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Dream Girl
For Christine, dreams have never meant much. Until she meets Gabriel. Everyone thinks Christine should stay away from her new coworker at the library—thanks to his bad reputation—but when her dreams grow more vivid and she becomes entangled in a dangerous dream world with Gabriel every night, she can’t stay away. Soon it’s clear there is far more to dreams than Christine ever imagined, and now she’s on the path to making the biggest, and strangest, decision of her life.
258 pages, Paperback
First published October 30, 2013
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October 12, 2013
Dream Girl review
This is a story of adventure, danger and romance done in an extraordinarily unique way. It’s a compelling, character-driven story that had me turning the pages fast – the kind that will keep you up later than at night than you’d planned!
Heroine Christine is a lot like many of us are at the brink of adulthood. She’s a quiet, do-right girl in the shadow of her best friends and often standing on the sideline - yet on the cusp of discovering of the depth of her courage and her purpose in life.
Christine’s ordinary life turns upside down when she meets her new coworker at the library: the mysterious, hot, troubled and magnetic Gabriel. With him, she finds a connection beyond anything she’s ever felt or experienced. It is this overwhelming connection that compels Christine to unknowingly follow Gabriel into a dangerous, bizarre dream world that’s as real as real can feel. S.J. Lomas’ beautiful writing makes each visit as visual and action-packed as a film. There, Christine discovers that it’s up to her to save the man with whom she’s irreversibly connected. Christine is faced with decisions that will affect Gabriel and the rest of her life.
A love triangle between Christine and another man she meets in and outside of the dream world complicates this story told through the distinct voices of Christine and Gabriel. As an author myself, I know this alternating of narrators is a difficult task but Lomas nails it like a master.
Looking forward to more from S.J. Lomas!
This is a story of adventure, danger and romance done in an extraordinarily unique way. It’s a compelling, character-driven story that had me turning the pages fast – the kind that will keep you up later than at night than you’d planned!
Heroine Christine is a lot like many of us are at the brink of adulthood. She’s a quiet, do-right girl in the shadow of her best friends and often standing on the sideline - yet on the cusp of discovering of the depth of her courage and her purpose in life.
Christine’s ordinary life turns upside down when she meets her new coworker at the library: the mysterious, hot, troubled and magnetic Gabriel. With him, she finds a connection beyond anything she’s ever felt or experienced. It is this overwhelming connection that compels Christine to unknowingly follow Gabriel into a dangerous, bizarre dream world that’s as real as real can feel. S.J. Lomas’ beautiful writing makes each visit as visual and action-packed as a film. There, Christine discovers that it’s up to her to save the man with whom she’s irreversibly connected. Christine is faced with decisions that will affect Gabriel and the rest of her life.
A love triangle between Christine and another man she meets in and outside of the dream world complicates this story told through the distinct voices of Christine and Gabriel. As an author myself, I know this alternating of narrators is a difficult task but Lomas nails it like a master.
Looking forward to more from S.J. Lomas!
March 26, 2014
This relatively short book was a sweet leisurely read. The writing is well done and the book has a natural flow to it. I also really liked how realistically Christine and her friends were portrayed. Apart from the ever annoying insta-love this was a great casual read. I would have liked for the novel to be a bit more fleshed out, but seeing as how this is part of a series I am confident that subsequent books will give this story more substance. Can't wait for the next one!
Note : I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
November 6, 2013
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First I want congrats the author.The book was amazing. I never read a book like this and it was amazing. Every page I became more curious that what going be happen in the next page?
Heroine Christine is a lot like many of us.She has a ordinary life..until she met Gabriel.The mysterious, hot, troubled and magnetic Gabriel.Actually he's not trouble or other things. He just protected her from costumer's tease. With him, she finds a connection beyond anything she’s ever felt or experienced.But this experience also dangerous.Until she find Leo. He's going to save them. But not just him. Entire government.Well not entire Only Dream Work agents.
I know that writing both world is hard but looks like S.J Lomas is the master of this business.
I hope book will continued. Also can't wait to read more of her books.
First I want congrats the author.The book was amazing. I never read a book like this and it was amazing. Every page I became more curious that what going be happen in the next page?
Heroine Christine is a lot like many of us.She has a ordinary life..until she met Gabriel.The mysterious, hot, troubled and magnetic Gabriel.Actually he's not trouble or other things. He just protected her from costumer's tease. With him, she finds a connection beyond anything she’s ever felt or experienced.But this experience also dangerous.Until she find Leo. He's going to save them. But not just him. Entire government.Well not entire Only Dream Work agents.
I know that writing both world is hard but looks like S.J Lomas is the master of this business.
I hope book will continued. Also can't wait to read more of her books.
June 28, 2019
I really enjoyed Dream Girl. The content was clean, the characters were easy to relate to and lovable, and S.J. Lomas really impressed me as an author. She has a way of writing that draws you in and makes you want to keep reading.
The chapters are very short in this book, sometimes even just a few paragraphs, but I found that I loved that! It made the book move quickly, and I was done way to fast.
It starts out with Christine, a typical teenage girl working in a library, who meets the new boy that just joined the staff. Soon, however, we realize that this boy has a darkness about him, and a past as mysterious as his sudden appearance.
As the story progresses, you get little glimpses into the life of each, and slowly put together the over all plot in a fun and exciting way.
While I'm disappointed that the book was over so fast, I'm excited that there is a sequel and look forward to seeing the thrilling conclusion of this book! Great job S.J. Lomas, your on my watch list!
The chapters are very short in this book, sometimes even just a few paragraphs, but I found that I loved that! It made the book move quickly, and I was done way to fast.
It starts out with Christine, a typical teenage girl working in a library, who meets the new boy that just joined the staff. Soon, however, we realize that this boy has a darkness about him, and a past as mysterious as his sudden appearance.
