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The Merman and the Moon Forgotten
The Earth is going to end. What’s fourteen-year-old Nick Lyons supposed to do? Travel through space and time to save a race of Merfolk on a fantastic moon of course.
Sometime in the near future the Geneva virus has decimated the human population, forcing many to live in refugee camps, including Nick’s best friends. But his parents can’t be bothered with what happens across “the fence”, especially when their schedules are packed with skin-regeneration therapy sessions and global shopping trips.
Nick has only one dream: To leave planet Earth and all of its chaos. His grandfather, Grand, offers a way to fulfill his dream by taking him to the moon, but there’s a catch. Grand’s moon is in the past, it’s teeming with magical creatures, and its beloved Merfolk believe Nick will save them from the thousand-eyed monsters that haunt their fortresses. Nick must decide which life he really wants to live: One of a teenage boy trying to survive a dystopian earth, or the guardian of a fantastic moon inhabited by blood thirsty gorgons, man-eating pirate ships, and fire-breathing winged lions.
The Merman and The Moon Forgotten follows Nick’s boisterous and humorous journey from Earth to Moon as he searches for a simple life in a world that is anything but.
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What kids and adults are saying about the Nikolas and Co series!
Pure awesome in a cup. With some waffles. Which would make it a waffle load. - Austin 14
My boys 11 and 14 both really enjoyed the story and only complained that book 2 wasn't out yet so they couldn't keep reading. - Fred Chambers
I have to admit, before I could snuggle up under my blankies with this fantastical book, my son beat me to it. He read it in a single day and raved. - Elizabeth Mueller
Review from my 13-year old daughter:
"This was an imaginative, well-written novel similar to the Hitchhiker's Guide books and was a pleasure to read. The author did a good job and hopefully has more in store." Sara Grace
"Enticing and Amazing"... These are the opening reviews my 11 year old son. As a constant video/computer gamer, it is phenomenal to see him immersed in these books. He loves this series so much that he's been sharing his books with other boys in his class and asked the school librarian to carry it. Highly recommended by this family! - Gemmavive
Nikolas and company is the best book I've ever read. It was full of surprises that kept me on the edge, it also full of awkward moments that made me laugh. - J-Man
Kevin has created a fun, unique fantasy world full of magic and adventure. The story gets off to a fast start and sucks you in. - Micah Lewis
great YA fantasy, funny, a very unique premise, very well written, great descriptions, and a great band of heroes. - Julie Johnson
once I immersed myself in the stories characters and settings I couldn't put it down. Pam Torres
It's great for anyone that loves fantasy, science fiction, it's clean with just the slightest hint of boys and girls taking a notice of each other.
Heather
I was thoroughly tickled to visit Kevin's fantasy world. His writing style is awesome too. He pulled me in and never let me go until I sadly finished the story. - Robyn Campbell
What a fantastic book - and I use that word in the literal sense! Matt Keland
I was caught up in the story and couldn't wait to read what happened next. Merrows, Scuccas, Jynn'us - It feels like this book only scratches the surface. - Rob Momary
Sometime in the near future the Geneva virus has decimated the human population, forcing many to live in refugee camps, including Nick’s best friends. But his parents can’t be bothered with what happens across “the fence”, especially when their schedules are packed with skin-regeneration therapy sessions and global shopping trips.
Nick has only one dream: To leave planet Earth and all of its chaos. His grandfather, Grand, offers a way to fulfill his dream by taking him to the moon, but there’s a catch. Grand’s moon is in the past, it’s teeming with magical creatures, and its beloved Merfolk believe Nick will save them from the thousand-eyed monsters that haunt their fortresses. Nick must decide which life he really wants to live: One of a teenage boy trying to survive a dystopian earth, or the guardian of a fantastic moon inhabited by blood thirsty gorgons, man-eating pirate ships, and fire-breathing winged lions.
The Merman and The Moon Forgotten follows Nick’s boisterous and humorous journey from Earth to Moon as he searches for a simple life in a world that is anything but.
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What kids and adults are saying about the Nikolas and Co series!
Pure awesome in a cup. With some waffles. Which would make it a waffle load. - Austin 14
My boys 11 and 14 both really enjoyed the story and only complained that book 2 wasn't out yet so they couldn't keep reading. - Fred Chambers
I have to admit, before I could snuggle up under my blankies with this fantastical book, my son beat me to it. He read it in a single day and raved. - Elizabeth Mueller
Review from my 13-year old daughter:
"This was an imaginative, well-written novel similar to the Hitchhiker's Guide books and was a pleasure to read. The author did a good job and hopefully has more in store." Sara Grace
"Enticing and Amazing"... These are the opening reviews my 11 year old son. As a constant video/computer gamer, it is phenomenal to see him immersed in these books. He loves this series so much that he's been sharing his books with other boys in his class and asked the school librarian to carry it. Highly recommended by this family! - Gemmavive
Nikolas and company is the best book I've ever read. It was full of surprises that kept me on the edge, it also full of awkward moments that made me laugh. - J-Man
Kevin has created a fun, unique fantasy world full of magic and adventure. The story gets off to a fast start and sucks you in. - Micah Lewis
great YA fantasy, funny, a very unique premise, very well written, great descriptions, and a great band of heroes. - Julie Johnson
once I immersed myself in the stories characters and settings I couldn't put it down. Pam Torres
It's great for anyone that loves fantasy, science fiction, it's clean with just the slightest hint of boys and girls taking a notice of each other.
Heather
I was thoroughly tickled to visit Kevin's fantasy world. His writing style is awesome too. He pulled me in and never let me go until I sadly finished the story. - Robyn Campbell
What a fantastic book - and I use that word in the literal sense! Matt Keland
I was caught up in the story and couldn't wait to read what happened next. Merrows, Scuccas, Jynn'us - It feels like this book only scratches the surface. - Rob Momary
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First published July 6, 2011
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Kevin McGill
16 books107 followersKevin McGill is the author of the Nikolas and Company series where the Moon is much more than we think, mermen walk on automaton legs, and a 14-year-old boy talks to the spirit of a city in his head.
