A spunky young widow hires a farmhand with a bad reputation to help her get her cotton to Jefferson to meet the wagon train, and sparks fly—but can she love a man who doesn’t love the Lord?
Susannah Abbot Baylor reluctantly hires Henry Buckmeyer to help her along the Jefferson Trace, the hard stretch of land between her Texas farm and the cotton market, where she is determined to get a fair price for her crop. It’s been a rough year, and she’s in danger of losing the land her husband left to her and the children, but she’ll need help getting both of her wagons to Jefferson safely. She knows Henry’s reputation as a layabout and is prepared for his insolence, but she is not expecting his irresistible good looks or his gentle manner. Soon they are entwined in a romantic relationship that only gets more complicated when Susannah learns that Henry doesn’t know God the way she does. Dangers arise on the road—but none as difficult as the trial her heart is going through.
Will Susannah and Henry’s love overcome their differences? And will she get her crop safely to the cotton market with enough money to save the farm? In this heartening and adventurous tale, a young woman’s fortitude, faith, and heart are put to the ultimate test.
Born in California, Caryl McAdoo got to Texas in time to celebrate her first birthday. As a Dallas seventh grader, she remembers a homework essay on ‘What will you be doing in 2000?’ Looking into the future, she saw herself as an inter-galactically famous author, streaking from planet to planet signing books.
She laughs, “But I didn’t start writing again until the late ’80s, then was so blessed to find the DFW Writers’ Workshop in ’93.”
Her first book debuted ’99, then for the next nine years, she averaged a title a year from four traditional presses: two non-fiction, four novels, and three mid-grade chapter books.
In March 2014, her first historical Christian romance VOW UNBROKEN debuted from Howard Books, an imprint of Simon & Schuster.
In April that year, she re-released LADY LUCK'S A LOSER (formerly The Apple Orchard Bed and Breakfast) with a new chapter. In September 2014 HEARTS STOLEN, book two in the Texas Romance Family Saga historical romance series, debuted as her first new Indie, and in November A LITTLE LOWER THAN THE ANGELS, her first Biblical fiction series The Generations launched. So four titles in 2014.
Book three of the historical Family Saga HOPE REBORN debuted in January 2015 to start off a whole new year with eleven new titles planned. THE PREACHER'S FAITH comes in February, Caryl's first contemporary in Red River Romance series. THEN THE DELUGE COMES, volume two of The Generations, follows in March.
Since 2014, she's published over sixty new books, averaging over seven new titles a year through 2020. She completed the 'Texas Romance Family Saga' with a total of ten novels, plus several 'Texas Companion Books'!
Plus, she's eight books into a second series, the 'Cross Timbers Romance Family Saga' and debuts a third New Beginnings saga's book one WAGONS WEST in November 2022, her fifth book for the year.
Also known as Grami, she adores twenty-five grandsugars, and she and O’Pa—her high school sweetheart and husband of fifty+ years write together. She’s dedicated to advancing God’s Kingdom through her novels, praying her story gives God glory!
Caryl loves to share her testimony, pray, and praise and worship Him; He frequently gives her new songs.
She believes all good things are from Him and that her books will minister His love, mercy, and grace to her readers.
Irving, Texas remained her lifelong home until 2008 when she and Ron followed God’s leading to Red River County in the far northeast corner of the Lone Star State. There at The Peaceable, the twenty acres of blessings they call home, the McAdoos raise chickens and goats while waiting for God to open the next door!
Loved this story! Fresh strong voice from Caryl McAdoo, who, herself has personality aplenty like her heroine Susannah "Sue" Baylor. The feisty widow, mother of a nine year old girl, and custodial aunt to a teen boy, is one of the most memorable characters I've encountered in some time! Sparks fly as soon as she meets with "supposed" ne'er do well Henry Buckmeyer, who turns out to be a perfect match for her strong-willed character. I especially loved Blue Dog, who was a true hero. Our own labrador retriever was named Blue Dog because his fur was so black it looked blue. Sue's daughter, Rebecca, is personality plus, too. And Levi, her nephew, is also a well-developed character. Caryl had the dialogue down pat. This entire crew perfectly fits the well plotted and nicely paced story.