As the story progresses, you get little glimpses into the life of each, and slowly put together the over all plot in a fun and exciting way.
While I'm disappointed that the book was over so fast, I'm excited that there is a sequel and look forward to seeing the thrilling conclusion of this book! Great job S.J. Lomas, your on my watch list!
March 7, 2014
Dream Girl by S.J. Lomas tells the story of Christine, a young woman at a sort of crossroads in her life. Split between trying to make a life for herself in Michigan, or leave with her parents for a new town and a new home, things get even more complicated when an enigmatic boy enters the picture—Gabriel, who seems to be dealing with a lot more than he’s letting on. Things get even more intense when Gabriel and Christine start meeting in their dreams—is it real? What does this mean? And how will these dreams affect the outcome of Christine’s life?
This was an interesting premise for me: girl exists within and without reality, having to navigate dreams that can physically break the barrier and bridge into real life—with real life consequences. Unfortunately, it just didn’t resonate well with me, at least, not initially. Christine and Gabriel meet fairly quickly, which is fine, but their relationship progresses so quickly that I had a hard time suspending my disbelief. Destiny can go a long way for a story, but it has to be paced properly and, for me, the pacing of the story as a whole was definitely an issue. Some moments I’d be flipping pages, wanting to know what happens next; next, I’d be looking at a page and wondering why this particular scene was included.
I also think it wasn’t necessary to have the novel split between two perspectives. Christine’s would have served well enough and would have added a level of mystery to the novel. I didn’t find myself enjoying Gabriel’s sections as much as Christine’s and I think the story would have been stronger had it just been told from one angle.
I really enjoyed the dream world in this novel—especially Christine’s interactions with the character Leo within that world. I thought some of that dialogue and storytelling was the best in the novel and I would have liked to see their relationship fleshed out more. Hopefully that will come in any subsequent novels. The end of the story definitely picked up the pace—and landed a few surprises, but it would have been nice to have that kind of consistency throughout the novel.
All in all, it’s definitely an interesting start and I think with time Lomas will be better able to develop the story. If you’re looking for a sci-fi type adventure, with mystery and suspense, then this book is for you.
I was given a copy of the novel in exchange for a fair and honest review.
This was an interesting premise for me: girl exists within and without reality, having to navigate dreams that can physically break the barrier and bridge into real life—with real life consequences. Unfortunately, it just didn’t resonate well with me, at least, not initially. Christine and Gabriel meet fairly quickly, which is fine, but their relationship progresses so quickly that I had a hard time suspending my disbelief. Destiny can go a long way for a story, but it has to be paced properly and, for me, the pacing of the story as a whole was definitely an issue. Some moments I’d be flipping pages, wanting to know what happens next; next, I’d be looking at a page and wondering why this particular scene was included.
I also think it wasn’t necessary to have the novel split between two perspectives. Christine’s would have served well enough and would have added a level of mystery to the novel. I didn’t find myself enjoying Gabriel’s sections as much as Christine’s and I think the story would have been stronger had it just been told from one angle.
I really enjoyed the dream world in this novel—especially Christine’s interactions with the character Leo within that world. I thought some of that dialogue and storytelling was the best in the novel and I would have liked to see their relationship fleshed out more. Hopefully that will come in any subsequent novels. The end of the story definitely picked up the pace—and landed a few surprises, but it would have been nice to have that kind of consistency throughout the novel.
All in all, it’s definitely an interesting start and I think with time Lomas will be better able to develop the story. If you’re looking for a sci-fi type adventure, with mystery and suspense, then this book is for you.
I was given a copy of the novel in exchange for a fair and honest review.
March 19, 2014
My copy was provided by Netgalley.
Christine is an average girl who is living on her own. She works at a dream job for book lovers which is called working at a library. She has never had anything abnormal happen to her. She's always thought that dreams are just dreams. Until Gabriel shows up. He is the guy your parents have warned you about. He has a bad reputation and fits the picture for a bad boy. Yet why is a bad boy working at the library?
As Christine tries to figure Gabriel out, her whole life is turned upside down when she is sucked into one of Gabriel's dreams. If that wasn't weird enough, it turns out that when Gabriel sleeps, he travel to a dream world where Gabriel can get hurt while he sleeps. Christine has to figure out if she wants to stay beside Gabriel and if her ability to go into Gabriel's dreams mean something.
This book sounded really good! I mean, this girl works at the library and this dangerous guy shows up and she somehow gets sucked into his dreams. It sounds like a girl's fantasy. Yet it was very slow in the beginning. It felt like nothing interesting was happening and there was no action. And when things did speed up a bit, it seemed like these parts were skimmed over and were rushed. I would've liked to know more about Christine and her personality. She never really felt alive to me. I needed more connections to her because I felt like I didn't relate to her at all.
The relationship between Christine and Gabriel was cute at first, but the intensity at which the relationship grew seemed unbelievable. I believe that love takes awhile to blossom and their relationship seemed to speed up way too fast.
I liked Christine's take on the dream world. I didn't feel as if Gabriel's point of view was really necessary as I enjoyed Christine's take on things more than Gabriel's. The dream world was very cool and I loved whenever Christine met up with Leo. I really liked Leo and I hope the next book includes a lot more of him.
The ending definitely picked up the pace and there were some unexpected surprises that I enjoyed. This was an interesting book and I do want to read the sequel, but I feel as if some details just needed to be left out as they weren't really important or relevant to the story.
Christine is an average girl who is living on her own. She works at a dream job for book lovers which is called working at a library. She has never had anything abnormal happen to her. She's always thought that dreams are just dreams. Until Gabriel shows up. He is the guy your parents have warned you about. He has a bad reputation and fits the picture for a bad boy. Yet why is a bad boy working at the library?
