcy the next morning, Eve Sinclair realizes that she seduced Darcy's valet, and the Sinclairs left before the hunt was over. When Georgiana comes for tea with the Earl and meets Mr. Bennet, the Earl suggests Darcy to help with his estate problems. He does, and Mr. Bennet could not remember why they didn't like him, because he was very sociable and helpful with Bennet's estate problems. When the Bennets leave for Longbourn with Bingley, Darcy tells her he will see her shortly. Before he can leave for Netherfield, Mr. Bennet and Elizabeth are back at Darcy House. Elizabeth is a mess, because Lydia has eloped with Wickham. The marriage is arranged by Darcy, and the two idiots are married in London. When Lady Catherine confronts Mr. Bennet about Elizabeth and her getting no satisfaction, leaves for London to confront her brother, the Earl of Matlock. Knowing how the Earl feels about Elizabeth, his sister is sent home to Rosings, but because of Lady Catherine's interference and disapproval, Mr. Bennet convinced the two to marry as soon as possible. Of course, neither Darcy or Bingley was upset nor were Elizabeth or Jane, because they got to share their wedding day in weeks rather than months. When the Earl finds out what Wickham tried to do with his own family, Wickham is left with nothing but that he received upon marrying Lydia. Two months later, the Earl has come to Pemberley to relate what happened in Newcastle. When all of their family converges on Pemberley during the summer, Darcy has the honor of telling everyone Wickham's fate. Everyone is happy married including the Earl of Matlock and Mrs. Madeleine Gardiner. Five years later, many happy children and their parents converted on Pemberley.
Very interesting variation in which Lord Matlock and Edward and Madeleine Gardiner were good friends. When Edward Gardiner died at a young age and left Madeleine with two children to raise, the Earl was there to help her. She didn't need money, since Gardiner had made not only himself wealthy, but increased the coffers of many peers of the realm because of his astute business sense. When the Earl met the Bennet nieces, he falls under their charms immediately, especially Elizabeth, as did his daughter, Selina. Sad story where two wealthy men, George Darcy and Lord Matlock, over indulged one child not related family, and seem to have ignored his profligate ways. Giving him an extensive education and money, but requiring nothing in return for their generosity. Their children were taught to work and be proud of their heritage, but young man only knew how to beg for more. The horrible part of this travesty is that all their children knew what he really was: a cheat, a gambler, a scoundrel, and degenerate that seduced young girls, including his daughter and beloved niece. The whole of his desire was to marry into one of these two families. The Earl, completely smitten with Elizabeth, has her Aunt Gardiner and two nieces to his home for a Christmas family dinner. Unbeknownst to the Bennet girls and Matlock's favorite nephew, they again were thrown together. By the time he arrives, the Earl's sons are both paying a lot of attention to the Bennet girls. The Earl is somewhat of a jokester in this story which I liked him a lot. When he says out loud that the Bennet girls are available to his sons and would not mind to have either one or both for daughter-in-laws, Darcy's jealousy kicks in rather rapidly during dinner. The fact that their group left Netherfield without as much as a wave goodbye, has Elizabeth and Jane barely speaking to him. However, Salina and Georgiana are captured by their charms, especially Elizabeth's outgoing, teasing nature and witty responses to the Earl's remarks and they were already calling each other by their first names. Darcy has been in a funk ever since returning to London, and as dinner progresses, becomes even more so especially since Elizabeth is mostly ignoring him. That's what he gets by running away to escape her arts and alluring self, even though he first thought her tolerable. Mr. Darcy of London is different from the Mr. Darcy of Meryton. She decides that she likes this Mr. Darcy. The next week on New Years Day, Lady Selina and Lady Brightmore (Selina's mother-in-law) their annual Ball. Robert Fitzwilliam claimed Elizabeth's first dance, and Darcy's jealousy is eating away at him. Darcy is waylaid by Lady Eve Sinclair, a real *itch. She's worst than Caroline Bingley if one can imagine. After dancing with her and walking away to claim Elizabeth's hand for the next dance, their smiles are for each other. Dinner is called and he walks her to her chair, but he's at another table. During the after dinner separation, she is bored, and walks to the music room. As she steps to the door, she hears Lady Sinclair discussing with another evidently about Elizabeth. Shocked, she walks outside and decides that she wants to leave. Mrs. Gardiner and her nieces make their excuses and leave. Th roo room m was