Forbidden Apple

by baka_usagi

WATTPAD VERSION

158 pages, ebook

First published March 20, 2013

About the author

https://instagram.com/jonna1012

Reviews

[Ronalyn · Rating 5 out of 5]

Congratulations for sending goose bumps everywhere! A job well done for making my head hurts! And guess what, I am totally lost with all the twists and turns your imaginations has brought!

Kyaaaaaa >.< Ate Jonna, CONGRATS! CONGRATS! CONGRATS! It's my first time to read fantasy/mystery books and, yes, I find it amazing :-) Actually, while reading, I have this urged to PM you and asks who is she/he, what was that, what will happen next and the like. Haha :-) From the beginning 'til the end, the revelations surprises and I was like "Woah! For real?".

I admire you a lot for this! You are one of a kind! Genius enough to get the attention of the readers by using codes to decode and of course the twists of the story itself.

I find this book somewhat inspirational. This taught me how to value life, how to sacrifice for the one you love, and how jealousy can be the root of all evilness.

Thank you Ate Jonna for sharing this kind of story to us :-) You serve as an inspiration not only to me but especially to those who are frustrated enough and about to end their lives :-) More blessings to come and keep on writing :-) I LOVE YOU MY INSPIRATION :-) :-* ♥

[Sarah Jane · Rating 5 out of 5]

THIS IS MY SECOND TIME READING A FANTASY STORY. AND JUST LIKE THE FIRST ONE I READ NAMANGHA TALAGA AKO SA DITO.2 THUMBS UP SA STORY NA TO. INFORMATION OVERLOAD AFTER READING THIS HAHAHAHA. ANG DAMING TWIST AND TURNS OF EVENTS HINDI SIYA CLICHE NA STORY KAYA GAGANAHAN KA TALAGANG BASAHIN. EDUCATIONAL DIN BECAUSE OF THE DIFFERENTS CODES NA KELANGAN ISOLVE I REALLY TRIED MY BEST NA ISOLVE PERO NGANGA TALAGA AKO EH HAHAHA


ANG CUTE NG FLOW NG STORY MAPAPA-HA KA NALANG KADA CHAPTER. LAHAT NA NAFEEL KO SA STORY NA TO TAKOT, KILIG, SAYA, PANGHIHINAYANG THE BEST WOHHH


CONGRATULATIONS ATE JONNA FOR CREATING SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY <3
AJA FIGHTING

[Jhen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Actually, Im not a fan of a fantasy genre stories but when I read this one I was actually amazed. Ang ganda ng message ng story though fantasy sya di sya boring. Tatamaan ka sa mga linyang binibitawan ng mga characters.

Try this one and you'll realize how to value life and the values instilled in the book should be applied by everyone.

Godbless Ms. Jonnalyn and Congratulations for a beautiful masterpiece ♥

[Justine Mae · Rating 5 out of 5]

First of all, this book gave me a HEADACHE XD talagang mapapaisip ka at para kang baliw na kakausapin mo ang sarili mo kung ganto ganyan XD. pero i can say that this book ay maLUPET! ang astig talagang pinagisipan ang bawat chapters :) MASTER PIECE ^___^\/
although hindi siya yung normal na romance na karaniwan nating binabasa , masasabi ko pa ring isa to sa napakagandang nabasa ko :) SWEAR ! ^__^ kung gusto niyo makabasa ng hindi CLICHE eto na yun!!! kaya gora na basa na rin kayo nito :)

[Eun-hye Camden · Rating 5 out of 5]

its a great story...great twist...aLdo ndi q nabasa un ibng chaps nito sa wattpad kasi na pubLish na nito ni ms author kya some chaps are deLeted...but khit ganun..mapapahook ka tLga s story nito at sa iba nyang mga works..galing ni ms. author..as in...u'LL feeL a Lots of emotions s mga works nya..she is a great author..one of the great..God bLess to u author...more inspirations po..

[Natsu · Rating 5 out of 5]

This second book is a matter of life and death. Are you brave enough to sacrifice something for your love one? Are you prepared of the consequences? This things will pop in to your mind while reading this book. You'll surely think of some things that really relates into your life all thru out.

[Natsu · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book is so cool! Started with its mind twisting game that will surely twist your mind. :)

[Ean · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ate Jonna! Your story... Super duper ultra mega ganda. Sobrang natuwa ako. Lahat yon FIRST. First time ko mag order, takot kasi ako e. First time ko din magbasa ng ganung klaseng genre. Matagal ko nang naorder yung book na FA 1 & 2 pero ngayon ko lang nabasa. Super ganda talaga ate. :( Hahaha! As in. Nagustuhan ko. Kahit na nahilo, sumakit ang ulo ko kaka analyze. The codes. Educational din. Na pati ako namamangyan sa mga codes. Well, grade 7 palang naman ako. Haha kada may code na dadarating para kay Apple, nasa harap ako ng laptop ko. Nag reresearch ako about sa codes. Hihi. Lumawak pa knowledge ko. OHA?! Hahaha pero ate... natuwa talaga ako sa story. Kasi andun lahat ng hinahanap ko :) Hindi puro kilig. Hindi puro romance. Halo halo. <3 Pero sa totoo lang, umiyak ako nung sinabing namatay si J to save Apple. WAAAAA. Pero yun pala... GEEZ. I really love your story Ate Jonna. :) Di ko inexpect na pagpupuyatan ko yun. Hihihi. Yung tipong isang gabi ko lang binasa yung isang book. Di ko kayang ipagpabukas pa. Hahaha, TWO THUMBS UP AKO ATE. NA AMAZE AKO. As in. Hihihi. Congrats ate. Love lots. <3


PS. Kinilig ako sa message mo po. ^__^ Hihi. I'm your XHEA. -XHEANTTLE :) <3

[Vet Ly · Rating 5 out of 5]

This story is really worth it talaga. I love the twist of the story. yung logic pati sa pagsolve nung puzzles wow ang galing talaga and nakakakilig grabe <33 *O*