As Christine tries to figure Gabriel out, her whole life is turned upside down when she is sucked into one of Gabriel's dreams. If that wasn't weird enough, it turns out that when Gabriel sleeps, he travel to a dream world where Gabriel can get hurt while he sleeps. Christine has to figure out if she wants to stay beside Gabriel and if her ability to go into Gabriel's dreams mean something.
This book sounded really good! I mean, this girl works at the library and this dangerous guy shows up and she somehow gets sucked into his dreams. It sounds like a girl's fantasy. Yet it was very slow in the beginning. It felt like nothing interesting was happening and there was no action. And when things did speed up a bit, it seemed like these parts were skimmed over and were rushed. I would've liked to know more about Christine and her personality. She never really felt alive to me. I needed more connections to her because I felt like I didn't relate to her at all.
The relationship between Christine and Gabriel was cute at first, but the intensity at which the relationship grew seemed unbelievable. I believe that love takes awhile to blossom and their relationship seemed to speed up way too fast.
I liked Christine's take on the dream world. I didn't feel as if Gabriel's point of view was really necessary as I enjoyed Christine's take on things more than Gabriel's. The dream world was very cool and I loved whenever Christine met up with Leo. I really liked Leo and I hope the next book includes a lot more of him.
The ending definitely picked up the pace and there were some unexpected surprises that I enjoyed. This was an interesting book and I do want to read the sequel, but I feel as if some details just needed to be left out as they weren't really important or relevant to the story.
April 1, 2020
What if dreaming isn’t really a dream?
I don’t read a lot of descriptions when I pick up a book to read and review. Fewer expectations that way. I can say, I was genuinely impressed with this book. I read it in under a week, which is quick for me.
The characters felt realistic, as well as their interactions with each other. Their accusations, suspicions, and excitement felt real. Christine’s character arch was intriguing as she was fighting to find a way to stay with her friends, to the big change in the end. Her and Gabriel’s relationship was sketchy in the beginning, but I grew to root for them quickly.
I liked that the author chose to jump between characters, and I liked the short chapters. I felt both kept the story moving. The Government Agency thing has left me with so many questions, but I suppose I will need to read book 2 to find the answers!
I don’t read a lot of descriptions when I pick up a book to read and review. Fewer expectations that way. I can say, I was genuinely impressed with this book. I read it in under a week, which is quick for me.
The characters felt realistic, as well as their interactions with each other. Their accusations, suspicions, and excitement felt real. Christine’s character arch was intriguing as she was fighting to find a way to stay with her friends, to the big change in the end. Her and Gabriel’s relationship was sketchy in the beginning, but I grew to root for them quickly.
I liked that the author chose to jump between characters, and I liked the short chapters. I felt both kept the story moving. The Government Agency thing has left me with so many questions, but I suppose I will need to read book 2 to find the answers!
February 23, 2020
I very much enjoyed this book. It starts out like a YA romance where the main character (Christine) meets a handsome brooding writer (Gabriel), but instead of centering the primary conflict on their romance, the author made the dream world the most chaotic factor, in my opinion. More specifically, both characters also live separate realities at night. This is a very interesting premise for a novel. I'm going to get the sequel as soon as my reading queue clears because I really want to know what happens next :)
November 7, 2013
Dream Girl narrates the story from two different perspectives of Gabriel and Christine. It is a novel that lets you dive right in to the world of dreams that is more than just lucid dreams. One you couldn't possibly imagine dreaming of.
Gabriel is an emotional and capable character, in my opinion. He is able to get things on his side without much of an effort. Although the demeanor he gives people can be intimidating, he is trustworthy enough that Christine believes in him. She is instantly pulled to him almost as the first time she caught sight of him at the public library. I thought that was inevitable as he is strikingly good-looking guy and foolish of her to be attracted, so much so without knowing him. The love at first sight was a rush and not a well thought out move, that's all. However, I started to realize something though and it was not half bad at all.
I had agreed with Daria (one of Christine's best friends), regarding the infatuation Christine feels towards Gabriel. Her views were right then. As I continued reading, the plot's climax or somewhere around it has dawned on me to think more clearly. From there, I started changing my views on what it really is about Christine and Gabriel's relationship. It has a purpose. The two were brought together for a revelation or something like it. Both of them are about to get to the bottom of things and find out.
The story started off to get the attention of the reader. It was intriguing enough when Gabriel appears all of a sudden into the plot. Honestly, I've had experienced a bit of a struggle at first, after Gabriel was introduced but I work slowly through it.
Readers have to pay close attention. There's a part where I got confused between what's real and dream world. I thought it was the character's reality until it was stated it was only a dream. Prior to what I missed out and clueless of what the events were, I had to reread it again.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading Dream Girl, one that reminds me of the movie Inception as it was pretty much alike to each other. I love idea when dreams are formed by the main characters, all can be felt physically and emotionally. Despite the difficulties Christine and Gabriel faced, they are determined to overcome the obstacles and end them. Both has survived the intense and every realistic they encounter in each of their dreams.
The ending wrapped up nicely. Even though it hasn't been fully revealed to readers of why Christine could have the ability that matches Gabriel's, I believe they still have a long way to go and better understand the dangers of the journey they have chosen for themselves. I definitely hope for a sequel to come! If you loved the movie Inception, I would recommend that you read this book!
(Actual) Rating: 3.5 of 5 stars
Review Originally posted on Queekie Girl Reads - VISIT the blog tour: Blog Tour: Dream Girl by S.J. Lomas (Review + Giveaway!)
Gabriel is an emotional and capable character, in my opinion. He is able to get things on his side without much of an effort. Although the demeanor he gives people can be intimidating, he is trustworthy enough that Christine believes in him. She is instantly pulled to him almost as the first time she caught sight of him at the public library. I thought that was inevitable as he is strikingly good-looking guy and foolish of her to be attracted, so much so without knowing him. The love at first sight was a rush and not a well thought out move, that's all. However, I started to realize something though and it was not half bad at all.