He's also the author who launched his book into space ->
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He's also the author who launched his book into space ->
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August 3, 2012
A-A-A-U-U-G-G-H-H. Another book that ends in the middle of the story. So many books these days seem to do this. The end isn't really an end. However, in this case, I rather expected it. After all the title does say, Episode 1. I do look forward to reading the upcoming installments. I quite enjoyed this one. It's an interesting blend of fantasy and science fiction with some great twists and turns. There is one at the end that really surprised me, which is always great. But I didn't find this story predictable in any way and very entertaining.
Nick and his friends set out on a rather confusing adventure to a place they've never even heard of, but with poisonings, hideous tracking monsters, and the possibility of developing magical powers outweigh the negatives. The characters in this book were certainly interesting. Intelligent Nick who tends to create disaster at every turn, his twin brother Tim, seemingly the only cautious one, belligerent Haley who hates boys, Caroline, the motherly type, Brandy, the fashionista, and last but certainly not least, Grand, who has spent years flying about the earth in a beat up hovertruck.
The setting alternates between a surprisingly different version of the Moon and an Earth that sees little sunlight and revolves around a great deal of technology. I found it fascinating how the author conveys a sense of place without spending a great deal of time on description. The story moves along at fast clip, I read it one evening. Many interesting things happen, including a rather interesting visit to a church in the midst of a funeral, funny and exciting all at the same time.
The only problem I had with the book, besides the cut off ending was the lack of description. This lack aids in the rapid pace of the story, but I would have liked to have more details about the settings and various characters. Plus the wording in a few places was a bit awkward. But these were minor issues and didn't overly inhibit the flow of the story. I recommend this book to all who enjoy a fast paced, entertainingly creative story.
Nick and his friends set out on a rather confusing adventure to a place they've never even heard of, but with poisonings, hideous tracking monsters, and the possibility of developing magical powers outweigh the negatives. The characters in this book were certainly interesting. Intelligent Nick who tends to create disaster at every turn, his twin brother Tim, seemingly the only cautious one, belligerent Haley who hates boys, Caroline, the motherly type, Brandy, the fashionista, and last but certainly not least, Grand, who has spent years flying about the earth in a beat up hovertruck.
The setting alternates between a surprisingly different version of the Moon and an Earth that sees little sunlight and revolves around a great deal of technology. I found it fascinating how the author conveys a sense of place without spending a great deal of time on description. The story moves along at fast clip, I read it one evening. Many interesting things happen, including a rather interesting visit to a church in the midst of a funeral, funny and exciting all at the same time.
The only problem I had with the book, besides the cut off ending was the lack of description. This lack aids in the rapid pace of the story, but I would have liked to have more details about the settings and various characters. Plus the wording in a few places was a bit awkward. But these were minor issues and didn't overly inhibit the flow of the story. I recommend this book to all who enjoy a fast paced, entertainingly creative story.
June 29, 2015
A Great Fantasy Book
I enjoyed this book. I loved all the characters especially Grand. Each character a very unique personality. The fantasy adventure was fun. There was mythological creatures, science, magic, action and adventure. This was a fun read and I would recommend it to anyone. The first book does leave you hanging but this is a series and it picks up where it leaves off in the second book.
I enjoyed this book. I loved all the characters especially Grand. Each character a very unique personality. The fantasy adventure was fun. There was mythological creatures, science, magic, action and adventure. This was a fun read and I would recommend it to anyone. The first book does leave you hanging but this is a series and it picks up where it leaves off in the second book.
August 3, 2021
that was...not fun.
i don't know if it's because i listened to the audiobook or what. there were a lot of sound effects that at times would drown out the narration, which was exceedingly annoying. i'm also the kind of person that when there's a lot going on, it's more difficult for me to focus, so the noises were exceedingly distracting.
the story itself was kinda eh. honestly, it would probably have gotten a higher rating if i hadn't listened to the audiobook. the narrator wasn't bad, but i hated some of the voices chosen. it just made everything more annoying.
i don't know if it's because i listened to the audiobook or what. there were a lot of sound effects that at times would drown out the narration, which was exceedingly annoying. i'm also the kind of person that when there's a lot going on, it's more difficult for me to focus, so the noises were exceedingly distracting.
the story itself was kinda eh. honestly, it would probably have gotten a higher rating if i hadn't listened to the audiobook. the narrator wasn't bad, but i hated some of the voices chosen. it just made everything more annoying.
March 17, 2013
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Detailed Review:
Apparently all the good parts in the book have already been said up there, so I will talk about how it is good. There's nothing bad to say about this book, so you can guess what rating I'm giving this book.
It's creative. I have never seen an author able to piece fantasy AND science fiction so perfectly. No flaws, just perfection. It's just plain genius of the author to think of such a plot. Nobody but him can think that Earth and the Moon are brother planets and people really live on the Moon, or Mon.
Here's some facts about Nikolas Lyons:
1. He's smart.
2. He likes to invent stuff, which mostly sets fire to things or literally explodes.
3. I love him. ( Cut out all the ews ok?) I just do.
4. He's MY hero.
5. He has a brother called Tim, who I find super annoying and feel like punching in the face every second he appears in the book. Can someone damn him to hell for that? Please? Then I can leave in peace. And whoever who does that will get their reward too. Fair?
Here are some other characters with descriptions according to Nick's computer recognition system.
Caroline Wendell: People only like Caroline because she can cook, from scratch, A rare commodity in this century. And for only a fourteen-year-old, she is a fantastic cook. Chocolate chip cookies after school, pie on Sundays, and a large bird called turkey for Thanksgiving. If boys won’t fancy her for her looks, they’ ll fancy her for her key lime pie.
Brandy Wendell: Brandy couldn’t be more different. Being the youngest sister, she hates to cook. Brandy claims that it keeps her from her number one love: looking cute. In defense, Brandy also explains that cooking keeps her from talking with her friends, all 372 of them to be
exact. Some people collect stamps; Brandy collects people.
