Where to begin? Maybe at the fact that I didn't finish this book! Why?
I didn't read author's personal description, but I would assume she is 18 year old literature student and this is one of her earlier work! Before she discovered EDITING !!!!
How else would you forgive her 30 mistakes per page?!? English is not my first language, hell, not even second one, but I know the difference between too and to, and you're and your!
I read somewhere she had a beta reader!!!! Beta or blind reader? It both starts with B!
And COMMAS!! Commas, for Christ sake!! You know this little things that look like this , and divide sentences, names and words like BABY!!
If I had a penny for every time I read word "baby", I could buy a much better books than this one.
Typical conversation in this book:
He: Baby (1) can you bring me a beer?
She: Of course baby (2)
He: Thank your baby (3)
She: Your welcome baby (4)
He: Love you baby (5)
She: Love you to baby (6)
..... You can see where this is going.....
Few months ago I read something that stayed with me. Main female was offended by the nickname "baby", because she thought it was so unpersonal, for somebody you can't remember their name.
"Baby" is for a "fangirls", not a woman you love.
If I didn't read it as much as I did, maybe I wouldn't mind. This way was annoying as hell!!
This book had a potential, but never diveloped it fully! Maybe if this idea was in some other author's hands, it could be 4,25 stars book! This way, it was a 4, 25 stars disappointment!
For all of you out there who could see a tree in this forest of mistakes, I salute you!