Enticed

by Lynn Davis

Rhonda Emerson had the relationship she had wanted, an understanding man, good loyal friends and family that loved her. She just graduated from college and has the rest of her life unfolding before her. She lands a job with a highly sought after employer. Just when life seems to be going in the right direction for Rhonda, Miguel returns from Afghanistan and wants to tie up loose ends. Rhonda starts to feel things she thought were dead but how can she give in to her feelings for Miguel when she is engaged to be married to Roland?

When Roland laid his eyes on Rhonda, he was not confused...He had to had her in his life. He immediately takes matters into his own hands and in spite of her friends, he wins her heart. Now after three years of dating, she is ready to start a life with him only. The heart knows what the heart wants and Rhonda Emerson is the girl for him, but is he ready to challenge a bond from the past?

This is book one of the Rhonda Emerson Series

28 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 11, 2013

About the author

Lynn Davis is an emerging author from Literotica.com. Her stories Danielle and David, I Never Meant to Fall in Love and A Lesson in Love has jump started her writing career. With an average of about 10K viewers, she is ready to launch in to the literary world. When Lynn is not writing, she is a life coach of women empowerment, non-profit director and an entrepreneur. Her favorite thing to help her relax is cross-stitching, reading a good book or watching a good movie (girl flicks, of course). Lynn lives in California as a single woman who loves life but often she hangs with her niece and nephew. She is interactive with her loyal readers and welcomes you to contact her. She actually loves hearing from you.

Reviews

[Crystal · Rating 3 out of 5]

Enticed is a short but steamy read.

Rhonda is engaged to an incredible guy. But lately her mind has been wandering back to her ex Miguel who broke her heart. When Miguel comes back into the picture and wants to reconnect with Rhonda, will she give in to him or will she turn him away?

Lynn did a good job with this novella. Although to me it felt a little rushed, I enjoyed reading it. I hope in the next install to this series, we get to see more detail into Rhonda's past relationship with Miguel.

[N. Kuhn · Rating 2 out of 5]

First off, this book needs editing. Not only are there a bunch of errors when reading it, but then a lot of the writing felt forced. It was trying to hard to portray certain emotions instead of just flowing. The erotic parts were a lot better written than the rest of the book, but at times it still felt stilted when there were conversations and interactions. Even the plot was transparent, predictible and the ending left it unresolved, and not in a good way. Definitely does not leave me hanging, waiting to read something else.

[Irayda Moran (Quezada) · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5
"Where there was fire ashes remain." Entice reminds me of that saying.
This is a quick short story of love and betrayal. Rhonda is engaged to Ronald and one day she receives a call from an old love, Miguel. She begins to have doubts about her wedding. Miguel will stop at nothing to have Rhonda back and regrets letting her go.
The story has great potential for development. The love scenes could have been a bit more steamier for an erotic novel. In all, I am curious to see where it leads and what happens with the the newly formed triangle..
Happy Reading!