Haley Wendell: Sixteen years old, enchanting blond hair and deep green eyes. Haley’s name is on the lips of every boy at the refugee camp, without any aid on her part. In fact, it takes a brave boy to ask her on a date, knowing that Haley has responded with more than a ‘no’. She verbally assaults would-be suitors, leaving only a scarred psyche for collection. Over Christmas break, Weaver High School’s basketball team, who had won 4 state championships in a row, made a bet as to whom she would say “yes” to first on the team. Every one of them stepped up and took their turn. She told them exactly what she thought. Not only did the basketball team not win state championship that year, the point guard asked to be transferred to another school because, and I quote from his Friendbook account, ‘I have serious questions about my own ability to dribble a ball, defend the basket, or lift a fork and put it in my mouth.’
Daniel Kobayashi: Nineteen-year-old Daniel Kobayashi is not much taller than a hobbit and intelligent beyond his years. By the early age of ten, he had made the front cover of Japan’s holopaper, ‘I’. They named him “Child Genius of The Year” for discovering the very first non-metal
magnet. That was until the genetic plague killed his mother, crippled him, and left him utterly hairless, which makes him more goblin than hobbit, I suppose.
Xanthus Kobayashi: Xanthus, Daniel’s half-brother, is thirteen years old. Xanthus explains to everyone that he received his name from a visit in the night by an African tribal leader indigenous to the Sub-Saharan, known for his powerful magic and warrior-like skills. This would be true if by “African tribal leader” he means ‘I live in my own fantasy world because I can’t cope with life at the
refugee camp.’ Xanthus’ pitiful faux hawk, his earring of a silver woman, and mismatched black outfit make for an awkward compilation.
The characters above, together with Nick's grandfather, also called Nick embark on a strange adventure that wasn't intended. I really can't wait for the 2nd book! Ahhhhh! I really want to know what happens next! AHC! AHC! AHC! AHC! (You should know what that means now, as introduced to you by Chloe.)
I can't say enough of what I think of this book. But this review is lengthy enough. I must stop to catch my breath.
Brief Review: I'm glad that I agreed to review the book and the author had introduced me to it. This is definitely for fans of science fiction and fantasy. To me, every single word in the book meant a whole new thing to me as the story progressed. And there is a pretty huge cliffhanger at the end. Just saying.
Final Rating: 5/5 "Totally Amazing!"
Detailed Review:
Apparently all the good parts in the book have already been said up there, so I will talk about how it is good. There's nothing bad to say about this book, so you can guess what rating I'm giving this book.
It's creative. I have never seen an author able to piece fantasy AND science fiction so perfectly. No flaws, just perfection. It's just plain genius of the author to think of such a plot. Nobody but him can think that Earth and the Moon are brother planets and people really live on the Moon, or Mon.
Here's some facts about Nikolas Lyons:
1. He's smart.
2. He likes to invent stuff, which mostly sets fire to things or literally explodes.
3. I love him. ( Cut out all the ews ok?) I just do.
4. He's MY hero.
5. He has a brother called Tim, who I find super annoying and feel like punching in the face every second he appears in the book. Can someone damn him to hell for that? Please? Then I can leave in peace. And whoever who does that will get their reward too. Fair?
Here are some other characters with descriptions according to Nick's computer recognition system.
Caroline Wendell: People only like Caroline because she can cook, from scratch, A rare commodity in this century. And for only a fourteen-year-old, she is a fantastic cook. Chocolate chip cookies after school, pie on Sundays, and a large bird called turkey for Thanksgiving. If boys won’t fancy her for her looks, they’ ll fancy her for her key lime pie.
Brandy Wendell: Brandy couldn’t be more different. Being the youngest sister, she hates to cook. Brandy claims that it keeps her from her number one love: looking cute. In defense, Brandy also explains that cooking keeps her from talking with her friends, all 372 of them to be
exact. Some people collect stamps; Brandy collects people.
Haley Wendell: Sixteen years old, enchanting blond hair and deep green eyes. Haley’s name is on the lips of every boy at the refugee camp, without any aid on her part. In fact, it takes a brave boy to ask her on a date, knowing that Haley has responded with more than a ‘no’. She verbally assaults would-be suitors, leaving only a scarred psyche for collection. Over Christmas break, Weaver High School’s basketball team, who had won 4 state championships in a row, made a bet as to whom she would say “yes” to first on the team. Every one of them stepped up and took their turn. She told them exactly what she thought. Not only did the basketball team not win state championship that year, the point guard asked to be transferred to another school because, and I quote from his Friendbook account, ‘I have serious questions about my own ability to dribble a ball, defend the basket, or lift a fork and put it in my mouth.’
Daniel Kobayashi: Nineteen-year-old Daniel Kobayashi is not much taller than a hobbit and intelligent beyond his years. By the early age of ten, he had made the front cover of Japan’s holopaper, ‘I’. They named him “Child Genius of The Year” for discovering the very first non-metal
magnet. That was until the genetic plague killed his mother, crippled him, and left him utterly hairless, which makes him more goblin than hobbit, I suppose.
Xanthus Kobayashi: Xanthus, Daniel’s half-brother, is thirteen years old. Xanthus explains to everyone that he received his name from a visit in the night by an African tribal leader indigenous to the Sub-Saharan, known for his powerful magic and warrior-like skills. This would be true if by “African tribal leader” he means ‘I live in my own fantasy world because I can’t cope with life at the
refugee camp.’ Xanthus’ pitiful faux hawk, his earring of a silver woman, and mismatched black outfit make for an awkward compilation.
The characters above, together with Nick's grandfather, also called Nick embark on a strange adventure that wasn't intended. I really can't wait for the 2nd book! Ahhhhh! I really want to know what happens next! AHC! AHC! AHC! AHC! (You should know what that means now, as introduced to you by Chloe.)
I can't say enough of what I think of this book. But this review is lengthy enough. I must stop to catch my breath.
