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A Change of Scene
Author's Note: Once again I have ventured into the world of human livestock. What goes through the mind of a human who finds that he has been reduced to the status of an animal? If you find yourself on that path, not by your choice, how do you cope? How do you adjust? Can you?
Tags: F-mf, non-consensual, reluctant, armbinder, bondage, caught, cbt, chastity, electricity, extreme, humiliation, kidnapping, ponyplay, slavery, toys, tricked
Tags: F-mf, non-consensual, reluctant, armbinder, bondage, caught, cbt, chastity, electricity, extreme, humiliation, kidnapping, ponyplay, slavery, toys, tricked
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January 8, 2015
REVIEW FOR ADULTS VIEWING ONLY.
This is an extreme femdom ponyplay story I've found on the internet last couple of days back. Just finished reading it today and it has given me lots of satisfaction. I love it to bits and pieces although the story is yet to be complete. This review will be based only on the three chapters posted so far.
It's so rare finding good ponyplay stories where men are the ones being subjugated instead of women. The author calls it a human livestock story where humans are forcefully reduced to the status of an animal. The author was trying to bring forth these questions for the readers to ponder upon:
What goes through the mind of a human who finds that he has been reduced to the status of an animal?
If you find yourself on that path, not by your choice, how do you cope?
How do you adjust? Can you?
Hence, welcome to the World of Human Livestock.
I find this story to be highly arousing and erotic even though it does not really focus on sex or have any rape in it. Maybe it's the imbalance power-exchange and total lost of control that got me excited. Or, it's just the way my deviant little mind is wired. Anyhoo, to me this is all just a fantasy. Fantasy of gaining total control over someone, something that I know I would NOT ever seek out in real life. Fantasies should be kept just as fantasies imo. I am so glad my mind is my own. Lol.
What I enjoyed most was the trainers mindfucking the ponies to submission. I was totally engrossed with the whole process and how I wish for moar of it. So much so that I was truly sorry when it ended so soon. I do hope the next chapters would come in fast although where I left off wasn't a cliffhanger.
Bear in mind this is a true DMC material (Depraved Mind's Club). If you have no qualms reading stuff on extreme humiliation and abuse, this is for you. Otherwise, please steer clear. Especially NOT FOR THOSE EASILY OFFENDED.
Tags I got from the story's website: F-mf, non-consensual, reluctant, armbinder, bondage, caught, cbt, chastity, electricity, extreme, humiliation, kidnapping, ponyplay, slavery, toys, tricked
Seems like the tags left out one squick inducing potential - b-mod / body modification. So be warned.
Note:
First read Ch 1 to 3 from 16-18 July 2013 and reviewed based on only 3 chapters
21 August, 2013 - con't reading since new chapters been added. Initially stopped at chapter 3. Hot sure how many new chapters added, but happy to be able to continue this again.
Read from 16th - 18th July 2013
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September 2, 2019Ugh. Just Ugh. What should have been smokin' hot was the longest drawn out thing I have ever read. Seriously. I didn't finish. I'm surprised I don't know the exact shade of paint on a car or the history of horses in their entirety after the first 50 pages. This isn't even smut - it's just an expository writing explosion with more adjectives than a dictionary. I just. can't. even. NO.
July 21, 2013
F*ck! I absolutely hated this.
Kyn you were right, I should have avoided it.
HOWEVER, since I have put myself through it, I decided to post a review anyway.
First off. This is an extreme fetish story.
So if Fem-dom plus pony play is NOT your fetish, then carefully back out of this page right now, and erase it from your browser memory. I'm not kidding guys, this is not something you can taste test - no, no, no!
Generally well written, well structured story. My issues are purely with the type of kink, not with the story writing.
How do I dislike Fem-dom, let-me-count-the-ways...
Every single fem-dom story I've ever read (granted, that's not many) have a huge humiliation aspect to the kink. And I'm extremely humiliation-adverse. Even in m-m stories, I will tolerate it only as part of a plot-point, and only in limited doses.
I'm not exactly sure why it's such a fem-dom standard. My guess is it's something to do with women being physically smaller/weaker, so dominating by physical power alone won't work. Having said that, one fem-dom story with a female alien who was actually physically stronger/faster/more lethal than the male, ALSO relied on humiliation - so maybe it's simply part of the kink.
A relationship should be complementary. Partners should both give, and get something from being together. If one partner is taking all the time, then it becomes abuse (this is true even in BDSM stories). I'm a dub-con, slave-fic fan. But these stories start off with a bad situation, and I expect them to be moving on to some kind of complementary relationship-give-take solution. Reading an abuse story, purely for the abuse kink is seriously NOT my thing.
Kyn you were right, I should have avoided it.
HOWEVER, since I have put myself through it, I decided to post a review anyway.
First off. This is an extreme fetish story.
So if Fem-dom plus pony play is NOT your fetish, then carefully back out of this page right now, and erase it from your browser memory. I'm not kidding guys, this is not something you can taste test - no, no, no!
Generally well written, well structured story. My issues are purely with the type of kink, not with the story writing.
How do I dislike Fem-dom, let-me-count-the-ways...