The writing has a sparse feel to it. I don't mind that, in fact I sometimes write similarly. There's a Louis L'Amour and All-American feel to Caryl's writing. It's hard to find stories that are for women yet have this clean feel to them, and are rustic. Beautiful romance, one of the nicest I've seen in a while. I'm expecting this book to make it onto my best of 2014 list.
Summary (from Amazon) A spunky young widow hires a farmhand with a bad reputation to help her get her cotton to Jefferson to meet the wagon train, and sparks fly—but can she love a man who doesn't love the Lord?
Susannah Abbot Baylor reluctantly hires Henry Buckmeyer to help her along the Jefferson Trace, the hard stretch of land between her Texas farm and the cotton market, where she is determined to get a fair price for her crop. It’s been a rough year, and she’s in danger of losing the land her husband left to her and the children, but she’ll need help getting both of her wagons to Jefferson safely. She knows Henry’s reputation as a layabout and is prepared for his insolence, but she is not expecting his irresistible good looks or his gentle manner. Soon they are entwined in a romantic relationship that only gets more complicated when Susannah learns that Henry doesn't know God the way she does. Dangers arise on the road—but none as difficult as the trial her heart is going through.
Will Susannah and Henry’s love overcome their differences? And will she get her crop safely to the cotton market with enough money to save the farm? In this heartening and adventurous tale, a young woman’s fortitude, faith, and heart are put to the ultimate test.
This is the first book I've ever read by this author. To be perfectly honest, I really failed to connect with the characters. I found the narrative to be long and descriptive, and when I was at 30% finished (I had a Kindle copy), I was feeling that I should have been a lot further along. I ended up skimming the rest of the book to find out what happened, but I wasn't invested in the story. This is one of those books that I could have put down and not returned to.
I liked the premise of the book - a young widow needs to get her cotton crop to the market and enlists the help of a neighbor man. Yet, I really found it to be slow moving. I didn't need to know EVERY little detail on the journey. I really didn't.
I also didn't see what it was about the heroine that made the hero love her. To me, she was a rather flat character. On the other hand, the hero, Henry, was very well developed. I enjoyed the various layers and depths to him. Sure, he was a little rough around the edges, but I did find him to be very kind and caring.
I've recently read an article by one of my favorite authors where she explains seven different things that can stop her from finishing reading a novel. As I read her article, I really felt that she was describing my feelings regarding this book perfectly! I found myself not caring about the characters, and I thought it was too slow moving to name a couple of things.
I may give the author another try. But truthfully, I'm not sure.
Still, I know others may enjoy this book, even though I didn't particularly care for it. Please don't just take my opinion on it. There are several really positive reviews on Amazon.
I received a Kindle version of this book for free from Howard Books via NetGalley for the purpose of reviewing. I was not required to like the book or give a positive review. My thoughts and opinions are my own.
Recommended to fans of historical fiction, wagon trains
Rating - 2 stars - I really couldn't care about the characters
Susannah's journey in Vow Unbroken had an unexpected stow-a-way. Me. I got so caught up in the authors knowledge of Northeast Texas History and folklore, I couldn't stop reading for fear they may leave me behind. The details were so true to life, I was really impressed. I thoroughly enjoyed reading a Christian book that was historical and enjoyable. I would be thrilled to have Lifetime or Hallmark to make a series of Christian movies. this book is perfect. By the way you are in danger of falling in love with Henry. Margaret
Susanna Baylor has been a committed woman of God. She learned her lesson once before when she married Andrew and failed to gain her earthly father's blessing. Shortly after that she lost him and his brother in a wagon accident. With her young daughter, Rebecca, to raise along with her nephew Levi unless she can find a buyer for her cotton, she will have to sell off some of her land to get them through the next year. But when she loads up her wagon to head to town to sell it for four cents a pound, Mr. Littlejohn changes his mind and offers her two cents instead. Unfortunately for Susanna, she can't afford to take such a loss. Her only option is to drive the wagon load to the town of Jefferson where she has been promised four cents from the cotton buyers there. But how will she be able to do it with just Levi and Rebecca?