Brief Review: I'm glad that I agreed to review the book and the author had introduced me to it. This is definitely for fans of science fiction and fantasy. To me, every single word in the book meant a whole new thing to me as the story progressed. And there is a pretty huge cliffhanger at the end. Just saying.
Final Rating: 5/5 "Totally Amazing!"
May 15, 2014
14-year-old Nick desperately wants to get off Earth (a dystopian/futuristic Earth). His parents are crazy, he sees injustice all around him and he feels drawn toward the moon, as if it’s his real home. Nick tries everything to run away and hop a ride to the moon even though life there is much less comfortable compared to his privileged life on Earth. And then there’s the voice in Nick’s head that keeps repeating the same warning message.
Yeri is a driver for the Fungman, Zedock and Josiah Stagecoach Company. He lives on the moon. Not the moon you see in Nick’s world, but the moon from tens of thousands of years ago, when the moon was tethered to the Earth through a magic force. The moon was packed with life, both human and other, and magic. Yeri was responsible for trying to save the lives of a group of Mermen (or Merrows as they are called) who inhabit the moon and walk on its surface in automaton legs.
These two worlds are destined to collide – only first Nick has to figure out how he’s going to explain to his parents that he blew up their shed, dismantled his dad’s Validate (some sort of futuristic vehicle) and set Hiker’s Canyon on fire.
First of all the book gets bonus points for an awesome cover. The story is really what is depicted on the cover – excitement – danger – steampunk meets Harry Potter meets Doctor Who. The story plot, characters and setting are so good, I can’t get it out of my mind. The book is one where you literally have to keep turning the pages to find out what happens next. The steampunk (mixing of old and new technology and lifestyles) feel to the book was an extra for me. The alternate world Mr. McGill created is incredible! The story is totally unique and one that I found fascinating. There are a couple of creepy things that go on in the book (for example the government runs refugee camps where the people who live in them are actually owned by an organ donating company) that may not be appropriate for younger kids, but there is nothing graphic about it and there is no bad language. I’d rate it at a 12+ age level.
This book is so close to total and complete awesomeness – like Percy Jackson/Redwall awesomeness, but it made me mad too. I actually yelled at the book when it ended because it didn’t end in a cliff hanger, it ended in the middle of the story! >:/ The reader (me) had no sense of completion. I know it’s the first book in the series, but in my opinion, it needed some kind of end. The beginning chapters were a bit confusing and they drug down the rest of the book a bit. I had to reread in a couple of places. After getting past them the rest of the book flowed easily. Mr. McGill’s writing style is a joy to read. His imagination is incredible. I actually went back and forth on giving this book 3 (good) or 4 (great) bookworms (mostly because I was mad at the ending), but I literally can’t keep the story out of my head. Any book that can do that gets the extra worm. I will be reading Episode 2!
*NOTE I got a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review
Yeri is a driver for the Fungman, Zedock and Josiah Stagecoach Company. He lives on the moon. Not the moon you see in Nick’s world, but the moon from tens of thousands of years ago, when the moon was tethered to the Earth through a magic force. The moon was packed with life, both human and other, and magic. Yeri was responsible for trying to save the lives of a group of Mermen (or Merrows as they are called) who inhabit the moon and walk on its surface in automaton legs.
These two worlds are destined to collide – only first Nick has to figure out how he’s going to explain to his parents that he blew up their shed, dismantled his dad’s Validate (some sort of futuristic vehicle) and set Hiker’s Canyon on fire.
First of all the book gets bonus points for an awesome cover. The story is really what is depicted on the cover – excitement – danger – steampunk meets Harry Potter meets Doctor Who. The story plot, characters and setting are so good, I can’t get it out of my mind. The book is one where you literally have to keep turning the pages to find out what happens next. The steampunk (mixing of old and new technology and lifestyles) feel to the book was an extra for me. The alternate world Mr. McGill created is incredible! The story is totally unique and one that I found fascinating. There are a couple of creepy things that go on in the book (for example the government runs refugee camps where the people who live in them are actually owned by an organ donating company) that may not be appropriate for younger kids, but there is nothing graphic about it and there is no bad language. I’d rate it at a 12+ age level.
This book is so close to total and complete awesomeness – like Percy Jackson/Redwall awesomeness, but it made me mad too. I actually yelled at the book when it ended because it didn’t end in a cliff hanger, it ended in the middle of the story! >:/ The reader (me) had no sense of completion. I know it’s the first book in the series, but in my opinion, it needed some kind of end. The beginning chapters were a bit confusing and they drug down the rest of the book a bit. I had to reread in a couple of places. After getting past them the rest of the book flowed easily. Mr. McGill’s writing style is a joy to read. His imagination is incredible. I actually went back and forth on giving this book 3 (good) or 4 (great) bookworms (mostly because I was mad at the ending), but I literally can’t keep the story out of my head. Any book that can do that gets the extra worm. I will be reading Episode 2!
*NOTE I got a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review
May 15, 2012
This novella has one foot in science fiction and the other in fantasy. I was reminded a lot of The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy when I read this. It was kind of crazy with weird creatures and unusual journeys and a weird mission. The character Nick who is the main character is adventuresome, an inventor, a thinker and not likely to follow instructions-any one's! I really liked him because he took charge and did what needed to be done when a leader wasn't clear. There are many characters including Tim, Nick's twin who is the exact opposite of Nick. He seems to be cautious, overly sure of his qualifications (to beat a girl up twice his size called Rocky) and wants to slow down and think things through. He'd rather stay on earth where the atmosphere is so bad that there is no sun and the Geneva Virus is spreading like wildfire killing thousands at a time. But he isn't given a choice when they are attacked by trackers that don't give up until their prey is dead.
Meanwhile, back on the Moon, Yeri the brave and heroic wagon driver finds that he is carrying precious cargo, The Duke and Duchess of Eynclaene, the Merrow people who guard the coast and keep the treasure of the city of Huron safe. Yeri is brought into further service of the Merrow people, but in this Episode, we don't know if he succeeds or fails.
