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The Merlin Spiral #3

Merlin's Nightmare

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Arthur, now eighteen, is missing, and Merlin must find him before a shadowy pursuer catches him first.
With the High King and his kingdom caught in a trap of sinister deceit, Merlin has to find a way out before all is lost. Having everything to fight for, and almost nothing to fight with, Merlin and Arthur must rally Britain’s warriors against three overwhelming enemies: Saxen hordes in the south, Picti raiders in the north, and a chilling new enemy that has arisen in the west. At the same time, Morgana brings Merlin’s deepest fear to life and sets a horde of werewolves loose to destroy Britain. But when the secret purpose of this nightmare is finally revealed, will Merlin and Arthur find a way to survive—without unleashing an even greater evil?

432 pages, Paperback

First published March 25, 2014

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Robert Treskillard

9 books134 followers
I am the author of the Merlin Spiral book series based on the legends of King Arthur, published by BLINK YA Books.

Book 1: MERLIN'S BLADE
Book 2: MERLIN'S SHADOW
Book 3: MERLIN'S NIGHTMARE

MERLIN'S BLADE won the 2014 Silver Moonbeam Award in the YA Fantasy/Sci-Fi category, as well as the 2013 Grace Award.

Here is the website for my series:

http://www.EpicTales.org

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November 1, 2023
3.75⭐️

A really good conclusion-yet set up between trilogies!

I likely would’ve rated it higher if I hadn’t read it on a migraine week….
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Author 2 books178 followers
March 9, 2019
The first book will always be my favorite, but I really liked this one! I’m really liking Arthur, and I can’t wait until his books come out. 😁😁😁
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June 19, 2014






Merlin's Nightmare by Robert Treskillard
"Arthur, now eighteen, is missing, and Merlin must find him before a shadowy pursuer catches him first.
With the High King and his kingdom caught in a trap of sinister deceit, Merlin has to find a way out before all is lost. Having everything to fight for, and almost nothing to fight with, Merlin and Arthur must rally Britain’s warriors against three overwhelming enemies: Saxen hordes in the south, Picti raiders in the north, and a chilling new enemy that has arisen in the west. At the same time, Morgana brings Merlin’s deepest fear to life and sets a horde of werewolves loose to destroy Britain. But when the secret purpose of this nightmare is finally revealed, will Merlin and Arthur find a way to survive—without unleashing an even greater evil?"

Leona's Review:

This is the third book of the Merlin series by Robert Treskillard. The others are Merlin's Blade and Merlin's Shadow.
In this book Merlin now has two children by his wife, Natalenya. The years have passed from the first books. Any of the books can be read on their own. The author has The Story of Book 1, Merlin's Blade and The Story of Book 2 , Merlin's Shadow at the beginning of Merlin's Nightmare so the reader has an idea of what has happened in the previous books.

Robert Treskillard has such full descriptions of what is happening especially in the battles. This book had more war then the other two but necessary to accomplish the mission. A werewolf is also part of this book which is interesting and unusual in the Arthurian books but the Voice is also different.
The reader finds many of the same characters in the first books of the Merlin Series. Arthur, Merlin, Natalenya, Dwin, The Voice and Morgana. I liked the addition of the children in this third book; it helped make the book more personal.

Part One : Fear's Glance (page 21)
Ash, smoke, and flame: the young one looming.
Sin, spite, and hate: the sly shade luring.
Hand, soul, and heart: the black choice making.
Snare, lash, and trap: the death power waking.
Orb and fang, there at the dark demise.

Part Two: Terror's Grasp (page 159)
Battle, noise, and dust: the young one fighting;
Holy, pure, and strong: the good God calling;
Spirit, hand, and heart: the white path choosing;
Gauntlet, shield, and torc: the kingship taking;
Skinned in death, there the moon will rise.

Part Three: Nightmare's Gallows (page 283)
Faster than crow, the bleak night coming;
Blacker than coal, the dread oath binding;
Stronger than steel, the great claws gripping;
Sharper than flint, the long teeth gnashing;
Sword and stone, there the prophet outcries.

Dedicated to: For Samantha Adele, Leighton, and Ness. Psalm 5:1-12

God is also a big part of the book as the characters pray often.

One similar chant I remember when we spoke Latin in Church:
Sanctus, Sanctus, Sanctus-Dominus Deus Sabaoth.
Pleni sunt caeli et terra gloria tua.
Hosanna in excelsis.
Benedictus qui venit in nomine Domini.
Hosanna in excelsis.

A response in British:
Holy, holy, holy is the Lord-the God of mighty warriors.
Heaven and earth are filled with Thy glory.
Hosanna in the highest.
Blessed is He who cometh in the name of the Lord.
Hosanna in the highest.

There are maps in the beginning of the book and a glossary in the back (page 408). I used the glossary many times because of so many names. There is also a pronunciation guide. (page 407)

This was a harder book for me to read than the other two books in the series. It was good but so many names and activities. It still will get a 5 star rating.
This is not the end of the series; it continues with the Pendragon Series.

I received a complimentary copy from booksneeze.com to read and review. The opinions are my own.

Robert Treskillard may be reached at:

www.KingArthur.org.uk
and https://www.goodreads.com/treskillard

Many characters and happenings are based on legends and history but Merlin's Nightmare is fictional. It is good reading for young people as well as adults.
Leona Olson
www.mnleona.blogspot.com


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1,275 reviews33 followers
May 10, 2014
If there was ever a journey that forcibly hurtled you toward the fragile edges of the breaking point of the human spirit while coming up just shy of the fringes of madness then look no further than the dangerous and reckless pages of this book. You will find yourself facing your worst fears and yet discovering a courage and hope that you never thought possible. The unimaginable and impossible await you, but are you ready to answer the call of this terrifying and magnificent adventure?

