In Ashlyn Macnamara’s stunning romance debut—perfect for fans of Julia Quinn, Eloisa James, and Sabrina Jeffries—two childhood friends in Regency England discover love with the most unlikely of partners: each other.
After watching her beloved sister Sophia pine over the ton’s Golden Boy for years, Miss Julia St. Claire has foresworn love and put herself firmly on the shelf. Unfortunately, her social-climbing mother and debt-ridden father have other ideas, and jump at the chance to marry Julia off to the newly-named Earl of Clivesden…the man of Sophia’s dreams.
Since resigning his Cavalry commission, Benedict Revelstoke has spent his time in London avoiding the marriage mart. But when he discovers that the Earl of Clivesden has set Julia in his sights, Benedict tries to protect his childhood best friend from the man’s advances—only to discover more than friendship driving his desire to defend her. He surprises them both with the force of his feelings, but when she refuses him and her father announces her betrothal, he fears he’s lost her forever—until Julia approaches him with a shocking scheme that will ruin her for all respectable society…
…and lead them into an exquisite world of forbidden pleasures.
Ashlyn lives in the wilds of suburbia outside Montreal with her husband and two teenaged daughters. When not writing, she looks for other excuses to neglect the housework, among them knitting, reading and wasting time on the internet in the guise of doing research.
A Most Scandalous Proposal centers on two sisters: Julia and Sophia St. Clair. Younger sister Julia doesn’t want the heartache of a love match, which is exactly the type of wife the Earl of Clivesden desires. Sophia has been pining five long years for womanizing Clivesden. Her heart breaks to see him pursue Julia.
A compromising situation leads to Sophia’s engagement to the Earl of Highgate, an older noble surrounded by rumors. Julia’s childhood friend Benedict Revelstoke tries to win Julia’s heart and block Clivesden’s pursuit. Scandal, accidental and intentional, rewards the sisters with surprising consequences.
Ashlyn Macnamara’s debut novel seems more a spin of Jane Austen’s Sense and Sensibility, including specific references by the characters. In Ms. Austen’s story, the Dashwood sisters are balanced with sensible older sister Elinor against a headstrong and passionate Marianne. It was easy to empathize with the Dashwood’s trials and heartache. This was not the case with the St. Clair sisters.
At times, Julia’s and Sophia’s self-absorbed manners and ambitions challenged this reader to sympathize with them, especially in light of their father’s financial troubles. The somewhat modern ideals of the heroines conflicted with their situations and historical setting. It was difficult to temporarily suspend disbelief and enjoy the story.
Benedict and the Earl of Highgate are the highlight in A Most Scandalous Proposal. It would be fair to compare Highgate with Ms. Austen’s honorable Colonel Christopher Brandon, the older gentleman who quietly falls in love with Marianne Dashwood. Benedict is heroic as Julia’s friend and suitor. Their history as childhood friends served as backstory rather than adding intensity to their romance. Overall, it seemed this full-length novel splits the reader’s attention between the sisters’ romances serving two secondary storylines that don’t fully serve a rewarding historical romance.
ARC courtesy of Random House Publishing via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review
This is a very promising début from Ashlyn Macnamara. The writing and pacing were both good and there were none of those credulity-stretching moments that seem to have marred so many of the newer historical romances I’ve read recently.
I was pleased to discover that this book features not just one, but two of my favourite tropes in romantic fiction – forced marriage and ‘friends-become-lovers’. I should say at this point though that the ‘blurb’ is rather misleading in that one could be forgiven for thinking the story is about Julia St. Clare and her childhood friend Benedict Revelstoke. In fact, the book features two parallel stories – one featuring Julia and Benedict and the other, her older sister Sophia and Rufus, Earl of Highgate, and I would venture to say that this fact marks the book out as something a little bit different. Both stories are given equal prominence which, on the plus side, means that the pace never slackens. The negative side however is that it doesn’t allow for a great deal of character and relationship development, and I know that some reviewers have said that they found the four different points-of-view to be distracting.
For me, the latter wasn’t a problem, but I did have some issues with the lack of depth in terms of the characterisation. I would have liked, for example, for Benedict’s awareness of his true feelings for Julia to have happened more slowly, over time, so that the reader could share in his gradual awakening. I also thought that the reason for Julia’s reluctance to love was somewhat flimsy and, in fact, unnecessary, given what she was seeing every day in her parents’ marriage.
I felt that Highgate was probably the most rounded character, even though we probably see less of him than of the other three protagonists. But there’s something about a wounded man with a bit of a murky past, isn’t there? I also found his romance with Sophia to be the more satisfying one in the end, although that’s not to say I didn’t like Julia and Benedict’s story as well.
Overall then, this is an engaging read with likeable characters (and a few not-so-likeable ones!) and a couple of well-executed storylines. The love scenes were romantic and sexy and the author did a good job in building the sexual tension between the ladies and their beaus.
If you’re looking for a new voice in historical romance, I would definitely recommend giving this book a try, and on the strength of this, I will certainly be on the lookout for future titles from this author.
With thanks to Ballantine Books and Edelweiss for the review copy.
ARC courtesy of Random House Publishing via Edelweiss This review is for about 75% of the book(the first 16 chapters and the last one)
Main characters: Julia and Benedict Sophia and Highgate
My love of covers…
What I Liked: Well… nothing really, besides the cover. I read on and on in hopes of finding something that I liked, but I couldn’t. The story is about 2 sisters who eventually find their happiness. We have Sophia, who suffers from bad-love syndrome as she’s mooning after an idiot who doesn’t want her and could never be faithful to only one woman, and Julia who after she sees what that “love” has done to her sister wants to remain unmarried. As you can understand that doesn’t happen and both of them end with men that they hadn’t expected.