not Hunsford next day they were to go to tea at Lady Selina's house. When Darcy saw that she wasn't with them, he called at Gracechurch Street. Mrs. Gardiner's drawing room wasn't Hunsford, but a close second. The argument that follows was very hateful remarks thrown towards Darcy from Elizabeth. Not that he didn't deserve some of it, but Elizabeth could not control her anger. Darcy leaves Lone and takes his shattered heart to Pemberley. Two weeks have passed and after getting Georgiana's letter telling him Elizabeth had been sick and hasn't left her room for a week, Darcy realizes that was the day of his terrible proposal. After reviewing every time they met in Hertfordshire, he realized her refusal and hurtful words were justified. Mrs. Gardiner and her children, Elizabeth and Jane are invited to a hunting party at the Earl's estate. Unfortunately Lord and Lady Sinclair were invited also, because the Earl and Lord Sinclair are friends and both are avid hunters. Eve Sinclair is still a hateful *itch, and with Caroline Bingley continues to be mean. Of course with Elizabeth's sharp mind and wit, she gently insults both without them understanding the insult. That night Lady Sinclair sneaks into Darcy's room. Unknowingly she attacked who she thought was Darcy, but Darcy was with Elizabeth and Georgiana, and when they headed towards her room, he stayed long into the early morning. In the morning his valet, Miles, tells him what happened. When confronted by Darcy the next morning, Eve Sinclair realizes that she seduced Darcy's valet, and the Sinclairs left before the hunt was over. When Georgiana comes for tea with the Earl and meets Mr. Bennet, the Earl suggests Darcy to help with his estate problems. He does, and Mr. Bennet could not remember why they didn't like him, because he was very sociable and helpful with Bennet's estate problems. When the Bennets leave for Longbourn with Bingley, Darcy tells her he will see her shortly. Before he can leave for Netherfield, Mr. Bennet and Elizabeth are back at Darcy House. Elizabeth is a mess, because Lydia has eloped with Wickham. The marriage is arranged by Darcy, and the two idiots are married in London. When Lady Catherine confronts Mr. Bennet about Elizabeth and her getting no satisfaction, leaves for London to confront her brother, the Earl of Matlock. Knowing how the Earl feels about Elizabeth, his sister is sent home to Rosings, but because of Lady Catherine's interference and disapproval, Mr. Bennet convinced the two to marry as soon as possible. Of course, neither Darcy or Bingley was upset nor were Elizabeth or Jane, because they got to share their wedding day in weeks rather than months. When the Earl finds out what Wickham tried to do with his own family, Wickham is left with nothing but that he received upon marrying Lydia. Two months later, the Earl has come to Pemberley to relate what happened in Newcastle. When all of their family converges on Pemberley during the summer, Darcy has the honor of telling everyone Wickham's fate. Everyone is happy married including the Earl of Matlock and Mrs. Madeleine Gardiner. Five years later, many happy children and their parents converted on Pemberley.
December 20, 2020
It took only halfway through the first chapter and a wide grin involuntarily spread and stayed fixed upon my countenance for the remainder of the read.
The intrusive thought that this reeks of excellent, prime JAFF never abandoned me!
EDIT: (2nd read 2025) Well, five years later and that intrusive aforementioned thought has well deserted me. I am sick in bed with a terrible flu, and decided to go down ol' JAFF memory lane. On this read through I found this work much less cohesive and not as gripping, though tolerable enough. I am DNF'ing at 53% and move the rating down a star.
Onwards and upwards!
Synopsis:
Meet Lord Matlock;
You will love this sassy, debonair Lord who is a champion to the Lizzy, Jane and Mrs Gardiner.
You'll recognize this Mr Darcy, he is everything proper and on character;
-Over confident;
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-Sardonic,
The intrusive thought that this reeks of excellent, prime JAFF never abandoned me!
EDIT: (2nd read 2025) Well, five years later and that intrusive aforementioned thought has well deserted me. I am sick in bed with a terrible flu, and decided to go down ol' JAFF memory lane. On this read through I found this work much less cohesive and not as gripping, though tolerable enough. I am DNF'ing at 53% and move the rating down a star.
Onwards and upwards!
Synopsis:
Meet Lord Matlock;
“However, you should prepare as it is likely you will meet a woman whose eyes will charm your senses and whose wit will bewitch your mind.”-Lord Matlock
“Does she have an interesting dowry, too?”- Colonel Fitzwilliam
The earl gulped his brandy and shook his head. “We shall see if you ask about her dowry tomorrow night.”
You will love this sassy, debonair Lord who is a champion to the Lizzy, Jane and Mrs Gardiner.