By the grace of God, Merlin has finally found some peace in his life. He has been granted sixteen years of happiness and bliss with his loving wife Natalenya and their two children, and he has thanked God for every moment of this heaven on earth. They have raised Arthur as their own, and he knows nothing of his heritage or of his future. He has lived the life of a carefree, happy boy who has only known unconditional love and endless joy. However, the evil that controls Morgana has not been idle during this time. Intricate plans have been set in motion that only the Creator can foil. Merlin will face his greatest nightmare, and Arthur will find out what kind of man he will become. More sacrifices will have to be made and the greatest evil of that time will once again try to overtake and destroy them. Will Merlin find the strength he needs to follow the deadly and painful path that is set before him, and will Arthur prove to be the kind of King that Britain is in desperate need of?

This is not an easy story, and it is not a happy one. Nevertheless, it is a battle that has to be fought and won in order to defeat those that would enslave them all. Victory was not promised, but help would be given if asked for it. These beautifully flawed characters of Merlin and Arthur show us that the human spirit cannot be defeated so easily as long as the source of our hope and strength come from the Creator of the Universe. In and of ourselves, we are fearful by nature and our hearts are fickle, but if we lean on the One who controls all, we can overcome even the most fearsome and malevolent foe.

My curiosity and fascination in the Arthurian legends have been broadened and challenged by the twists and turns presented in this series. I have been immensely entertained and enthralled by the level of imagination and creativity laid out before me. The meticulous level of detail is captivating and wonderful and made the story so genuine that I felt like I was back in that time watching as all of these events unfolded. I have felt and experienced the pain, horror, and joy of each of the characters, and because of that they really came alive in my mind and in my heart.

Robert Treskillard has laid down the gauntlet for authors of pure and true epic fantasy. No stone was left unturned and no emotion was hidden from the reader as they walked alongside Merlin and endured the dangerous and fearful path that has been set before him. The only other fantasy author in my mind that rivals Treskillard is Patrick W. Carr with his the Staff and the Sword trilogy. Both of these outstanding authors have set such a high standard for fantasy that few can stand up to. I anxiously await the next book in The Merlin Spiral series as I know there are even bigger and better things to come. May the fortunate readers who come across this series open their heart and their mind to the endless possibilities that our loving Creator can do for and through them. We are merely the instruments of His Glory, and He loves each and every one of us with an incomprehensible and boundless love.
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Author 19 books238 followers
August 1, 2018
The whole of Britain is blighted with a drought. In the south, there is war against the Saxenow. In the north, there is war against the Picts. From within, the men of Kernow turn and attack the king’s city. Morgana, a woman with evil powers, drives them on, and has other plots in store.

It would be hard even for King Arthur to save a Britain like this. It’s harder yet for Artorius – young, reckless, and ignorant still of his heritage. But many things are emerging from their hiding places, and not all as welcome as the true king.

With Merlin’s Nightmare, Robert Treskillard completes the Merlin Spiral trilogy. The Merlin Spiral is very much a fantasy series; the magical element is strong, though put into a Christian context. But it is also firmly anchored in the historical reality of the fifth century – more so than many people may realize, given how obscure the fifth century is. (Vortigern may have a firmer place in history than Arthur.)

There’s a sixteen-year jump between the second book and the last, but it works well. I enjoyed seeing Arthur really enter the story. I liked the father-son dynamic between Arthur and Merlin, naturally arising from the earlier books, and I thought they shifted toward their ultimate roles as king and counselor in a subtle, convincing way. And though I did not initially notice it, Merlin’s fear contrasted with Arthur’s recklessness, and eventually both found their way toward the wise middle ground.

Guinevere was introduced in this novel, providing some lighthearted moments. I was also intrigued to see that Robert Treskillard made the beginning of her relationship with Arthur suitably contradicted. (And I wonder – was Lancelot also introduced, though by another name?)

Curiously, the book ends without any great triumph. The heroes enjoyed smaller victories, but a new disaster seemed to come on the heels of every one, and it’s not clear Britain is, on balance, better off when the fighting ended than when it began. Doubtless this is partly due to the fact that the story is not over, and undefeated enemies are held over for the upcoming Pendragon Spiral series. Still, I missed the moment of triumph. I missed the satisfaction of thinking, “It’s over, and they won.”

Merlin’s Nightmare is an intriguing, well-written novel that blends history and myth into a fascinating, innovative re-telling of the Arthurian Legends. I’ll be keeping an eye out for the Pendragon Spiral.


In conjunction with the CSFF Blog Tour, I received a free copy of this book from the publisher.
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19 reviews4 followers
May 31, 2016
The last installment in the Merlin Spiral, Merlin's Nightmare is every bit as good as the first two. Everything I loved about the first two books -- the well-developed characters, the world-building, the action-packed plot -- was present in this book. The only minor beef I had with Merlin's Nightmare is that a lot of the persistent, adventurous spirit that we had come to know and love in Merlin seemed to be missing now. There is an approximately 16-year gap between this book and the previous one, and Merlin is older now, and has settled down with Natalenya and their family. He gets reluctantly dragged into another adventure, this time with Arthur calling the shots, and spends what I felt was an inordinate amount of time pining to return to Natalenya and their uncomplicated life. While this is certainly a sentiment that makes sense -- it wouldn't be very believable, either, to have Merlin jump at the chance to leave his comfortable home and family -- it was seemed so pervasive in the story that Merlin no longer seemed to have the same spirit we had come to know and love. That said, everything else about the story was perfect high fantasy. Now I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation of the saga in the Pendragon Spiral.
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January 1, 2020
As Merlin returns from convincing the king of Rheged to finally deal with the threat of the Prithager from the north, he meets with Fodor, envoy of High King Vortigern, who is summoning men to a muster in the far south to deal with the Saxenow invasion. When Arthur, now around eighteen years old, hears of the muster, he sets off with his two friends; but little does he know that the man he is going to aid is the one who murdered his father! Merlin has to reach him before he gets to Vortigern. But hiding in the shadows of the land is an evil even greater than Vortigern: Morgana, Merlin’s half-sister, is plotting her revenge, a revenge that will have all of Britain crushed beneath her heel and that of her wicked master. Will Merlin realize where the true trouble is coming from before it is too late?