What I didn't like: This will be very long :D First of all there were too many clichés! I never thought I’d say that, but after reading one after the other it just drove me crazy! We have the friends to lovers one(Julia and Benedict), the unrequited love(Sophia and Clivesden), the beauty and the beast( Sophia and Highgate), and the usual gossipy old woman who appears evil and crazy, but actually is perceptive and unhappy. Besides this collection(which if I think hard enough I could add to) we have lots of drama, for example: Sophia always almost-swoons when she sees Clivesden, there’s a lot of “I love you even if you don’t love me”-stuff and I couldn’t take it anymore.
Favorite character: I might like Julia a little, but not much. She’s smart, but unfortunately doesn’t uses her mind often.
My least favorite character: All of them! The male leads are underdeveloped, the sisters are annoying and some of the time from the TSTL category, the parents are plain stupid, all the other secondary characters are boring and one-dimensional…
Favorite scene: There is good one at the start of the book, but I can’t put my finger on it.
The book wasn’t that bad, but close Would I recommend the book: Not really, I didn’t finish it. I understand that this is a debut but trying to cram it full of what’s supposed to be romancelandia’s favorite clichés is a bad idea, just makes the book appear even more unremarkable. There are no memorable characters and the whole plot is kind of weak. All in all I can’t even see if the author has potential or not because I couldn’t concentrate on her voice, all that recycled stuff taking my eyes off.
Forgot I read this years ago! I’m glad I re-read this. I’ve upped the rating from 3 stars to 4. Really like McNamara’s style and thought the parallel romances were fun (if you like the two romance thing, check out Emma Wildes, she does it too and I love it).
Still liked Sophia and Highgate’s story best but found Benedict and Julia more fun this go around too. This author wrote a very smooth, well crafted debut. I’m impressed.
Original review:
A Most Scandalous Proposal was my first time reading Ashlyn Macnamara. While I didn't love this debut novel, there were several elements that I appreciated and I will be trying more of her work in the future.
A Most Scandalous Proposal actually has two romantic pairings. The first is Julia and Benedict who have grown up as friends until Benedict's feelings went deeper while Julia remained blind to the attraction. The second is Sophia and the Earl of Highgate who are thrown together due to an unintended compromising situation even though Sophia is in love with another man.
There are a lot of plot threads and the snobbishness and unforgiving nature of the ton is sketched out expertly. There were many times I felt stifled just reading about the world the characters had to navigate (which was a good thing--it felt more authentic and not just convenient window dressing). I thought both Julia and Sophia were a bit tough to like. Julia was always an ice queen, holding herself apart from the world, while Sophia remained devoted to a creep of a guy despite having the interest of a great man. There was a lot of short sightedness on the sisters' end and Benedict was a bit forgettable, but the Earl of Highgate was my favorite :) He was mysterious, noble, and sexy as all get out. He saved the book for me and kept me turning pages.
Julia and Benedict were not as interesting to me. Most of their relationship was an extended seduction scene and by the time they got together, I was just skimming pages and muttering to get on with it so I could read about Sophia and Highgate some more.
Overall, a smooth read with nice historical detail and two romance plot lines (which I like). I plan to try more by this author.
Spectacular debut novel from Ashlyn Macnamara. I stayed up until 2 a.m. reading this!
This was a lovely surprise as it was really two stories in one book. Generally speaking, we would have seen either Julia or Sophia's story, and then would have had to wait for the next book to find out the other's story.
Nope. Ms. Macnamara has intertwined the sisters' stories, first time I've seen one like this, and it was a JOY to read.
Julia, after watching Sophia pine for five long years over the newly named Earl of Clivesden. If that's love, then she wants no part of it. She much prefers the friendship of her childhood friend, Benedict Revelstoke.
He is rarely in town, but stumbles across a wager in White's infamous book. A wager that shocks him. Someone is betting that they will marry Julia. He simply can't let that happen.
Meanwhile, Sophia is suffering through unrequited love. Her heart soars when Clivesden glances at her and she sobs when he ignores her. When he maneuvers her into a situation with the Earl of Highgate, she has to accept his betrothal or forever be shunned in society. Highgate was a high point in this book. I loved him. He has a hurt heart and can empathize with Sophia, but he also is rather taken by her. Yep, LOVED him.
Julia and Sophia, for separate reasons, have spurned any and all proposals that have come their way over five seasons on the marriage mart. Their parents are beyond restless (and on the cusp of bankruptcy) and start pushing things. To the heartbreak of their daughters.
I like to see characters grow, and learn. These two sisters are a shining example of how it should be shown. Well done, Ms. Macnamara!
So many things to enjoy in this book. In fact, so much so that I stayed up until 2:30 a.m. reading! Had to find out how both story lines would be resolved.
Thank you, NetGalley and Ballantine Books, for the opportunity to read this book!
Oh my….seriously. A Most Scandalous Proposal definitely is one of the most promising debuts I’ve read in a long time. As a romance addict, I have certainly read a lot of those. The story is about two sisters, who are united in their love for each other but couldn’t be more different in the way they pursue their dreams: On the one hand there is Julia St. Claire who thinks that she can learn about the painful sides of love by watching others. I think that’s a mistake easily done. And then there is Sophia, who is so steadfast in her love that she doesn’t doubt for one moment. As they say, love makes us blind… so there you have it: two wonderful female characters: both strong in their own way. But it doesn’t stop there: Ashlyn Macnamara seems to create male characters that make you forget yourself. There is no other way to put it: Between Benedict and Rufus, it’s very hard to decide who I’d rather get to know better… and as a bonus there is Upperton who has such a wicked sense of humor, which is delicious. But I’m getting ahead of myself.