I had agreed with Daria (one of Christine's best friends), regarding the infatuation Christine feels towards Gabriel. Her views were right then. As I continued reading, the plot's climax or somewhere around it has dawned on me to think more clearly. From there, I started changing my views on what it really is about Christine and Gabriel's relationship. It has a purpose. The two were brought together for a revelation or something like it. Both of them are about to get to the bottom of things and find out.
The story started off to get the attention of the reader. It was intriguing enough when Gabriel appears all of a sudden into the plot. Honestly, I've had experienced a bit of a struggle at first, after Gabriel was introduced but I work slowly through it.
Readers have to pay close attention. There's a part where I got confused between what's real and dream world. I thought it was the character's reality until it was stated it was only a dream. Prior to what I missed out and clueless of what the events were, I had to reread it again.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading Dream Girl, one that reminds me of the movie Inception as it was pretty much alike to each other. I love idea when dreams are formed by the main characters, all can be felt physically and emotionally. Despite the difficulties Christine and Gabriel faced, they are determined to overcome the obstacles and end them. Both has survived the intense and every realistic they encounter in each of their dreams.
The ending wrapped up nicely. Even though it hasn't been fully revealed to readers of why Christine could have the ability that matches Gabriel's, I believe they still have a long way to go and better understand the dangers of the journey they have chosen for themselves. I definitely hope for a sequel to come! If you loved the movie Inception, I would recommend that you read this book!
(Actual) Rating: 3.5 of 5 stars
Review Originally posted on Queekie Girl Reads - VISIT the blog tour: Blog Tour: Dream Girl by S.J. Lomas (Review + Giveaway!)
March 3, 2014
Be careful what you wish for.
In this story an ordinary girl gets thrust into a world where dreams really can hurt you. The setting was a perfect backdrop to this extraordinary story. What starts out as a dream come true suddenly turns into a nightmare. The whole concept of the Dream world is very imaginative and intriguing. We get to explore a bit of it in this first book and I am eager to learn more about how everything works and its limits in future ones.
My favorite part about this book was the relationship between Christine and Gabriel. At first I was kinda worried because it seemed like it was going to be an insta love kinda thing. However I was happily surprised. Christine and Gabriel do start to get close a bit early on, but instead of forsaking everything for some guy Christine is actually very mature and level headed. Even when things get a little crazy she does never forgets her friends and does her best to find a way to make things right. I really admired her calm and rational thinking, especially since I would have probably been completely crazy at that point. Her and Gabriel do come to care for one another very much, but things weren't easy and it made them all the stronger for it.
Gabriel is a misunderstood boy who just wanted to be normal. He is funny, smart, and really interesting. He knows what a risk it is to make friends which is why he tries to avoid Christine at first, but eventually he learns that he can't hide forever. He really grows a lot throughout the story. It was nice to see him go from the moody misunderstood boy to the man who finally stood up for himself and fought back.
I can't wait to see these two extraordinary characters in the next installment. It promises to be a very action packed and emotionally charged book.
For a romantic and life changing adventure check out Dream Girl by S.J. Lomas!
In this story an ordinary girl gets thrust into a world where dreams really can hurt you. The setting was a perfect backdrop to this extraordinary story. What starts out as a dream come true suddenly turns into a nightmare. The whole concept of the Dream world is very imaginative and intriguing. We get to explore a bit of it in this first book and I am eager to learn more about how everything works and its limits in future ones.
My favorite part about this book was the relationship between Christine and Gabriel. At first I was kinda worried because it seemed like it was going to be an insta love kinda thing. However I was happily surprised. Christine and Gabriel do start to get close a bit early on, but instead of forsaking everything for some guy Christine is actually very mature and level headed. Even when things get a little crazy she does never forgets her friends and does her best to find a way to make things right. I really admired her calm and rational thinking, especially since I would have probably been completely crazy at that point. Her and Gabriel do come to care for one another very much, but things weren't easy and it made them all the stronger for it.
Gabriel is a misunderstood boy who just wanted to be normal. He is funny, smart, and really interesting. He knows what a risk it is to make friends which is why he tries to avoid Christine at first, but eventually he learns that he can't hide forever. He really grows a lot throughout the story. It was nice to see him go from the moody misunderstood boy to the man who finally stood up for himself and fought back.
I can't wait to see these two extraordinary characters in the next installment. It promises to be a very action packed and emotionally charged book.
For a romantic and life changing adventure check out Dream Girl by S.J. Lomas!
November 22, 2013
Library? Bad boy working at library? Strange dreams? I had to give this book a try and I tried to enjoy it. I promise, I did! But I could not get into it. It starts off ok. The library life felt believable, the relationships between the girls felt believable. Sadly, that's where the believability of this story ended.
I think the main issue for me was pacing. There's instalove with even less build up than normal. The juxtaposition of Gabriel's stories/dreams didn't help me get to know his character at all. We hardly get to know Christine at all before her life gets consumed by Gabriel. There's definitely a unique idea and format here, but the relationship development felt unnatural and rushed to get us to the strangeness of the stories/dreams quicker. I wish it would have taken the time to build the characters, to make me care about Gabriel and his strange dreams. Mostly, I really wanted Gabriel to seek out a mental health professional because his angst read more like major depression to me.
Not sure if this is a spoiler per say, but it does have to do with the twist of this book so be warned.
This is the first book in a series and it has the possibility to be an interesting one from the books blurb, but sadly, it just wasn't my cup of tea.
Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC.
I think the main issue for me was pacing. There's instalove with even less build up than normal. The juxtaposition of Gabriel's stories/dreams didn't help me get to know his character at all. We hardly get to know Christine at all before her life gets consumed by Gabriel. There's definitely a unique idea and format here, but the relationship development felt unnatural and rushed to get us to the strangeness of the stories/dreams quicker. I wish it would have taken the time to build the characters, to make me care about Gabriel and his strange dreams. Mostly, I really wanted Gabriel to seek out a mental health professional because his angst read more like major depression to me.