At 130 pages, this was a nice introduction into the two worlds of the story. The characters were summed up nicely by Nick- "Haley hates love. Brandy loves fashion. Tim's a wuss. Daniel: evil scientist. Xanthus: dragon nerd. And you (Caroline): good cook." That is who they are at their basest, but of course we all know people are more complex. Nick just likes to think everything is simple. I think he's going to find things are very complex as he travels to the moon and becomes the Steward of Huron, charged with speaking with the Merrow and protecting Huron's fortunes.
I enjoyed this story very much. As I'm not a science fiction fan, I may not have enjoyed the story in it's entirety, but broken up like this, it's got me very curious. And the fantasy world created which Nick and friends are just about to enter is very interesting. I can't wait to learn more about it! The lore is that the moon and the earth were twin planets joined together by a bridge. This will prove to be a very imaginative story. And I must say, it was very well formatted for my Kindle. The pictures were all in the right places and the titles were in the right places. It was a pleasure to read it! I will definitely be reading the rest of the series so I can see what happens.
It's great for anyone that loves fantasy, science fiction, it's clean with just the slightest hint of boys and girls taking a notice of each other. Lots of adventure, but not so far fetched that you don't believe it.
Meanwhile, back on the Moon, Yeri the brave and heroic wagon driver finds that he is carrying precious cargo, The Duke and Duchess of Eynclaene, the Merrow people who guard the coast and keep the treasure of the city of Huron safe. Yeri is brought into further service of the Merrow people, but in this Episode, we don't know if he succeeds or fails.
At 130 pages, this was a nice introduction into the two worlds of the story. The characters were summed up nicely by Nick- "Haley hates love. Brandy loves fashion. Tim's a wuss. Daniel: evil scientist. Xanthus: dragon nerd. And you (Caroline): good cook." That is who they are at their basest, but of course we all know people are more complex. Nick just likes to think everything is simple. I think he's going to find things are very complex as he travels to the moon and becomes the Steward of Huron, charged with speaking with the Merrow and protecting Huron's fortunes.
I enjoyed this story very much. As I'm not a science fiction fan, I may not have enjoyed the story in it's entirety, but broken up like this, it's got me very curious. And the fantasy world created which Nick and friends are just about to enter is very interesting. I can't wait to learn more about it! The lore is that the moon and the earth were twin planets joined together by a bridge. This will prove to be a very imaginative story. And I must say, it was very well formatted for my Kindle. The pictures were all in the right places and the titles were in the right places. It was a pleasure to read it! I will definitely be reading the rest of the series so I can see what happens.
It's great for anyone that loves fantasy, science fiction, it's clean with just the slightest hint of boys and girls taking a notice of each other. Lots of adventure, but not so far fetched that you don't believe it.
May 21, 2012
This start to a new series by Kevin McGill is a sci-fi adventure. The story takes place in two settings, Earth and Moon. On Moon you see the merpeople (known as merrows) discussing vague problems and monsters and explaining their grave danger to this one guy Yeri. On Earth, you have this boy inventor Nikolas who is desperate to get off Earth. These two little plotlines then mash together as Nick learns about Moon and other secrets.
Honestly, I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this book. I wasn’t sure how much to expect from it because it’s short (180-ish pages) and it’s kind of geared towards middle grade, but I found it to be highly captivating and exciting. The story moved along quickly so I was never bored or wanted to stop reading.
The writing was wonderful as well. I admired the word choice, the way characters were presented, and the flow of the whole book. Kevin McGill is obviously a fan of using sounds in his writing (whimpers, screams, yells, etc.) and he doesn’t just say, “Bill screamed.” He writes, “AAAUUUHHH!!!!” There were a multitude of screams, yells, and other exclamations used. I feel like that fits really well into the aspect of Kevin’s writing I liked the most. All the dialogue was very real. Everything was phrased to sound like something a kid would actually say. Many books put words into characters mouths that don’t match the character, and that’s not what Kevin did at all. He knows how fourteen-year-old boys talk and he writes that way.
My biggest problem with the book was the MASSIVE amount of facts thrown at me with little to no explanation. Obviously this fictional world is complex and detailed, and the author has everything figured out somewhere else. But I could only glimpse a sliver of this complex world through the book, and I just wish that the world-building could have been less about telling me a little of everything and more about really explaining a lot about a few things. I realize this is the first short book in a quick-release book series, but the details could have been dispensed in a more understandable way that didn’t overwhelm the reader. Add to this the sci-fi elements of strange names, creatures, and settings, and it’s just too much new information. But if you don’t skim, and you don’t expect all the answers in the first book, you can easily have an enjoyable reading experience.
There are a lot of little things I loved about this book: the way he found to introduce most of the Earthen characters, the hilarious personalities of Nick’s parents, Grand’s character, the autodrones, Yeri’s cluelessness, etc.
I highly enjoyed this book, and will definitely get the sequel, as this one ends on a bit of a cliff-hanger (great twist at the end!).
Honestly, I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this book. I wasn’t sure how much to expect from it because it’s short (180-ish pages) and it’s kind of geared towards middle grade, but I found it to be highly captivating and exciting. The story moved along quickly so I was never bored or wanted to stop reading.
The writing was wonderful as well. I admired the word choice, the way characters were presented, and the flow of the whole book. Kevin McGill is obviously a fan of using sounds in his writing (whimpers, screams, yells, etc.) and he doesn’t just say, “Bill screamed.” He writes, “AAAUUUHHH!!!!” There were a multitude of screams, yells, and other exclamations used. I feel like that fits really well into the aspect of Kevin’s writing I liked the most. All the dialogue was very real. Everything was phrased to sound like something a kid would actually say. Many books put words into characters mouths that don’t match the character, and that’s not what Kevin did at all. He knows how fourteen-year-old boys talk and he writes that way.