You'll recognize this Mr Darcy, he is everything proper and on character;
-Over confident;
“On the other hand, Darcy knew Elizabeth did not dislike him. The earl was completely wrong about that! She smiled at him, teased him, and followed him with her eyes when they were together"
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-Sardonic,
“Then, by all means, do introduce some witty subjects, ladies,” said Darcy severely. “I have long desired such an unusual event to occur.” His voice was as rude as his words."
-and just skirting the the bounds of propriety;“I heartily agree with you, Aunt, with regard to both matters. I have no doubt about Anne’s exquisite taste, and yes, Miss Bennet has a very good notion of fingering. She only has to practice more under the close guidance of a master.”
How scandalous, Mr Darcy! How shall we punish him?
What I enjoyed:
-Very Gradual and realistic turn in affection for ODC“Third—among all the gentlemen at the party, Mr. Darcy was indeed the one whose clothes were most flattering to his figurere. It was fortunate that Lady Brightmore and Lady Selina had pointed out that feature to her; she had never paid close attention to it before with any gentleman.”
-Sleigh ride
-Lady Brightmore slayed Caro!
-Darcy advising Mr Bennet on Longbourne and their blossoming bromance
-Lady Selina
Lydia gets recovered from London before Wickhams demands need heading but she fancies herself in love
What Displeased Me:
Unfocused structure. A good story, like a bow tied gift, when read feels akin to releasing the knot of a silk ribbon, sliding slowly until all sides of the box evenly fall and reveal the central theme inside.
This is the closest I can come to explaining what I felt kept this story from perfect.
With good characters, dialogue and ODC chemistry why have I cause to even repine?
Yes those are all integral to an entertaining story, but a tale has a central underlying narrative, something everything should be inching towards and there was an absence of that structure here.
Colonel Fitzwilliam is usually named Richard but is Robert here, and its confusing, but thats his name in all her stories.
Conclusion
I enjoyed it, and I will reread!
I measure the quality of a JAFF by three factors, as follows;
1. Did I feel the characters acted true to Austen's character framework (allowing for changed circumstance and scenario to offer some leeway)? YES
2. Was I engaged during the reading and not bored? YES
3. Was the writing compelling/ intelligent and was there sufficient interaction/dialogue between the main characters? YES
July 19, 2013
This variation begins with Lizzy accompanying Jane, Mrs. Gardiner and her children on an extended visit to London for the Christmas holidays. Jane’s heart is troubled by the sudden and recent departure of Mr. Bingley from Herefordshire. Lizzy’s heart is leaning toward a preference for Mr. Wickham, her high opinion of him not shared by her aunt. Mrs. Gardiner is not so easily influenced by his charms as she sees Mr. Wickham’s eagerness to share, with strangers, the intimate details of his association with Mr. Darcy, as ungentlemanly behavior.
Mr. Gardiner, a well-respected businessman, highly successful and intelligent, tragically died two years earlier. Because of his good reputation and business skills, along with Mrs. Gardiner’s refined manners and exquisite taste, the couple had many influential acquaintances and some very close friends among the ton. They not only attended many parties with this illustrious society but gave well received parties in their impressive home as well.
Thus as a return to a somewhat normal life for herself and a much needed diversion for both her nieces, Mrs. Gardiner promises them attendance to some parties and maybe a few small balls from people that she still considered close friends! The first such invitation comes from the Earl of Matlock and his married daughter, Lady Selina, who had been dear friends of the both the Gardiners. The Earl is now a widower and has two sons that are single. He has a favorite nephew and niece that will be in attendance as well. Expect some fireworks at this dinner when both Darcy and Elizabeth reunite unexpectedly. The Earl is extremely fond of Lizzy and her quick wit and he admires Jane’s quiet nature. He thinks either would be fine wives for his two sons, much to Darcy’s surprise! As Mrs. Gardiner and the two eldest Bennet sisters are often the special guest of the Earl and/or his daughter, there are many opportunities for Darcy and Elizabeth to spend time in each other’s company! After all, isn’t that what we each desire?
I loved the Earl of Matlock. He is a wonderful character and is central to the story. The Colonel is his lovable self and his brother, the Viscount, is nice and honorable. I adored Lady Selina and Georgiana! Lady Brightmore, Lady Selina’s mother-in-law, is delightful!
The Queen of Mean, Caroline Bingley, has a rival for nastiness in Lady . They eventually get their put downs quite nicely! There is still the story of Lydia and Wickham but with a twist this time. It is a very interesting turn of events and is resolved in a manner unlike any I have read before. Nicely done, Ms. Lilian!
