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Naughty Girl #2
Mine
Alexandra opened her heart and let herself be vulnerable to Paul. The walls around Paul's heart were torn down by the feisty Alex. Both of them are happier than they've been in a long time.
Paul's ex-wife comes to town and turns their life upside down with news that shakes Paul to the core, making him question everything he's ever done. Will Alex be reminded of why she’s never trusted anyone and leave? Can Paul show Alex that she's the only one for him before it's too late? Or will someone else from their past destroy them beyond repair?
Paul's ex-wife comes to town and turns their life upside down with news that shakes Paul to the core, making him question everything he's ever done. Will Alex be reminded of why she’s never trusted anyone and leave? Can Paul show Alex that she's the only one for him before it's too late? Or will someone else from their past destroy them beyond repair?
83 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 25, 2013
About the author
Scarlett Metal
48 books500 followersScarlett lives in the Midwest with her sexy husband, two girls, and three furbabies. She dabbled in writing right after college but it wasn't until she took up blogging about eight years ago that she started writing seriously. After writing a few boring service pieces for some online publications, she went back to her true passion, fiction. When she's not busy writing steamy stories, she can be found with her nose in a book, camping, or geocaching with her family. She loves Diet Coke, Tina Fey and Amy Poehler, and 80's hair bands.
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September 5, 2013
WOW!!! This book snuck up on me and just BLEW ME AWAY. Yes, it is short. BUT... filled with drama, hot sex, twists and turns. I loved it! I am totally hooked on Paul and Alex now and cannot wait for the next book to see what happens next! This is the second book in the series, Naughty Girl is book one, also short, but a good idea to read first to get the background of the characters.
Paul and Alex both are not interested in commitment, i.e. marriage, so they think they are perfect for each other for a relationship that has an eventual end. However, they are each other's end and are finally beginning to, slowly, realize that! I just love them together. They are perfect! Paul is a hot controlling Dom and Alex is a sweet, stubborn, independent woman who is the perfect submissive in the bedroom. I honestly loved that their Dom/Sub relationship mostly stayed in the bedroom. But their love was all the time. I loved their characters, and loved the supporting characters. Just enough drama to keep you on your toes, tons of HOT sex, and such a well developed storyline in a small amount of time. LOVED LOVED LOVED it!!
Great supporting characters too and I'm already dying to know what is going on with Max. Please tell me he is going to be getting his own book?!!!
Although short, this book had everything you could want and more. Very eagerly awaiting to find out what happens next!!!-Tynna
Paul and Alex both are not interested in commitment, i.e. marriage, so they think they are perfect for each other for a relationship that has an eventual end. However, they are each other's end and are finally beginning to, slowly, realize that! I just love them together. They are perfect! Paul is a hot controlling Dom and Alex is a sweet, stubborn, independent woman who is the perfect submissive in the bedroom. I honestly loved that their Dom/Sub relationship mostly stayed in the bedroom. But their love was all the time. I loved their characters, and loved the supporting characters. Just enough drama to keep you on your toes, tons of HOT sex, and such a well developed storyline in a small amount of time. LOVED LOVED LOVED it!!
Great supporting characters too and I'm already dying to know what is going on with Max. Please tell me he is going to be getting his own book?!!!
Although short, this book had everything you could want and more. Very eagerly awaiting to find out what happens next!!!-Tynna
September 4, 2013
Whew.. LOVED IT... What a great little Novella.. Took me no time at all to read this wonderful HOT book.. I love watching the characters develop and their relationship grow.
While it is a BDSM book, it is more on the outskirt, never really getting too much in depth with that lifestyle or those sex scenes. I'll admit I'm a little bummed about that, but even without the BDSM it is still a sexy read.
I will only give it 4 stars though as there is quite a few typos and that always distracts me. :(
I do hope to read a full length novel from Scarlett because her writing is wonderful. It flows very well and the story is easy to follow with great characters and their relationships.
