[7/10]
An early effort from an unconventional fantasy author. It's difficult to apply the word epic to a book under 200 pages, but I believe it is appropriate. 1975 is well before the advent of doorstopper sized, extruded long series like the Wheel of Time. Another reviewer made a comparison with George R R Martin famous Westeros books, and looking through Crowley bio I see it is not an accidental remark. Both authors went to the same source material : The War of the Roses. Two powerful factions, The Reds and The Blacks, fight it to the death for the throne at the center of the world. Nobody is safe and major characters are cut down shortly after being built up. We have sisters of Mercy (Endwives), Maesters of a sort (The Gray) and an assassin sect (The Just) . The common people (The Folk) are largely ignored as they get caught in the middle of the warring factions. The setting is medieval and low on magic. Another coincidence between the two series is a religious system based on the number seven and on a set of tarot cards used to scry for future events (Erikson?). I really liked this angle, although it was underdeveloped. I made a note of the basic duality for each Deity / Virtue :
- Chalah, who is Love and its redemption, is also Lust and its baseness.
- Dindred, who is Pride, Glory, thus Greatness in the world's eyes, is also blind Rage, thence treachery and ingloriousness.
- Blem, who is Joy and good times, Fellowship and all its comforts, is too Drunkenness, Incontinence and all discomforts.
- Dir, who is Wit, is the same Dir who is Foolishness.
- Tintinnar is the magnanimity of Wealth, the care for money, thus meanness and Poverty.
- Thrawn is Strength and Ability, exertion, exhaustion, and lastly Weakness and Sloth.
- Rizna is Death. Death and Life, who carries the sickle and the seedbag, and ever reaps what he continually sows.
If the plot reminds me of GRRM, the style is not yet wholly Crowley and pays some homage to Michael Moorcock, with a prevalent dark, gothic mood. The world is a disk, but it has little to do with Sir Terry Pratchett's invention: the struggle for survival leaves little time for humor.
And there came the world. Merely a bright line at first, on the darkness of the horizon where the Deep met the black sky; then widening to an ellipse. The world, flat and round and glittering, like a coin flung on the face of the Deep. It came closer, or he grew closer to it -- the sun crossing above it cast changing light upon it, and he watched it change, like a jewel, blue to white to green to veined and shadowed like marble. Only it, in all the Deep that surrounded it, all the infinity of dense darkness, only it glowed: a circle of Something in a sea of nothing.
Some descriptive passages, although short and rare, show the lyrical direction Crowley will go in later novels:
Through the morning, mist in wan rags like unhappy ghosts rose up from the Outlands, drawn into the sun, but still lay thick along the river they followed. Gray trees with pendulous branches waded up to their knobby knees in the slow water.
The prose is dense and challenging at times. Characterization is good, but the naming conventions are unfortunate, with everybody having Black or Red in his family name and an absence of first names (using Older, Younger, Son of, Little instead). The focus is on the big picture where the actors are looked down upon from a great height, toiling like ants unaware that their destiny is controlled by larger forces.
These forces are another aspect that I found typical of the seventies in genre fiction, when fantasy was viewed as the little sister of SF, and writers put in a scientific angle in order to atract the readers. I'm thinking of Pern and Shannara, but also of the big success of conspiracy theorist Erik von Daniken. The Deep opens with the arrival of a Visitor, fallen from the skies in a mechanical egg. He is 'hairless, sexless, birthless, deathless' , probably a construct of sorts who has lost his/its memory and forgoten the mission he was sent to accomplish. His quest for self awareness parallels and redefines the faction war he is a witness and recorder of.
Highly recommended for readers who like compact, single book epics and who prefer puzzles and mysteries left unexplained instead of having every point and angle spoonfed to them (I'm thinking of Sanderson here).