There are sleigh rides, balls, parties, theater visits and hunting trips---lots of time for Darcy and Lizzy to have misunderstandings; then time for Darcy to accept his feelings for Lizzy and for her to eventually change hers for him! The relationship that develops between Darcy and Mr. Bennet is wonderful and very enjoyable to read!
Although I prefer a PnP story to have passionate but chaste romance, this story is for mature audiences as it does contain several scenes of explicit sex after Darcy and Lizzy wed. If that is your preference you will enjoy the hot, steamy scenes.
Overall, I enjoyed this variation very much. Lory Lilian is a good story teller and kept her characters true to their personalities and created some new favorites! I liked the way she changed some of the scenes from the original by using different characters to enact them. This book will be a great addition for any fan of Pride and Prejudice and JAFF.
Reviewed at More Agreeably Engaged
4 out of 5 stars
Rated M for mature audiences and explicit sex
Mr. Gardiner, a well-respected businessman, highly successful and intelligent, tragically died two years earlier. Because of his good reputation and business skills, along with Mrs. Gardiner’s refined manners and exquisite taste, the couple had many influential acquaintances and some very close friends among the ton. They not only attended many parties with this illustrious society but gave well received parties in their impressive home as well.
Thus as a return to a somewhat normal life for herself and a much needed diversion for both her nieces, Mrs. Gardiner promises them attendance to some parties and maybe a few small balls from people that she still considered close friends! The first such invitation comes from the Earl of Matlock and his married daughter, Lady Selina, who had been dear friends of the both the Gardiners. The Earl is now a widower and has two sons that are single. He has a favorite nephew and niece that will be in attendance as well. Expect some fireworks at this dinner when both Darcy and Elizabeth reunite unexpectedly. The Earl is extremely fond of Lizzy and her quick wit and he admires Jane’s quiet nature. He thinks either would be fine wives for his two sons, much to Darcy’s surprise! As Mrs. Gardiner and the two eldest Bennet sisters are often the special guest of the Earl and/or his daughter, there are many opportunities for Darcy and Elizabeth to spend time in each other’s company! After all, isn’t that what we each desire?
I loved the Earl of Matlock. He is a wonderful character and is central to the story. The Colonel is his lovable self and his brother, the Viscount, is nice and honorable. I adored Lady Selina and Georgiana! Lady Brightmore, Lady Selina’s mother-in-law, is delightful!
The Queen of Mean, Caroline Bingley, has a rival for nastiness in Lady . They eventually get their put downs quite nicely! There is still the story of Lydia and Wickham but with a twist this time. It is a very interesting turn of events and is resolved in a manner unlike any I have read before. Nicely done, Ms. Lilian!
There are sleigh rides, balls, parties, theater visits and hunting trips---lots of time for Darcy and Lizzy to have misunderstandings; then time for Darcy to accept his feelings for Lizzy and for her to eventually change hers for him! The relationship that develops between Darcy and Mr. Bennet is wonderful and very enjoyable to read!
Although I prefer a PnP story to have passionate but chaste romance, this story is for mature audiences as it does contain several scenes of explicit sex after Darcy and Lizzy wed. If that is your preference you will enjoy the hot, steamy scenes.
Overall, I enjoyed this variation very much. Lory Lilian is a good story teller and kept her characters true to their personalities and created some new favorites! I liked the way she changed some of the scenes from the original by using different characters to enact them. This book will be a great addition for any fan of Pride and Prejudice and JAFF.
Reviewed at More Agreeably Engaged
4 out of 5 stars
Rated M for mature audiences and explicit sex
September 26, 2015
This variation of Pride and Prejudice centers around Elizabeth and Darcy, but it also somewhat revolves around Lord Matlock and Mrs. Gardiner somewhat. Mr. Gardner and Lady Matlock have both passed in this version, and after Darcy leaves Hertfordshire after the Netherfield ball, he unexpectedly runs into Elizabeth in London. She is visiting her Aunt Gardiner who is good friends with Lord Matlock. He used to do business with her late husband, so that's how they met. Anyway, Lord Matlock is a bit loudmouthed, slightly offending, but good natured. He, like his late brother George Darcy, also shares a blind eye to his favorite, George Wickham.
What I liked: I liked Lord Matlock's character,as well as the connection he shares with Mrs. Gardiner. I enjoyed the evil Lady Sinclair. If anything I would have liked to have seen more of her. She's pretty despicable. All the characters were were written very well in general. The story was good, and watching Elizabeth and Darcy fall in love once more was wonderful. This author definitely knows how to make our characters very passionate and romantic.