Merlin’s Nightmare takes place around sixteen years after the events of Merlin’s Shadow. This raises somewhat of an issue because there is little time gap between the first two books of the series, making the third installment feel a little distant from them. Part of that may be due to the fact that the author wrote some from Arthur’s point of view, something that would have been difficult to do if he were only two years old. Perhaps, however, it would have been better then to have this book be the first in the Pendragon Spiral, seeing as it is setting the reader up to begin following Arthur as a main character. Other than that concern, however, the time jump is fairly tolerable.

The Merlin Spiral is probably best categorized as historical fantasy. The first book set the tone, but the next two have jumped headlong into the fantasy part of the genre. Even so, it should be noted that perhaps some of the things one might assume to be pure fantasy may not be quite so far from reality as at first seems.

[POSSIBLE SPOILERS]
Merlin’s Nightmare certainly keeps a person turning pages, especially toward the end. The last chapter is a whirlwind of danger and excitement, made especially effective because just before this chapter begins, the reader feels like the enemy has been foiled, when in fact the very plan of Morgana has been carried out by Arthur and Merlin. That being said, the very last part of the book, the epilogue, tends to drag just a bit; but it also sets the reader up for the Pendragon Spiral.

When I was reading this book, I was quite literally furious at the Prithager as they invaded Rheged. The ability to evoke strong emotion in a reader is something many authors wish to do, and that certainly was the case in Merlin’s Nightmare. But beyond this, the book also points the reader unerringly toward Jesus and the hope that us Christians have for this life and beyond. The religion of this series is not tacked on; it is an integral part of the story, flowing smoothly along with the narrative. That more than anything else is what makes this series work. [SPOILERS] There is a very powerful moment toward the end of the book where Merlin is paddling madly toward a werewolf that has taken Natalenya hostage, and God speaks to him. In that moment “….the world stopped. Nothing moved. A flaming arrow shot from behind hung in the air to Merlin’s left, its flame frozen. The drool from the werewolf hung, floating idly from his teeth.” It is not hard to picture this scene, time stopped all around, and yet Merlin hears God’s voice, reminding him of what his duty is and where his true allegiance lies. There are similar moments scattered throughout the series, powerful reminders of what truly matters in this world. And that is one of the things that makes a story worth reading, problems and all.
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December 15, 2021
Why is this book excellent? For at least three reasons. First, it continues Treskillard's "realistic" portrayal of Merlin. I know, realistic? With a dragon? With blue flame? With evil so personified? But yes... Merlin is a flawed, broken, struggling human. And he remains that way even at the end. He certainly takes steps forward (and backward) but this is human life under God's loving hand. We see his stubborn slow growth, and if honest, we can relate to it. Second, because in a literary world where the political correctness of universalism, relativism, humanism are common, Treskillard presents a STORY, a fiction, a picture of imaginative life that holds true to True Principles, even where the oddities of magic, creatures, and the supernatural are present. An third, because it is simply a fun read. Maybe because I know after three books that solutions WILL be found (even if I don't completely LIKE the solutions!!!) I can relax while reading. Still feeling the tension, but tension with hope instead of despair.

Read this book!
(And bring on the next one, Robert!)
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6 reviews2 followers
August 30, 2017
A very nice return to form by Robert Treskillard in the last book of the Merlin Spiral. Gone are the frequent, confusing visions and dreams, and while dreams and visions are still found they are well-placed, make absolute sense, and progress the plot.

Which is good, because extremely dire times are upon Britain: a withering drought has stricken the land. The Picti are raiding to the north, the Saxons are gobbling up chunks of Britain, and what little of the country that is still in British lands are held by the man who murdered the rightful king, Uther.

Of course Arthur has no idea of his royal legacy, and in fact believes that Merlin is his father. Oh how things are going to change, especially since Morgana's plan is finally coming into effect.

Merlin's Nightmare is a tense journey from beginning to end, and Merlin is constantly dealing with fear and the many forms it takes to attack him.

I loved the use of characters from old to new (especially one raven-feather wearing prophetess that I hope to see more of) and the use of the landscape.

If I had any critiques, the ending felt a little out of place with the rest of the book and I didn't get a definitive ending, the ending just felt like set up for the next book. All in all however, a very fine book that I am glad I read and I can't wait to read the first book in the Pendragon Spiral!
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500 reviews109 followers
March 20, 2016
I've never had such a case of review-writer's-block before, because I couldn't figure out how to express how much I enjoyed this book.

The Story:
Merlin's Nightmare, book 3 of the Merlin Spiral, takes place about 16 years after the first two books. It follows an older, 30-something year old Merlin, and a now-grown Arthur, who at 18 is full of liveliness and is ready to take on the whole world, seemingly. Together with various other characters, both new ones and re-imagined figures of legend, they must face overwhelming odds and perils from all sides in a desperate fight to save Britain from destruction.

Here is the Arthurian legend reborn.

I'm not sure how Treskillard managed to make it so original and fresh while simultaneously drawing so many parts of the old King Arthur stories into it so well, but he did.

General Review:
I enjoyed this book SO MUCH. From the very beginning I was completely spellbound – I couldn't stop reading and finished it in a few days. It was basically everything a book should be: gripping, epic, and just a lot of fun. I kept coming across bits of hilarity and general awesomeness that I would excitedly quote aloud to whatever family member happened to be around. I found myself laughing several times, and the action, adventure, journeying and battles were all awesome.