My biggest problem with the book was the MASSIVE amount of facts thrown at me with little to no explanation. Obviously this fictional world is complex and detailed, and the author has everything figured out somewhere else. But I could only glimpse a sliver of this complex world through the book, and I just wish that the world-building could have been less about telling me a little of everything and more about really explaining a lot about a few things. I realize this is the first short book in a quick-release book series, but the details could have been dispensed in a more understandable way that didn’t overwhelm the reader. Add to this the sci-fi elements of strange names, creatures, and settings, and it’s just too much new information. But if you don’t skim, and you don’t expect all the answers in the first book, you can easily have an enjoyable reading experience.
There are a lot of little things I loved about this book: the way he found to introduce most of the Earthen characters, the hilarious personalities of Nick’s parents, Grand’s character, the autodrones, Yeri’s cluelessness, etc.
I highly enjoyed this book, and will definitely get the sequel, as this one ends on a bit of a cliff-hanger (great twist at the end!).
September 20, 2012
This first book in the Nikolas & Company adventures is science fiction/fantasy/adventure, but most important: it's a lot of fun. If you like your books with a lot of set-up, this isn't the one for you. But if you enjoy being plunked down into the middle of a fully developed and detailed magical world, then you should definitely check it out. In addition to the fun premise and the spot-on, action-packed execution, Nikolas and Company features the classic hero-and-his-misfit-friends. A reader who regularly picks up sci-fi/fantasy books will recognise many of the archetypes, but in a way that seems like welcoming an old friend. Although this first installment is rather short, McGill already begins to establish dimension to his farmiliar characters. Nik and his friends are dissatisfied and outcast -- homesick (Nik), picked on (his brother Tim), refugees (the friends). They are all smart and skilled and are loyal friends, so when faced with the possibility of another world and another time and lots of magic -- they more than willing to put doubt behind them and take the leap. My only minor issue with the book is the ending. I know the author originally wrote Nikolas and Company as one longer book, then decided to break it up into multiple; and it makes for a jarring ending-that's-not-really-an-ending.
The tone of this middle grade to early YA book is similar to the Percy Jackson books, and it's worth checking out or -- if it's not your kind of book -- passing along to your sci-fi/fantasy/adventure reading son/daughter/niece/nephew/student Full disclosure: it was recommended to me by a friend of the author, and I'm glad I took him up on the recommendation. Bottom line: a light, fun and fast-paced read.
The tone of this middle grade to early YA book is similar to the Percy Jackson books, and it's worth checking out or -- if it's not your kind of book -- passing along to your sci-fi/fantasy/adventure reading son/daughter/niece/nephew/student Full disclosure: it was recommended to me by a friend of the author, and I'm glad I took him up on the recommendation. Bottom line: a light, fun and fast-paced read.
July 4, 2012
I don’t read fantasy books. At all. It’s not my thing. I don’t watch sci-fi/fantasy movies or TV shows. I just don’t get them. I can’t follow them. I don’t even give them a chance. Then, Kevin McGill contacted me and I read the first few chapters of Nikolas & Company: The Merman & the Moon Forgotten. And I was instantly hooked. It’s almost like this book was written as my introduction to the sci-fi/fantasy genre.
McGill has an interesting take on the Earth-Moon relationship, one that seems plausible, yet fantastical at the same time. We’re dropped into a dystopian-future society where the Geneva virus has wreaked havoc on the populace. It’s a harsh, and prejudiced, but it is what they know. Though we are only very briefly introduced to Nikolas & Company, you tell right off that there is a strong friendship between them all, a depth of friendship that sincere and honest.
Though the writing was choppy at times, I was able to follow the story. Even, all the different names, places, etc. were distinct enough that I was able to keep up with it all. Which is a near miracle to me, because with most movies of this genre, the names alone would be enough to have me puzzled. Thank you for not loosing me, Kevin!
At the end we have a cliffhanger, which I’m not usually a fan of. But it was appropriate, and now I can't wait to read Episode 2, When Boats Breathe and Cities Speak!
McGill has an interesting take on the Earth-Moon relationship, one that seems plausible, yet fantastical at the same time. We’re dropped into a dystopian-future society where the Geneva virus has wreaked havoc on the populace. It’s a harsh, and prejudiced, but it is what they know. Though we are only very briefly introduced to Nikolas & Company, you tell right off that there is a strong friendship between them all, a depth of friendship that sincere and honest.
Though the writing was choppy at times, I was able to follow the story. Even, all the different names, places, etc. were distinct enough that I was able to keep up with it all. Which is a near miracle to me, because with most movies of this genre, the names alone would be enough to have me puzzled. Thank you for not loosing me, Kevin!
At the end we have a cliffhanger, which I’m not usually a fan of. But it was appropriate, and now I can't wait to read Episode 2, When Boats Breathe and Cities Speak!
October 15, 2012
This book is so much fun to read, you will be sad when your time with these well thought out characters is over. You want engaging?? You got it! You want fast paced?? You got it! Want great characters and humor on top of that?? You got it! The MERMAN AND THE MOON FORGOTTEN, with its wonderful illustrations by Carlyle McCullough flows easily from one scene to the next, which makes for easy reading. The first two to three chapters are a little confusing, but then the story gets supercalafragalistical, peeps! Kevin is a magical user of onomatopoeia which I loved. Grung, grung, grung, grung, grung, grung. He's a master at this. From the sound of grinding chains to PHFIT! Bodacious! With merpeople and characters you actually pull for. Especially 14 year-old Nick who wants to return to the moon. Kevin plops you right into his world of hovercars and lizardskin. There'sadeadbodyheadonmylap! There'sadeadbodyheadonmylap! Excellent! I was thoroughly tickled to visit Kevin's fantasy world. His writing style is awesome too. I felt as though I would see a creature standing next to me any moment. He pulled me in and never let me go until I sadly finished the story. I really didn't mind waiting on the next installment, because I know I get to be in Kevin's vivid, imaginative, world once again.
June 8, 2012
Nothing is what it seems. Merpeople riding carriages and waltzing about on land with automaton legs, cities crying out to their stewards of impending dangers while a dangerous virus hits the countryside where the ill are sent to places for organ harvesting. This is the world where 14 year-old Nick lives and all he wants to do is go back to the moon.
