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Monsters' Sin Club #1

The Orc Lord of Praise

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The massive monster satisfies my every forbidden desire. But can I tempt an orc billionaire to bind our hearts?

When my human boyfriend dumps me, he has the nerve to call me boring in bed. Me? Boring? Ha! He has no idea what I really want. I’m burning to meet a monster, and I know just where to do it.

The Monsters’ Sin Club is the hottest “play” club in town and exactly the place to find everything I’ve been missing.

But I never expected to catch the eye of its billionaire orc owner.

Vorn is seven feet of green muscle and temptation. And when the hot as hell orc growls in my ear that he’ll take me in front of everyone, I burn. With one sentence, he’s cut straight to my naughtiest fantasy—I love an audience. Then he unlocks a new desire the first time he tells me I’m his good girl.

Time after time, he makes my body sing, upping our public shows with toys, bindings, and magic spells. And once away from the audience, Vorn gives me heart-melting aftercare. Soon, I want to be something other than his play partner. How do I get my billionaire orc to make me his good girl forever?

95 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 6, 2023

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Rosemary Dark

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I write monster romance stories with lots of spice and heart-melting aftercare. These big males know exactly how to treat a woman and satisfy her every desire.

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Profile Image for Alien Peen Fiend.
60 reviews22 followers
July 4, 2023
HOLY ORC DICK THIS BOOK WAS HOTT AF. If you like insta-love, exhibitionism , BDSM, heart melting aftercare, and literal BUCKETS of orc c*m, this book is for you

Zoe is a closeted “monster fucker” with a exhibitionist kink. After a bad break up with a classically terrible human man, she decides to go to the infamous monster sex club, Monsters Sin, to finally live out her fantasy. Enter Vorn, club owner, billionaire,Dom, and fellow exhibitionist, and man do things kick off from there! I loved that Zoe was a monster fucker, giving a little nod to all us monster lovers, and Vorn was an absolutely sexy af orc daddy. I also really LOVED the lore and unique take of orcs, dwarves, ect., totally fascinating and unique concept it’s making my brain buzz!

I typically don’t have a exhibitionism kink, but I’m starting to think maybe I don’t know wtf I’m talking about because holy CRAP was this book HOTT. The orc dick size difference, the literal firing hose of c*m (there is a splash zone), the Dom/sub dynamic? Sign me tf up! Holy hell. With multiple different spicy scenes, there is one that is very….Loki-like? This is the only way I can describe it without spoiling it, but holy crap that was shocking but amazing at the same time! Absolutely steamy and filthy.🤌🏻💚

I really loved these two MCs and they are honestly really inspiring sexually- very much giving “live your life fully, find your pleasure, and be you” vibes! As someone who is demisexual, I don’t typically read more erotica leaning books. While I would have liked a little more development of their relationship outside of kinks personally, I still felt their love and tenderness to each other and enjoyed the story immensely! And frankly, I’m don’t think that’s what this book was meant to be about anyways, which totally valid! Just be aware this leans more insta-lust/love erotica, and they fall in love mostly from their shared kinks.

If your looking for a quick, smutty, kinky, read- I highly recommend picking this one up!


CW: BDSM, exhibition, brief attempted assault of FMC (non-sexual), shitty manipulative ex (talked about briefly), lots of fluids, rimming, praise


Levels:
Alien-ness: 👽👽🔘🔘🔘 (Ridges. HUGE. Lots of c*m)
MCs Together: 🫂🫂🫂🔘🔘 (They meet fairly early, around 24%)
Burn: 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔘: (First intimate encounter around 30%)
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🔘 (This book is definitely high spice, 3-4 intimate scenes at least.)
Sweet: 🧁🧁🧁🔘🔘 (That aftercare was melt worthy.)
Angst: 😈🔘🔘🔘🔘 (Not really angsty, maybe a very tiny amount.)
Action: 🔘🔘🔘🔘🔘 (No action.)
Profile Image for Kate V.
1,848 reviews370 followers
July 29, 2024
3.5 stars!

A smutty monster romance worth reading! Vorn is a billionaire orc that owns a club with a kinky secret. His fellow orc friends are always looking for their “match.”

Zoe is a down on her luck human female that decides to check out Vorn’s club. As soon as she enters, he knows she’s his and wants to introduce her to the pleasures of the flesh and how great they could be together.

The more Vorn and Zoe spend together the deeper they fall.