A lot of things near the end had me nearly squealing with excitement, and it's killing me I can't talk about them due to spoilers. Let's just say it does NOT disappoint in the realm of epic Arthurian-ness. *SQUEAL*

I feel like Merlin's Nightmare forms the core of Treskillard's retelling of the Arthurian story. Everything comes together and explodes into this sweeping epic tale, with the first two books providing excellent background so that everything makes sense and you know where it all came from, while also anticipating the continuation of the saga. It was the perfect third book to a trilogy. Anything that bothered me about the first two was swept away because it all makes sense now. I can see the whole. The story arc of Merlin is complete in a way, while at the same time beginning a new one that will focus on Arthur himself.

Merlin:
I loved Merlin in this book, seeing his journey through the first two books, into this one, and with a hint toward becoming the Merlin of legend. I can see his faith from the first one, his fighting spirit from the second, and a measure of caution and wisdom brought on by both and the years since, as he continues to struggle toward who he needs to be, before his earthly lord, and his King on high.

Merlin is in his 30s and has a family of his own by the start of the book (can I just say how much I love his whole adorable family?). I was worried about this, because I normally don't like stories where the young hero grows up, but Treskillard pulled it off impressively. If anything, I liked the grown up Merlin even better, and could only think “Here indeed is the great Bard of Britain.”

Arthur:
Arthur is without a doubt the number one thing I loved about the book. He was perfect – both original, and also measuring up to the Arthur of traditional Arthurian legend. All King Arthur figures have a lot to be compared to, and I wasn't sure if he would be able to compete. I need not have worried. Treskillard's Arthur was absolutely AWESOME. I loved his boundless energy, his dashing recklessness, his courage and natural leadership qualities, and all-around epicness. He was strong and kingly and downright fun, and overall just stupendous and KING ARTHUR. <3 I really REALLY liked him and can't wait to see more of him in later books!

Cons:
In the interests of being balanced, I'm trying to think of any downsides to the book, which is actually difficult. I will say that some of it is a bit scary and/or violent for younger readers, though it didn't bother me for the most part. It also ended more suddenly than I would have liked, but that's mainly because I wanted to savor it all and didn't want it to end.

Overview:
Book 1, Merlin's Blade, was great. Book 2, Merlin's Shadow, threw me for a loop because it was so unexpected and different, so I was startled into not enjoying it quite as much, though it was still good. Book 3, Merlin's Nightmare, simply knocked me over with its awesomeness – as a re-imagining of the Arthurian legend, as its own story, and drawing all the threads from the first two into it to complete the epic tapestry of this story.

I say complete, but there are some threads left over to lead into the next three books, the Pendragon Spiral, which I'm absolutely dying to read. Treskillard had better get those books out pronto before I expire of anticipation. ;)

Bottom Line:
Read this book, people! If you like Arthurian stories, action/adventure, fantasy, YA, Christian fiction, or just a really good, well-crafted story, or all of that rolled in one. Just read it!

Disclaimer:
I received a free copy of this book from the publisher in return for an honest review. It was in no way required to be positive. These opinions are entirely my own.
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255 reviews32 followers
June 23, 2017
A fitting end to The Merlin Spiral, I nevertheless missed seeing our protagonists as young adults. The transition to Merlin being a fully-fledged father was a bit jarring for me even though I largely enjoyed the novel. I definitely look forward to reading the companion series when it comes out!

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460 reviews59 followers
July 26, 2014

Suggested Age: 12+
Genre: Christian, YA, Fantasy



I was privileged and honored to get to read an ARC of this book and I waited a bit to write my review because I wanted to compare it to the published copy. The ARC was very long and daunting in a way, the published book is really great.

I struggled to know how to rate this book. Originally I had rated it a three star but I’ve since updated to a four—largely because the published version took out some of the parts I felt were unnecessary or that was just too wordy or lengthy.

My only complaint is that it ends in a cliffhanger. I’m okay with a cliffhanger sometimes but at the end of a series? I dunno, I just feel frustrated that I have to wait for another series to come out. I feel there should have been a little bit of a better conclusion or even just continue this series instead of making a new one.




Arthur, now eighteen, is missing, and Merlin must find him before a shadowy pursuer catches him first.
With the High King and his kingdom caught in a trap of sinister deceit, Merlin has to find a way out before all is lost. Having everything to fight for, and almost nothing to fight with, Merlin and Arthur must rally Britain’s warriors against three overwhelming enemies: Saxen hordes in the south, Picti raiders in the north, and a chilling new enemy that has arisen in the west. At the same time, Morgana brings Merlin’s deepest fear to life and sets a horde of werewolves loose to destroy Britain. But when the secret purpose of this nightmare is finally revealed, will Merlin and Arthur find a way to survive—without unleashing an even greater evil?


I usually don’t share the synopsis but I wanted to address several things...


Arthur is now the High King and I kind of thought it was odd how fast the two transitioned from being a father/son to Arthur calling Merlin by his name. It seemed inconsistent at times but maybe that was just Arthur’s indecision…I was unsure how to feel about that. Maybe it was because I was feeling how Merlin must have felt at suddenly being a subject instead of a father to the boy he raised.

The werewolves—I’m not sure why but they weirded me out. Yes, I just used the word weirded in a review—sue me. It also almost destroyed any hope that I had for Morgana’s redemption. Yes, I know she is bad but I was still kind of hoping…

All in all? This book kicks butt and I can’t wait to read more, even though I was a little reluctant to give a five star—mostly because of my frustration and impatience to read the next book. I guess I’m a bit like a child throwing a tantrum wanting my candy now rather than later.

Tsk, tsk on the author for torturing me so! All I can say is that the next book better be worth the wait because I’m still itching to know what the world is going on!
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625 reviews8 followers
February 21, 2017
I was given a copy of this title, free, in exchange for my honest opinion.