While it is a BDSM book, it is more on the outskirt, never really getting too much in depth with that lifestyle or those sex scenes. I'll admit I'm a little bummed about that, but even without the BDSM it is still a sexy read.
I will only give it 4 stars though as there is quite a few typos and that always distracts me. :(
I do hope to read a full length novel from Scarlett because her writing is wonderful. It flows very well and the story is easy to follow with great characters and their relationships.
August 26, 2013
Holy fuck I love this book, Jessica is a freaking psycho and will damb I can't wait for the next book.
August 16, 2013
***I received an ARC copy of this book in exchange for an honest review ***
Mine continues the story of Alex and Paul whom we met in Naughty Girl. Paul and Alex are happy and very much in love. They are living together, and Alex is now working alongside Paul taking care of PR at the club. Their relationship is going great the chemistry is still smoking hot between theses two, and they continue to have lots of hot kinky sex. Paul is even thinking of doing something else with Alex that he said he would never do again. However the return of someone from Paul’s past is not only about to cause problems, but also puts Alex in danger.
I loved the storyline; there was more suspense and drama, again it was full of hot steamy sex, with mild BDSM scenes, and I have to say I enjoyed the one in the playroom ;). I loved seeing how the characters' relationship had developed both inside and outside of the bedroom; I could really feel how much they loved each other. Paul is as sexy as ever; loved the way he is with Alex. I think Paul can call me Mine any day. ;)
Overall I would say that this was another great novella from Scarlett Metal, which I think I enjoyed a little more than first. I liked the secondary characters; I so want to know what is going on with Max, I think he needs his own story. A surprise POV, and the cliffhanger at the end of the book ensured that I was left wanting more. I can’t wait to read the next book in the series to see what is going to happen next.
If like me, you love a bit of smut, and love Scarlett Metal then I would recommend you read this book, but only after first reading Naughty Girl, as I don’t think you will be disappointed.
Mine gets 4 stars
Mine continues the story of Alex and Paul whom we met in Naughty Girl. Paul and Alex are happy and very much in love. They are living together, and Alex is now working alongside Paul taking care of PR at the club. Their relationship is going great the chemistry is still smoking hot between theses two, and they continue to have lots of hot kinky sex. Paul is even thinking of doing something else with Alex that he said he would never do again. However the return of someone from Paul’s past is not only about to cause problems, but also puts Alex in danger.
I loved the storyline; there was more suspense and drama, again it was full of hot steamy sex, with mild BDSM scenes, and I have to say I enjoyed the one in the playroom ;). I loved seeing how the characters' relationship had developed both inside and outside of the bedroom; I could really feel how much they loved each other. Paul is as sexy as ever; loved the way he is with Alex. I think Paul can call me Mine any day. ;)
Overall I would say that this was another great novella from Scarlett Metal, which I think I enjoyed a little more than first. I liked the secondary characters; I so want to know what is going on with Max, I think he needs his own story. A surprise POV, and the cliffhanger at the end of the book ensured that I was left wanting more. I can’t wait to read the next book in the series to see what is going to happen next.
If like me, you love a bit of smut, and love Scarlett Metal then I would recommend you read this book, but only after first reading Naughty Girl, as I don’t think you will be disappointed.
Mine gets 4 stars
September 5, 2013
Original review on Reese's Reviews!
Alexandra and Paul are doing great now that the drama with her ex-Dom is over. They’re both running the club together with Alex doing all of the P.R.ing for the club and Paul running it with his best friend. They still have a great sex life with Alex now wearing Paul’s collar. Things couldn’t be more perfect. That is until Paul’s ex-wife shows up wanting him back and willing to do anything for it, even kill. When Jessica Paul’s ex shows up at the house with a gun the consequences are almost fatal and even if Alex gets out of the situation with Jessica alive will she be safe because someone is after her and will do anything and everything he can to get her back and it’s not Paul.