Not sure if this is a spoiler per say, but it does have to do with the twist of this book so be warned.
This is the first book in a series and it has the possibility to be an interesting one from the books blurb, but sadly, it just wasn't my cup of tea.
Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC.
August 10, 2016
Posted at Book Hoarder Reviews
I received a digital copy of this book from Netgalley in return for a review.
I thought it started out slowly, but then I really enjoyed it. I loved all the characters and thought they were well written. The major thing that I didn't like so much was the "instant love" between Christine and Gabriel. I think there is way too much of this in YA books and it's starting to become unrealistic. I understand that a relationship needs to happen in under 400 pages but at least wait until they have a full conversation before deciding that they are in love.
The main reason I wanted to read this book was the interesting plot. However I thought it fell apart in a few spots and I was left scratching my head for most of the book. I hate saying this because I know what it takes to write a novel, but I feel as though if the author had spent a little more time working on the plot the book would have been a hundred times better. It didn't feel as well thought out as the characters.
I feel like the author has a lot of promise and I will check out other novels, but I'm not sure I'd read this one again. I would recommend it to anyone looking for a quick read if you can overlook anything I mentioned here.
I received a digital copy of this book from Netgalley in return for a review.
I thought it started out slowly, but then I really enjoyed it. I loved all the characters and thought they were well written. The major thing that I didn't like so much was the "instant love" between Christine and Gabriel. I think there is way too much of this in YA books and it's starting to become unrealistic. I understand that a relationship needs to happen in under 400 pages but at least wait until they have a full conversation before deciding that they are in love.
The main reason I wanted to read this book was the interesting plot. However I thought it fell apart in a few spots and I was left scratching my head for most of the book. I hate saying this because I know what it takes to write a novel, but I feel as though if the author had spent a little more time working on the plot the book would have been a hundred times better. It didn't feel as well thought out as the characters.
I feel like the author has a lot of promise and I will check out other novels, but I'm not sure I'd read this one again. I would recommend it to anyone looking for a quick read if you can overlook anything I mentioned here.
August 27, 2016
*I received a copy of this from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review*
Dream Girl reminded me of a current Matrix-like YA novel. I knew I would love this book from page one when Christine mentions receiving a hardcopy of her favorite book, Jane Eyre.
This was a very intricate story that I read in one sitting. I had to find out what was going on and how it all tied up which the author did flawlessly.
The writing style is wonderful with just the right amount of description. The two POV's-Christine and Gabriel-really pulled me in and made me excited to see how they responded to each other.
I could totally relate with how Christine's friends-Tiffany and Daria-were the voice of reason, Tiffany being less judgmental than Daria, and Daria's firmness in her belief she was saving Christine from herself.
Leo was intriguing and provided a nice triangle that makes me hope a second installment is in order pronto!
The world building was creative and well mapped out. This was a fast paced, easy read. Overall, I truly enjoyed Dream Girl and would recommend this to fans of YA paranormal fiction.
Dream Girl reminded me of a current Matrix-like YA novel. I knew I would love this book from page one when Christine mentions receiving a hardcopy of her favorite book, Jane Eyre.
This was a very intricate story that I read in one sitting. I had to find out what was going on and how it all tied up which the author did flawlessly.
The writing style is wonderful with just the right amount of description. The two POV's-Christine and Gabriel-really pulled me in and made me excited to see how they responded to each other.
I could totally relate with how Christine's friends-Tiffany and Daria-were the voice of reason, Tiffany being less judgmental than Daria, and Daria's firmness in her belief she was saving Christine from herself.
Leo was intriguing and provided a nice triangle that makes me hope a second installment is in order pronto!
The world building was creative and well mapped out. This was a fast paced, easy read. Overall, I truly enjoyed Dream Girl and would recommend this to fans of YA paranormal fiction.
August 28, 2016
Dream Girl by S. J. Lomas was quite the read. It was a little confusing at times but it had a way of drawing me back in every time I felt like putting it down. It was dark. It was peculiar. It was suspenseful. Still, there was an air of sweetness to this story. As I read, question after question came into my mind. I guess it would be fair to say that it all came down to one - WHAT. Scratch that, maybe the better question dealt with WHY.
Then, I read chapter 27. From there on, it was a ride. Wow!
The characters in this book were so interesting. I found myself wanting to know more about each one of them. Literally. They were so unusual. I like unusual though. It makes books like this one work.
It would be hard for me to go further with my thoughts on this book without giving away the details. All I am going to say is that you have to read this one for yourself. I don't think you will be disappointed. Just keep reading; don't stop. Push forward. You will like what you discover.
I received a complimentary copy of this title in exchange for an honest review.
Rating: 4.25
Recommend: Yes
Bookshelf Worthy: Yes!
Then, I read chapter 27. From there on, it was a ride. Wow!
The characters in this book were so interesting. I found myself wanting to know more about each one of them. Literally. They were so unusual. I like unusual though. It makes books like this one work.
It would be hard for me to go further with my thoughts on this book without giving away the details. All I am going to say is that you have to read this one for yourself. I don't think you will be disappointed. Just keep reading; don't stop. Push forward. You will like what you discover.
I received a complimentary copy of this title in exchange for an honest review.
Rating: 4.25
Recommend: Yes
Bookshelf Worthy: Yes!
December 27, 2013
DREAM GIRL was terrific and disappointing at the same time for me. The author has managed to write an engaging work, but like so many e-books, it is merely the beginning of a story. Picture the portion of THE STAND in which we're introduced to Stew and the others at the gas station, the car takes out the pumps, then the army comes in and takes them off and this is where the story would end. Like this, it is merely the preface to a story, getting us ready for what is to come.