Under the counsel of her wise friend, she hires Henry Buckmeyer, who rumor has it has been born lazy his whole life. Susanna believes it will be a waste visiting Henry to hire him since he is likely to decline. But when her friends refuse to let her go alone unless she asks him, she has no other choice. Without the sale of the cotton, she will be forced to sell the land Andrew left to her and Levi. Lucky for her that Henry agrees with the exception that he can also bring along his tobacco and furs to sell when they arrive as well as his trusty dog, Blue for protection.
Knowing she doesn't have any other options, Sue grants Henry the permission to come along as hired help as long as he is willing to listen to her advice on what they should do and how soon they need to arrive in Jefferson. But what Henry doesn't count on is how determined Sue will be to have her way despite all the risks she is willing to take to get to Jefferson in hurry. What Sue doesn't consider is what it means to plan out the journey and realize that despite the odds that will challenge them at every turn, and that she may have to concede to Henry's knowledge of just how to get them all there safe and in one piece. It may be the hardest pill she has to learn to swallow in learning to agree to let Henry take care of her and her children and in the process realize that trusting God to know what is best in the end.
I received Vow Unbroken by Caryl McAdoo compliments of Howard Books, a division of Simon and Schuster Publishers for my honest review. I did not receive any monetary compensation for my review and the opinions expressed here are strictly my own. I love how determined and strong willed Susanna is, always looking out for what is best for her family and keeping her faith in God. She has made a vow to never marry a man again unless her earthly father has given his blessing as well as that man must be a believer in God satisfying her spiritual Father as well. But will a man be willing to do whatever Sue wants to get her to marry him and become the father to Levi and Rebecca in the process even if it means traveling to Tennessee to see her father? You'll have to see just how hard this journey is and what they all learn along the way by picking up this novel. This is the first in The Lone Star Series and one I rate a 4.5 out of 5 stars.
Vow Unbroken is a delightful historical fiction novel with clean romance of life in the 1800’s where Susannah, young widow raising two children – her nephew and her daughter, needs to sell her cotton. But when the man who promised to buy her cotton reneges on the promised price, Susannah decides to set out and take her cotton to Jefferson herself. Needing help to get both her wagons safely to town, she is forced to hire the only man available, who is rumoured to be slothful. Nevertheless, she is determined to get her cotton sold, or she will lose her farm.
We follow the small family and the hired man Henry along the trace as they make their way to Jefferson. The plot is filled with many of the difficulties that might have befallen those who would’ve undertaken such journeys in those days and the Ms. McAdoo does a splendid job of developing the characters of the stubborn, feisty Susannah and the gentle, forgiving Henry.
Susannah has been a widow for about 10 years, since her husband Adam died in an accident. She has vowed that she will not marry a man who is not a believer in Christ. As she begins to develop feelings for Henry, she struggles with her feelings because she knows he is not a believer. Not only that, but she feels exceedingly guilty since when she can stand back and look on her own behaviour, she can see that there are times when Henry, the unbeliever, behaves more like a Christian than she does. How can she win him over to the Lord like this? I loved this truth in this book. No Christian is perfect and yes, sometimes we don’t behave as we should. I think it’s a great reminder not to beat ourselves up, but to keep striving to do what is right.
Caryl McAdoo has done a splendid job of putting together an interesting plot with excellent pacing about characters you can really care about. What woman wouldn’t fall in love with a man like Henry?
If you enjoy historical romance, you are going to love debut author Caryl McAdoo. I highly recommend Vow Unbroken! 5 stars out of 5!
Thank you to Howard Books for providing a review copy through NetGalley in exchange for a fair and honest review. A positive opinion was not required. All thoughts are my own.
