Fighter. He made it here, he can make it anywhere. Fighter is the story of a young mans journey, climbing out of the gutter to rise to the top in New York city. An adventure through the underbelly of society, watching Peter fight his way from the very bottom of the ladder and slowly reach the top. Hard knocks don't come any harder than on the streets of New York. Will Peter manage to survive the mean streets or will he, rise up the ranks and thrive?
A classic story of redemption and one man overcoming all the odds. A true modern day hero story for everyman. realistic and grounded in truth, this story will take you to those places you have wanted to go but wouldnt dare.
Any reader needs to remember this is a first novel and the writer has been very brave to offer it up for public scrutiny. It is therefore up to the reader and the writing community to share their wisdom and suggestions to help him improve.
This is the story of Peter who has grown up in the slums of New York and how he uses his skill as a fighter to turn his life around. Logically the first people he meets and gets involved with are gangsters. The readers sympathy is still retained as there is something of the gentleman about the character in his manner, despite his violence. He meets a number of beautiful women who play differing roles in his life and the book ends with acts of philanthropic generosity.
There are some nice phrases in the writing which suggest potential for improvement. This is a reasonable first attempt and I am sorry I can not give it more.