Wow:
For such a short story “Mine” was packed high with emotions and action from the first pages. In the few pages “Mine” had Dom and sub sex, crazy ex’s, a shooting, and threats. Who would have thought such a short novel would have so much in it? Not me. So happy Scarlett Metal decided to continue this series and I cannot wait for the next installment in this awesome and sexy series.
Overall:
Holy toast I seriously recommend this amazing series to anyone looking for hot sexy scenes with well-rounded relatable characters, and surprises with every page turn then the Naughty Girl Series is definitely something you should be picking up like NOW. Scarlett Metal definitely weaves an intricate story that will leave you wanting more with her amazing writing and amazing story-telling.
Alexandra and Paul are doing great now that the drama with her ex-Dom is over. They’re both running the club together with Alex doing all of the P.R.ing for the club and Paul running it with his best friend. They still have a great sex life with Alex now wearing Paul’s collar. Things couldn’t be more perfect. That is until Paul’s ex-wife shows up wanting him back and willing to do anything for it, even kill. When Jessica Paul’s ex shows up at the house with a gun the consequences are almost fatal and even if Alex gets out of the situation with Jessica alive will she be safe because someone is after her and will do anything and everything he can to get her back and it’s not Paul.
Wow:
For such a short story “Mine” was packed high with emotions and action from the first pages. In the few pages “Mine” had Dom and sub sex, crazy ex’s, a shooting, and threats. Who would have thought such a short novel would have so much in it? Not me. So happy Scarlett Metal decided to continue this series and I cannot wait for the next installment in this awesome and sexy series.
Overall:
Holy toast I seriously recommend this amazing series to anyone looking for hot sexy scenes with well-rounded relatable characters, and surprises with every page turn then the Naughty Girl Series is definitely something you should be picking up like NOW. Scarlett Metal definitely weaves an intricate story that will leave you wanting more with her amazing writing and amazing story-telling.
August 25, 2013
~*~ 3.5 STARS ~*~
“Tonight was about showing Alex she was mine, that I loved her and wouldn’t ever leave her. I was going to get lost in her – her whimpers, her moans, and the way she cried out my name in the throes of passion.”
MINE by Scarlett Metal is a Naughty Girl Novella. This picks back up on Paul and Alex’s relationship. If you are looking for a short deliciously naughty read, then this is the ticket. If you can look past some grammatical errors, there is a good story here. Full of intense kinky fun, as well as some major drama, MINE will quench your thirst in all that is erotica.
“You are mine, Alex, don’t you forget.”
I liked Paul and Alex’s relationship. I think that they meshed well together, and there was some very hot chemistry between them. I loved the fact that when Paul needed Alex, she was right there for him, no matter what else was going on. She was the perfect sub to his Dom. For the most part, MINE started to get me excited about the other characters in the book. Like Max for instance. I want to know more about this guy. How he got started with the club and I would love to know more about his past relationships, and what the hell is going on in his life. He is a mystery to be solved, and I can’t wait to learn more. Then we have Will. What is the deal with that guy? I will warn you, this ends with a cliffhanger, but I know Ms. Metal will not leave us hanging for too long.
*ARC provided by author
“Tonight was about showing Alex she was mine, that I loved her and wouldn’t ever leave her. I was going to get lost in her – her whimpers, her moans, and the way she cried out my name in the throes of passion.”
MINE by Scarlett Metal is a Naughty Girl Novella. This picks back up on Paul and Alex’s relationship. If you are looking for a short deliciously naughty read, then this is the ticket. If you can look past some grammatical errors, there is a good story here. Full of intense kinky fun, as well as some major drama, MINE will quench your thirst in all that is erotica.
“You are mine, Alex, don’t you forget.”
I liked Paul and Alex’s relationship. I think that they meshed well together, and there was some very hot chemistry between them. I loved the fact that when Paul needed Alex, she was right there for him, no matter what else was going on. She was the perfect sub to his Dom. For the most part, MINE started to get me excited about the other characters in the book. Like Max for instance. I want to know more about this guy. How he got started with the club and I would love to know more about his past relationships, and what the hell is going on in his life. He is a mystery to be solved, and I can’t wait to learn more. Then we have Will. What is the deal with that guy? I will warn you, this ends with a cliffhanger, but I know Ms. Metal will not leave us hanging for too long.