A lovely pioneer -historical - adventure with true clean romance and action
I received “Vow Unbroken” by Caryl McAdoo compliments of Howard Books, a division of Simon and Schuster Publishers for my honest and own review. Caryl McAdoo's amazing trust and guidance in the Lord is displayed in her wonderful novel “Vow Unbroken”. A very well researched authored historical adventure with romance and action, trust and faith which immediately drew me in to becoming a part of the story. The characters held my attention at all times until the very end. Sue being a hasty vibrant young lady elopes to marry her young man without her father’s consent and blessings. She loses the love of her life during her pregnancy leaving her into an unknown future ahead. Working hard and taking control of her life she goes on with her faith and beliefs to venture out further away to sell her cotton for a higher price accompanied by her 9 year old daughter and nephew. With remembrance to her vow she continues to support and seek guidance in the spoken word. The interaction and communication between Susannah and Henry is a romancing affair with love and faith. Susannah’s faith and Henry’s non faith is a testimony so true and real to marriages and relationships in today’s world. Sue focuses on keeping the Lord before her at all times. The long hard journeys are endured during their rough travels sustaining dangerous encounters along the Jefferson Trace during the struggle in the Mexican Texas pioneering age. A great novel book read and recommended to historical adventure readers of all ages with a pioneer story to engross in. The courage and faith is an important part of the story line which was experienced. I thoroughly enjoyed reading Caryl’s novel with its flare of the old fashioned pioneer way of life. I particularly loved the cover of the book with its subtle serene colors with the scenic pioneer view, a cover well suited to the book title. I certainly look forward to follow up novels from this enthusiastic and devoted Christian author.
I loved this book--fast paced, adventurous, and satisfyingly wholesome. Way to go, Caryl!
Susannah Baylor is a young widow with a premium crop of cotton, baled and promised to a buyer for three and a half to four cents a pound. When sold, for the first time since her husband and his brother were killed in a logging accident, she and her teenage nephew and little girl will not be facing privations and another year of back-breaking work.
Then the double-crossing, conniving swindler says he won't buy it at that price, but only for two cents a pound. At that price, Susannah would have to sell off part of the land she had fought so hard to keep for the children. She decides she must take the two wagons filled with cotton to buyers in Jefferson. With luck, she can catch up with the others who are taking their cotton there.
Trouble is, she can't find anyone of her friends to go with her. Her best friend suggests Henry Buckmeyer. What? That slacker? The man who didn't even have a job and everybody knew he drank all his meager earnings? Not a chance!
Nevertheless, the next morning finds her on the trail with Levi (the nephew), Becky (the daughter), and Henry Buckmeyer. But no way is that man going to order her around. She will show him who's boss.
This story is an engaging read. Historical romance fans will love it!
Susannah Baylor, the hard-nosed, strong willed Christian, pitted against the soft spoken, mild mannered heathen Henry makes for an interesting--and true to life--juxtaposition. (I've had similar thoughts far too often: She/He behaves so much more like Christ than I. Yet I claim to be the Christian? Shame on me!)
Caryl McAdoo has crafted a creative, intriguing twist to an oft-used setting involving a difficult overland trip in covered wagons. But her well researched details add interest as well as authenticity.
The characters ring true all the way to the end. I closed the book believing they were my own relatives, who, by the way, traveled across Texas in covered wagons. Sue's up-and-down transformation from beginning to end was authentic. Henry's character was revealed gradually, and his ultimate transformation quite a surprise. The relationships among the characters developed in believable ways, especially Levi's relationship with the other three.
An enjoyable read that makes me want more of Caryl McAdoo. Bring 'em on, girl! (4 1/2 stars!)
Vow Unbroken tells a delightful story set in the 1800’s about a journey on the Jefferson Trace. Widowed Sue Baylor is strong-minded wanting to get the best price she can for her cotton crop so she doesn’t lose her farm. Left with a teenage nephew, Levi, and nine-year-old daughter, Rebecca to raise, Sue does her best to keep things going. When someone tries to cheat her on the price of her cotton, she has no choice but to make the long, arduous trip to market. Is that too much for a woman and two children? Her closest friend advises against it and suggests Henry Buckmeyer. Rumor has it that he is lazy but what choice does she have? Sue is stubborn, opinionated, head-strong, single-minded and well, kind of preachy. Henry is long-suffering, knowledgeable, just as determined as Sue, handsome and single. Will Sue realize she can trust him? Lovable characters include nine-year-old, Rebecca, who is as Henry says, ‘his arrogant little angel’, fourteen-year-old Levi who is caught between a boy and a man and Henry’s Blue Dog making this a fun read. An adventure filled with hope, forgiveness, love and faith in God. I look forward to reading the other books in this series.
