Disclaimer: I'm all for reverse harem and in no way do I intend on slut shaming. The only problem I have is with the author, not the characters. [I would say spoiler alert but I won’t bother because reading this review would save you from reading the book]
Ok I don't think I’ve ever given a book a 1 star - not even crappy fan fiction or After (fan pic made into novel) which promotes an unhealthy and abusive relationship. This is worse. It has every single YA cliché and bad trope you could think of. I was really excited to read this book because I love reverse harem in anime, but it clearly didn't translate well in books. Cringe-fest.
Premise: A girl moves into a new town (right off the bat you know it’s generic as fuck) and meets one guy every day who all belong to the same friendship quad. She has a crazy mother who never lets her go out and make friends but the boys and her become friends anyway. The end.
Yup that pretty much sums it up.
The main character Sang meets a guy every chapter which the author emphasises by naming each chapter after the boy she meets. There is NO storyline despite the author’s weak attempt, which I’m guessing is because she thought she could pull it off my captivating us with the oh-so-attractive (7+) love interests. I get that her intention is to make each novel in this series more like a chapter (like Zenith) seeing as this book only has 100 pages or so, but at least make it good.
Firstly, Sang is such a special fucking snowflake. NO. The author tries and tries to make her so unique but fails and instead make her so cliché and unlikeable. Just my luck - an annoying main character yet again. Everything is about Sang - zero world building, zero storyline, zero character development. She has no personality besides being upset and self-doubting. Her mother doesn’t want her to meet and befriend people because it is dangerous and she might get raped or kidnapped. Sounds like an overprotective mother who wants the best for her child right? However, typical YA shitty family dynamic, the author had to make the parent abusive and controlling. This is my biggest problem - the unrealistic portrayal of domestic abuse, which really hits close to home. ignore pun. The mother doesn’t beat her, doesn’t verbally abuses her, doesn’t lock her up. The one thing she did was make Sang drink a cup of lemon juice and vinegar, which for the majority of the book Sang thought was the worst thing that could ever happen to her.
Quote: ’I sighed. Kota put a hand on my back, rubbing softly as I said it as loud as I was able. “My mother made me drink a glass of lemon juice and vinegar.” It was easier to say than I thought. It was like Kota’s hand on me made me feel brave.’
The author, who seems quite unintelligent, should have know that there are people who drink vinegar for healthier reasons. Granted, lemon and vinegar are acidic but having a little sore throat isn’t the end of the fucking world. But the author goes out of her way to paint mum as the villain. i.e. she yelled at Sang to go clean her room. Wow, so evil. Forgive me if I’m being insensitive, but what the fuck, get over yourself. You’re a middle class white girl, there are children in war zones wondering if they’ll live through the day. However, her hypersensitive mum never notices when Sang is out the house. How convenient. It seems like the whole abusive parents thing is only used for the convenience of the story and to make us feel bad for Sang which is so insensitive and not ‘cool’ at all. C.L. Stone LOVES to victimise Sang. For some reason, she thinks it would be cool to make her seem so fucking weak and pitiable. For goodness’ sake, she is what 16? which means she is old enough to stand up for herself to her mum but no, of course, because ‘she’s a girl, she can’t do anything about it’. She is always the damsel in distress and one guy or another or all of them always swoops in to save her. Anti feminist, borderline sexist. E.g. she was frying some bacon and a drop of hot grease popped onto her arm which is so common yet North rushes over to help her and cooks the bacon for her. GET A FUCKING GRIP, YOU AINT A FUCKING QUEEN! Not to mention the guys have to escort her every where she goes, including school because apparently half the students are from a bad neighbourhood so it isn’t safe for her. Talk about generalisation and prejudice. Even Dr free had to help her register for class cus she was incapable of queuing up. Moreover, it is extremely unrealistic how she never had a friend in her whole lifetime. I know there are loners, but even as a child you are bound to make friends or at least play with other kids. She goes on and on about how she doesn’t know how to speak to people because she has never had a friend. Shut the fuck up, you don’t need to have friends to know how to perform basic human interactions. The author makes her so innocent and naive to such a cringe extent. Yet she, and the 7 guys, blush every other page. Sang is also overly dramatic. ‘Her heart was throbbing’ because she was only allowed 2 AP classes instead of 3 that she wanted… The horror. How will she manage. (This makes American school systems look so messy and confusing.)
C.L.Stone also loves to promote the ‘I’m not like other girls.’ trope. This is fucking sexist, pitting girl against girl. What does ‘other girls’ even mean? She’s not like other girls because she doesn’t wear make up? Doesn’t like to gossip? Doesn’t like to dress up and do girly things? Newsflash, there isn’t one particular type of girl that takes up the majority of female population. Everyone is slightly different. Plus, what’s wrong with a girly girl? By saying “she’s not like other girls”, the author is basically putting down all the other girls who is so called basic and average. Fuck off.
If this still doesn’t seem sexist to you, check this out. The 7 main guys have zero personality just like Sang and are only there to serve the purpose of eye candy. They are objectified so badly with the unnecessary over-description of their appearances which make my eyes hurt from rolling. Men aren’t mere piece of meat. The author thinks she can compensate by distributing each guy with that one particular defining trait, eg the nerd, the clown, the athlete, the foodie, the musician etc Not to mention everyone is white heterosexual! BIG DEAL BREAKER FOR ME.
The insta-love disgusts me. Okay, all insta-love is bad but some can be compensated for by a good romance. BUT NOT THIS. Within the day of meeting her, each guy had respectively:
let her sleep over at his house
bought her a phone
beat up some guys for her
invited her over and played with her in his pool
washed her hair for her
brought her to his to-be-restaurant and shared his dreams
took her on a motorbike ride
In a span of a handful of days, they all act like they’ve known each other since they popped out their mums’ vaginas. No friendship/love blooms this quickly.
Quote: ‘“You are amazing, Sang. Ever since I met you, you never once asked about the strange things you saw with us, even when I could see it in your eyes that you wanted to ask. The others could see it too. You stuck with us. You’re so sweet and considerate. We don’t want you to leave.”’
I’m sorry but what the fuck did I just read. I feel personally attacked by this bullshit. How do the reasons he provided explain why she is ‘amazing’? How does 7 guys all fall for one weak excuse of a girl?
This whole book damages the young girls who read them and expect things to turn out this way. These young girls will think that they should be weak like Sang, let their parents be abusive like Sang, go with stranger they just met just because they’re attractive like Sang, have everything spoonfed to her like Sang. That is not right. What a poor role model. It only makes the author appear sad and uneducated. Yeah, I went there. Take it personally, C.L.Stone.