5 Stars

This is the third and final book in the Merlin Spiral trilogy. So I can’t say very much about what happens in this book without spoiling the book. I can say that this is the book where Arthur has grown up and learns the truth of his birth and history. If you have been following me for a while you know that I have thoroughly enjoyed the first two books. So no surprise that I enjoyed this one, though the enjoyment is bittersweet. I am very happy to have arrived at the end of this trilogy, but I am also very sad that this adventure has come to an end.

I am only sorry that it has taken me so very long to read this. Part of it was my aversion to reading the final book in a series, something that I am getting so much better at. Part of it was simply that I knew that it was going to take me a while to get through. I say that not to turn people away from this book, it is not a quick read. Though, it is hard to put down. Once again, Treskillard has a way of packing his books with so so much goodness. It doesn’t feel like you are not just captivated by the story but that you are right there along the characters experiencing their adventure with them.

We have a returning cast of characters, and while they are all essentially the same, they are also different. So much has changed, the characters have grown and gone on with life. They have different roles and have taken on new challenges. I, once again, really enjoyed this book. It is hard to pick a favorite, so I would recommend that you just read the entire trilogy. And once you have finished, keep an eye out for Treskillard’s new trilogy The Pendragon Spiral, where Arthur steps into his role and becomes the main character.
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Author 1 book9 followers
December 25, 2014
my ratings: 4.5 out of 5

in one word: EPIC

in one sentence: It races from one epic, action-packed battle scene to the next with multiple, excellent, and suspenseful storylines weaved in between.

good:
Battles, battles, and more battles.
I felt exhausted and exhilarated with all the wars and personal struggles. This book was very difficult to put down. It was such an intense read that I did something I've never done before. Whenever Mr. Treskillard would switch from Character A to Character B, switching story threads during a HUGE cliffhanger, I would skip the chapter of Character B to find out what was happening to Character A. I HAD TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!
Yes, I would eventually go back to read the skipped chapters but NEVER in my life have I ever needed to skip chapters.
Tension was everywhere in this book but it wasn't a slow tightening kind of tension. It was high levels of tension throughout the book. Heart-pumping-wrenching-dropping tension.
Merlin's nightmare comes to life and you won't believe how it shapeshifts into existence.

You can tell that Mr. Treskillard did quite a bit of research for this trilogy. He delves into history - bringing out Romans, Picts, Saxons, Druids, and Christians - and recreates the Arthurian legend in a time when these characters might have really lived.
With a little dab of magic thrown in, of course. (Duh, can't go without that.)
Mr. Treskillard takes us to a time in Britain where the Romans have withdrawn, leaving the Britons to the invading Saxenow from the south, war with the Picts in the north, and men from Kernow turning and attacking the king's city. All the while, Morgana drives them on with her evil powers and schemes.
(Feel your blood pressure rising yet?)
The backdrop for this series is richly layered, creative, and marvelously well crafted without it ever overwhelming the story with history.
Wayne Thomas Batson said it best, "...you can almost feel the fog rolling in off the moors, smell the low heather, and catch a glint off a blade."

The characters were great and I liked seeing Mr. Treskillard's take on each one. I even liked the Merlin's and Arthur's father/son relationship.

I appreciated all of the maps, lists of characters, glossary, and even the review sheet to remind us what had happened in the previous books. I then felt like I was able to really understand whom everyone was and grasp where they were all coming from which created a cohesive experience. It's really hard for me to remember things. I'm reading about twenty-five or so books every year and it's hard to remember every detail in a character's life when you've shared your life with many.

This series is excellent and wonderfully unique in the telling of Arthur's and Merlin's story with history and myth blending to create one epic trilogy.

bad:
GRAMMAR NAZI ALERT!
I was surprised to find words in the wrong tense and even words missing from sentences.

do or don't: do

notes:
While this series ends, another begins...The Pendragon Spiral. I look forward to this series with great anticipation.

In exchange for my little review, Blink generously sent this book to me for FREE. Thank you.
And always, thank you to Rebecca LuElla Miller for hosting and organizing the blog tours.
6 reviews
August 30, 2017
It was a book I highly recommend, but its the third book of a series. The first is Merlins blade, and the second is Merlins Shadow. There's lots of action and adventure, and it will keep you very entertained. Read this book and the whole series!
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2,035 reviews67 followers
August 26, 2014
Robert Treskillard in his new book “Merlin’s Nightmare” Book Three in The Merlin Spiral series published by Blink gives us another adventure with Merlin.

From the back cover: Haunted by the past, chased by the present.

Arthur is now eighteen, and Merlin, tired of hiding and running from his enemies, wants nothing more than to spend his days with his family and train Arthur for his rightful place as king. But when Arthur goes missing, a desperate Merlin must abandon all other quests to find him before a shadowy pursuer catches Arthur first.

Having everything to fight for, and almost nothing to fight with, Merlin and Arthur must rally Britain’s warriors against three overwhelming enemies: Saxenow hordes in the south, Picti raiders in the north, and a chilling new enemy that has arisen in the west.

At the same time, Mórgana brings Merlin’s deepest fear to life and sets a horde of werewolves loose to destroy Britain. But when the secret purpose of this nightmare is finally revealed, will Merlin and Arthur find a way to survive—without unleashing an even greater evil?

Just say the two words, Merlin and Arthur and, immediately, you know you are in for a good time reading the story. Mr. Treskillard continues the story of Merlin and Arthur and brings them an adventure they are unprepared for. The enemy is gathering on three sides and Britain is severely challenged. It has been eighteen years and Merlin and Arthur are leading somewhat normal lives, almost like a normal family. However this is not to be. Arthur runs away hoping to join in the fight without telling Merlin leaving Merlin to drop everything to find him before the bad guys do. This is exciting stuff. There are multiple epic battles not only on the battlefield but in Merlin’s mind. The duo are pushed to the brink of doom more than once and just barely escape to continue the fight. “Merlin’s Nightmare” is an epic battle between good and evil. Mr. Treskillard has done an incredible job of bringing his characters to life and we root for them to win against overwhelming forces. “Merlin’s Nightmare” is a wonderful, interesting story with power and depth that will keep you flipping pages. While The Merlin Spiral series ends now it will pick up again in Mr. Treskillard’s next series, The Pendragon Spiral of which I am so looking forward to.