Vow Unbroken is the first book by Caryl McAdoo. It is a very clean Christian read. I would recommend it to readers of all ages. It has good historical content. Sweet characters that came to life throughout the story. The heroin struggles with her prideful attitude. She REALLY battles with whether or not she can marry Henry because he is not saved, almost to the point of redundancy. The title fit the book well. I am a sucker for a pretty cover and this one really caught my eye. I love that a picture of the author's dog is on the front cover. Blue Dog was a big part of the story so if your a dog lover you will appreciate that part of the story.I definitely plan to read the next book in the series, Heart Stolen.
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This is the first book I’ve read by Caryl McAdoo and it won’t be the last. I really enjoyed it, and had trouble putting it down. The premise of the story is a little different. It’s not your typical western and that made it interesting. With strong characters that are believable in their faults, they will pull you into the story and cause you to visualize what’s happening, thanks to McAdoo’s well developed story line and thorough research.
There is the gamut of emotions in this captivating story; grief, love, joy, fear etc. as well as the characters learning to trust God through everything. I truly do recommend this wonderful book!
I received a complimentary copy of this book but was not required to leave a review.
Caryl, I've known for a while you were a great author. This story of Sue and Henry was just as delightful to read as your others, if not more so. I laughed, cried and rejoiced with Sue along her journey. I could see a lot of you in Sue, and a lot of Ron in Henry. I think if you continue this story into a generational legacy series, like Love Comes Softly, it is going to sweep through the Christian Historical Fiction world like Harry Potter through the pagan world. I can hardly wait to see the movie! I love you! Keep writing! God has truly blessed your years of effort.
Susannah Baylor has raised her daughter and nephew single-handedly since the death of her husband, a man her father never wanted her to marry. As a result, she’s vowed not to marry again without the permission of her father, even though he lives in Tennessee and she’s in Texas. However, Sue’ immediate problem is her need to get her cotton crop to market. She is forced to ask local layabout Henry Buckmeyer for help taking the wagons through the Jefferson trace.
The opening was excellent, pulling us straight into the action and giving us a sense of Susannah’s personality (and faults) without bogging the story down in past history. It moved quickly to the central plot, the need to get their cotton crop to market, and the central conflict, her relationship with Henry. I understand she was used to making all the decisions for herself because her husband was dead, but it didn’t speak well to her character that she didn’t ask for or receive advice from anyone.
This was my main issue with Vow Unbroken—I didn’t like Sue at the beginning, and she hadn’t improved any by the end (if anything, she showed that at twenty-eight and after ten years of widowhood, she still had shades of the impetuous teenager who married against her father’s advice).
Vow Unbroken ticks all the boxes for a Christian historical romance. It’s set in Texas. The research is excellent. It has a plucky if infuriating heroine, a too-perfect hero, some light-hearted moments between the struggle to survive in the West, and a Christian message. But I found it all a bit too formulaic. It didn’t have the injection of realism or humour that sets some books apart, like those from Carol Cox, Jen Turano or Karen Wittemeyer. I didn’t feel that excitement, that hard to define wow! factor. I’m sure lots of people will love this, but I didn't. I can't even say it was okay, because I couldn’t get past the annoying heroine.
Thanks to Howard Publishing and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.
Widowed at a young age and left with the care of her daughter and nephew, Susannah Baylor has grown accustomed to fending for herself on her Texas farm. When a local buyer attempts to cheat her out of a good price for her cotton, Susannah finds herself in unfamiliar--and unwanted--territory. She must hitch her mules and take her cotton to port, and she must solicit the help of a shiftless bachelor named Henry to get there.
In Caryl McAdoo's Vow Unbroken, readers are taken on an adventurous journey through historic Texas, where danger and trouble lurk along the trail, and personality clashes create enough spark to ignite attraction.