What I didn't like so much: If I could have a nickel every time Elizabeth is "embarrassed"...I am not sure why this bothered me so much but it did. She was embarrassed with Lord Matlock, then it seemed almost everyone in the story embarrassed her at one point or another. Then she seems to be embarrassed every time Darcy does anything to her. She starts to seem prudish even (not quite that bad, but after all of the previous embarrassments, I was like come on!) The character is supposed to be famous for not letting herself be intimidated. She's supposed to arise to the occasion - right? Then why is she ALWAYS embarrassed? Again - if it was just said two or three times, I'd brush it off, but it wasn't.
She's also excessively mean to Darcy to begin with. That's a pet peeve of mine. I mean she does despise him, but she is not blind to the good things he does like she is here. She even mentions in this book that Darcy is much more tolerable and nice in London. Yet when she refuses him...her rejection is even sharper!
Overall it was an excellent variation. I won't read it again, but I recommend JAFF fans check it out, and I am sure I will read other Lory Lilian books. :)
What I liked: I liked Lord Matlock's character,as well as the connection he shares with Mrs. Gardiner. I enjoyed the evil Lady Sinclair. If anything I would have liked to have seen more of her. She's pretty despicable. All the characters were were written very well in general. The story was good, and watching Elizabeth and Darcy fall in love once more was wonderful. This author definitely knows how to make our characters very passionate and romantic.
What I didn't like so much: If I could have a nickel every time Elizabeth is "embarrassed"...I am not sure why this bothered me so much but it did. She was embarrassed with Lord Matlock, then it seemed almost everyone in the story embarrassed her at one point or another. Then she seems to be embarrassed every time Darcy does anything to her. She starts to seem prudish even (not quite that bad, but after all of the previous embarrassments, I was like come on!) The character is supposed to be famous for not letting herself be intimidated. She's supposed to arise to the occasion - right? Then why is she ALWAYS embarrassed? Again - if it was just said two or three times, I'd brush it off, but it wasn't.
She's also excessively mean to Darcy to begin with. That's a pet peeve of mine. I mean she does despise him, but she is not blind to the good things he does like she is here. She even mentions in this book that Darcy is much more tolerable and nice in London. Yet when she refuses him...her rejection is even sharper!
Overall it was an excellent variation. I won't read it again, but I recommend JAFF fans check it out, and I am sure I will read other Lory Lilian books. :)
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October 13, 2016
Another great one!!
I am consistently impressed with the depth and detail in Ms. Lillian's novels. This is no exception. Very interesting to have a widow Mrs Gardner as a main character and additionally a widower Lord Matlock, who considered the Gardiners close friends. This makes for situations where our favorite characters meet in ways they never could have otherwise. A wonderful adventure!
I am consistently impressed with the depth and detail in Ms. Lillian's novels. This is no exception. Very interesting to have a widow Mrs Gardner as a main character and additionally a widower Lord Matlock, who considered the Gardiners close friends. This makes for situations where our favorite characters meet in ways they never could have otherwise. A wonderful adventure!
May 14, 2018
Delightful story, off canon but bigger because of it
Many new characters. Earl of Matlock and the widow Gardiner are not totally new but their changes and circumstances are very new.
The story is hard to put down which is difficult for the reader because of its length. A great problem for we readers to have.
Recommended highly
Many new characters. Earl of Matlock and the widow Gardiner are not totally new but their changes and circumstances are very new.
The story is hard to put down which is difficult for the reader because of its length. A great problem for we readers to have.
Recommended highly
June 7, 2024
reread .
When I saw that this was re-released on Kindle I had to re-read it. It has been a few years and many of the details escaped my memory, but I did remember that I liked it a great deal -and wasn't disappointed. This had a bit of everything. angst, drama, family secrets revealed, pettiness, vivaciousness, melancholy, hope, joy (a bit of steam) and love of family.
When I saw that this was re-released on Kindle I had to re-read it. It has been a few years and many of the details escaped my memory, but I did remember that I liked it a great deal -and wasn't disappointed. This had a bit of everything. angst, drama, family secrets revealed, pettiness, vivaciousness, melancholy, hope, joy (a bit of steam) and love of family.
June 26, 2013
Lory Lilian has done it again! I love His Uncle’s Favorite! It is now up there among my favorite Pride and Prejudice variations! I loved the new twist, and the new spins she puts on some of the original characters.
