DI Nikki Gill has recently moved to Oxford, working for Thames Valley Police. Previously at the Met, she has been sent to new pastures despite having a stellar record. This is due to a tragic shooting that left her traumatised. The powers that be thought the move would be for the best.
The book opens with action from the start and it is a fast paced crime procedure whodunnit. The first in a brand new series, the collection gets off to a flying start, with a good premise.
However, clunky dialogue, with conversations such as “can I ask when this happened?” “ I cannot go into details of the case, but may I please ask where were you between the hours of four and eight yesterday evening?” And “He conveniently forgot to mention this, didn’t he?” Says Nikki. Monty shrugged. “I wasn’t there, guv”. Nikki, “”I know. I wonder why he lied to us?”.
Then there are the haphazard timelines, if Nikki was 8 years old 30 years ago, she couldn’t possibly have been 18 years old 16 years ago.
The scenes that jump all over the place and back again need serious editing.
The names were a laugh though, Sue Pollard, Terence Conran, Len Deighton to name but a few!
All in all, a quick easy read, but not without lots of errors, nothing a good editing wouldn’t sort out.
Thank you NetGalley.