“You like that, don’t you? You like them watching you take my cock. Whose cunt is this? Whose cunt is my cock filling in front of all these people?”

“Yours,” I gasped. “Only yours.”

“Yes. It’s mine!” he roared, baring his tusks at the crowd. “She’s mine!”


A little bit of action and a whole lot of kink, this just hit my monster romance buttons!
Profile Image for Poppy || Monster Lover.
1,822 reviews512 followers
February 19, 2024
Smutty and kinky short

So the dirty talk was on point in this book. All of the praise and kinky exhibitionism was also on point. But the romance was a bit lackluster.

Spice: 5/5

Triggers: fat phobia, emotional abuse
Profile Image for jennifer | offmyredcarpet.
556 reviews44 followers
November 13, 2023
DNFd at 33%. Did not like the writing style. Would have appreciated the author give some page real estate to developing characters instead of so much talk about body types.
Profile Image for brooke_and_books.
299 reviews
June 28, 2023
This was a very spicy, delicious monster novella!
Zoe our female mc is exactly what Vorn is looking for! He is the co-owner of - monster s€x club and in walks Zoe after being dumped by her ex. He said she was boring in bed but she really loves being watched and so does Vorn. If you love some yummy monster smut then this is for you!
Profile Image for Ryann Rice.
1,482 reviews11 followers
October 8, 2023
This book was hot AF and so fast paced. I wanted Orc smut and I got it
Profile Image for Books_n_tea.
62 reviews3 followers
July 2, 2023
Rating - 🌟🌟🌟🌟
This book set my whole Kindle on fire. It was so hot and steamy.

The plot was straightforward and there was no third-act breakup. Both Zoe & Vorn accepted their feelings for each other.

Zoe is our monterfudger queen who is on her journey to re-embrace her lush curvy body and her pleasure. Vorn is an Orc lord and Co-owner of the Night/seggs club. There were many magic elements and monsters that I found fascinating.

The book was a quick read and I enjoyed reading all the hot scenes.

Read if you like -
Billionaire Orc Lord MMC x Plus Size FMC
Paranormal Romance
Seggs club setting
Spice with some plot
Exhibitionism
Bondage
Swings
Spanking
DP
Claiming bite
Lot of Praise
Good aftercare


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Profile Image for Mads.
253 reviews45 followers
July 23, 2023
It’s honestly been too long since I’ve read a monster romance. This was short, spicy, and satisfying. Vorn is a dom billionaire sex club owning orc. Zoe is a human tired of human men and wanting someone more monstrous. They share an exhibitionism kink. Loved the communication, steamy scenes and after care. What I didn’t really enjoy was the weight aspect. Zoe is a larger lady, but what bothered me a bit was some of the weight comments. I’m all for embracing your curves and your body, but no need to place so much emphasis on thinner women vs you.

This was insta lust, more erotic than romantic, fast paced, and somehow they’re just in love after boning for several days. I felt like a little more emotional intimacy could have been added.
Profile Image for Jess *lovetolovebooks*.
685 reviews149 followers
July 29, 2023
What a fun time that was! It’s short but packs the heat. A magical sex club that’s run by a billionaire Orc who has an exhibition and praise kink? Definitely a fan of those tropes. It’s also got the usual instalove feel which is often found in monster romances. While it works better in some novellas than others, I didn’t mind it here. It felt a tad bit rushed but who am I kidding? I’m here for the orc peen so I can’t judge too harshly when it delivered what was promised. Overall I liked it and can absolutely see myself reading future books from this author!

What to expect:
-billionaire Orc
-plus sized FMC
-monster sex club
-Exhibitionism/Voyeurism
-use of sex equipment (swing, spanking bench ,etc)
-restraints/bondage
-toys
-magical mirror = menage
-mating bite
-praise
-novella length

4⭐️ 4🔥
Profile Image for Artemis Cienfuegos.
1,028 reviews6 followers
June 30, 2023
Oh my goodness I am melting. I need every character in this book all the Lords I need their books give me more give me more. Perfect amount of spice and I didn’t need a plot. all I needed is these two together
Profile Image for V.P. Nightshade.
Author 17 books56 followers
May 25, 2024
Love Orcs

Spicy, kinky, Instalove and hot Orc Lords, what more do you need in a fairly short novel? This is just over an hour in read time, and for a smutty little story has some decent world building and some character development. A highly enjoyable read. On to book two!
Profile Image for Michelle David.
2,559 reviews13 followers
July 10, 2023
Hot