There are a few things that make A Most Scandalous Proposal a must keep for me (FYI: I’m not putting them in any particular order): Macnamara manages to tell two stories - in one book - in a way that doesn’t give you a feeling that you were missing out on either couple: There is the storyline and there is enough time for every character and all the couples.
The author has the ability to write history without losing herself in explanations of any kind. It’s fluently yet accurately written. Being true to historical facts and the code of behavior is important to me and only heightens the pleasure of reading. (What can I say? I’m totally into history)
I adore the notion of childhood friends turning into lovers: I thought Benedict’s emotions were tangible in a subtle way from the beginning. Julia on the other hand might not know her heart from the start but at the same time she is true to her believes and she doesn’t repeat herself all over. She simply acts accordingly to her thoughts.
There is room for imagination, not every single detail is spilled out. I have read Macnamara’s debut more than once by now and I still find myself discovering new things that make my mind run wild. At one scene in the book Sophia talks about Sense and Sensibility and of course one sees parallels between those two books. For me this felt like homage to a grand female author. However and that’s probably the most important asset: A Most Scandalous Proposal would have made generations of Jane Austen readers blush. The sexy and spicy scenes were truly delicious. I can’t wait to read more about Upperton and with whom he’ll get a happy ever after. All in all this is a wonderful story, with great characters, romances flourishing beautifully and there is always the promise of more… so much more!
I love a great romance novel, you all know that, and A Most Scandalous Proposal was the best one I read in 2012. It's not quite perfect, but I enjoyed every moment of it, and found parts of it to be exactly what I love most about a romance novel.
Childhood friends?? Say no more, I'm there. (You would think I'm pining after some childhood friend of my own, wouldn't you? I'm so not.) I stumbled across this one last fall on Net Galley, and that phrase is enough to make me instantly request a book, so I did. And I am so glad. Unlike most childhood friends novels, this one doesn't start with a prologue to their youth or a flashback, but instead starts immediately with the action. Benedict and Julia's friendship is woven into the text of the book, in a very natural and easy way. Benedict realized he has feelings for her years before the story takes place, but Julia is slower to come to realize hers. Unfortunately for her, she's thrown into a situation in which she has to act on them before she has them (hence the title), but Macnamara manages to pull it off believably. Neither Julia or Benedict is without flaws, but the story uses the flaws to further the plot, instead of as filler space.
While Julia and Benedict are falling in love, Julia is also dealing with her parents' actions in trying to force her to marry the object of her sister's affections. Julia is determined not to hurt Sophia more by agreeing, even if she liked the man, which she doesn't. The relationship between the sisters is well done and their love for each other is neither to perfect nor too caricatured. Sophia inadvertently causes a little scandal herself, and the resulting romance is so sweet and charming that I wish the author had actually written it as two books. I really loved Sophia's beau- he was possibly my favorite character in the book- and wanted to see more of them.
I have a few very minor quibbles with some very minor details, but nothing that at all distracted from my enjoyment of the story. I would highly recommend this to anyone who loves light historical romances. It's sweet and funny a little hot, while still not veering into slapstick or being overly flowery. I loved it completely and can't wait to see what Ms. Macnamara writes next.
Another debut for this year and it turned out to be rather promising. Miss Julia St. Claire has no desire to fall in love and marry, instead she leaves that to her sister Sophia who has pined over the Earl of Clivesden for years. Yet when Clivesden suddenly shows an interest in Julia, tension abounds and Julia keeps distancing herself from the drated man but he is always there. She turns to her childhood friend, Benedict Revelstoke for help getting out of her unwanted betrothal. Julia would rather be ruined in the eyes of society than cause her sister pain. Problem is Benedict will not ruin her without offering marriage...a marriage Julia fears will be one sided in love and the thing she wants to avoid at all costs. . .
I was pleasantly surprised to see that this story actually is two romances in one; Julia and Benedict and Sophia and the man she inadvertently gets compromised with. I was afraid that Sophia's storyline was going to detract from the other storyline but instead it really added to the story as I came to realize that Sophia also needed to find her own happily ever after and closure for Julia's story to really work (though I would have really enjoyed Sophia in a full length as her story had a bit more mystery to it). Julia is known as a bit of a frigid lady due to her desire to guard her heart and not open it to any man, not reveal her true feelings. Her interactions with Benedict were fun and sweet though I do wish she would have given Benedict a chance a bit sooner. Benedict had no idea of his feelings for Julia until they waltzed and suddenly his life was turned upside down and all he can do now is protect Julia but he naturally, has a hard time expressing this. He is charming, clever and it was refreshing not to read about a rake or titled gentleman for a change of pace. A very pleasant, yet steamy, friends to lovers story with a nice sense of family, wit and charm. Really looking forward to the next book featuring Benedict's best friend. 3 1/2 stars
I picked up this book because I love historicals, and the description mentions it is perfect for fans of Julia Quinn and Eloisa James – two of my favorite historical authors.
There are two stories in this book – Julia and Benedict’s being the main one interspersed with the story of Sophia and Highgate. Julia is disillusioned by love and has decided she does not need it in a marriage. Sophia on the other hand, is infatuated, and waiting to marry the one she believes she loves.
When circumstances turn around such that Julia is required to marry Sophia’s love, she must do something. What she does is ‘the most scandalous proposal’ and she seeks the help of her dependable, childhood friend Benedict. Sophia’s life also takes a different route as Highgate enters it.
How the two couples discover love and happiness (inevitable of course, so not a spoiler) is the rest of the book – and definitely a sweet journey (When best friends discover that they love each other, it is always sweet., and when two broken hearts find true love, well that is sweet too!)
My favorite characters in this book were the men in this book – the heroes Benedict and Highgate. Both of them were steadfast, and oh-so dependable, and yes, a definite sweetness too in both of them. The other characters are also well developed and I liked or disliked them based on their personalities in the book.
