Drake Coburn has always looked out for his stepsister like a good brother should, until one day his girlfriend had an idea that would turn their lives upside down. Would one taste of the sweet Bella be enough, or will he go back for more?
When Drake Coburn was nine years old his father married Rachel and she had a daughter named Isabella who was a year younger than him. At first Drake kept to himself and didn’t pay much attention to his new stepsister but eventually they became best friends. Drake and Isabella are now both seniors in high school and Drake is dating Maddy. Isabella is usually a third wheel with Drake and Maddy so Maddy suggests they have a threesome.
— I can’t wait to make love to my sexy stepsister, only thing was, where they might both think this was a one time thing, I was pretty sure I was not going to be satisfied with that.
— When her lips closed around the head of my cock I thought I might explode, nothing prepared me for the emotion that rioted through me, the love and lust that took control.
Well, 👀 I think that was probably the only scenario where FMF would work for me 🤣🤣. This was short and shallow. If the heroine had a pov and dialogue, this might have been a higher rated book. Also, if the hero hadn’t been quite so diplomatic to the OW after they did the deed and she was all outraged he’d completely ignored her, I would have been more satisfied. 🤷🏼♀️ The hero eventually gets it right though. I do love a good evil OW getting what she deserves. 😈
I did like this one. The H had a girlfriend in the beginning who wanted a threesome with the h. During the threesome the H/h realized how they felt. He only kissed the girlfriend during and after until he could get away from her. Little weird, but good story.
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Jordan Silver`s stories are certainly guilty pleasures of mine,and "Forbidden" comes close to that. The funny thing is that there was supposed to be a menage night between a stepsister Isabella and her stepbrother Drake and his girlfriend Maddy. But it ends up being only about the step-siblings Drake and Isabella.
Short and very silly written, but that`s the style of Jordan Silver i guess.
There is just something about forbidden love stories...
The story is mainly in the hero's POV. I like that the hero is possessive to the heroine. The sex scene was descriptive and the FMF action was hot! Love that the hero was only focused with the heroine.. sucks for the gf! lol.
I wish the book was longer because it has some potential to be a full length book.
Hmm, it is true that there is something exciting about the forbidden, hence the reason I bought this book. The story isn't bad, yes it's short but you get the whole story all the way till they have a kid. The only problem I had was the way Bella lost her virginity. I mean a threesome for your very first time? Anyway, Silver has better books than this one. Read Lyon's story!
This was pure taboo smut. Ok, ok, that's a bit harsh. It's written from the step-brother's POV, so it reads a bit crass. Also, his step-sis is almost infantile with her insecurity and self-soothing rocking. I just didn't find her mature or attractive. And their parents were kind of icky. And his ménage seeking slutty girlfriend was definitely icky. Overall, the book was not good.
⚠️ + Info: - Instalove - H POV only - Virgin h, & H was experienced + in a relationship their first time together - Menage momentish, it’s the H’s gfs idea for the 3 of them to have smex together but during the act the H kinda forgets she’s there - OWD: h’s gf/ex gf tries to cause drama - H is faithful to h after the menage moment - No: OMD, push/pull, cheating, separation, or 3rd act break up - HEA: Married & pregnant with a baby.
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I can't really say anything bad about this book. The quality of writing wasn't so good. Lot of run-on sentences.
For example:
I reassured her the third time I had seen this reaction, I'd come up on her in the hallway outside our bedroom doors which were across the hall from each other, our parents were screwing away in their room at the end of the hall, it was midday on a Saturday, school was out for the weekend and if I remembered correctly last thing I knew Rachel had been in the middle of making lunch while dad had ran to his office at the hospital for some paperwork he had forgotten.
And, that's a bigger mouthful than Isabella gets later in the book.
This book was an extremely hot story about a step-brother and step-sister who realize they have deeper feelings for each other than sibling love.
The sex scenes were well-written as usual when it comes to Jordan. It will make you sweat, and sigh, and swoon. Oh my!
Drake sees Isabella in a new light, and when he realizes his love for her, he doesn't let his ex or the other kids at school bother him, because all he cared about was the two of them.
The ending was awesome too. My only complaint was I wanted more of Bella and Drake. Oh well. You can't always get what you want.
I liked it. The writing could've been better I guess, because I had to reread few paragraphs to understand few scenes, it jumped a lot too from one scene to another, the transition could've been smoother. I don't know, I don't know much about writing, I just wrote what I felt like. Anyway, I enjoyed it, I wanted more, and author could've streched the story easily because I wanted to know more, it finished way too quickly, and it had the usual teenage highschool drama which I LOVE, so it explains why I wanted more. The story had potential.
Although the subject matter is not what society would consider normal, I enjoyed the love story. I just couldn't stop putting Jace in Drake's place. I expected Drake to treat Maddy, I don't know, flex his rich muscle. It was a short novella but a good read. I don't know if this would be a reread like the Eden High series. But read it and form your own opinion.
Man was a wuss. I didn’t like the OW by any means but the way he treated both women were horrible.
Heroine felt like a side character. She didn’t really have much personality nor part in the story imo and got completely overshadowed by the supposed plot, the hero, and the drama. She spoke like what 10 lines?
The ow drama wasn’t my jam. Had to ignore the fact that the H more than liked the ow and was dating her and having bomb sex before ow suggest the threesome. It was ironic that the guy figures out he loves h during a threesome w ow where there is plenty of touching between him and ow He starts w calling ow his girl and then shifts to h calling her the same.
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It was nice getting the POV from the male character, I really enjoyed the story just wish it was a bit longer, more bantering between the two main characters. Either way it was good, really enjoyed it.
They say forbidden fruit tastes the sweetest... Drake found that out with his step sister Isabella. Drake was so soft and sweet with Isabella. Their relationship was truly beautiful.
I have read all of JS book and some of the multiple times. My all time favorite is of course the foul mouth alpha Colton Lyon. If you need a quick fix of steamy sex, gorgeous alpha possessive and some time a sassy corky heroine, JS is is the master.