McAdoo's characterization is excellent in this debut novel. Susannah's headstrong sassiness and Henry's wise patience make for great romantic tension and enhance the situations of conflict throughout the story. The children Levi and Becky, and Henry's faithful dog Blue, work together to make this traveling band loveable and interesting.
Susannah's character is realistic. She has both flaws and positive traits. Her love for the children and her drive to accomplish her goal make her an admirable character that many women can relate to. As a young woman who widowed shortly after marrying, however, she has little experience with people who are not like her. She's quick to resist advice, and carries some biases inherited from childhood. But her experiences along the journey, and her desire to please God, help Susannah learn and grow throughout the story.
What she cannot change, however, is the vow she made to herself and to God to never marry again without her father's consent. And of all the trials she faces on the trail, her vow--and keeping it unbroken--become the greatest.
McAdoo's debut novel was a joy to read, and I gave it five out of five stars.
The young widow Susannah Baylor is angry and ready to make a long trip to catch up with friends set out on a wagon train to sell their bounty of cotton. She had been glad to not be making the long trip but after the wagon train was several days out she finds herself cheated and mislead by a buyer that offered her a fair price but when she arrived with her cotton he insisted on paying her a much lower price. She is discouraged by friends at home to not make the trip alone especially with her daughter and nephew since there are so many danger in such a trek. They recommend she hire Henry Buckmeyer to help her on the trip. She had heard he was a slacker and a drunk but she knew she could not go alone.
Susannah took their advise finding all the rumors about Henry were unfounded. He was a hard working attractive man and was very patient and kind. Her young daughter Becky falls in love with him and makes it know to him she wants him to be her daddy which must remain their secret until just the right time. Susannah sees the attachment the children have for Henry but she has made a vow she can not break. She must focus on getting the cotton sold while overcoming apparent dangers on the long trip.
Susannah is like a mama bear ready to do what she must to protect her cubs. Her character is strong , independent and determined. The author writes of a woman wanting to prove to the world she can stand on her own two feet not needing a man to tell her how to do anything. A character in charge no matter how badly she would love to have a partner to lean on for a change.
An adventurous tale of romance, danger and trust.
I rated this book 5 out of 5.
Disclosure: I received a free copy of this book from Howard Books/ SimonSchuster for an honest review.
"Vow Unbroken" by Caryl McAdoo, is published by Howard Books, a division of Simon and Schuster.
I really liked this novel and had a hard time putting it down. The characters, Susannah Baylor a widow whose husband and brother-in-law had died ten years earlier, her precocious daughter Rebecca and her nephew Levi, whom she thought of as her own child were trying to get their hard earned cotton crop to market. For ten years Susannah and the children kept their farms going and finally had a good cotton crop. After being fleeced by a so-called buyer, Susannah hires Henry Buckmeyer, a noted layabout to help her get her crop to market. They journeyed in two wagons carrying her cotton bales, his furs and honey for over a week to get to Jefferson. They are beset by bad weather, impossible water crossings, thieves and wild animals during their trip. If it hadn’t been for Henry, Susannah and her children would not have survived.
The author skillfully wrote about this trip in very descriptive language so that you actually felt all the emotions that the novel’s characters felt. My only criticism of this novel is that I felt that the heroine, Susannah, worried too much about whether or not Henry had been “saved��. It was as if she felt that she alone was responsible for his relationship with the Lord. I think the idea was overworked. Otherwise, I very much enjoyed reading this book.
I was sent a free print copy of this book from Howard Books and a free kindle copy by NetGalley in return for my honest review.