His Uncle’s Favorite is a very interesting title! After reading the book, I feel it could refer to many people; Darcy, Elizabeth or even Wickham! I’m assuming - no, I know - the Uncle is Lord Matlock, and he seems to have many favorites. He is such an unusual, quirky gentleman. He loves to tease people, say what’s on his mind, and sometimes says the most improper things at the most inopportune times.
The story begins about a month after the Netherfield ball, and the Bingleys and Darcy have all left for London. Mrs. Gardiner invites both Jane and Elizabeth to London to visit her for the winter. Mrs Gardiner has been a widow for about two years now. She still feels the loss of Mr. Gardiner deeply. The Gardiners were well liked among the ton, and as a result, they were invited to social events most people of trade were not. Mrs. Gardiner is still regarded highly by the upper class. She is also close friends with the Matlocks. I love this Mrs. Gardiner!
There is a new character to dislike, Lady Sinclair! Miss Bingley is also around to be irritating. And, of course, Mr. Wickham is causing trouble here too.
My one complaint was at the end of the story. After Darcy and Elizabeth are married, there are some sex scenes. After becoming so emotionally involved in a relationship, moments like these feel natural, but there comes a point when it becomes too much, which I feel happened here. Personally, I don't need to know every time they enjoyed one another. That said, I still LOVED the story!
There is so much I could say about this story - so many great scenes - but I won’t for spoiler reasons. If you are a fan of P&P spin offs, I highly recommend reading His Uncle’s Favorite!
Warning: Mature rating for strong sexual content.
Disclaimer: I received an e-copy of the book for my honest review.
His Uncle’s Favorite is a very interesting title! After reading the book, I feel it could refer to many people; Darcy, Elizabeth or even Wickham! I’m assuming - no, I know - the Uncle is Lord Matlock, and he seems to have many favorites. He is such an unusual, quirky gentleman. He loves to tease people, say what’s on his mind, and sometimes says the most improper things at the most inopportune times.
The story begins about a month after the Netherfield ball, and the Bingleys and Darcy have all left for London. Mrs. Gardiner invites both Jane and Elizabeth to London to visit her for the winter. Mrs Gardiner has been a widow for about two years now. She still feels the loss of Mr. Gardiner deeply. The Gardiners were well liked among the ton, and as a result, they were invited to social events most people of trade were not. Mrs. Gardiner is still regarded highly by the upper class. She is also close friends with the Matlocks. I love this Mrs. Gardiner!
There is a new character to dislike, Lady Sinclair! Miss Bingley is also around to be irritating. And, of course, Mr. Wickham is causing trouble here too.
My one complaint was at the end of the story. After Darcy and Elizabeth are married, there are some sex scenes. After becoming so emotionally involved in a relationship, moments like these feel natural, but there comes a point when it becomes too much, which I feel happened here. Personally, I don't need to know every time they enjoyed one another. That said, I still LOVED the story!
There is so much I could say about this story - so many great scenes - but I won’t for spoiler reasons. If you are a fan of P&P spin offs, I highly recommend reading His Uncle’s Favorite!
Warning: Mature rating for strong sexual content.
Disclaimer: I received an e-copy of the book for my honest review.
July 31, 2013
This is the 3rd of Lilian's P&P variations that I have read and enjoyed. In this case, the story takes place after the ball at Netherfield. Mr. Gardiner unexpectedly passed away two years prior and Jane and Lizzy go to London with their Aunt and her children to spend the Christmas season. Mrs. Gardiner is still grieving the loss of her husband and Jane is broken-hearted over the departure of Bingley. Lizzy finds herself conflicted over her feelings for Darcy and shocked to find out that his Uncle Lord Matlock and cousin Lady Selena are old friends of her aunt and uncle, pushing the two into spending time together. The usual angst-ridden path to a HEA for Darcy & Elizabeth follow. A good twist on the story with a deeper exploration of some of the characters of P&P and an introduction to some new faces.
January 8, 2016
Interesting plot version in this book. I really enjoyed the Earl of Matlock. The dialogue between the a Earl and Lizzy alone is a good reason to look at this book.
July 5, 2023
Darcy and Bingley have just recently left Netherfield. But if they thought that they left their respective Bennet girls behind, they have another think coming, because Elizabeth and Jane are both in London. Mrs. Gardiner is widowed and friends with the Earl of Matlock's family. The earl is also widowed, by the by, and enchanted with the two eldest Bennet girls, particularly Elizabeth. So Darcy and Elizabeth get invited to events together. Realizing that his family for the most part would in fact approve of Elizabeth, Darcy proposes but it goes badly. After a letter and some more meetings, and some estate management advice for Mr. Bennet, he gets another chance and a more favourable response at about the halfway mark. But it's by far not the end of their troubles as all the usual suspects want to meddle and there is also a married lady who wants Darcy for his body.
