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333 pages, Hardcover
First published October 27, 2013



'Bloodmark'is the first novel in the 'Bloodmark Saga' and a very solid debut from Aurora Whittet! It captured the very essence of what I love best about werewolf/fantasy/shape-shifter novels! The steamy, sexy, hot romance that permeates every single page!
Whilst it wasn't a COMPLETELY original idea, it definitely had quite a FEW original ideas thrown in there. I thought if those original ideas were more emphasises or evolved – maybe even more ideas thought up to support them - then they really made for an even BETTER story.
Like most independently published or self-published novels, this one lacked just a little something. I guess a good metaphor for it would be a diamond in the rough, not yet completely ready to see the light, but pretty good in its own self and full of potential. This draft was as polished as it could possibly be but still needs some professional critique.
'Bloodmark' was written very well and effectively. It conveyed every bit of that raw emotion pulsing through the plot. It didn't repeat itself and was executed in a very mature and practised style. However, it could have been written a bit more differently. 'Bloodmark' was told like most other novels: in chronological order. I believe if the author disrupted the plot a little with flashbacks and flashforwards it would have created a better effect and would have enhanced both quality and final effect.
It is written solely from Ashling's POV in first person. I guess this was a good choice but if it was written in a different narrative, such as second person - that would have been awesome!
The world was well built and I enjoyed the historical background which Aurora Whittet created to support the existence of her fantastical creatures. It brought that extra tang and novelty to my reading experience. It wasn't the most original, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. If you're looking for a soul-satisfying read: Then there is NOTHING better than this!
I definitely stayed up late reading and finished this book sometime in the middle of the night! There was something there that kept me reading and reading just one more chapter!
Grammar was good and the prose well done! I spotted a few typos but they were easy to ignore and one time quite hilarious!
Congratulations to Aurora Whittet on publishing a solid debut worthy of the most pickiest werewolf lovers!
A werewolf Princess with no hope.
A land of mysteries.
An arranged marriage.
A frightful future.
Enemies abound.
Hope can be found.
Love can be gained through the ashes of torn dreams.
Blood will be spilled as evil lurks withing shadows.
Bloodmark.
Ahh sorry, i know i went so dramatic there! It had to be done because when i read the premise there was so much excite! (yes i mean it that way), I was nearly dancing in my seat when i opened the file with gleaming eyes.
and then...
well....
How do I explain this?
This book could've been a killer story, i mean, i was half in love with the idea and then i started reading and i just...gosh...I just hated Ashling so much. She was SUCH a brat!
S.U.C.H-A- B.R.A.T
Frustration became a feeling i was thoroughly acquainted with.
I'm sorry if this is a bit too blunt, but i honestly have to tell my opinion.
When looking back on my annotations throughout reading i had a lot of "So cliche" and "typical" and "She's a brat!" as comments.
Oh! um, i should warn you guys, there is insta love, and so many guys fall for her!
Ahhhhh I'm so annoyed! This book's story line was freaking great but the overall delivery...was...lacking.
Authors, 16 years old princess do not all have to be the same, they do not have to be like "I am so strong, but i need to be protected! Everyone bow to me, but oh-shucks i'm so shy and annoying but everyone loves me!"
Oh and they don't need to be stupid!
"...It is the pheronome you give off that they don't realize they are smelling."
"So I stink!? That's why they want to be near me?!"
"Don't be a child..."
I was thinking the same thing. Don't be a child princess! you've been raised in unusual circumstances which means you'd have to mature pronto!
Anyway, have a go at it, for me it didn't quite make it, the idea is pretty cool though and it had a lot of potential to be a pretty awesome story.
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