Short, sweet and definitely steamy enough to knock your socks off. I love the orc definition of sin so much.
Profile Image for Bookish Beanss.
122 reviews1 follower
January 3, 2025
This was something. Spice was good. Enjoyed this short story. But the writing could have been much much better.
Profile Image for Cas ✨.
817 reviews7 followers
July 16, 2023
I received an ARC copy of this tasty monster morsel and I am leaving this review voluntarily. Rosemary Dark promises monster males that know how to satisfy their women as well as heart-warming aftercare and I think she definitely delivered on those promises.

The Orc Lord of Praise hits all the smutty marks in terms of spice/k!nk and steam, I like that the story (and it sounds like the series) revolves around a s3x club run by orc royalty because it gives the author a chance to really focus on specific k!nks, which is something I haven’t seen much of in the monster romance/erotica realm. This first installment focuses on praise & exhibitionism, it sounds like the next may be spanking from the hints in the book. 👀

I do think this falls more in the erotica category, the character’s histories/lives and personalities are not really explored beyond the basics that bring them together and while they feel some sort of mating pull that results in an HEA that’s not really explored either. So just know going into it that this is truly monster smut.
Profile Image for Mary Mitchell.
1,020 reviews9 followers
January 3, 2026
Spicy Fun

What a spicy fun book. I really enjoyed these characters and the way the author made this world both old and new. This was a fast fun read and I am glad to see more books in this world to read.
Profile Image for Brittany (Brit.tea.reads).
1,473 reviews433 followers
July 8, 2023
Zoe has always wondered what it would be like to sleep with an ORC, and after her breakup with her boyfriend, she hears about The Monsters’ Sin Club, the hottest play club in town. This is the perfect place for her to try out all her wildest fantasies and more.

𝐿𝑜𝑜𝓀 𝒶𝓉 𝓎𝑜𝓊, 𝓉𝒶𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝓂𝑒 𝒾𝓃𝓉𝑜 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝓂𝟢𝓊𝓉𝒽 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝓈𝓊𝒸𝒽 𝒶 𝑔𝑜𝑜𝒹 𝑔𝒾𝓇𝓁.

Zoe’s ultimate fantasy is being watched while having s3x.

𝐼 𝓌𝒶𝓃𝓉 𝓉𝑜 𝒸𝓁𝒶𝒾𝓂 𝓎𝑜𝓊, 𝓂𝒶𝓇𝓀 𝓎𝑜𝓊 𝒶𝓈 𝓂𝒾𝓃𝑒.

At the club, she meets Vorn, a tall, sexy green Orc who just so happens to be part owner of the club. He also shares the same kink as she does, and sparks fly and things start to heat up when they both start to explore each other’s bodies.

𝒲𝒽𝑒𝓃 𝐼 𝓅𝓊𝓉 𝒶 𝒷𝒶𝒷𝓎 𝒾𝓃 𝓎𝑜𝓊, 𝒾𝓉 𝓌𝒾𝓁𝓁 𝒷𝑒 𝒷𝑒𝒸𝒶𝓊𝓈𝑒 𝓎𝑜𝓊 𝒷𝑒𝑔 𝒻𝑜𝓇 𝓂𝓎 𝓈𝑒𝑒𝒹 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝒶 𝑔𝑜𝑜𝒹 𝑔𝒾𝓇𝓁.

If you are looking for a short, fun, and smutty monster read, I highly recommend this book. Trust me, you won’t be disappointed.

I can’t wait to read the other guy's books in this series.
Profile Image for Amy Dale.
623 reviews18 followers
July 5, 2023
ARC Review
I really loved this book! If you liked all the steam and club stuff from A Lady of Rooksgrave Manor or the noisy masked rockstar book Rhage, this will be your new favourite!

The writing style drew me in immediately, it's concise with no unnecessary clutter or offshoots, no extraneous characters, just straight to the good stuff, it's vivid, friendly and engaging.
I love the beginning with the girly gossip and curiosity between the heroine and her bff as they wonder what being with a monster would be like.