One other thing I enjoyed in this book – references to Jane Austen and her books – Sense and Sensibility especially and a little of Pride and Prejudice.
I will definitely read books by Ashlyn again – a great debut novel, a wonderful romantic read!
Thanks to Random House Publishing Group for this ARC via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review
This was a buddy read with Anna and I left her high and dry. Why? This book so did not grab me. The author used about 50,000 words when a few would have sufficed to communicate a thought or a feeling. At one point I found myself thinking about Charlie Brown's teacher ... whaw whaw whaw.... Not good. So, not going to waste any more of my precious time and just call this stinker done.
I seriously tried on multiple occasions to engage with this book. Just did not happen. Nothing worse than a historical romance that wants to be edifying. Know?
Full review may come soon.
ARC provided by the author and Random House Publishing Group via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
This is a tale of two sisters, Julia and Sophia, whose relationship is tested when an unscrupulous gentleman ruins Sophia's reputation by arranging she is caught with another while attempting to ensnare Julia with wagers and schemes. In the process of writing the wrongs that have been done, both sisters assumptions about men, love, sisterhood and friendship are challenged, leading to a satisfying end.
I was a Goodreads First reads winner of this book it and it is a winner too. I love this time period and it was a really well told story with great characters. Very hard to believe this is a debut, it was that good. There is a sample at the end of the book of "A Most Devilish Rogue" that Is bringing another story surrounding these characters (yes!). I looked it up its to be out on Aug. 27th, and what a cover! Looking forward to it and many more hopefully to come from this author.
A Most Scandalous Proposal is a 2013 release, published by Random House. This is a Regency period romance written by Ashylyn MacNamara.
Sophia St. Claire has pined for the newly named Earl of Clivesden for the past five years. But, Clivesden has set his sights on Sophia's sister Julia. Julia has no intention of getting married. She has seen the pain that an arranged marriage can bring, but the pain of a broken heart is Julia's worst fear. Benedict Revelstoke and Julia had been friends since childhood. For Julia, Benedict is the only man she feels safe with. But, after he goes out of her way to tell her about Clivesden's intentions and they share a waltz, her feelings for Benedict become confused. When Julia learns of the Earl's plans, she avoids him and flat out refuses to entertain his advances. But, her parents, are determined to see their daughters married to titled men. Julia's father announces her betrothal to the Earl in public so Julia couldn't protest. But, Julia has a plan that involves Benedict. Will Benedict accept Julia's scandalous proposal?
The first few historical romances released in 2013 that I read had me really concerned about the direction this sub-genre was taking. But, I think there is still some hope for historical romances if more books are written like this one. Regency period romances can get stale for sure, but there are some stories we never tire of, like Pride and Prejudice and Sense and Sensibility. This book draws on both those well loved stories at times and it works well. The secondary romance with Sophia and Rufus was also a good solid romance. This author has a lot of promise. There were still times when I felt the language was too relaxed for the Regency period, but I've pretty much given up on finding newer release historicals that stick to total authenticity in that regard. I am looking forward to the upcoming installments in this series. Overall this one gets an A-. Thanks to Librarything for the early review copy of this book.
I really liked the sound of a friends-to-lovers romance story and was excited to start this book. It turns out that A MOST SCANDALOUS PROPOSAL is written a little differently from your standard historical romance, in that it features not one, but two couples; the main character, Julia, and her love interest, and also her sister, Sophia, whose romance takes up almost an equal amount of page time.
The thing is, I liked both sets of characters and both romances, though they were very different from each other. But splitting the readers' attention like that, I think, was a mistake. I was never able to fully engage in either pairing, as we'd just start to build up a little momentum with one, only to abruptly leave them to rejoin the other. Having said that, the two relationships were nicely linked by other characters which meant on several occasions, everyone was in the same scene, which certainly helped. Most notably completing the often complicated circuit, was the rakish Earl of Clivesden, whom Julia's sister Sophia has been madly in love with for years. What, then, is Julia supposed to do when he takes a paticular interest in marrying her instead?
It was a complicated tangle that got sorted out to a satisfying and heart-warming conclusion. The intimate scenes, through rather sparse, were well-written and the characters themselves were fleshed out well to say there were four of them. I just wish we'd had more time to watch each romance bloom naturally.
3.5 Stars ★★★1/2 ARC provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
I think that my choosing A Most Scandalous Proposal for review was kismet! I had reached a point in my reading where I needed something very different from Alpha-hole heroes, frustrating heroines and debut authors who seem to write using a checklist of Historical romance clichés. This story hit all of the right buttons for me, including one of my favorite plot devices, making it a very enjoyable read.
The St. Clair sisters are no strangers to a London season, having both been out for a few years without a successful match. It doesn’t help that both women have very different expectations about their futures which are clouding any possibility of happiness. Sophia has spent her failed seasons pining for the love of Mr. William Ludlowe, expecting that once he truly sees her it will be an instant love for him too and they will be blissfully wed. Julia is less interested in the courtship dance with an eligible man having seen how her sister’s unrequited love for Mr. Ludlowe has destroyed her self-confidence. To Julia, any marriage she agrees to would be of a practical nature only, with husband and wife being companions only rather than passionate equals in a relationship. For both women, their best laid plans about the future are thrown into complete turmoil when, unbeknownst to them, Julia is betrothed to the new Earl of Clivesden; William Ludlowe!
Ashlyn Macnamara makes her debut with a lovely tale of two sisters. Told in four different points of view, and following the complete development of two different relationships, I was charmed by the different approach to this story. Usually, if a second relationship is introduced in a romance it gets second billing and scarcely a mention. These were two fully developed romantic arcs, two heroines you want to root for, and two very different yet equally compelling heroes. I was sucked into the world she created, with lovely dialogue, fun Regency era flirtations, and a childhood friends-turned-lovers story to make me sigh in pleasure.