Every single fem-dom story I've ever read (granted, that's not many) have a huge humiliation aspect to the kink. And I'm extremely humiliation-adverse. Even in m-m stories, I will tolerate it only as part of a plot-point, and only in limited doses.
I'm not exactly sure why it's such a fem-dom standard. My guess is it's something to do with women being physically smaller/weaker, so dominating by physical power alone won't work. Having said that, one fem-dom story with a female alien who was actually physically stronger/faster/more lethal than the male, ALSO relied on humiliation - so maybe it's simply part of the kink.
A relationship should be complementary. Partners should both give, and get something from being together. If one partner is taking all the time, then it becomes abuse (this is true even in BDSM stories). I'm a dub-con, slave-fic fan. But these stories start off with a bad situation, and I expect them to be moving on to some kind of complementary relationship-give-take solution. Reading an abuse story, purely for the abuse kink is seriously NOT my thing.
July 19, 2013
The structure bunny in me loved this book, because it's a classic fairy tale. A man lets the beast in him rule his head, and in return a powerful woman turns him into the embodiment of a beast.
Why I didn't like it more is a) no smexin' b) it's half a story. Also c) a lot of details about tack and equipment. I mean, I get it, that's part of the whole kink, but although I love ponies, I'm just not into tack.
The tale finishes as the MC recognizes his new status as beast. For this to be completely satisfying I wanted trials and suffering as said beast, and then redemption. But - uh oh - I don't think this guy's got any redemption coming this century. Eep!
But there could be been some sex. Or at least prostate milking. If he's a good pony.
Thanks for the rec, Kynthos!
Why I didn't like it more is a) no smexin' b) it's half a story. Also c) a lot of details about tack and equipment. I mean, I get it, that's part of the whole kink, but although I love ponies, I'm just not into tack.
The tale finishes as the MC recognizes his new status as beast. For this to be completely satisfying I wanted trials and suffering as said beast, and then redemption. But - uh oh - I don't think this guy's got any redemption coming this century. Eep!
But there could be been some sex. Or at least prostate milking. If he's a good pony.
Thanks for the rec, Kynthos!
February 8, 2022
I didn't know I would ever enjoy that much reading a book fully focused on Pony-Play. But I'm glad to have picked this. Although the basic premise is a man's subjugation into a pony, the way it is done is pure entertainment for anyone interested a cruel non-consensual Femdom story. And let me warn you, this is an extremely cruel story. So if you're not interested in such stories, do not pick it up at all.
There are a few problems with the story though. First of all, there is just too much repetition of same character reactions throughout the book. Sometimes this enhances feeling the experiences of main character in different scenes and scenarios. But many times it feels too much wordiness. If edited properly, the book can be surely skimmed for about quarter of its length. Probably even half if the author shorten/remove the details of pony tacks and bondage equipment in every scene. These repetitions and wordiness kind of bored at several places, and ultra-slowed the main story.
Another problem, the clothing details of female characters were neglected even in very important scenes and scenarios. This is surprising, as the author always described in great details everything about any pony that came in a scene. Author missed the point that a scene requires details of both the characters to be imagined the same way the author imagined while writing that. Hence, I believe several scenes could not bring same impact as the author intended.
Although the book is written in third-person, the first half of the book is written as if it was first-person POV. It feels to me that the author originally intended to write the book in first-person, but because of some needs in the later part re-wrote/edited it in third-person narration. I personally think that the book would have lot better impact if it was written in first person. But if the author had already decided to write it in third person, the first part should have been re-written properly, and then the more details of the characters like Sally, reluctant pony, and local girl should have been provided.
One thing I really liked about this story. Although it's a Femdom story, it's not created as a Female Supremacy book. In addition to Lezdom, the scenario involves maledom-femsub interactions as well. Just that their detailed scenes are avoided. For this people who don't like Female Supremacy books will enjoy this, as well as Femdom readers who are irritated by Maledom-Femsub scenes. It is done very nicely.
I will say overall it's a very good book which could have been a masterpiece actually if the author could have handled the issues I described above. If you are into extremely cruel Femdom story, read it. If you're into pony-play in such scenario, this would be a pure gem for you. But honestly, avoid it if you are not into non-consensual Femdom stories with extreme cruelty. Not only you will not like reading it, you might in fact hate it.
There are a few problems with the story though. First of all, there is just too much repetition of same character reactions throughout the book. Sometimes this enhances feeling the experiences of main character in different scenes and scenarios. But many times it feels too much wordiness. If edited properly, the book can be surely skimmed for about quarter of its length. Probably even half if the author shorten/remove the details of pony tacks and bondage equipment in every scene. These repetitions and wordiness kind of bored at several places, and ultra-slowed the main story.
Another problem, the clothing details of female characters were neglected even in very important scenes and scenarios. This is surprising, as the author always described in great details everything about any pony that came in a scene. Author missed the point that a scene requires details of both the characters to be imagined the same way the author imagined while writing that. Hence, I believe several scenes could not bring same impact as the author intended.