I enjoyed this story of the widow, Susannah Abbot Baylor, and Patrick Henry Buckmeyer. The story has so many emotions, sorrow, joy, heartache, forgiveness, acceptance and love. I found Henry to be a man of very strong morals, and to be and act more a Christian, than most Christians. He truly proved over and over to be a man of Godly character, even if he hadn't accepted Christ yet. He was a brave, honest and hard working man, even if the so-called Christian busy-body gossips in town had decided he was nothing more than a heathen. Lesson here, "Judge not less ye be judged!" Sue is a strong woman who is a bit misguided by what she believes as punishment from God. Yes, she married against her father's wishes, but God did not kill her husband and brother-in-law because of it, even Christians can have accidents and die. The storyline was captivating as they journey from home to Jefferson to take the labor of their hard work to deliver the cotton to market. Henry proves over and over he is a strong and extremely intelligent man with more patients than most people. Sue has to learn so many lessons in life the hard way. Overall, Christians (and yes I am a born again Christian) cannot push or force someone to come to God's saving grace, it is the Holy Spirit that convicts. I am so glad that Henry was not turned off by Sue's attitude, and he did find Salvation. I look forward to reading book two, Hearts Stolen.
Disclosure: I was gifted a paperback copy of this book by the author. All thoughts, opinions and ratings are my own.
This entertaining western captured my attention from the beginning, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it through the end. I very much admire Susanna Baylor and all that she accomplishes during her years of widowhood. Not many women of that day would have been able to put forth the hard labor and accept the responsibility that she chose to take upon herself. Her strong will and self-reliance continue to work against her in relationships, but without them, she would have faltered and lost her land many years prior. Sue struggles, as we all do, with our character flaws, but we see glimpses of the spiritual and psychological growth that is taking place in her life, as she strives to find a balance between being a woman and being “the boss.” All the main characters, in addition to Sue, are well developed and are integral to the story.
This wagon-train type story is much more interesting than some, since it takes place in Texas, rather than on a long haul from the Mid-West to the West Coast. Each day brings new challenges and often new people into the scene. The people and incidents seem very realistic, and are written in an engaging fashion.
Although the romantic thread, based on the vows, is a consistent thread throughout the novel, it seems to me that the story deals more with Susanna and her struggle to survive in Texas as a widowed woman in 1832.
I’d recommend Vow Unbroken to readers who enjoy books with a strong female character set in frontier times.
I'm not sure what I expected from this book, but I must say that I loved it. It's a very well written story about a widow and her struggle to get her crop of cotton to market. Susannah Baylor faces one challenge after another after hiring a man, Henry Buckmeyer, to take them to the buyers who had just pulled out. The journey takes them across dangerous territory.
Was it wise to hire someone that she doesn't really know? Will they survive the perilous trials that they face? Can they reach the buyers before they are gone?
There are so many things that I truly loved about this story. Number one, being Susannah, strong faith and need to trust that the Lord knows best, especially when it comes to being unequally yoked with an unbeliever. Her stubbornness made me laugh a few times. Sue's grit was admirable and made me proud.
My favorite character was Rebecca, Susannah's daughter. She had a heart of gold and did what she could for others without them knowing. That little girl stole my heart from the beginning.
I recommend this book to those who enjoy historical romance with some good Christian lessons thrown in.
I received a copy of Vow Unbroken from the author. I was not asked to write a review, but feel this book deserves a shout out, as it is an excellent read. I intend to purchase the rest of the books in the series and look forward to reading them, as well.
Vow Unbroken takes us to Texas along the Jefferson Trace in early 1800. I love the descriptions of the Trace and surrounding areas which gives the reader the feeling of being one of the travelers. The characters are true-to-life and well developed. Henry is a handsome rugged cowboy, an endearing hero and a perfect match for Sue’s strong-willed character. There is far more to him than Sue had expected, which wasn’t much. I like the sparks that fly between the two as they travel along the Trace. I love Sue’s young daughter, Rebecca, she is a joy to watch. She brings laughter to the story, especially when she asks Henry to sing and then when he does she tells him he should not sing but stick to talking—had me chuckling. Henry and Rebecca have a secret that is endearing. I am a cat person but love the dog, Blue Dog, who is a hero as well. I enjoyed watching Levi, Sue’s nephew, as he learns important things in growing into an honorable man, lessons he is learning from Henry. I appreciate the spiritual elements woven throughout the story. A fun, heartwarming story.