Can't wait to see what she does next... apparently something with handsome arses if the cover of her next book is any indication. :)
My review contains spoilers and they're mostly my thoughts as I went with the book...
Ashlyn Macnamara’s debut novel, A Most Scandalous Proposal, was an enjoyable read; at least for the most part. What really bugged me were the activities of the two sisters, Julia and Sophia. The heroes, Benedict and Rufus were adorable, and this book is worth reading only for them. But when you have two great heroes and then you find the heroines being ninny and pushing them away (while you’re screaming ‘WTF woman??!!’). You’re sometimes bound to do some *headdesk* along the way.
This story is told from the POVs of the characters, sometimes Julia and Benedict, sometimes Sophia and Rufus, so at first I felt confused because it was really distracting me from the general narratives. But I got used to with the storytelling sometimes later. It took me a while to determine who the main couple of the story was because to me, both sisters had almost the same amount of space and attentions in the book.
Julia and her elder sister, Sophia, are in London for another husband hunt. Their mother, an ambitious b*tch, wants both her daughters to have titled husbands and needless to mention, money. The family is in dire financial need, thanks to their father’s mismanagement and strong habit of gambling. So the two sisters are the ‘hope’ to save the family from going to the poor house. It’s easier said than done because Julia’s father isn’t titled. Their mother also isn’t from a noble/titled family, but she wanted a titled husband for herself. It never happened though, the whys of which we get to know later in the story. Now, both sisters are beautiful, Sophia was probably one of the most beautiful girls when she made her debut 5 or so yrs. ago. She’s all in vogue with her blonde and delicate looks, inherited from their mother. Julia is darker, but lovely in her own way. No one, at the least, can say that it’s their looks that kept them from having husbands. In fact, both were courted by men or some tried to court them, but none of the sisters reciprocated. And so, now, they’re still unmarried at their advanced age, and two ‘hope-crushers’, things that their mother reminds them every freakin’ minute.
Got me thinking, why really, are these two still unmarried? So I find that Sophia has been pining away for some golden boy of the Ton, one William Ludlowe, for the last 5 years since her debut. We meet Ludlowe in a ball both sisters are attending presently. He’s also of golden good looks and full of charms. Or is he? Sophia can’t tell since she melts into a puddle of sheer delight if Ludlowe so much as look her way once and bestows her with one of his flashing smiles. But most of the times, he ignores her. Completely ignores her, something Julia, the one with more rational head on her shoulders, can see clearly. In fact, Julia can’t stand Ludlowe and his oily charm at all. She despairs of her sister’s one-sided adoration for the man. Everyone knows that Ludlowe is a rake, a really worse one at that and he’s selfish, completely oblivious of who he’s hurting on the process of making his conquests. As far as Julia can see, he doesn’t possess one ounce of brain or sense to speak of. To sum up, Ludlowe is a creep and a jerk. Today it seem that Ludlowe, again, is ignoring Sophia completely and, worse, has now turned his oily charm on her. Julia shudders to think what might be on his mind!
Julia also isn’t getting married because... hmm, the reason behind it was kind of ridiculous to me since I couldn’t really understand it. She was afraid of falling in love and vowed to resist that however she can. One bad example was her sister, of course. And then there was their mother, a bitter and unhappy woman, constantly vying for things that she’s not meant to have. So Julia has decided she won’t get married, as there’s a chance of falling in love that won’t be reciprocated, and would stay a spinster. But she has a good childhood friend, Benedict, who is the second son of an Earl. They were very close when they were growing up and often played together. Benedict has been in the army and fought against the French. Benedict has returned now. Julia can’t wait to see him. But since Benedict doesn’t like London and balls, he’s not that often here. He rather likes his horses and trying to work for a stud farm, something of his own. Julia doesn’t have to wait too long when Benedict trudges inside the ball, directly towards her. He has some news and needs to speak with her, privately. But private nooks aren’t for unmarried couple, so he butts someone off of Julia to get her to dance with him, another thing that is so-not-Benedict. Julia is a bit overwhelmed to see him after quite sometimes. He has grown, of course, which she knew, though purely theoretically. They have often exchanged letters and she considered him still a close friend but now that she had seen him again, Julia can’t help but notice his pretty blue eyes against his bronzed skin, or his dark hair. All so familiar, yet seems so anew, making her heart flutter! For Julia, it’s a total bad news.
Benedict had the same for Julia; a weakness for her since childhood. He found her lovely back then, and he finds her lovely still. Seeing the grown up Julia is a blow he quite successfully hides behind his mask of slight indifference. But Benedict needs to discuss this recent development that directly concerns her. Gossip has been swirling around that Ludlowe will be the new Earl of Clivesden soon because the current earl died alongside his only issue. When he inherits, he’d be in the market for a bride to secure his title. The jerk has done something that is truly him, and offensive; he’d put a bet on Julia’s name, which Benedict found in the marker, saying that she’d be Ludlowe’s Countess in a certain period of time. Benedict is totally enraged by this because this was done mainly to bring Julia down. Everyone thought her cold and aloof and Ludlowe saw her as a challenge. Julia needs to ignore Ludlowe’s advances no matter what.
On the other side of the ballroom, Sophia was mad at Ludlowe who was dancing with her and now, left her and then disappeared with some blousy heiress. She can’t stand this and mad at the woman. Funny thing was, Sophia thought all the talks of Ludlowe’s conquests were only talks to malign him. To her, he was a prince. I just wanted to shake Sophia a little, to rattle her airy brain to see the reality of what Ludlowe actually was. She was, in fact, SO BLIND that she got angry at Julia because Ludlowe paid attentions to her, even though Julia never even encouraged him in anyway. This was plain pathetic. And then, something happens; something which gave me a little headache. When she spies Ludlowe with that heiress in sort of a making out situation, she loses it. On her way to recuperate, she faints... and falls in the arms of the Earl of Highgate, Rufus.
