From a purely intellectual standpoint, I understand and even appreciate (I think) what McDermott is trying to do. She's writing about a woman, and an unbeautiful one, and her relationship with her own body throughout her life. The novel's main character is probably born in the 1930s(?) and we get glimpses into key moments of her life--important moments in her childhood, the first time she falls in love, her first real job, illnesses, her wedding day, the birth of her first child--all these puzzle pieces adding up to make something whole. I should mention her brother, Gabe, who plays an important role too. Is McDermott trying to write a female version of the kinds of novels that Roth and Bellow are known for? I think she is. I think she's trying to write about a woman from that generation, and set her in this immigrant, working class neighborhood. In Brooklyn, to be specific. Maybe McDermott is too young. She's writing about a life she's imagining but never lived, and so the energy isn't there. I don't know. She has a good idea, but this writing feels like a trance, like cautious, passionless, painful work. I don't think she can have enjoyed writing it. I felt traces of interest. Some scenes written near the very end felt more vibrant, but it was much too little, far too late.
I don't want to spend time summarizing the plot. Why didn't this book ever get off the ground? Was McDermott trying too hard? Trying to write an Important Book, instead of simply giving us a good read? It's as if she's been too careful. You begin the book and it's as if she'd put a pot on the stove and started it on at very low heat. You keep reading, hoping the heat will crank up, and finally get to a rolling boil. But no. Simmer, simmer, simmer. Nothing. I felt no pleasure reading this novel. I felt vaguely uncomfortable throughout. Wondering why I was wasting my time with it, but I kept at it, dutifully, doggedly. Alas, my faith was in vain. It never got off the ground for me.
The thing is, in many ways, this book seems completely unobjectionable. The prose is lovely and descriptive. The characters real and lovable. I wanted the book to succeed. But it lacked that zip. That tangy zip. It was mayonnaise, and I prefer Miracle Whip.