I found this book in the library and, running out of time, picked it up on the way out just for something to read. I am glad that I did as I found it to be very entertaining. This seems to be a typical fantasy story line but has a few definite twists. An estranged prince is framed for a crime and must seek support to raise an army in order to reclaim his birthright. Along the way, the characters grow and deal with problems and challenges in their lives. I particularly liked how the author explores the feelings raging inside the characters and how they go about resolving them but does not dwell on them to a fault. He gives me a taste of what is going on without droning on. The book I read had quite a few editing errors which I can ignore if I am enjoying myself. The characters developed steadily although perhaps a bit slowly. Another complaint is that certain aspects of the various sub-plots seem to have been edited out. I will find references to something going on in the main characters life but those events had never been expanded upon. I felt that the author gave the main character a well rounded personality that makes you see him have potential as a future champion yet when the going gets tough, the main character becomes annoyingly spoiled, complaining about how everything that is going wrong. By the end of the book, we start seeing more appropriate growth toward maturity. Even with some of these gaps, the story is easy to follow and, except for some poor editing, is a very easy read. I don't see very much out there by this author but after reading this book, I see that with a little work, Mr. Brown could be a competitive author if he chose. This may not be the best read but I thoroughly enjoyed it and am looking forward to reading the rest of this series.