Rufus is a much older guy. He was once married, but his wife cuckolded him (later we learn that the d*ck was Ludlowe... duh!). Rufus loved his wife, and was terribly hurt when he found them together. The woman died in an accident on the way to one of her trysts. So he and Ludlowe have a ‘history’ of sort that many don’t know about or heard the adulterated version bandied about by Ludlowe. He fought with the creep, and now, has a scar on his face to prove it too. Rufus is reclusive due to all that scandal. He likes living in his estate as a monk, a fact his widowed elder sister nags about all day long, annoying the hell out of him. He needs an heir, that’s for sure. The title going out of hand is a fact, Mariah, who is a stickler for propriety, can’t even contemplate. Her nagging is what forced Rufus out of his estate, and now, in this ball. But this soft and beautiful miss who fainted on his arms does pose some problems. Somehow, both his sister and Sophia’s mother find them together and now Sophia is considered compromised. Oh happy day for Sophia’s mother! An Earl for one? And another would be Earl vying for the other’s hand? Sophia’s mother is in heaven right now. She is more than eager to show Sophia ‘compromised’ so that Rufus is forced to ask for her hand in marriage.
This leaves Sophia unhappy, and she acts as a martyr, as if being married to Rufus is a fate worse than hell. She’s also acting betrayed with Julia who is a bit baffled by all these. She too thinks she’s done something wrong here, hurting her sister, when all the while I could see that both needed a hard shake and kick Ludlowe out of their mind and system. As soon as Ludlowe starts calling on Julia and again, completely ignoring Sophia (who would act like a hurt puppy) or talk of nothing but polite greetings. Once he found Sophia alone and the d*ck insinuates about Rufus’s supposed scandalous reputation and ‘dark’ past which I felt, was to totally rile her up. He was successful as Sophia begins worrying about her fate at those insinuations. It’s very much apparent that the d*ck had always known about Sophia’s infatuation with him but since she posed no competition (and no money to speak of) he never gave a sh*t about her. Even though Sophia’s musings proved that she’s not entirely the air-head everyone thought her to be, she still made me frustrated by believing in Ludlowe’s crap. But one of the most frustrating moments was yet to come, when Julia refuses Bendict’s proposal of marriage. Benedict isn’t a man with sly charm, but honest and true. And he always suspected his feelings were rather deep where Julia was concerned. He thought this was the only way to save Julia from harm. But Julia and her crazy ideas! She denies Benedict, hurting him much in the process. I just wanted to slap her, plain and simple because Benedict was adorable in his own way.
Now, Rufus, he was another story; more experienced in life and by age. Not a man of many words, but his quite words and ways exudes authority. Rufus was hell of a sexy thing; quiet ones are the hottest and all that. And he was determined to have Sophia in his life, even though having a wife was the farthest thing on his mind when he came to London. After seeing and holding Sophia, even for a while, in his arms told Rufus that he needs to have her. But he won’t force her, oh no, Rufus would woo her… in his own way. *shivers* So, what happens is, he makes a plan and tells Sophia that they’d get officially engaged. She can cry off a few weeks later. Sophia would go with this plan (as she mentions to Julia) but, the thing was, she couldn’t deny Rufus’s personality. It was attracting her like a moth to a flame. She even tried telling herself about Ludlowe, but now, he’s not the one she is thinking about often.
Soon, at a ball, Sophia-Rufus’s engagement was announced. But Julia was caught by surprise when she was forced to watch and be the party to another announcement; hers with Ludlowe. It was just... *shakes head* I wanted to slap Julia’s parents for being so insensitive but I also thought it was what Julia deserved for her idiotic ideology of life and yes, for refusing someone perfectly eligible as Benedict, who was so eager in his proposal. There was a scene with her father and another with her mother, where her parents’ callous behavior was as clear as the daylight. The way they treated their daughters were plain horrible. Rufus’s sister, Mariah, was no less rude to the sisters. I laughed myself silly where Rufus finally got annoyed by her bullying around, especially about Sophia and how she’s not ‘good enough’ for him, and gives Mariah some ‘suggestions’ to divert her attentions elsewhere. :p
In all of the characters, I think Rufus was the one with a cool and reasonable head on his shoulders. He takes his sweet time to woo Sophia as she deserves, opening up a little about him in the process. He knew her absurd infatuation over Ludlowe, and so once, he relates his own tale and the blow his wife dealt him to make her understand that he knows how it feels. Sophia gradually begins to soften towards him, seeing Ludlowe for the crap he really is. It was very much apparent that they were connecting as she never had the hope of connecting with Ludlowe. Rufus also tells her that Ludlowe would’ve never been faithful to her. In one carriage scene, Rufus and Sophia become plenty close. I wished for love scenes between Rufus and Sophia but regrettably, there was none. I had to be happy with his efforts of convincing Sophia that their match could be so so good, if only she would open her eyes and see reason. But, umm... whatever he did was utterly delicious! After that, Sophia sort of knew that she can’t escape Rufus. Then she realizes that she doesn’t want to anymore.