Okay, I was So excited that once again we have a girl who's chubby and actually described that way, she has a 'plump stomach'! And I was even more excited when our orc lord is revealed to have absolutely no interest in the very thin ideal of beauty humans have, he wants a squishy, curvy girl he won't break when he lays on. *dreamy sigh* Heck yes!! I felt like maybe someone could love me one day too! For once I was the beauty standard. 🥹
I love both characters, she's very sweet and relatable and he's very tall and intimidating but he's actually incredibly protective, tender, attentive and thoughtful, but a complete beast during intimacy, perfect really!

The story is essentially just pure smut at the naughty club and outside of it. Both characters are exhibitionists and there's at least 3 full length scenes of them being watched on various apparatuses in the club. I was so excited because I Love public scenes in books, but I think I'm learning from this one and Rooksgrave that I actually enjoy it more when it's humiliating and kind of against their will, I don't know, l think I wanted the audience to be jeering and shouting crass things or whistling,etc, but they just watched pretty silently so it was harder for my imagination to click into the public effect, until one part where the hero growled at them to show ownership. Having never seen some of the devices used, it was a bit hard for me to understand some of the positions too so I lost a bit of the swoon. But, it was amazing and super dirty, super unique and while there's a bit of spanking and whip use, it was light and he didn't hurt her. And there's more romantic smut outside of the club.
There's so much aftercare! 🥹 He carries her off and cleans everything up and it's really sweet. I loved their romance, I want someone to care for me like that!

I must mention, there's a troll bouncer at the club and you know me and trolls 😍 I'm really hoping he might get a story one day too!

