Drinking game: Every time Sarah Coakley writes something like "If I'm right about this", take a shot. You'll get drunk, but it may help with the readability of this book.
First of all, I abhorred Coakley's writing style. The informal, chatty, "I wanna be your pal" tone may work in lecture halls (I can imagine it is quite engaging) but in writing it comes across as grating, prone to redundancies, and manipulative. Like most post-modern feminisms, Cokaley's "feminist theology" is more assertive than argumentative. She doesn't argue for her points, she asserts why you should agree with them at face value and by fragmenting them into a verbal soup.
Though she initially makes a big deal of her "theologie totale" it's exact function is somehwat obscure and by chapter 7 she seems to have forgotten about it almost completely and is just ranting about the patriarchy, throwing the word around as if it is going out of style, and making distinctly psycholinguistic arguments rather than theological ones.
Now, is this book all bad? No. If you can get past her writing there are interesting themes here. Coakley does well in tackling what she percieves as the three main objections to Systematic Theology, and she very fruitfully nuances past (uncharitable) interpretations of the patristic fathers.
Yet, the overall perception is that there are too many chefs in the kitchen. She flits from thinker to thinker without engaging truly and deeply with anyone, she'll suddenly drop in a completely redundant assessment from an ecologist, then drop it as if it never happened.
Her pneumatology is interesting, though I think she is unduly harsh towards the early and institutional church. I would agree with her that you can't just slap a "feminine" aspect onto the Trinity and then hope all objections go away, yet, at times it seems it is exactly what she does when she vehemently denounces the implicit primacy of the dyadic Father-Son, and exalts in the idea of the primacy of the Spirit instead. Which she has firmly rooted to risqué sectarianism, ecstatic experiences of the divine, and female political and sexual power.
Following in the usual trends of post-modern feminism she is obsessed with sex and gender and sees everything through this lens, which leads to some awkward overinterpretations and conclusions that are really only obvious if you agreed with her underlying presumptions before the assertions are made. It's very blunt and awkward metaphorical readings.
She takes a stand for gendered differentation, yet fails to properly define what this means to her, which muddles her point about it's cosmic lability and the problematic 'third' which is part of the realm of humanity as well.
In her suggestion that the East/West split is somewhat overexaggerated and false, which I can support or sympathize with, she somewhat curiously suggest that the definitional split is primarily down to a post-revolutionary Russian Orthodox need to separate itself from Western neo-Thomism. She seems then to equate all orthodoxy with Russian Orthodoxy, and only in the last chapter does she give a half-hearted "oh right, the filioque" discussion which she frankly seems bored with from start to finish and which only serves as an impetus to spend the final pages screeching "patriarchy".
In this sentence, were the words "scummy" and "patriarchal" necessary, especially scummy? Ugh, this is what puts me off feminism as a whole: "Its appropriateness inner-trinitarianly means that the TRUE meaning of 'Father' is to be found in the Trinity, not dredged from the scummy realm of human patriarchal fatherhood"
So, was it cogent? Not really. It's like she's thrown a ton of things into a bowl and is then trying to stitch it all together, but the final product is lumpy and uneven, and worse yet - it is sometimes unclear if Coakley has much original thoughts of her own, or if she's simply laboring to tie together other theologians thoughts with a modern feminist sensibility, trying to fit God into feminism. Her expressed goal was to give the objections to Systematic Theology a solid refutation in a theological framing, but she ultimately comes across as someone serving two masters, trying to have her cake and eating it too.
Much like Robert Jenson she seems to have a deep suspicion of early conciliary efforts and doctrinal formulations, yet at least the former digs into the history of it in a less reductionist way. Here it's most "church bad. Wants to rein in and control" - "spirit-lead path good! Sectarian and nebulous, but women, yay!" It just comes across as extremely one sided in Coakely at times, though she does nuance particular arguments against e.g. Augustine, she sheds no light on the nuances of doctrine, suggesting its beneficial aspects along with the problematic ones.
Ultimately, for me as a reader, if this is representative of why Systematic Theology is necessary, then I'm gonna be part of the crowd singing "hey hey, ho ho, Systematic Theology has got to go!" I'm being somewhat facticious here, it is probably Coakley's feminist theology I've no patience for, rather than the systematic aspects.
I hope I won't have to read Coakley again, and I'll only do so for an assignment. If you like Judith Butler and her kind, you'll probably find some interesting stuff in here. If you don't, then there are still a couple of pages which may be of interest. But I can't genuinely recommend it, it's floaty, verbose theory purporting contemplative practicality, yet contemplation is dropped after a couple of chapters and a lot of the writing is probably gibberish to people outside of academia. So basically, top-down gender theory hoping to help us "mind-shift" to pneumatological primacy. Thanks, but no thanks.