Benedict was very concerned about Julia and didn’t know what to do. His friend, Upperton, who is generally a jolly fellow, but with a tad too much fondness for women and gambling, keeps poking him about things. Well, Upperton is just... Upperton. He has this humorous side that I loved a lot. He’s one of Benedict’s closest friends, and was there with him in quite a few scenes. In almost each of those, I had something to laugh about from his dialogues. It’s apparent that he hides a lot behind his jovial personality cause when he sobers up, he can be serious. He knew about Benedict’s love for Julia. Even though he was one of the people who signed the gambling sheets about Julia and Ludlowe, he is a bit embarrassed about it too. He wants Benedict to fight and not drink himself to oblivion hearing the news of Julia’s engagement. Soon enough, Benedict gets the chance too, when a few days later Julia comes secretively at night, offering him a scandalous proposition. She wants him to compromise her so that Ludlowe breaks off the engagement. Benedict is, at first, a bit baffled but he makes her understand that he loves her and if this is to happen, she will have to marry him. And that’s the best way isn’t it, to fend off Ludlowe? After all the idiocy throughout the story, Julia finally sees the reasoning behind Benedict’s words. It was so obvious that all he wants is to make her happy, even if he can’t give her a title. That very night they elope.
Shortly afterwards follows a duel, when they are found together after doing the deed and Ludlowe challenges Benedict. What goes around, comes around and all that. Ludlowe the hypocrite couldn’t take that Julia bested him, and humiliated him with Benedict. But I don’t think he saw it this way; that he is now in a position where he put his supposed best friend (he was shagging his fiancée) and many other husbands. He’s that big of an a$$! Benedict and Upperton already knew about Ludlowe’s a$$hatty behavior when they were students together. I wished Ludlowe to die in that duel so that I could bid him good-riddance but sadly, he doesn’t. Instead he injures Benedict badly. The last few chapters were pretty good and more action packed than the rest. I was still kind of cheering more for Rufus-Sophia than Julia-Benedict. Even though I started liking Sophia by then, I still couldn’t warm up to Julia that much. She took her own time to give the three words back to Benedict, which was utterly frustrating.
Overall, A Most Scandalous Proposal was a good read; the dialogues interesting and AMac’s writing admirable for a debut author. Upperton is getting the next book, and even though I previously read some disturbing (to me) piece of information about him, I’m quite eager to know him better. 4 stars.
PS: I seriously hope that the author doesn’t decide to torture us by giving Ludlowe (or Clivesden as he becomes later) a book, because I had a feeling of something like that... My response is a big NO!
This ARC was provided to me by Random House/Ballantine Books via edelweiss which didn’t influence my review and rating in any way.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
“Some things are worth the pain. They’re most definitely worth the risk.”
We encounter this quote very early on; in fact, it’s in the excerpt at the beginning of the book. It should really make no difference because the first time I read it, it was out of context. It was just present as one of those ploys to get you to want to read the book.
Boy, did it work.
I have a thing for romance, but I’m usually a very picky reader. I find most romance novels to be somewhat corny, badly plotted and over too soon. I don’t want a hero and a heroine that will get together in the last pages of the book after struggling against their feelings for most it. I want to feel the romance. I want to see it develop. I want to read a book that makes me feel like I was there, like I know these two characters, they’re my friends, and I was, somehow, a witness to what transpired between them.
Ashlyn Mcnamara does a pretty fine job of this in “A Most Scandalous Proposal”. Well, no. Let’s dispense with understatements. She does a brilliant job of it.
Julia St. Claire has spent a long time seeing her sister suffer because of unrequited love. And she has learned her lesson. She is determined to be different. She is determined not to feel.
Benedict Revelstoke has been Julia’s friend since childhood. He’s certainly never had any romantic feelings for her. He’s never had any romantic feelings for anyone. But when Julia’s parents conspire to have her married to the same man Sophia has been in love with, Benedict discovers he’s been deluding himself. Julia is not merely his friend. She has never been merely his friend.
This, however, is not only Julia’s story. It’s also Sophia’s story. And it’s such a completely different story. Sophia has been in love for years, or so she thinks. But when she’s caught in a situation she never expected to find herself in, she’s confronted with the idea that love is not always about sighs and drama. Love, sometimes, is calm and quiet. Love can, sometimes, sneak up on you.
What a special treat it was for me to get both sides of the story in the same book. The kind of love that knocks you down, and the kind of love that you never see coming. For me, this is what a romance novel is supposed to be about. Characters that take a journey and invite you along for the ride. Heroines that make you root for them. And, of course, heroes that make you sigh.
I have neglected to mention him before, but I must say that Rufus is my absolute favorite part about the book. Benedict I expected to like. He, however, was a pleasant surprise. And, isn’t that what it’s all about? Isn’t this why we read romance in the first place?
To recap, this is a wonderful debut, very well-written, engaging, and with the little bit of soul that all good romances need. I’ll be sure to pick up the next book (Upperton, I’m so glad it’s about you!), and any that come after. You should do the same.
Ashlyn Macnamara makes her debut with this stunning novel. A Book about family, friends, love and despair. Another great find from netgalley!
The Sisters St Claire are picky to say the least. Sophia has been in "love" with one man for five long years, turning away prospective groom after prospective groom. Julia has refused any type of marriage proposal where there might be affection. Determined to not let herself fall into the trap of love.
While reading the famous betting book at White's Benedict Revelstoke discovers a marriage bet placed by his boyhood rival about his childhood best friend. Immediately he rushes to her rescue, while warning her about the impending "courtship" he takes Julia on to the floor and a dance of duos begins.
Sophia, following the "love of her life" wanting only to capture his attention but knowing for some reason he wants nothing to do with her. Escaping with an impending migraine, she finds herself suddenly awakening from a blackout with an unknown savior. Her "love" manages to implicate them and suddenly the two find themselves engaged and now the Earl of Clivesden is free to play his games.
This was a wonderful story of family loyalties.. Julia is determined to protect Sophia's tender feelings. Refusing to fall in with her mother's scheming. Under no circumstances will she accept the unwanted proposal.. but sadly her parents will. While Julia has refused to accept that there can be love in a relationship, that sometimes love survives and that it doesn't always destroy. She finds that the only way to escape a marriage of betrayal she must rely on the one person who has always been there. Who has always loved her..