Really exciting, modern, vivid story that sizzles!
Profile Image for Nevena.
927 reviews27 followers
July 4, 2023
🔥 “You’re being such a good girl for me, letting me put you on display. Can you see that? Can you see them all watching you be my good girl?”
~~~
I loved Zoe so much! She’s fun, feisty and absolutely gorgeous. And, after being dumped by her ex for being boring in bed, she embarks on a journey to re-embrace herself, her curves, her passions and desires. Even more, she’s so ready to spice things up and have her way with monsters (don’t we all, girl!). Zoe is so amazing and just needs the right male to prove to her that she’s perfect exactly as she is.

And then, there’s Vorn. Billionaire extraordinaire, one of the owners of Monsters’ Sin Club, one of the Lords of Sin. The huge orc is dominant, possessive and fiercely protective. And he’s also caring, thoughtful and kind. Vorn is a magnificent male and I couldn’t help but adore every single thing about him!

I absolutely loved everything that happened between Zoe and Vorn! From the moment they met, their attraction was undeniable. And, even better, their kinks matched so perfectly! Those two were amazing together and I loved every passionate moment they shared! Oh, I was all in for every kinky and monstrously naughty delight. And there was also the heart-melting aftercare! 🫠🫠🫠 Vorn can call me his good girl anytime, anywhere… He and Zoe were so perfect together and I couldn’t get enough of either of them!

In addition, the worldbuilding was phenomenal! I loved this world after the Conjunction, when monster and human worlds merged. And I loved all the creatures we got to meet. Even more, I wouldn’t mind joining a monster fudgers forum and I’d love to visit Monsters’ Sin Club myself. And hopefully get invited to The Sinner’s Lair, too. 😏

Overall, The Orc Lord of Praise is fun, naughty, sweet and kinky read and a spectacular start of the series.

I couldn’t put it down and absolutely loved every page of it!
And I cannot wait to see what will happen in Monsters’ Sin Club next!
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370 reviews7 followers
July 2, 2023
The blurb itself is enough for me to decide that I want to be a sinner, with 15 chapters that deliver a perfect mix of romance and kinks.

Imagine a club full of different creatures indulging in their desires and kinks, with one particular area of the club where voyeurs and exhibitionists find their perfect haven.

The magic mirror scene! WTF! 🔥🤩 That was incredibly hot! That scene lives rent-free in my mind.

Aside from the spicy scenes, Vorn's tender care for Zoe strikes the perfect balance after the exhilarating and passionate moments they share. I love how Vorn protected the Orc claiming bite, keeping it private. "As much as my instincts wanted the public exhibition of our sex, I did not want my claiming to be reduced to a spectacle. Zoe was too precious for that."

The Orc Lord of Praise grants me exclusive access to the inner worlds of both Vorn and Zoe, providing an intimate glimpse into their thoughts and emotions.
Profile Image for Camilla.
266 reviews29 followers
July 8, 2023
A fun spicy novella with some light BDSM elements and plenty of Orc juice.

A fun idea, but the writing didn't quite work for me - it just didn't flow very well in my opinion. I love reading about curvy heroines who then feel small and dainty with their huge monster men, and this novella didn't disappoint me there.

This novella had promise, but didn't quite nail the delicate balance of having plenty of smut but still making the "I love you"s make sense at the end. It didn't feel like the main characters actually knew each other, so the claiming and "I love you" didn't feel warranted for me. I wish there had been more focus on page for the characters to form a connection outside of the bedroom, and maybe a little less focus on what the heroine is wearing.

But, there was plenty of spice, and the spice was fun and hot. If you want a spicy monster novella without a whole lot of relationship building, this might be up your alley.
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206 reviews28 followers
July 3, 2023
The Orc Lord of Praise is a short, sweet, and high heat read!

Zoe is just out of a bad relationship and looking for some fun. She's always been interested in monsters and decides to spend an evening at the Monsters' Sin Club.

Vorn is one of the Orc Lords who runs the club, and he's looking for someone who will match his desires and intensity. When he's sees Zoe, he knows he's found the person he's been looking for.

I love orc romances, and this one had everything I wanted all packed into a quick read. I loved the world Rosemary Dark has created, and I would happily run away to live in it. The spicy scenes were high heat with and were balanced wth the sweet aftercare scenes, which often led to more heat. I enjoyed the Fated mates and fast pace of the relationship.

This book is a great read when you're looking for something quick and steamy!
982 reviews6 followers
November 6, 2025
For a book that takes place at a sex club and is centered around BDSM this felt very….safe. Yes there’s a sex scene at the end with a mirrored version of the MMC so she gets a threesome and yes there’s A LOT of sex but the scenes themselves don’t have the emotional connection behind them which made them feel very 2 dimension. I mean during every scene the FMC “hears the rustle of clothing” and all of a sudden she remembers there’s a room full of fucking people watching them. The one kink that she’s CONSTANTLY reminding us she craves and wants and she can’t even remember it’s happening. Not to mention that even though this faceless crowd is mention they aren’t really included in the story. I don’t know if that makes sense. I just did not find the writing to be very good. No depth, no emotion, just words and cum.
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834 reviews11 followers
November 23, 2025
3.5⭐️
🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Vibes
- Fine, Good Time

Dogs don't even get called a "good girl" this much
After Zoe got dumped by her shitty boyfriend his parting shot was how she was boring in bed, but she's secretly a "monster fucker" with an exhibitionist kink. She's hasn't had the opportunity to indulge in that fantasy until now. She searches several forums until someone recommends the Monsters' Sin Club where she catches the eye of one of the owners and an exhibitionist himself, Vron. Vron is an orc and no-one that has come into his club has caught his eye in a while until Zoe. He is determined to show her and everyone else all the pleasure he can bring her. I liked the way the exhibitionism was done but the praise kink that is incorporated into it lacked creativity. The term "good girl" was used so much is lost the effect. I like a fictional prise kink as much as the next basic bitch but can we mix it up a bit.

Tropes
-Monster
-Billionaire
-Sex Club
-Plus Size
Profile Image for Alarming Allegory.
47 reviews5 followers
December 27, 2023
I understand that this is a short novella, but even the tiniest amount of character development would have gone a long way here.

There is so much here that could have been expanded upon, yet the author chooses instead to spend most of the time describing body types and fashion choices.

The writing is clunky and repetitive, there are only so many times that one can use the words primal and possessive before they become meaningless and boring, and this story hits that limit fast.
Can we also spare a moment to think about the poor FMC and her cramping thighs? Because lord knows they are cramping with the amount of times she 'squeezes her thighs together'

Honestly, the whole story reads like a horny personal fantasy. It lacks substance but at least there is spice, I guess.
Profile Image for Kate Presley.
223 reviews7 followers
January 9, 2024
Really quick, 90ish pages.

I wish the author would have focused more on the relationship building between the two characters more so than all of the details on every outfit they wore, body types of everyone, etc. I know that back ground and visual information is important, but to me there was so little in the way of dialogue between the two outside of the voyeur acts and a few cuddles and it just made it feel extremely rushed. I don't care what color her shoes are, I care about the depth of characters outside of their physical appearance and kinks.

You won't find depth in the characters, but you will find insta love and voyeurism kinks, oh and like every outfit mapped out for you if that's your vibe.
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