*ARC provided by author
August 12, 2014
I LOVED this continuation of the Naughty Girl story with Alex and Paul. This story picks up where Naughty Girl ended and will take the reader on one heck of a ride. The love scenes between Alex and Paul are so HOT that I swear my book was smoking. Scarlett Metal kicked up the crazy factor with the introduction of Paul's ex-wife Jessica. The twist at the end of the book will leave readers screaming for the next installment of this story.
I highly recommend this book and series to anyone looking for HEAT and suspense. This book will leave you at the edge of your seat!! I cannot wait to find out what happens next for these characters. Great Job Mrs. Metal!!! This story has earned each of its five stars from me!!!
I highly recommend this book and series to anyone looking for HEAT and suspense. This book will leave you at the edge of your seat!! I cannot wait to find out what happens next for these characters. Great Job Mrs. Metal!!! This story has earned each of its five stars from me!!!
August 31, 2013
Ms. Scarlett did it again! This book totally rocks!!
Mine, just like Naughty Girl, was also great and I'm not disappointed! The author really did a great job on keeping the story interesting.
About the story, I love how the story continued and how the story became more interesting with the unexpected ex-wife and the unexpected events. I love how the story and the characters captured my interest.
I also loved how the story ended and I'm excited for the next book to see what will happen next to these awesome characters.
I'm happy to have read this book and it was definitely worth it!
~Ms. ME28
Mine, just like Naughty Girl, was also great and I'm not disappointed! The author really did a great job on keeping the story interesting.
About the story, I love how the story continued and how the story became more interesting with the unexpected ex-wife and the unexpected events. I love how the story and the characters captured my interest.
I also loved how the story ended and I'm excited for the next book to see what will happen next to these awesome characters.
I'm happy to have read this book and it was definitely worth it!
~Ms. ME28
October 16, 2014
Alexandra opened her heart and let herself be vulnerable to Paul. The walls around Paul's heart were torn down by the feisty Alex. Both of them are happier than they've been in a long time. Paul's ex-wife comes to town and turns their life upside down and shakes Paul to the core. Will Alex be collateral damage of his past? This book was crazy good we learn more about each of them. Paul's ex makes both of their lives crazy and we get a chance to meet other characters. This book was a short quick read like the first it was well written and yes you do have to read the first one. I am looking forward to reading the next book when Alex's ex Will shows his self.
November 6, 2014
BDSM! Whew, it was hot!
Things were going great for Paul and Alex. She was doing awesome PR for the club and all was quiet on the home front. That can never last for long though right?
Fears can change everything, but will it be for the better or worse? Relationships, ex relationships, and so much more will show themselves in this novella. How much can this couple handle?
Mine is written in Alex's POV, as well as, in Paul's POV. It alternated between the characters allowing us to experience both characters on a deeper level in many of the scenes. It is well written and definitely leaves you ready for more.
Things were going great for Paul and Alex. She was doing awesome PR for the club and all was quiet on the home front. That can never last for long though right?
Fears can change everything, but will it be for the better or worse? Relationships, ex relationships, and so much more will show themselves in this novella. How much can this couple handle?
Mine is written in Alex's POV, as well as, in Paul's POV. It alternated between the characters allowing us to experience both characters on a deeper level in many of the scenes. It is well written and definitely leaves you ready for more.
September 7, 2013
The continued story of Alex and Paul was full of love, heat and suspense!! After Paul collared Alex, they relationship progressed. The bdsm scenes were even hotter than the first book and with Alex and Paul's ex out there causing some trouble, it kept me on the edge of my seat to see what was going to happen next. Every time someone tried to interfere with their relationship, it seemed to bring them closer together. I can't wait to read what happens next with Alex and Paul and if they finally get engaged and married! Short but hot and suspenseful!!