The characters are well written and introduced in ways that pulls the reader into the story without him knowing it. My problem being I started to read and was at the end wondering how you got there so quickly. I would have liked to seen more information about the agency as well as Bret and the two thugs with him. How they came into being at the agency? What made them choose to leave? What is this dream world? How does it work? Just who is Leo? How does the dream world work? Can things be controlled?? What makes people be able to get into the dream world? How does the training work?
The characters are well written and introduced in ways that pulls the reader into the story without him knowing it. My problem being I started to read and was at the end wondering how you got there so quickly. I would have liked to seen more information about the agency as well as Bret and the two thugs with him. How they came into being at the agency? What made them choose to leave? What is this dream world? How does it work? Just who is Leo? How does the dream world work? Can things be controlled?? What makes people be able to get into the dream world? How does the training work?
December 30, 2013
When I first requested this book on Netgally I was pretty interested. But, when I saw the reviews on this book, I was a bit skeptical. I had put off this book for a short time. When I finally went through my TBR list this was next so I decided I've stop putting it off and see what its about.
Even if the reviews almost swayed my chances of reading this I'm glad that I did end up reading it. I thought this book was interesting. At first this book left me disoriented and confused as the main characters. Once I got over that little bump which at first annoyed me I got over it and things started to piece together. I liked the characters, they were interesting enough. The story felt like it dragged in some parts and rushed in others. I liked that there was two point of views for the main characters. When the ending came I was left with many questions and I think maybe I'll keep an eye on this author to see what happens next. I don't know I'm iffy about this book but curious for the next book to see whats in store for the characters. 3 of 5 Stars!
Even if the reviews almost swayed my chances of reading this I'm glad that I did end up reading it. I thought this book was interesting. At first this book left me disoriented and confused as the main characters. Once I got over that little bump which at first annoyed me I got over it and things started to piece together. I liked the characters, they were interesting enough. The story felt like it dragged in some parts and rushed in others. I liked that there was two point of views for the main characters. When the ending came I was left with many questions and I think maybe I'll keep an eye on this author to see what happens next. I don't know I'm iffy about this book but curious for the next book to see whats in store for the characters. 3 of 5 Stars!
March 8, 2014
Dream Girl had promise. It had it's interesting parts but overall, it could have been better executed.
The story progresses quite slowly and a lot of the more interesting parts were vague or rushed. For example, there needed to be more build up with the characters and their relationships. What came to mind while reading Dream girl, was that the author had a good idea but was a bit daunted by the word count. The result was a story that filled out the length of the book instead of what happens in really great books, where the author has so much to say that there's always something happening and it's crammed into the page count. A good example of that concept are the Harry Potter books.
In addition to this, the characters needed a bit more fleshing out. There was enough I liked to keep me reading but not enough to really connect with them.
Finally, the ending was a bit of a let down. I wasn't keen on the way the series was going to progress and I thought it was a bit anti-climatic.
Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC
The story progresses quite slowly and a lot of the more interesting parts were vague or rushed. For example, there needed to be more build up with the characters and their relationships. What came to mind while reading Dream girl, was that the author had a good idea but was a bit daunted by the word count. The result was a story that filled out the length of the book instead of what happens in really great books, where the author has so much to say that there's always something happening and it's crammed into the page count. A good example of that concept are the Harry Potter books.
In addition to this, the characters needed a bit more fleshing out. There was enough I liked to keep me reading but not enough to really connect with them.
Finally, the ending was a bit of a let down. I wasn't keen on the way the series was going to progress and I thought it was a bit anti-climatic.
Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC
December 21, 2013
I work in a library and read a lot of books so, for me, finding something unique is a big deal. Dream Girl is one those rare books.
I found Christine to be a engaging character with an independent spirit. Gabriel is likeable, sincere, and a bit mysterious - both characters make you want to know what's going to happen to them. Lomas crafts excellent imagery, making it clear just by the feel of her descriptions when the characters are in the real world or the dream world. The story builds, drawing the reader ever forward and ultimately revealing an unexpected plot turn. Because I enjoyed the turn of events, I choose not to elaborate, but instead encourage you to read Dream Girl and discover for yourself where Christine and Gabriel end up. As an added bonus, the book comes to a satisfying conclusion while still leaving enough story for a sequel.
Dream Girl combines fantasy, thriller, and romance into one terrific novel. Highly recommend!
I found Christine to be a engaging character with an independent spirit. Gabriel is likeable, sincere, and a bit mysterious - both characters make you want to know what's going to happen to them. Lomas crafts excellent imagery, making it clear just by the feel of her descriptions when the characters are in the real world or the dream world. The story builds, drawing the reader ever forward and ultimately revealing an unexpected plot turn. Because I enjoyed the turn of events, I choose not to elaborate, but instead encourage you to read Dream Girl and discover for yourself where Christine and Gabriel end up. As an added bonus, the book comes to a satisfying conclusion while still leaving enough story for a sequel.
Dream Girl combines fantasy, thriller, and romance into one terrific novel. Highly recommend!
August 6, 2016
This is a very unique book with a very cool premise. The idea of dreams and two people living in them together every night is a great idea, but it fell a little short for me. If there was more character development and relationship development between the characters, this book would be perfect. There is just enough sci-fi adventure and romance to be a wonderful read, but the relationship between the two main characters is what threw me off. I am a sucker for sweet love stories that don't always need to be realistic, but this romance progressed extremely fast and didn't have an ounce of reality. It was a bit much for me. If it weren't for that relationship, I think I could have gotten into the book more. However, the idea behind the book is genius and still deserves a read. Don't pass this book by; give it a chance.
