I disagree with the majority of the ratings for this book. Because the ratings were so high, and the books were a decent price, I went ahead and bought all three prior to reading the first. I will not ever do that again. While the story might warrant a 4.0, the writing really detracted from it. If based on writing alone, I would have given the book a 1.0. Every other page was rife with errors, misspelled words, misused words, etc., and I found it really hard to get through.
Plot:
Most of us know that Lucifer and some of his fellow angels rebelled against God and were thrown out of Heaven. In this story, some of the fallen angels were repentant, so instead of being deemed totally unworthy of returning to Heaven, their penitence was to earn their way back in by protecting humans from the demons that exist in the world. The fallen – which consist of hellhounds, vampires, gryphons, fairies, werewolves, etc. – go to Hellhouse to receive training once they become teenagers. Kasadya Levourne, a hellhound, is naturally talented, but struggles through the training because she is hardheaded and impulsive and refuses to listen to anyone’s instruction. As a result, she is temporarily “grounded,” and during her grounding, she disappears into a world that truly tests her ability to survive.
Characters:
Kasadya is the heroine of the story. While she is a strong female, she is also snarky and critical (in addition to hardheaded and impulsive), so she is sometimes hard to like. Her redeeming quality is that she cares deeply about the people around her. The other primary character is Kasadya’s instructor, Chax DeLuca, who is cold, unyielding, and pretty much unlikable. To me, that equals misunderstood and automatically makes him my favorite character. The fact that Kasadya can’t stand him makes me like him even more.
At Hellhouse, Kasadya is surrounded by a ton of different characters. A few stick out more than others. She has two roommates Lada, who is calm and rational, and Nanini who is hyper and flighty. Kasadya’s love interest in the book is Seth, who is also an instructor. Seth, while sweet, basically lacks personality, and that makes his scenes with Kasadya underwhelming. There is also Kali, your typical mean girl; I can’t give away too much about Kali without giving away any important plot developments. Two other non-Hellhouse characters appear frequently, Draco and Ballen, both of whom are demons. While they don’t appear consistently throughout the book, they do have a major impact on the plot and on Kasadya.
Writing:
So many errors. Conquered was spelled concurred in every reference. Were was spelled where. There were apostrophes on plurals, and no apostrophes on possessives. This may not bother some people, but if you are a strict grammarian, you should prepare yourself for a difficult read. Additionally, the emotions aren’t as deep as I would like them to be, and the love scenes aren’t as powerful either. It’s as if the author tells you what to feel instead of evoking those feelings through the writing.
The Bottom Line:
With all I have said, it might seem like I absolutely hated the book, and that’s not necessarily true. One of the reviewers mentioned that it was addictive, and I think that’s a good way to describe it. There were times that I didn’t want to put the book down because I did want to see what happened. (Don’t get me wrong…. There were also a couple of times I had to really motivate myself to read.) The story is way out there (if you are reading this genre of book, you probably consider that a given), and that makes the story pretty unpredictable. There is also a major cliffhanger at the end, so if you choose to go on, you will likely want to have the second book ready immediately.