Disclosure of Material Connection: In conjunction with the CSFF Blog Tour, I received a free copy of this book from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
10 reviews2 followers
August 20, 2014
I was riveted to Merlin’s Nightmare from page one. It was a strong pull, more than reading the latest book from a favorite author...it was an immersing experience. When I got home, I had been counseling at a Christian camp for a week, my wife wanted to know why book three pulled me in so hard. You see I don’t have a lot of free time when I’m counseling so anything I do use my free time for is valuable. My wife knew this wasn’t the typical casual read for me...in fact I rarely read books at camp. She also mentioned how the slow start of Merlin’s Blade had been a struggle for me, even though I ended up liking the book a great deal. Although I got into book two faster and enjoyed it even more, it was an initial struggle. Her question got me thinking. Why did book three grab me immediately and refuse to let me go? Although I had given the other two books high ratings for, in my opinion at least, superior work in a genre field generally unexplored by Christians except in a romance novel format, book three was superior not due to genre or what it was measured against...it just was. Why? I liked it so much that I would put it in the top fifteen books I have ever read. To be clear JR Tolkien, Orson Scott Card, Ted Dekker, Stephen Lawhead, Terry Brooks, David Webber, Dean R Koontz, Eoin Colfer, CS Lewis, and Robert Jordan are the authors on this list. Why did I like it so much? Although I really liked Treskillard’s Arthur character, this does not explain how strongly I felt about this book. I think it’s the build. What I found so hard about book one and to some extent book two was the slow build BUT Robert Treskillard uses this to create a book three that is a masterpiece. Merlin and his sister are the subtle thread that starts in book one, becomes obvious in book 2, and brings about the epic clash between two of literatures most famous characters far beyond what has tried before. They are superior to Marvel and DCs rendering of them, that being mysterious agents of good and evil. This is a story where the legendary characters feel so normal for so long that when they become what they actually are...the embodiment of good and evil wrapped in flawed human flesh, you feel so connected to both of them. Unlike modern literature where authors are obsessed with showing the good guys as not so good and the evil characters as not so bad, Treskillard shows human frailty without excuse and yet without doubt between who the good guy and bad guys are. This series is worth your time! Be patient with it because the ride is definitely worth it! Book three transcends the series entering the halls of truly great works but it only gets there on the ot
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2,218 reviews40 followers
August 15, 2014
About the Book:

Arthur, now eighteen, is missing, and Merlin must find him before a shadowy pursuer catches him first.
With the High King and his kingdom caught in a trap of sinister deceit, Merlin has to find a way out before all is lost. Having everything to fight for, and almost nothing to fight with, Merlin and Arthur must rally Britain’s warriors against three overwhelming enemies: Saxen hordes in the south, Picti raiders in the north, and a chilling new enemy that has arisen in the west. At the same time, Morgana brings Merlin’s deepest fear to life and sets a horde of werewolves loose to destroy Britain. But when the secret purpose of this nightmare is finally revealed, will Merlin and Arthur find a way to survive—without unleashing an even greater evil?



About the Author:

Robert Treskillard has been crafting stories from his early youth, and is a software developer, graphic artist, and sometime bladesmith. He and his wife have three children and are still homeschooling their youngest. They live in the country near St. Louis, Missouri.



My Review:

Countless times, Merlin has remained hidden to protect the ones that he loves. Although Merlin is ready to give up on the whole protection idea, the formidable Arthur is ready to go to war. Arthur gains a horse and abandons his home in order to look for adventure and to hopefully fight in the war. Little does he know, he is going to the wrong war camp.

Morgana is stronger than ever and she is all about showing everyone what she can do. She sends many, many werewolves to kill anyone in there path, but she really has Merlin in her sights to be the next victim. Merlin is a man on a mission he has to get Arthur back home to help fight Morgana and he has to protect his family as well.

I loved this book! It is a perfect addition to the Merlin Spiral series--being the third book in the series it is still going strong and has not become stale as some books typically do further on in a series. A great book that is filled with fantasy and action, definitely a page turner for sure!



**Disclosure** This book was sent to me free of charge for my honest review from the CSFF Blogger Program.

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Author 12 books264 followers
August 28, 2014
Merlin’s Nightmare concludes the Merlin’s Spiral Trilogy, but we know it is not the end of the story. This is King Arthur we are talking about here.

It’s been several months or so since I’ve visited the previous books in the series, so I loved the opening recap where books one and two were summarized by the characters and their contributions to the story thus far. Especially since there are a lot of characters.

To get a proper feel for Merlin’s Nightmare, it would be beneficial to review my previous thoughts on Merlin’s Blade and Merlin’s Shadow. Both books, I was blown away. Book three? Not so much. It was a great read, enjoyed it immensely, but it didn’t deliver like the first two books. At least for me. And I think it had something to do with the characters.

In the first two books, we are anchored to Merlin’s point of view. Yes, we cut in and out from all the other characters, but the book began and ended with Merlin. Book three ended with King Arthur. Makes sense as the ending leads to the next series, The Pendragon Spiral. But I didn’t connect like I did with Merlin. I was apprehensive about the characters, being that it’s been about sixteen years since book two. That’s a lot of growing up to do apart from us, so we didn’t grow with the characters. That said, I didn’t feel a disconnect from Merlin, just more distant since the focus now shifted from Merlin to King Arthur as it should.

This novel’s pace is fast and the story switched back and forth between Merlin’s and Arthur’s thread, Natalenya, the kids, and the hidden village’s thread, and Morgana’s. Lots of stuff happening, decisions being made and their consequences being unleashed upon them all.

