More like 2.5 stars
This is my first EL book. I was not thrilled about it because I was didn’t like how the book ended. I won’t, however, judge her other books by this and decided to give her the benefit of the doubt since she’s so highly recommended by GR members and Julia Quinn. I’ve already read some synopsis of her other books and I still have high hopes.
There are three stories in this book. 1) Camden & Gina, 2) Tuppy & Carola, and 3) Esme’s story. The only couple without a trace of infidelity is Tuppy & Carola – which is why it’s no surprise that it’s my favorite storyline, however minor.
When I don’t give the book serious considerations, I would say that I liked it well enough because I was entertained. It was diverting and it kept me amused [and awake] during my hours on the train commuting to/from work. However, when I do give it some consideration the only couple I wholeheartedly like is Tuppy & Carola...because when I think about the other two H/h, there’s quite a bit I find frustrating.
What I didn’t like:
1)The Cheating, Dishonestly, and the Betrayal:
I hate when people do bad things and essentially get away with it. Even if – actually, especially if – they are the H/h and do something low, they need to do something to redeem themselves. They didn’t here.
I liked Cam & Gina and I wanted them to be together, but she was a cheater (and Cam was her accomplice.) – I mean she was with Sebastian for a while and they were engaged! Therefore, even though I wanted her and Cam to have a HEA, I couldn’t root for them 100% since they got together upon betraying another – though the person who is being betrayed is also a [stick-in-the-mud, condescending] cheater! Just because Seb assumed – yea, assumed..not confirmed – that Gina was going to stay married to Cam, they are still engaged and committed ergo seducing Esme is cheating!
I HATE Esme. First, because she betrayed Gina, what’s worse is how casually Gina forgave her. Esme should have come forward the very next day after she and Sebastian kissed, but she didn’t. Instead she proceeded to flirt and deceive her closest friend. It wasn’t even that she was caught up in the passion either because she and Sebastian were at it all night. Secondly, I felt like Esme broke up her husband from his love by dangling the idea of an heir. Lastly, she let Sebastian take all the blame and punishment for something that she was equally responsible for.
Is Sebastian the villain? Were we supposed to hate him and only him? Really? That’s arguable because I dislike him just as much as Esme. No, I dislike Esme more, to be sure. Sebastian tried to be too good for too long that when he finally did, he went bust and it happened the night he was with Esme. I felt bad for the bastard actually, I think he got a worse punishment than he deserved.
What the heck happened? EL wrote these characters to be good people and then half way through they all lost their senses and respectability by listening to their loins instead of their conscience. Actually, what conscience? None of them felt any real guilt about cheating. They just felt shame because they were caught.
As a reader, I didn’t like that we were supposed to let the whole thing go since in the end the H/h got their HEA. Are we just supposed to forget that a significant breach of trust occurred? It felt like in the end, even though we get to the HEA..I didn’t have closure, at least not a clean one because I felt that at some point all four of them (Cam, Gina, Sebastian, and Esme) needed to repent – to say to each other “I’m sorry I was a deceitful friend. I’m sorry I betrayed your trust, never mind that you betrayed mine..”
2)The Ending – what a mess!
So, are Cam and Gina are no longer married right? They’ve been playing house while in Greece? With all the rules of propriety, why wasn’t this a concern.
What was the point in killing Lord Rawlings? He was such a nice man! Though I think his death served a purpose for a future book. It’s as if EL realized she only had 50 pages to wrap it all up and rushed the whole thing but still had crazy plot lines to squeeze in. Too much happened (the Aphrodite explanation, the brother reveal, Rawlings death, the annulment, trip to Greece, Seb's fake marriage license, etc) and it wasn’t written to transition well from one to the other..much of it just didn’t make good sense.
3)The Love Scenes – another mess!
Maybe I’ve been spoiled by Lisa Kleypas, but EL’s love scenes are – the best way I can describe is – at times unclear, muddled, and/or badly choreographed/described. I don’t know what’s happening, because the descriptions aren’t communicated well and when the reader doesn’t know what’s happening – well, it’s hard to get swept up in the moment. EL tries to be artsy in her description and it just does not work. Even basic things such as who is standing where? For example, when they were in the bath. One second they were kissing in the tub, then Cam laid Gina on her back..but where? In the water? On the floor next to the tub? against the tub? on the stairs? in the chaise? There are small details like this that I think EL assumes we can fill – which we can but then she describes something that doesn’t quite work. It feels like EL wants to be explicit and descriptive with fancy wording, but on some parts she changes her mind so she’s vague (forcing the readers to fill in the blanks.) It creates a disconnect and it’s distracting. I don’t personally need explicit love scenes to make the stories good – but if they are there, they need to be good. Don’t do it half way.
What I liked:
To end on a positive note, I positively loved Tuppy and Carola. They were sweet characters and adorable (and in the bedroom they were adorably awkward - haha.) Their story made me smile, laugh, and say “aww” more times than I care to admit.