~I received a copy of this book from the author/publisher (no monetary gain were exchanged), this is my honest review~
A lovely young widow has shielded her future with a most curious vow; Susannah Baylor maintains that she will never remarry without the express blessing of her father, since she sincerely believes that her husband and brother-in-law died as a result of her blatant disregard for his opinion. Raising her young daughter and nephew has proven to be full of obstacles, but her most pressing challenge to date is selling her bountiful cotton crop to a profitable bidder, after being duped by a conniving hustler.
Enter Henry Buckmeyer; single by choice, and living a quiet solitary life on the edges of civilization as a trapper and seed harvester. When Susannah appears like a beautiful apparition on his property and implores him to help transport cotton along the dangerous Jefferson Trace, he agrees to her employ. Ironically, Henry and Susannah discover that muddy creeks, sudden storms and packs of wolves are not the only hurdles along the trail, because their hearts have become forever entangled.
What a nice beginning to what is sure to be an enchanting series!
I thought I would enjoy this book more than I did. The premise sounded interesting- two strong characters on an adventure... but something was off for me. I didn't care for the writing style- it didn't give me a good visual in my head of the setting, and there were long passages of dialogue interchange where I would lose track of who was saying what. The main character Susannah was prickly and judgemental of Henry, even after her prejudices and first impressions were proven false. Her thoughts often contradicted with her words and actions, which gave a hypocritical vibe, like when she was griping about taking a rest and meal at the home of a family Henry knew, but even after befriending the wife, she didn't admit that it was a positive choice. I guess her prideful personality just rubbed me the wrong way.
Vow Unbroken is a 5-star read. I’m new to Caryl McAdoo’s books; so when I won a copy of this, I had no idea of the treat I was in for. Her lovely writing voice reminds me of the down-to-earth style of Janette Oke’s novels. However, Caryl has a Texan drawl instead of a Canadian-prairie-girl accent. The main character’s, Sue and Henry, are likeable from the start and the story pulled me into the plot and blessed me with a break from modern day living as it painted a believable picture of an adventurous, wagon journey that led all the way to a bended-knee proposal. Vow Unbroken includes a thought-provoking reading group guide and a warm and welcoming author interview with Caryl. If you enjoy inspirational, historical romances, this sweet book is for you.
My Thoughts: This was a great first historical novel. Caryl McAdoo has a great skill of making characters very realistic. There were times in this story I wanted to shake some sense and common decency into Susannah. Her anger and quick temper often led her into not listening when she would have been better off to listen. A great story. I loved Henry, he was so easy going, and did a great job of not letting a hot tempered woman drive him crazy. A great story, looking forward to the next in the series. 4 stars for this historical novel. This book was provided for review purposes only and no payment was received for this review.
I really enjoyed this book. This is the first book I have read by this author but it certainly won't be my last. The author does a wonderful job of capturing the spirit of the mid 1800's in Texas. I was caught up in the story line and the characters lives from the very first pages. The story is a wonderful mixture of adventure, history and romance, and it is a beautiful story of flawed characters finding the will of God in their lives. I definitely recommend it, and I am looking forward to reading other books by this author.
I truly loved this book. It is a journey of faith and true love. Susannah struggles with her faith and her trust in God throughout her trip along the trail to get her cotton to the buyers. This is a struggle that I have daily - to trust in God. To see her work though her doubts and learn to trust God gave me great encouragement and helped me to try to do the same in my life. Henry is such a lovable and patient character. How he cares for Susannah and her family is beautiful. This was a book that warmed my heart and I highly recommend it.
I have so enjoyed my signed copy of Vow Unbroken. Before I met Caryl McAdoo in person I had read Book Two in the series and loved the story of Rebecca and her Texas Ranger. Book One is about Rebecca's mother Susannah and her tenacity to take care of her family even if it means hiring a stranger to help her carry her cotton across Texas and further. Caryl captures the early 1800s drama with escapades in the wild Texas country. I promise I will be reading the rest of the series in the future.
This is the first book that I have read by this author. I enjoyed it because it was full of history. I learned a great deal about the struggles folks had back in the day to get their cotton crops to market. There was a great deal of work and adversity to overcome to make a living. The romance was sweet. I really liked the hero. I just wish there had been a bit more of affection between the hero and heroine. Overall, it was an enjoyable book and I look forward to reading more by this author.