I loved the supernatural aspects such as the Natalenya’s cut skirt connection, the mysterious visions, and the twist involving the sword and stone. And the creepy werewolves. And…yeah…don’t want to give too much away. :-)
I highly recommend this series, but start with book one! I’m picky and eclectic when it comes to what I read, but I think it is safe to say that I would read anything by Robert Treskillard.

*In conjunction with the CSFF Blog Tour, I received a free copy of this book from the publisher.
1,261 reviews
August 27, 2014
Robert Treskillard‘s Merlin Spiral is an outstanding series featuring meticulous research of Britain in the 5th century AD — language, customs, warfare — as well as the traditions of the Arthurian legends he uses as its foundation. I am going to leave it to others on the tour to discuss the symbolic and spiritual aspects of the book. What impressed me the most is that Merlin’s Nightmare is a man’s book. Yes, there is a lot of warfare described in bloody, if not gory detail, but it is the strong male characters and their development that stand out the most. In this time of marginalization of men, when even TV commercials depict men as silly and weak, it is refreshing to see men acting like men, real men.

First there is Merlin, a now experienced leader and advisor. He is also a committed man — to family, country and king. He struggles with fears (don’t we all) and is reluctant to face them head on. But it is his commitment to God’s will and leadership in his life that causes Merlin to step beyond himself, his yearning for peace and comfort, and into the purposes and plans placed before him.

Arthur is now an eighteen year old — brash, reckless and a bit naive. His emotions spur him into action. But as the book progresses, Arthur learns the true costs of being a man. He has to make tough decisions and put others ahead of himself. Although he has a long way to go, this servant-king is committed to his people.

Commitment is the keyword for Merlin’s Nightmare. Loyalty, devotion, and faithfulness are on display, and what great lessons for the young men in our lives. There are some great female characters as well, but in this book the men shine. So go out and get all three books in The Merlin Spiral and make sure your sons and daughters read them. Girls need to know what real men look like too! ;)

Highly Recommended.

Audience: Young adults and adults

(Thanks to Blink in conjunction with the CSFF Blog Tour for a review copy of this book. All opinions expressed are mine alone.)
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Author 31 books162 followers
August 27, 2014
Merlin's Nightmare
The Merlin Spiral #3
By Robert Treskillard

Merlin has kept his identity a secret. For years he has hidden his face from the public eye, wearing a mask that covers his scars. Scars that would reveal his identity to Vortigern should even a whisper touch his ear.

And if Merlin was revealed, Arthur's identity would be revealed as well. An identity that Arthur is unaware of. Even his name is hidden from him, as he has been called Artorius for as far back as his memory will take him.

But Arthur and Merlin's safety and indeed all of Britons is about to be threatened in a way that Merlin hoped and prayed would never come. His half-sister Ganieda, known as Morgana, is about to strike, bringing with her, her beloved wolves. But her wolves are no longer the beasts that hunted Merlin in his youth. These wolves have been perverted through the darkness of the Druid power that Morgana wields. (Think wolf/human cross and you get the picture - though not the total evilness behind it)

Morgana is manipulating both Merlin and Arthur towards her ultimate goal - a goal that no one saw coming... And Morgana is willing to sacrifice all those she controls to obtain her goals. Love is an unknown in her heart and it obvious that her hate for Merlin has grown in intensity in the years since their last encounter.

There is loss that will test both Merlin and Arthur and it will be interesting to see how it all plays out in the new upcoming series from Robert Treskillard The Pendragon Spiral. A little hint "HC SVNT DRACONES!"

I highly recommend this book and the entire series for fans of any of the following: Merlin, King Arthur, Historical Fiction, Action, and Fantasy Fiction.

I was provided a copy of this book by the publisher in conjunction with this CSFF blog tour in exchange for my participation and my honest review.
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571 reviews241 followers
May 23, 2014
Merlin's Nightmare by Robert Treskillard






{About the Book}

Arthur, now eighteen, is missing, and Merlin must find him before a shadowy pursuer catches him first.
With the High King and his kingdom caught in a trap of sinister deceit, Merlin has to find a way out before all is lost. Having everything to fight for, and almost nothing to fight with, Merlin and Arthur must rally Britain’s warriors against three overwhelming enemies: Saxen hordes in the south, Picti raiders in the north, and a chilling new enemy that has arisen in the west. At the same time, Morgana brings Merlin’s deepest fear to life and sets a horde of werewolves loose to destroy Britain. But when the secret purpose of this nightmare is finally revealed, will Merlin and Arthur find a way to survive—without unleashing an even greater evil?







{My Review}

4.5 Stars!

Merlin's Nightmare was a very intriguing read, I must say. The reason I decided to review this book was because of the content. I am more and more getting back into the Fantasy genre and I will read or watch anything pertaining to Merlin or King Arthur and the Knights of the Round Table. And of course dragons. Now I haven't read the two previous books in the series, but after reading and finishing Merlin's Nightmare in only a few hours I will most definitely be picking up Books #1 & #2!
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26 reviews2 followers
June 12, 2014
************************I received this Advanced Reading Copy from Blink**************************
The third installment in the Merlin Spiral series was awesome. Set in medieval Britain, the story tells the Legend of King Arthur in a totally different way. Arthur is now 18 years old and has become a reckless young man. He likes adventure and the thrill of danger. It’s not long before trouble arises, and Arthur and a few of his friends go missing. Merlin must go quickly and find them before his sister, Morgana, gets to the High King. Merlin is torn as he does this because he must leave his family behind. Through enemies, both human and mythical, Merlin and Arthur battle, until all is finally said and done. And at the end, Merlin must face his worst nightmare.
This story was intriguing and action packed. I loved having a view into each of the main characters’ minds. Treskillard did a wonderful job of ending the point of view right when the story was the most suspenseful. It made me want to read faster to find out what was happening to that character. The descriptive language Treskillard used was very well done. I loved how vividly I could picture things he described. However, this story does leave you hanging. But it is to be continued in the Pendragon Spiral.
If you like the Legend of King Arthur, or even anything medieval, you’ll love this book.
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593 reviews23 followers
April 4, 2015
MERLIN'S NIGHTMARE
Merlin has kept Arthur by safe by hiding both his and Arthur's true identity. Arthur is now a young man of eighteen who is reckless and takes many unnecessary risks. He is also unaware of his destiny. They have lived in security in a hidden valley but the time of safety are at an end. Once again the Picts are advancing and fearing that their valley will be discovered Merlin has convinced his uncle to join in the fight to stop them. Meanwhile, Vortipern has called for men to stop the Saxons who are advancing from the south and his enoy has approached the valley asking for help and is ordered to leave.