March 25, 2014
*Copy provided by NetGalley*
Dream Girl sounded so interesting that I was freaking out when I got accepted. The book itself was a bit hard to get through. I don't know if it was just the formatting of the copy, but I had the title, random numbers, and repeated phrases throughout the entire book which made reading it a bit confusing. The characters were okay, I didn't feel very connected to them as I thought I would. The love triangle was pretty adorable, I'm a bit indecisive about who I prefer better...Leo or Gabriel. The struggle continues. Anyway, I did enjoy the book, but it didn't make a whole impact on me. I would recommend it if you are looking for a nice easy read. :)
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Dream Girl sounded so interesting that I was freaking out when I got accepted. The book itself was a bit hard to get through. I don't know if it was just the formatting of the copy, but I had the title, random numbers, and repeated phrases throughout the entire book which made reading it a bit confusing. The characters were okay, I didn't feel very connected to them as I thought I would. The love triangle was pretty adorable, I'm a bit indecisive about who I prefer better...Leo or Gabriel. The struggle continues. Anyway, I did enjoy the book, but it didn't make a whole impact on me. I would recommend it if you are looking for a nice easy read. :)
Read more of my reviews at:
https://extreemeobsessed.blogspot.com
January 2, 2014
I was kindly allowed to read an arc through netgalley. thank you.
I really enjoyed this book. it's very unique, at least for me. and I'm quite intrigued by the story arc, more so in the future books.
the characters were likable, even if they were young, and the relationship may feel a bit intense and fast for some, but given the whole picture, I can understand it.
I feel like this book barely scratches the surface of a potentially great world, and I'm really looking forward to more.
Overall, I thought it was a good first book in a series, and it's a series I want to be invested in. I recommend it.
I really enjoyed this book. it's very unique, at least for me. and I'm quite intrigued by the story arc, more so in the future books.
the characters were likable, even if they were young, and the relationship may feel a bit intense and fast for some, but given the whole picture, I can understand it.
I feel like this book barely scratches the surface of a potentially great world, and I'm really looking forward to more.
Overall, I thought it was a good first book in a series, and it's a series I want to be invested in. I recommend it.
November 27, 2013
Wow! This is an unexpected surprise! The first few chapters read like a new series getting to know the characters, then wham you are suddenly on an adventure that is unique and fascinating. I could not put it down! When will the next book be out? I need to know what happens to Gabriel, Christine and Leo!
February 22, 2014
Christine meets Gabriel, a guy who seems to have a dark cloud over him, and soon realizes that there are many things in this earth than what one can see while awake. Very interesting book. As a teacher of teenagers, I can see how this sci-fi thriller would appeal, especially because of its vivid descriptions and romantic subplot.
March 6, 2014
A fun, quick, young adult dream world novel. I also love that family is mentioned in the acknowledgements. But I truly give it a 4 star for it is entertaining and well written.
February 2, 2014
I really liked this book.not sure why others found it slow or confusing. I did not. I enjoyed the premise, as described by others and found it unique. I want more! Give it a try. You will like it.
May 31, 2020
I've been looking for some more lighthearted and easy reads to add to my review list, so when the author offered me a YA romance/fantasy, I accepted. Although, this type of story is usually one I don't read.
Right off the bat, this book definitely definitely reads like an early 2010s YA. There's the young couple that seem to be immediately in love with each other at first sight. I will give the author credit that the protagonist has multiple female friends that stay in the picture and don't suffer any kind of girl hate. But a lot of holes begin to show at the beginning. The descriptions were haphazardly placed, with some scenes having incredible description for the sake of metaphor and others (including the library where a lot of the book takes place) having next to none.
The synopsis speaks about Gabriel and his bad reputation and how everyone distrusts him, but there's not a lot of evidence in the text. He shoos away a library patron for being rude and another for making sexist and threatening remarks toward the protagonist and everyone is suddenly on edge around him. You're told he's a bad boy, with no real evidence to back it up.
There's a reveal part of the way through the book that I won't discuss because of spoilers, but it did push the plot into teenaged power fantasies territory. I struggled to take any of it seriously. So I stopped trying.
For all it's faults, this book is at it's best when you read it as a melodrama. Expect over the top declarations of love, sudden conflicts and a love triangle out of nowhere, and you're actually in for a pretty good time. While I may not be invested in any of the characters, it was a fairly easy light read. And if you're in to traditional YA, I'm sure this is exactly your cup of tea.
Right off the bat, this book definitely definitely reads like an early 2010s YA. There's the young couple that seem to be immediately in love with each other at first sight. I will give the author credit that the protagonist has multiple female friends that stay in the picture and don't suffer any kind of girl hate. But a lot of holes begin to show at the beginning. The descriptions were haphazardly placed, with some scenes having incredible description for the sake of metaphor and others (including the library where a lot of the book takes place) having next to none.
The synopsis speaks about Gabriel and his bad reputation and how everyone distrusts him, but there's not a lot of evidence in the text. He shoos away a library patron for being rude and another for making sexist and threatening remarks toward the protagonist and everyone is suddenly on edge around him. You're told he's a bad boy, with no real evidence to back it up.
There's a reveal part of the way through the book that I won't discuss because of spoilers, but it did push the plot into teenaged power fantasies territory. I struggled to take any of it seriously. So I stopped trying.
For all it's faults, this book is at it's best when you read it as a melodrama. Expect over the top declarations of love, sudden conflicts and a love triangle out of nowhere, and you're actually in for a pretty good time. While I may not be invested in any of the characters, it was a fairly easy light read. And if you're in to traditional YA, I'm sure this is exactly your cup of tea.
July 28, 2017
Christine’s parents have moved to Texas. They expect her to follow after the summer. Christine has other plans. She is looking for a way to stay in Michigan for her senior year. She’s not expecting to meet Gabriel who turns her world upside down. Gabriel introduces her to the dream world. The dream world is a place that is dangerous for Gabriel. Christine tries to help him make sense of it. She has to keep the secret from her friends. Her plans are falling to the wayside. She knows one thing she has to help Gabriel and keep him safe.