This was nice but sometimes a bit wordy. Some sexual content. Minor editing issues remain, despite being one of however many editions.
This was nice but sometimes a bit wordy. Some sexual content. Minor editing issues remain, despite being one of however many editions.
July 6, 2018
3.5 Stars
I quite enjoyed this take on the novel, the plot was very interesting and I liked how key events in Austen's original were tweaked for this alternate take. The unpredictability of the timeline kept me engaged for the duration of the story, which as there are only so many ways the story can go, it of great credit to Lilian.
The only real downsides I encountered were the rather wordy sections, wherein certain characters' seemed to be holding the same conversation again and again, just worded differently. I could have also done without the sex scenes towards the end, but I appreciated that the author kept mostly true to the etiquette of the time period for most of the novel.
Overall, I rather liked this adaptation. It's certainly one of the most interesting takes on Pride and Prejudice I've read.
I quite enjoyed this take on the novel, the plot was very interesting and I liked how key events in Austen's original were tweaked for this alternate take. The unpredictability of the timeline kept me engaged for the duration of the story, which as there are only so many ways the story can go, it of great credit to Lilian.
The only real downsides I encountered were the rather wordy sections, wherein certain characters' seemed to be holding the same conversation again and again, just worded differently. I could have also done without the sex scenes towards the end, but I appreciated that the author kept mostly true to the etiquette of the time period for most of the novel.
Overall, I rather liked this adaptation. It's certainly one of the most interesting takes on Pride and Prejudice I've read.
July 24, 2026
4.5* rounded up to 5. Overall, I loved this book. My only complaint is that it is too long; I liked all the different threads in it, but it kind of dragged in the early middle part, and I believe that a good editor could reduce it by at least 50 pages, if not 100, by removing some extraneous stuff that did not particularly improve or move along the story itself. IMHO.
However, as I said, I loved this story. I loved the characters of Mrs. Gardiner, Lady Selina Brightmore and Lord Matlock. Caroline Bingley and Lady Catherine were both horrid (no surprise) After her set-downs from Lady Brightmore and Lord Matlock, I was surprised to see at the end of the story that Caroline was still horrid and yet was included in family events. Ugh.
So many things happen in this book, I will not try to explain any of it, except to say that I do recommend it to other JAFF lovers.
However, as I said, I loved this story. I loved the characters of Mrs. Gardiner, Lady Selina Brightmore and Lord Matlock. Caroline Bingley and Lady Catherine were both horrid (no surprise) After her set-downs from Lady Brightmore and Lord Matlock, I was surprised to see at the end of the story that Caroline was still horrid and yet was included in family events. Ugh.
So many things happen in this book, I will not try to explain any of it, except to say that I do recommend it to other JAFF lovers.
December 9, 2018
An enjoyable variation with the addition of some good characters. I liked that she showed them falling in love slowly, explaining their bond. A long and detailed story.
However, it lacked something. Improved editing would help for grammar/spelling, over wordy/repetitive passages, and some anachronistic language. Some of the more minor characters, like Lydia and Lady Catherine, were quite shallow and almost caricatures of themselves. The servants & many of the below&upstairs interactions felt really unrealistic for the time period; eg. there is no way a good housekeeper would show herself to be flustered at the masters arrival. If you’re a regency purist, you will probably be irritated at some of the behaviour. The end isn’t as good as the first half of the book. Still worth a read.
However, it lacked something. Improved editing would help for grammar/spelling, over wordy/repetitive passages, and some anachronistic language. Some of the more minor characters, like Lydia and Lady Catherine, were quite shallow and almost caricatures of themselves. The servants & many of the below&upstairs interactions felt really unrealistic for the time period; eg. there is no way a good housekeeper would show herself to be flustered at the masters arrival. If you’re a regency purist, you will probably be irritated at some of the behaviour. The end isn’t as good as the first half of the book. Still worth a read.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 29, 2025
**Spoilers**
**Mature Audiences**
This has all of the regular events.
Darcy's disastrous proposal. (different setting)
Whickam and Lydia. (different setting)
Some difference
Mr. Gardiner passed away unexpectedly prior to this story. Mrs. Gardiner is closely acquainted with Lord Matlock who is also widowed.
J & E marry B & D in a double wedding. L & W marry shortly before.
W is shot and killed.
Lord M & Mrs. G marry.
Col F and ADB marry and have a baby.
