You know I really though this had potential, I mean seriously who doesn't love a good zombie apocalypse book? right off the bat I loved the main character, she's a total badass with a bow and arrow, was raised country, she's a hunter (Like me), she's got a bow. and that's where the inconsistencies start. I have hunted with a lot of different weapons, rifles, cross bows, compounds, so when things don't add up I tend to notice more than some people. through out the book Alissa makes comments like "I swing my bow over my shoulder" okay, that is a little odd, but not too bad so lets move on to the next one. "I shoulder my bow" okay quick fun fact: the term "shouldering" only applies to rifles and cross bows, it refers to the act of lifting the stock to you shoulder to aim and probably fire the weapon. it has nothing to do with swinging the bow over your shoulder. swinging the bow over your shoulder is also not a very effective way of carrying it, and you have the potential to damage the string rendering the bow useless.
Another thing that really bothered me was the "hunting knife" that is talked about frequently, and used to kill many zombies. now in the beginning Alissa states that she hunt with a bow, a knife, and a gun . first of all I do not know of anyone who can hunt with a knife. spear? check. bow? check. rifle? definitely. knife? not that I know of, and If you did I would have to be a big friggin knife. knives are something that every hunter should always have on his person for varying reasons, but that doesn't mean that I would recommend hunting with them. furthermore, it is decided on by Alissa and Jordan that the "hunting knife" is not a "melee weapon". okay If its not a melee weapon than what the hell is it? and exactly what kind of knife are we talking here? do you mean knife like folding knife, or machete? you cant get away with just saying "hunting knife" because realistically there is not such thing.
okay last few technical details to go into before I start on the characters. there is a part, (I will not go into specifics because if you do plan on reading the book I will not spoil it for you) where Alissa has a rifle, and is attempting to shoot out "industrial tires" here is her take on the scene. "I lift my brand new rifle, point it at the tires and pull the trigger. nothing happens. This, this right here, is why I hate guns. "to hell with this." I mutter and drop the rifle, letting it clatter to the ground." this is exactly the opposite of what you should do when faced with that kind of situation, and any one who has ever handles a gun knows that. if you pull the trigger and nothing happens either you screwed up when loading it, forgot to turn the safety off, or something is very, very wrong. that gun has the potential to blow up in your face, and throwing it on the ground is asking for trouble. next Alissa proceeds to shoot a chisel point broad-head into an industrial tire at exactly the same time as Jordan and it blows. let me remind you that they are shooting at a moving target, from a roof top. the chance that both would make that shot are minuscule, and even if the truck had been standing it would have been damn near impossible to put enough force behind an arrow to get it to puncture the tire.
now onto the actual characters. lets get two things straight, I like Alissa, and I like Jordan. that being said I feel like they have absolutely no chemistry. we went from lets stay together to increase our chances of survival to sucking each others face in 0 pages flat. then we have snickers (those of you who have read the book know what I'm talking about) I liked that idea, and I felt like it had the potential to be one of those gut wrenching, soul shattering moments, that just make you want to cry for days . but it wasn't. it seemed to me like snickers only purpose was to create conflict between Alissa and Jordan, I found it hard to invest in her because one minute she was there, and the next she wasn't. there really wasn't any characterization, and I felt like there should have been.
as far as the twist at the end with Alissa's uncle, it seemed very rushed, and unnecessary. after most of the book being about survival I just couldn't bring myself to really care, it seemed small in comparison to the rest of the book, and I think if you want a plot twist at the end it needs to be something big.
all in all I was very disappointed, and I would not recommend this book.