I have to admit, before I could snuggle up under my blankies with this fantastical book, my son beat me to it. He read it in a single day and raved. I had to see what was up.
Kevin McGill has a refreshingly fresh perspective in world-building and I enjoyed the depths he took his character development as well. I enjoyed the jaunty dialogue the characters shared as well as the dark villains that had hunted poor Nick.
This is a quick read that had me wanting more.
I have to admit, before I could snuggle up under my blankies with this fantastical book, my son beat me to it. He read it in a single day and raved. I had to see what was up.
Kevin McGill has a refreshingly fresh perspective in world-building and I enjoyed the depths he took his character development as well. I enjoyed the jaunty dialogue the characters shared as well as the dark villains that had hunted poor Nick.
This is a quick read that had me wanting more.
August 7, 2012
What a fantastic book - and I use that word in the literal sense! I have to admit, I nearly didn't get past the first couple of chapters, but I'm damn glad I did. It's adventure filled with tons of imagination and action, and one of the most fun things I've read this year. It's a civilization on the moon that features bizarre re-imaginings of mythical creatures, mermaids with steam-powered artificial legs, and cities that talk telepathically. I was hooked, always wanting to know what new wonderful idea he was going to come up with in the next chapter.
The only reason I'm not giving this five stars is that some of the school-y type stuff, or the bits clearly aimed at teenage girls didn't work for me.
Well recommended for people who enjoy YA fantasy.
The only reason I'm not giving this five stars is that some of the school-y type stuff, or the bits clearly aimed at teenage girls didn't work for me.
Well recommended for people who enjoy YA fantasy.
June 25, 2013
This story is awesome!
First of all, Kevin does a fabulous job of putting you smack dab in the middle of the story with his wonderful use of setting, and the flow and pacing of his storytelling are spot on. And this story is futuristic, so that's quite a feat to accomplish without sounding like you're just describing a Star Trek episode. And the world Kevin created is filled with creatures of all kinds. My favorite creatures? The humans. I absolutely loved the teens in this story. They're witty, they're brave when they have to be, they mess up, they try again, and they talk to each other like real teens talk to each other. I felt like following them around just to listen to their banter some more. Don't get me wrong, there's adventure in this story too. Nikolas takes his troop on a mission to ... well, you'll just have to get the books to find out.
First of all, Kevin does a fabulous job of putting you smack dab in the middle of the story with his wonderful use of setting, and the flow and pacing of his storytelling are spot on. And this story is futuristic, so that's quite a feat to accomplish without sounding like you're just describing a Star Trek episode. And the world Kevin created is filled with creatures of all kinds. My favorite creatures? The humans. I absolutely loved the teens in this story. They're witty, they're brave when they have to be, they mess up, they try again, and they talk to each other like real teens talk to each other. I felt like following them around just to listen to their banter some more. Don't get me wrong, there's adventure in this story too. Nikolas takes his troop on a mission to ... well, you'll just have to get the books to find out.
July 30, 2011
For a first novel, it really blew me away. It deserves the five stars! I thought it reminiscent of Artemis Fowl or The Hunchback Assignments, great YA fantasy, funny, a very unique premise, very well written, great descriptions, and a great band of heros. I think this would also make an awesome graphic novel! I'm eager to read the next segment. I sped-read this first section because it was so engaging.
Though I know the author--he helped me out as a teacher with a boy's literacy event (a great event by the way)--I'm not just giving him the 5 stars out of courtesy! This book is really great. I wish great things for him and I expect they will happen because this book is so well done and deserves it!
Though I know the author--he helped me out as a teacher with a boy's literacy event (a great event by the way)--I'm not just giving him the 5 stars out of courtesy! This book is really great. I wish great things for him and I expect they will happen because this book is so well done and deserves it!
July 10, 2011
The book is very light and easygoing. The characters are enjoyable and they make a great team!My fav character is Caroline, she seems like she would be a genuine person and how awesome would that be to have a friend who could cook you anything you wanted?My only problem would be the beginning, it was somewhat confusing and I felt a little random? But from what I have read of the book, it's really great! Can't wait to read the rest! So what did I give the preview? 4 stars!
December 30, 2012
"Enticing and Amazing"... These are the opening reviews my 11 year old son chose to write when asked to create a book jacket summary and review for a school project. Sethie chose his own book and is now hooked on the series. As a constant video/computer gamer, it is phenomenal to see him immersed in these books. He loves this series so much that he's been sharing his books with other boys in his class and asked the school librarian to carry it. Highly recommended by this family!
June 29, 2011
Once I started reading this 'First Look' I couldn't stop. its Fantasy with a enough grounding in our world to be enjoyable even to those not steeped in the full genre. All it takes is a bit of imagination. Rest assured I'm eagerly awaiting the September release date to see just what happens next.
December 29, 2012
A Y/A sci-fantasy novel, Nikolas & Company is the first in a series. The story moved quickky although I was a bit dismayed at the amount of characters involved.
I liked the story and will most probably look in to the 2nd story. The author ends the book wih a major cliffhanger in which I actually said to myself, gee I didnt see that coming!
I liked the story and will most probably look in to the 2nd story. The author ends the book wih a major cliffhanger in which I actually said to myself, gee I didnt see that coming!
March 1, 2013
A very fun adventure that had a little bit of everything. The best part of this story for me was the interactions between the young characters and the dripping sarcasm that was comically laced through every scene. Another reviewer commented on this story's similarities with the movie "Goonies" and I would have to agree in the best of ways. I look forward to reading more by this author.
August 4, 2011
This outstanding story premise has great characters and a load of charm. It's one of the best YA novels I've come across. When the full novel comes out and I've read it, I'll do a proper review. I'm anxious to read the rest of it, but I have to wait (sigh) until Kevin releases it in September.