Morgana has been waiting or years for Arthur to become a man so the sword can be removed from the stone. She is manipulating both Merlin and Arthur so that will return and release the sword freeing something much worse than the demons that she has created to do her bidding. Her hatred has only grown and she's determined to see Merlin, Natalenya and their two young children destroyed along with anyone who dares to help them. She will not be satisfied until Brittan is returned back to the dark religion of the druids with her as it's Queen.

**4 STARS: * Receiving this book through Amazon's Vine Program did not influence my rating or review of this book; all opinions are my own**
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118 reviews
June 3, 2014
Merlin’s Nightmare is the final book in The Merlin Spiral trilogy. I was expecting a wrap up to the series, but instead, it has a cliffhanger that leads you into the next series, The Pendragon Spiral.

Merlin’s Nightmare begins with a nice recap of the prior two books to refresh your memory on what had taken place previously in the story. I appreciated this as I had forgotten a few of the key details due to it having been some time since I read the other books. Although this review is wonderful, you really need to have read the other books in this series to get the full picture, so I do not recommend just jumping right into this book.

The Merlin Spiral is not your traditional Arthurian book series. It has all kinds of new twists that keep readers on their toes. Merlin’s Nightmare continues the engaging story of Merlin and his family, Arthur, and Morgana. Once again, we find the story of Christ’s sacrifice, faith, good vs evil woven into every facet of the story creating a suspense-filled tale of hope and betrayal, love and heartache. The characters and story are engaging which is why it was hard not to see this story wrap up with the end of the Merlin Spiral.

I look forward to seeing what new adventures unfold in the upcoming Pendragon Spiral.
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Author 46 books43 followers
September 9, 2015
First I want to say that this was really well written. Good description but not too much, I could see the whole story. Intense, lots of action, never a dull moment. I really, really wanted to love this book because I love the first and second books in the series. However, I had two issues with this one.

1. Too creepy. I read the first two books with my 12 yr old. This book is YA and typically YA is for age 12 and up. The first two books of this series we were able to enjoy together. But this book, my daughter couldn't get past chapter 6 because she was getting freaked out 2 nights in a row and having trouble falling asleep. She opted to stop reading it because in her words, "it's too demonic". For myself, I did find it a little dark and especially the parts which were from the perspective of the witch, I skimmed/skipped those parts. It did make me feel uncomfortable too. So just a warning, not a great book for 12 yr. olds or anyone sensitive to that sort of thing.

2. Not a satisfying ending. The ending left me tense, not knowing whether the main character was really going to be okay. Things were left on a note of dread. I don't like that :(
3,009 reviews
August 18, 2021
This is a trilogy centering around a young Merlin who is a Christian in early Britain. He is also a blind one. Wolves attacked him as a young boy and as a result, his face is permanently scarred. Instead of possessing magical powers, he possesses faith in Jesus and is able to become the hero we now know him as through his spirituality. Non-Christian readers can still enjoy this series as it packs in a lot of history about the fight for and suppression of Druids as well as the various invasions of Britain by the Picts and the nomadic German tribes. This is a very dark series that deals with spiritual warfare, physical warfare, and the violence that ensues because of them. Treskillard adds in some of the classic Arthurian tropes and storylines with the inclusion of Uther, the white and the red dragon, a young Arthur, and a more historically accurate timeline of the real Arthur’s existence. I highly recommend this series to readers who need a nice series to fall into or for Arthurian nerds such as myself.
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379 reviews62 followers
April 16, 2014
Merlin has been hiding a secret from Arthur for to long and when he finally does tell him, Arthur doesn't know what to think. Soon after disaster seems to be at ever turn, wolf-heads come, Picti are invading Dinas Crag, someone is sabotaging Merlin, Arthur, and their friends when they are traveling, Saxenow are raiding Dinas Marl, and friends are lost. Everything seems to be going wrong, and Arthur has to start taking charge and lead his people.

This book was really good!! I haven't been able to read the first two books in the series, but I was able to pick up on what was going on and I didn't have any trouble reading it. When you start reading this book you don't want to stop, you never know what's going to happen next and I can't wait for the next book! I would recommend this book to fantasy, medieval, and King Arthur legend lovers :)

I received this books from Blink in return for an honest review.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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Author 2 books83 followers
August 25, 2014
4.5 Stars

Merlin's Nightmare continues sixteen years after Merlin's Shadow. Arthur has grown up and Merlin is married to Natalyena, which I thought was great. Being a fan or King Arthur, I liked to see him actually taking part in the adventures, rather than being more along for the ride as a baby. The story held my interest far better than Merlin's Shadow because I was able to see how the story played into Arthur's future as King.

I know that Treskillard has an accompanying series in the works and can not wait to read it. The Arthurian legends have always fascinated me, and I can not wait to see what life Treskillard breaths into them.

If you enjoyed the first two novels in the Merlin's Spiral trilogy, you will love this one and its host of characters. Get ready, because the true battle for Britain has just begun.

I received this novel through CSFF in exchange for an honest review.

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