I got this free from Smashwords several years ago. I love the title, love the era and the summary sounded interesting. But I ended up not really liking this book. I didn't realize this book was a short story. I loath short stories and no one can make me like them. What is the point? Idk
When I saw this book, I immediately thought it was a P&P sequal. Upon reading it, I found that the mother is annoying, father is intolerant of mom, younger sister is spoiled and loud, older sister is the local beauty...well I could go on. So this might as well have been a sequel.
Chapman created a cute story about a middle child, Kitty, who meets up with two captains while her parents try to marry off her older sister. The characters were likable, mostly because of their similarities to P&P. I wish the author had decided on making this a novel and not a short story.
The reason I hate novellas is because the characters don't develop as much as I always want them to and the stories themselves could blossom into so much more. The second reason, is because the author is almost forced to tell the reader everything and the story suffers. In the case of Kitty, the story did suffer because there was a lot of telling the reader instead of showing and I didn't like that.
The book had good dialogue. It really didn't deviate much from the era. The reason the book got a lower rating is because I noticed that there were some social interactions that never would have happened. I also noticed the book was a bit choppy in places. I had questions that were never really answered and this was partly due to the length of the book.
Overall, I wish Chapman had gone with a full length story rather than opted for a short story. I feel she created good characters, decent story line and the book would have been so much better had it had more depth and well, story.