August 20, 2011
Love it! I can't wait for the full book so I can know what's going on! :)
You did a great job Kevin! First I was confused as hell but then it all came together and I'm so excited for the finished product. :D
You did a great job Kevin! First I was confused as hell but then it all came together and I'm so excited for the finished product. :D
September 11, 2012
Even though the opening three chapters confused me a bit, I got over it. The first of a series, this is a great, fast-paced, wickedly fantastical story that bubbles with humor and great characters. Totally enjoyed it.
February 27, 2016
For young adult book the story was actually intriguing. I can't wait to see what the second book brings.
March 2, 2015
Very good world building.
I couldn't put it down. I must read the second one. I wonder what Hayley's ( too complicated of a word to spell) is?
I couldn't put it down. I must read the second one. I wonder what Hayley's ( too complicated of a word to spell) is?
October 31, 2015
I enjoyed this light, easy YA fantasy novel but really wish it didn't end so abruptly! Moving on to book 2...
February 11, 2016
Kevin Mcgill has a refreshingly fresh perspective in world-building and i enjoyed the depths he took his character development. I enjoyed the dialogue the characters shared as well as the bad guys.
April 5, 2012
Review soon . . .
January 9, 2019
This book was decent (I would give it more of a 2.5 star rating), but not something that I would read over and over again. At some points the story line just didn't make any sense, like you needed to have read another book before this- even though this is the first one. Other points I felt that they had written it with some detail, but eventually just took chunks of it out. This caused some of the more important parts to be confusing. However, I did enjoy the storyline and the creativity of the novel, it just needed some more explanation.
April 26, 2019
This book was a pretty good adventure. The characters were very one dimensional, and I found it weird that the author, through Nick, acknowledged this fact and then Caroline said everybody isn’t just one thing - but no one ever proved to be multifaceted.
I really enjoyed a lot of the metaphors in this book. They were extremely descriptive and funny.
Kind of annoyed that it ends in the middle of the story though. A lot of series books do this, and it bothers me every time.
I really enjoyed a lot of the metaphors in this book. They were extremely descriptive and funny.
Kind of annoyed that it ends in the middle of the story though. A lot of series books do this, and it bothers me every time.
April 6, 2012
From the very beginning, the Reader is presented with a world that promises a great amount of beauty, excitement, and mystery. Classic stagecoaches, Neo-Victorian machinery and decor, and a city of mer-people that manage to feel quite new and different from all other mer-people Authors have populated their stories with. While the writing style itself is not necessarily the world's greatest, I admit that I am captivated by the world of Mon in a way I wasn't quite expecting.
Meanwhile, the chapters that take place on a futuristic Earth are less enchanting. There were elements to this Earth that felt a little bit like "The Giver," which I liked, but certainly compared to Mon, I found Earth to be kind of boring and events a little hard to follow. But I recognize the importance of these parts to the overall story, and maybe in making these chapters less alluring than Mon, the Author has managed to make the Reader understand and sympathize with Nikolas's desire to leave Earth. I certainly would not have wanted to stay.
The characters present a wide variety to choose from in terms of who to like and dislike. I automatically loved Yeri - he has a sense of humor that felt natural and was genuinely funny. It didn't feel like the Author was trying to make him funny, but just wrote what was appropriate for his character, and thus Yeri felt one hundred percent real. Not that the other characters seem fake. The dialogue reads exactly the way people talk, and every character has their own separate personality. And since the characters are so realistic, not all of them are likable. Tim is the most annoying - always the reluctant partner when it comes to adventure, calculating chances of survival, freaking out, whining - and Brandy is quite a bit on the prissy side. Ironically enough, I would not ask the Author to change any of that. While Tim grates on my nerves and I want to tell Brandy to just forget about her shoes, they add variety to the troupe of friends. They play their roles well; not every single character should be wonderful and perfect, after all.
"The Merman and the Moon Forgotten" is at first a little slow feeling, but by Chapter Seven things start to pick up and events that were initially confusing are explained in a coherent fashion. There is no denying that the story is strange, but it is a strange that I find oddly appealing. At first, I wasn't certain that I really would like it, but after a very short while, it started to grow on me. This first installment of a series ends on one killer of a cliffhanger, naturally, and now that everyone is awy from futuristic Earth and on Mon, I'm really looking forward to reading its sequel.
Well, done, Kevin McGill!
Meanwhile, the chapters that take place on a futuristic Earth are less enchanting. There were elements to this Earth that felt a little bit like "The Giver," which I liked, but certainly compared to Mon, I found Earth to be kind of boring and events a little hard to follow. But I recognize the importance of these parts to the overall story, and maybe in making these chapters less alluring than Mon, the Author has managed to make the Reader understand and sympathize with Nikolas's desire to leave Earth. I certainly would not have wanted to stay.
The characters present a wide variety to choose from in terms of who to like and dislike. I automatically loved Yeri - he has a sense of humor that felt natural and was genuinely funny. It didn't feel like the Author was trying to make him funny, but just wrote what was appropriate for his character, and thus Yeri felt one hundred percent real. Not that the other characters seem fake. The dialogue reads exactly the way people talk, and every character has their own separate personality. And since the characters are so realistic, not all of them are likable. Tim is the most annoying - always the reluctant partner when it comes to adventure, calculating chances of survival, freaking out, whining - and Brandy is quite a bit on the prissy side. Ironically enough, I would not ask the Author to change any of that. While Tim grates on my nerves and I want to tell Brandy to just forget about her shoes, they add variety to the troupe of friends. They play their roles well; not every single character should be wonderful and perfect, after all.
"The Merman and the Moon Forgotten" is at first a little slow feeling, but by Chapter Seven things start to pick up and events that were initially confusing are explained in a coherent fashion. There is no denying that the story is strange, but it is a strange that I find oddly appealing. At first, I wasn't certain that I really would like it, but after a very short while, it started to grow on me. This first installment of a series ends on one killer of a cliffhanger, naturally, and now that everyone is awy from futuristic Earth and on Mon, I'm really looking forward to reading its sequel.
Well, done, Kevin McGill!
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