Although the book is written in third-person, the first half of the book is written as if it was first-person POV. It feels to me that the author originally intended to write the book in first-person, but because of some needs in the later part re-wrote/edited it in third-person narration. I personally think that the book would have lot better impact if it was written in first person. But if the author had already decided to write it in third person, the first part should have been re-written properly, and then the more details of the characters like Sally, reluctant pony, and local girl should have been provided.
One thing I really liked about this story. Although it's a Femdom story, it's not created as a Female Supremacy book. In addition to Lezdom, the scenario involves maledom-femsub interactions as well. Just that their detailed scenes are avoided. For this people who don't like Female Supremacy books will enjoy this, as well as Femdom readers who are irritated by Maledom-Femsub scenes. It is done very nicely.
I will say overall it's a very good book which could have been a masterpiece actually if the author could have handled the issues I described above. If you are into extremely cruel Femdom story, read it. If you're into pony-play in such scenario, this would be a pure gem for you. But honestly, avoid it if you are not into non-consensual Femdom stories with extreme cruelty. Not only you will not like reading it, you might in fact hate it.
August 14, 2014
Noncon, EXTREME ponyplay so don't read it if you don't want such hardcore BDSM. Believe me, it is... Tags: extreme ponyplay, hardcore BDSM, FM domination, abuse, kidnapping, pain, human stock.
November 9, 2018
What can I say? It’s supposed to be a FemDom/dominatrix story but it should be labelled borin’atrix. It’s nothing but 8/9 hours of the writer ‘trotting’ out loads of types of horse tackle – chapters and chapters of it in a very ‘narrative boring 3rd person storyline’ that continues throughout the entire book. I should have realised from the very beginning of the book, when it started ‘narrating’ about the main character Jacob, and I initially thought that it was just to give you an overview kind of scenario of how, a totally unbelievable, seriously naive stupid young man (and you’ve got to call him stupid as he was bordering dumb) of how he ends up loosing everything and his supposedly two best mates dump when he got literally caught with his pants down and subsequent ‘fall from grace’. The entire storyline was just too weak a storyline and in a lot of parts annoyingly predictable to say the least. Anyhoos, thought I’d plough on seeing as it wasn’t a cheap read, waiting for the story to pick up and hopefully gallop into the ‘oat's and hay’ as it were. Well, I read and read but nope not even at the end did it 'get going'. I did reads loads of complicated straps of horse tackle that was soooooo complicated in it’s description that it just came out sounding like a giant knot of leather, that left one feeling dazed trying to visualise what the author was trying to describe that, I actually had to skip pages and pages with the words ‘blah, blah, blah going off in my head as all the complicated description’s of these bit’s and bobs just droned on and on and, one could almost feel oneself… ‘Nodding’ off, sorry but that just fit the ‘bit’ LOL. The part that really bothered me was that the author seemed to think that it was ok to have naked men in various straps and stirrups inter acting with teenagers in school lessons, that's just well purvey WRONG, which leads me to wonder about the actual morals of the author. That was a serious 'neigh' and should not have been in the book… at all. Seriously, not even if you have trouble sleeping this would be an ideal book but if you were thinking it was going to be a good read in any shape or form you'll be disappointed..... it never happens.
December 19, 2017
Did not finish.
August 14, 2016
Okay, so this book was kinda hot. As in the, holy crap, I think I really like ponyplay stories. *sigh*
Anyhow, this sets up as your usual capture, but with a strange twist than the usual as it is small, petite girls doing the capturing of ... well, anyone who wanders into their strange little pony-town. (As a note, the author really needs to consult a BMI table - the height/weight ratio he described for these girls is *impossible* [and gross!] and it bugged me quite a bit.)
Jacob (for now) is the center of the story, though we are introduced to a few other ponies. The book catalogs his 'adventure' (re: torture) into the pony lifestyle. He starts participating for a bit until he has a snap and tries to run away ... oh dear... this will only end badly for him.
The end of the story is left so that another book could be added, but it could also end just fine there. I wouldn't mind continuing to read this.
There are lots of spelling errors as this is a book posted online, so I'm a little more forgiving than usual as it is obviously self-published. I read a few more books by this author as well - very entertaining.
Anyhow, this sets up as your usual capture, but with a strange twist than the usual as it is small, petite girls doing the capturing of ... well, anyone who wanders into their strange little pony-town. (As a note, the author really needs to consult a BMI table - the height/weight ratio he described for these girls is *impossible* [and gross!] and it bugged me quite a bit.)
Jacob (for now) is the center of the story, though we are introduced to a few other ponies. The book catalogs his 'adventure' (re: torture) into the pony lifestyle. He starts participating for a bit until he has a snap and tries to run away ... oh dear... this will only end badly for him.
The end of the story is left so that another book could be added, but it could also end just fine there. I wouldn't mind continuing to read this.
There are lots of spelling errors as this is a book posted online, so I'm a little more forgiving than usual as it is obviously self-published. I read a few more books by this author as well - very entertaining.
October 28, 2017
Good development
I enjoy the elaboration of the tale. The description are very good. The transformation of the The captivity. The good care of the pony with severe discipline
I enjoy the elaboration of the tale. The description are very good. The transformation of the The captivity. The good care of the pony with severe discipline
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