In an Oyster Shell – It was a compelling read that was creative and intriguing.
The Pearls – The whole book is good. The writing was well done. The concept was well conceived and well executed. I liked the idea of a dream world.
The attraction between Gabriel and Christine was electric. It compelled Christine to join Gabriel in his world. The tension this caused among her friends was tangible. The conflict and tension made me turn the pages quickly.
The world building was well done. The work that went into building up the dream world was intense. It paid off in the end. I like how the author used Gabriel’s stories to describe his experiences.
The Sand – I didn’t like all the stories that Gabriel shared with Christine.
In an Oyster Shell – It was a compelling read that was creative and intriguing.
The Pearls – The whole book is good. The writing was well done. The concept was well conceived and well executed. I liked the idea of a dream world.
The attraction between Gabriel and Christine was electric. It compelled Christine to join Gabriel in his world. The tension this caused among her friends was tangible. The conflict and tension made me turn the pages quickly.
The world building was well done. The work that went into building up the dream world was intense. It paid off in the end. I like how the author used Gabriel’s stories to describe his experiences.
The Sand – I didn’t like all the stories that Gabriel shared with Christine.
February 14, 2018
I inhaled this book. I do feel the title "could" be a little misleading to some, but not in a way that affects the quality! This was a fantastic read- I finished it all in one day.
"Dream Girl" puts us in the driver's seat with Christine whose dreams literally morph into reality after meeting the brooding male lead, Gabriel.
The novel begins fairly light, like any pleasant YA story, but it unravels into twists that I hadn't expected. In a stretch- it slightly reminded me of Inception (BUT DON'T GO MAKING THE ASSUMPTION ITS THE SAME- IT'S FAR FROM IT. It's just that it faintly reminds me of that concept).
The characters were well balanced, Christine most of all. She was my favorite, although Leo is a close second. Wait, who is Leo? Well, that's where I'll stop as to avoid spoilers!
Finally, the book ends with the perfect set up for part two, which I plan on buying ASAP. I'm still writing up my formal bog review- but had to rate it here now so people know how good this book is!
Overall: Likable characters, steady pacing, short chapters (which I prefer), takes familiar concepts but stands on its own.
"Dream Girl" puts us in the driver's seat with Christine whose dreams literally morph into reality after meeting the brooding male lead, Gabriel.
The novel begins fairly light, like any pleasant YA story, but it unravels into twists that I hadn't expected. In a stretch- it slightly reminded me of Inception (BUT DON'T GO MAKING THE ASSUMPTION ITS THE SAME- IT'S FAR FROM IT. It's just that it faintly reminds me of that concept).
The characters were well balanced, Christine most of all. She was my favorite, although Leo is a close second. Wait, who is Leo? Well, that's where I'll stop as to avoid spoilers!
Finally, the book ends with the perfect set up for part two, which I plan on buying ASAP. I'm still writing up my formal bog review- but had to rate it here now so people know how good this book is!
Overall: Likable characters, steady pacing, short chapters (which I prefer), takes familiar concepts but stands on its own.
May 9, 2019
Dream Girl is a fast-paced adventure/romance story that feels like a lower-key mash-up of the Matrix and Inception with a strong emphasis on the romantic. The main characters of Christine and Gabriel are tossed into a world of Dream Agents and trippy sequences that left me quite intrigued to see the ultimate resolution in the follow-up.
Some of the characters and happenings leave a little to be desired, especially with regards to Christine's friends who feel a bit flat, as well as the romance between Christine and Gabriel which happens almost instantaneously and isn't given enough time to organically breathe.
The emotions and language used to convey them, however, are fantastic and the descriptions of Christine's and Gabriel's interactions within and without the dreamscape are very well done.
The story takes a real sharp left turn into the world of Dream Agents and government conspiracies about 60% of the way through and this is when the book starts to really pick up speed. Despite this, I still wish there was more time to explore the world and the characters a bit more in depth. But I guess that's why I have to read the sequel!
Some of the characters and happenings leave a little to be desired, especially with regards to Christine's friends who feel a bit flat, as well as the romance between Christine and Gabriel which happens almost instantaneously and isn't given enough time to organically breathe.
The emotions and language used to convey them, however, are fantastic and the descriptions of Christine's and Gabriel's interactions within and without the dreamscape are very well done.
The story takes a real sharp left turn into the world of Dream Agents and government conspiracies about 60% of the way through and this is when the book starts to really pick up speed. Despite this, I still wish there was more time to explore the world and the characters a bit more in depth. But I guess that's why I have to read the sequel!
December 4, 2017
What if your dreams weren’t simply images, sensations and ideas that your brain organized in your sleep? What if they were something more? In Dream Girl, S.J. Lomas weaves an intoxicating tale of the possibilities of dreams, and the people who are tapping into their potential.
Christine doesn’t think much about her dreams until she meets her new co-worker Gabriel. As they learn more about each other they find that, not only are they connecting in their dreams, but they are connecting to others as well. They have unwittingly come under the attention a group who is interested in examining their abilities in detail and unravelling the mystery of the dreamworld they all share.
This coming of age story has the stirrings of young romance, with helpings of confusion and mixed emotions as Christine navigates her feelings for two young men who have entered her life. In order to find answers, she must place herself in the hands of the unknown, and agree to enter a world that most only ever dream of.
Christine doesn’t think much about her dreams until she meets her new co-worker Gabriel. As they learn more about each other they find that, not only are they connecting in their dreams, but they are connecting to others as well. They have unwittingly come under the attention a group who is interested in examining their abilities in detail and unravelling the mystery of the dreamworld they all share.
This coming of age story has the stirrings of young romance, with helpings of confusion and mixed emotions as Christine navigates her feelings for two young men who have entered her life. In order to find answers, she must place herself in the hands of the unknown, and agree to enter a world that most only ever dream of.
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