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Edyn: the Infected
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November 3, 2014
Yet another zombie book, with nothing to make it stand out (except possibly a complete lack of understanding of atheism).
The characters are flat and lifeless, and the dialogue is forced and unnatural. In the opening, a character watches his girlfriend collapse from a hideous unknown disease and then goes and has coffee and starts flirting. There's no real, genuine, engaging emotion.
The authors lack of understanding about medicine, science, atheism etc is painfully obvious and it's clear no research has been done.
Sadly, it's not even been edited beyond basic grammar. The description is poor, the sentences are awkward and words are repeated within a matter of sentences.
With research, effort and editing this could have been good. Hopefully the author will learn from her mistakes and produce something great next time round.
The characters are flat and lifeless, and the dialogue is forced and unnatural. In the opening, a character watches his girlfriend collapse from a hideous unknown disease and then goes and has coffee and starts flirting. There's no real, genuine, engaging emotion.
The authors lack of understanding about medicine, science, atheism etc is painfully obvious and it's clear no research has been done.
Sadly, it's not even been edited beyond basic grammar. The description is poor, the sentences are awkward and words are repeated within a matter of sentences.
With research, effort and editing this could have been good. Hopefully the author will learn from her mistakes and produce something great next time round.
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