With a name like Nick Oddo, how could this author not write science fiction? That is what I was thinking when I won this as part of a Goodreads Giveaway.
This book has a refreshing view of the future, which I say because most science fiction novels are all about how our negative actions in the present are intensified and the result is a dystopic view of the future. This novel shows a very promising view of the future, both in Andrew Jackson's time and 800 years away.
The use of the future as a setting of a science fiction gives almost limitless possibilities of what can happen, and simply explain them away as scientific advancements. I felt like the use of the 'first future' of 2094 was utterly unnecessary, since the technology is fairly close to that of our own, aside from the invention of orbs, a strange combination of a social security number, mobile phone and social media. I felt this could have been just as easily explained as being an experimental military technology in the present time, given to Andy just in case anything does happen whilst he is hibernating. I would have related more to Andy if he were from our present, rather than future present.
While on the topic of future present, I wasn't bored while reading about the events leading up to the hibernation, but nor was I particularly enthralled. A lot of characters I thought were redundant and confusing, which could have been alleviated if some of the characters had been amalgamated. This is also true, though much less so, in the future future part of the novel. I found the characters of Brennan and Shorty to be virtually useless, as they fulfil no real plot points until their descendants are revealed, though these descendants are in my mind equally as non-essential at the present time. I thought a better way would have been to have them as minor characters for now, and then maybe reintroduce them as more important characters in the next instalment, perhaps as an alternate view of the events in the first part of the story.
I found the story full of similarly redundant plot points, such as the expedition to New Paris. This plot point had no impact on the story or any lasting impression on the readers. Sure there was Andy's guilt, but that was mentioned and resolved in a single chapter with no apparent lasting effects. Mind you, many of these points could be trivial now but turn out to be a major turning point in the second and third books. I also found the explanations behind actions a little bit lacking. Why did they decide on an expedition to Pluto in the first place? Do they want to set up a galactic base there? Mine for minerals? Just generally explore. I would feel a lot more connected with the story if I knew more motivations of the characters.
The contents page gave away much of the story for me, and I thought the mini sub-chapter titles a little grating, with headings like 'garden party' and such. I would have found out it was a party in the garden just by reading it, not by being forewarned in the first instance. I was somewhat holding out hope that the events alluded to in the contents would be about other characters, but alas, they played out exactly as I imagined they might have on my first glimpse through the pages. Whilst on the topic of presentation, there were also several spelling and formatting errors, such as speech marks after the 'Andy said,' though nothing that interrupted the flow of the story. There was also some dialogue where I didn't know who was speaking. These might just be nitpicking points though.
While reading, I felt it would have been more beneficial to have seen the future entirely through Andy's eyes, not knowing the date or anyone's intentions until he did, and exploring the world as he saw it the first time. There were several cases where other characters, such as Helen or Doctor Ng, were talking about their intentions and then we read through the description of them carrying them out. To me it was like reading through the same events twice. By experiencing only Andy's perception of his surroundings, we would have been much more confused by the surroundings, wanting to know more, and maybe even mistrusting the more official characters as they had kept some secrets. It would have made the story much more interesting, in my opinion.
There were a few instances of jumping around in time, which were mildly annoying at worst, and they didn't occur often, only when explaining some aspect of the current point, which made them tolerable. Not so well done, however, were the large chunks of missing action. We see the characters preparing for a major event, such as the earthquake or engagement party, and then we see the aftermath. I would have liked to have read about the event, observing how the characters react, and learning more about them. I wanted to read about the frantic search for Andy's capsule by Brennan and her team, their despair when they realised he was lost, the heartache of the family when they heard that Andy was missing, or potentially dead. These are the type of events where I would have related as an emotional human and gained the most insight into the story and its characters.
The final third section of the novel read like a cheap love story to me, with predictable plot and cheesy dialogue. I thought it was the weakest part of the book.
I find it hard to write about the aspects I liked about the story, simply because its much easier to write negative comments than positive ones. I rated this novel 3 stars for a reason, and that is because it is a wonderful idea posed in an interesting setting. The execution and technique could have been greatly improved, in my opinion, but the core of the story is there. I loved reading about the future world Andy finds himself in, his adventures with future technology, and the explanations by his new friends of how to use it. I also enjoyed the almost satirical references to our own current technology and culture, such as the idolisation of celebrities, prolonging of life and the prospect of being connected to everyone in the world.
As a summary, I felt that this novel had huge potential, but maybe lacked in some areas of its execution. It seems to me like the typical self-published book, and thought it could have been improved with some reasonable editing. Much of the focus was on characterisation in places I felt story progression would have worked better. And points of view were either from several characters, resulting in duplicate retellings, or from one that was less informed about the situation, resulting in an incomplete picture of the events. Despite my comments above I did thoroughly enjoy being taken to the future by Mr. Oddo. I sincerely hope that it plays out as positively as it did in the novel.
A great book to kick off a focus on views on the future, especially for a debut novel. I will certainly be on the lookout for the next instalment in the trilogy.