My only complaint is that Lord M isn't informed that W tried to insinuate himself with Lord M's daughter then with Georgianna. Col F finally blows up on Lord M. He's mad at Lord M's fondness for W but he isn't told of W's worst offenses. So, how is he supposed to know how bad W is?
D & E do not fully consummate until after marriage.
**Mature Audiences**
This has all of the regular events.
Darcy's disastrous proposal. (different setting)
Whickam and Lydia. (different setting)
Some difference
Mr. Gardiner passed away unexpectedly prior to this story. Mrs. Gardiner is closely acquainted with Lord Matlock who is also widowed.
J & E marry B & D in a double wedding. L & W marry shortly before.
W is shot and killed.
Lord M & Mrs. G marry.
Col F and ADB marry and have a baby.
My only complaint is that Lord M isn't informed that W tried to insinuate himself with Lord M's daughter then with Georgianna. Col F finally blows up on Lord M. He's mad at Lord M's fondness for W but he isn't told of W's worst offenses. So, how is he supposed to know how bad W is?
D & E do not fully consummate until after marriage.
July 1, 2017
I love stories where Darcy's Earl uncle is a nice guy. In this variation, Mr Gardiner passed away 2 years prior to the start of this story but his widow is well thought of by his former partners and friends. Mrs Gardiner is good friends with the widower Earl of Matlock and his married daughter, and so Lizzie and Jane benefit from an introduction to Matlock and his family when they visit post-Netherfield ball.
Darcy left prior and is surprised to meet Lizzie again.
It's a charming story with excellent character development. I didn't want it to end!
Darcy left prior and is surprised to meet Lizzie again.
It's a charming story with excellent character development. I didn't want it to end!
June 19, 2020
Interesting and inquisitive yet cute and sweet
Completely different from any I have read. This was a truly amazing in which the closeness of family could be torn apart by one. Elizabeth and Darcy go through the usual meet and horrible argument, but it's his uncle and her aunt that keep them close. His uncle keeps the villain close, but it's not for why I thought. There is some very funny parts, especially caused but Caroline Bingley. The emotional aspect is throughout the book from beginning to end. One of her best works. Highly recommended to read
Completely different from any I have read. This was a truly amazing in which the closeness of family could be torn apart by one. Elizabeth and Darcy go through the usual meet and horrible argument, but it's his uncle and her aunt that keep them close. His uncle keeps the villain close, but it's not for why I thought. There is some very funny parts, especially caused but Caroline Bingley. The emotional aspect is throughout the book from beginning to end. One of her best works. Highly recommended to read
May 5, 2021
2.75 stars.
The main reason I can't justify giving this story 3 stars is that it was way too long. About 2/3rds of the way in I was drowning in how much was left to read because it just felt like it was dragging on and on to it's own detriment. The premise was definitely different but the execution was just too long-winded for me to enjoy it because it felt like certain subplots weren't really necessary.
The main reason I can't justify giving this story 3 stars is that it was way too long. About 2/3rds of the way in I was drowning in how much was left to read because it just felt like it was dragging on and on to it's own detriment. The premise was definitely different but the execution was just too long-winded for me to enjoy it because it felt like certain subplots weren't really necessary.
May 29, 2021
DNF
I stopped about 6 chapters in as the continuity was appalling. I have read bad fanfiction that adheres better to continuity than this story. Jane and Eliza had been at least 5 days in London but the text always said 3 days, no matter what was happening. Col. Fitzwilliam had the name Robert for some reason, and he asked Lizzy for a dance á week before the actual dance and then again 3 days before the dance and Lizzy behaved like he hadn't asked before.
That along with some other things made me quit which I'm sad about as the story looked very interesting.
I stopped about 6 chapters in as the continuity was appalling. I have read bad fanfiction that adheres better to continuity than this story. Jane and Eliza had been at least 5 days in London but the text always said 3 days, no matter what was happening. Col. Fitzwilliam had the name Robert for some reason, and he asked Lizzy for a dance á week before the actual dance and then again 3 days before the dance and Lizzy behaved like he hadn't asked before.
That along with some other things made me quit which I'm sad about as the story looked very interesting.
September 7, 2023
Overall I enjoyed the story and the progression. Skipped some scenes near the end that personally didn't need to be added. Editing in the book wasn't my favorite. Dialogue was confusing a few times because characters would speak and you didn't know who it was until later. Some minor in consistencies. But overall I loved the Darcy and Elizabeth romance. Wickhams plot wasn't my favorite and wanted it to be different than original.
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