August 31, 2013
Finally more about Alex and Paul. I really came to like them in Naughty Girl and was very happy to finally get to read Mine. Not only was the sex hot, especially the playroom scene, but there also was some drama. I don't want to give anything big away, I will just say someone from Paul's past wrecks havoc. A great continuation of Naughty Girl. Warning..cliff hanger ending. Can't wait to read the next installment.
September 1, 2013
*ARC was provided for an honest review*
Mine is the next installment of the Naughty Girl series by Scarlett Metal. Paul and Alex are such an intense couple. MINE is the nickname Paul has for Alex, and every time her called her that I got chills. There is high drama in this book with the return of Jessica, the dreaded ex sub/wife, but Paul and Alex can overcome anything together. Thank you Scarlett for another fabulous story!
Mine is the next installment of the Naughty Girl series by Scarlett Metal. Paul and Alex are such an intense couple. MINE is the nickname Paul has for Alex, and every time her called her that I got chills. There is high drama in this book with the return of Jessica, the dreaded ex sub/wife, but Paul and Alex can overcome anything together. Thank you Scarlett for another fabulous story!
November 17, 2014
I guess the BDSM storyline wasn't enough so this author had to add in drama and violence, and it appears that this will continue in part 3.
This is a relatively shallow portrayal of a couple in a committed BDSM relationship. We get inklings of what these people are like, but for me it wasn't enough.
This wasn't all that original re the BDSM or the plot. I thought this couple was kinda hot in the first book, but this didn't have the same level of intensity that book one had.
This is a relatively shallow portrayal of a couple in a committed BDSM relationship. We get inklings of what these people are like, but for me it wasn't enough.
This wasn't all that original re the BDSM or the plot. I thought this couple was kinda hot in the first book, but this didn't have the same level of intensity that book one had.
August 27, 2013
The book has a good story line and for the most part I liked the book. What I didn't like is all of the blatant grammatical errors which should have been caught while editing. If the book was editing the person who edited it did a horrible job. I hope the author will go through the book again and fix the errors and republish the e-book.
August 29, 2013
Mine is part two of the Naughty Girl Series and continues with Paul and Alex's relationship. Scarlett has not let me down in this one.
As Paul and Alex get closer, Alex finds herself in danger by something or someone from Paul's past. I will never tell, lol.
Their relationship is tested and he will stop at nothing to keep her safe. Their chemistry is hot and will knock your socks off, lol.
As Paul and Alex get closer, Alex finds herself in danger by something or someone from Paul's past. I will never tell, lol.
Their relationship is tested and he will stop at nothing to keep her safe. Their chemistry is hot and will knock your socks off, lol.
September 6, 2013
I loved the characters in Naughty Girl and enjoyed getting to come back to them in Mine.
Paul is such an alpha male who definitely knows how to "Dominate". My absolute favorite was when he called Alex Mine.
I can't wait to read more from these characters in Forever Mine.
Scarlett Metal knows how to write one hell of a sexy scene and I look forward to reading anything else she writes!
Paul is such an alpha male who definitely knows how to "Dominate". My absolute favorite was when he called Alex Mine.
I can't wait to read more from these characters in Forever Mine.
Scarlett Metal knows how to write one hell of a sexy scene and I look forward to reading anything else she writes!
September 9, 2013
I enjoyed this book and it was another quick read (: I am curious to know when book 3 will be out as I hav enot seen a title or cover yet... I like Paul and Alex so I'm anxious to know more about book 3.
October 20, 2014
gets a solid 3.5 stars. aside from my previous comment overall quite an enjoyable read. lust, sex and action in less than 100pgs... you really can't go wrong! ;-)
October 14, 2016
love this series but that "CLIFFY THOUGH". NOT COOL. NOT COOL AT ALL. When is the next book coming out I know I saw it was suppose to be in 2014? anyone know a date?
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