Sophia on the other hand must learn to let go of the man who wasn't. Really only a supposition of her imagination. The only true goodness to this man was that he didn't really exist. He never made advances or promises he was just so very purty *grins*. But she slowly learns that real love doesn't have to be full of drama and huge emotions but rather can be a gentle rain.. A Slow sensual slide into sensation.
I enjoyed this book immensely and plan on enjoying Ms MacNamara's writing for a long time to come
Shauni
This review is based on the ARC of A Most Scandalous Proposal provided by netgalley and is scheduled to be released on February 26, 2013
So sweet and adorable! A Most Scandalous Proposal was a fantastic book, absolutely excellent.
I LOVE romances where the couple have been best friends for years and begin to realize that they are in love with each other. In any setting, YA or adult, I love that concept. It just seems so sweet to me. So, this book was already guaranteed to have a few points in its favor. And it went above and beyond that to become an excellent romance.
This book has two couples featured in it, though the main one is Julia and Benedict, so let me start with them.
Julia is disillusioned about love. She hasn't seen any good examples of it and has therefore decided to do without it. Her reluctance to admit any romantic love could have been frustrating, but I think it was handled well. And she didn't stick to it out of sheer stubbornness. Once faced with the exact kind of marriage that she wanted, she realizes that it isn't what she wants. And so comes about the "scandalous proposal." But besides that, Julia was a nice character. She was strong, refusing to bow to other's wishes, and loyal, always there for her sister.
Benedict was an absolute sweetheart. He's been in love with Julia since they were young, though he hadn't done anything about it. Until he realizes that Julia was looking for a husband. Then he puts forth all his effort into winning his best friend turned true love. His persistence was charming and he never gave up in the face of Julia's reluctance. But, he was still protective of her. When she comes to him with her "proposal," his first thought is of the consequences for her. It was just so sweet. Their romance was adorable, tempered with just the right amount of sparks. I adored them together.
The other couple is Julia's sister, Sophia, and the Earl of Highgate, Rufus. Their relationship was different but no less sweet. I don't want to give away the details of their romance. I'll leave that to be a surprise :) But it is wonderfully done.
The plot started off a little slow, until about a quarter in. Then, it picked up and really got me hooked. There are a couple of minor surprises on the way the keep the book from being totally predictable. But, we do have the beloved happy ever after romance ending. It was sweet and perfect.
A Most Scandalous Proposal is a wonderful romance. Any lovers of the genre should read it.
Ashlyn Macnamara’s smart and sexy debut is a pleasure to read and should earn a place for her in the annals of talented historical romance authors.
Benedict Revelstoke is shocked, no alarmed to find his childhood friend, Miss Julia St. Clare, the object of a wager in the infamous betting book at White’s. As if the bet itself wasn’t outrageous enough, the wager’s been placed by the man who hopes to land Julia. The same man that Julia’s sister, Sophia, finds herself desperately in love with--William Ludlowe. When Benedict learns that Julia means to accept Ludlowe’s suit because of a misguided notion, he makes a practical counter offer.
This story has been touted as a take on Sense and Sensibility and I can certainly see the parallels. But in my mind, this story is extremely original, even with its nod to Austen, in its realistic portrayal of all the characters’ circumstances and emotional reactions to said circumstances. Julia’s desire to please her parents, to sacrifice herself to Ludlowe in order to save Sophia from unrequited affection and to settle herself into the unhappy life she thinks she deserves, all ring true. Macnamara’s talent with language and her deft turn of phrase will have you eagerly re-reading passages. Though Sophia’s story arc takes a few twists and turns and I did find myself wanting to strike her with a heavy object from time to time, things end on a very satisfying note. Throughout Sophia’s storyline, her emotions and reactions show her to be a layered and textured character.
Usually I take a few turns with the hero, just to get their measure, both physically and mentally, but Benedict is so finely written that I could picture him in my mind from the beginning and he only rose in my estimation with each page. Even when the characters reach a turning point, I couldn’t help cheering for them because they were so “real” and behaved like people instead of clichéd, cookie-cutter, tried-and-true characters. That is a feat not easily achieved and Macnamara does it with aplomb. Plus the sensuality of this piece is smoothly done, especially in a friends-to-lovers piece where things can sometime seem awkward in that transition.
I highly recommend this book and can’t wait for this author’s next book.
Julia St Claire has no desire for romantic entanglements. For the last five years, her sister Sophia has nursed a serious case of unrequited love for a gentleman of the ton. Watching Sophia pine away for nothing convinces Julia that a marriage of convenience is by far the best way to go. As long as Julia gets to choose the man she will have to tolerate for the remainder of her life.
Benedict Revelstroke is the second son of a Marquis with no title and very little income. Since he has no duty to produce an heir, Benedict figures to spend his time and money on horse breeding instead of wasting it wooing a woman. That plan lasts until he discovers a rake’s intention to trick his childhood friend, Julia St Claire, into marriage.
Benedict has loved Julia since they were children. When she comes to him with her ridiculous scheme to marry without affection, he knows this is his only chance. He has only to stoke the flames he knows her capable of feeling, and show her he is the one man she can trust with her heart.
This story is not just about Benedict and Julia’s tempestuous and witty romance. It is really about the entire St Claire family and the romantic foibles that upend a family with more backbone than any other in England. Though somewhat confusing at times with so many plot threads going at once, this is a highly entertaining read.
I thoroughly enjoyed Ashlyn Macnamara's debut novel. It had everything I like in a book: good dialogue, romance, scandal and historical accuracy! As someone who has studied history, I often find myself distracted when reading books that take liberties with history, but with this book, the author has obviously spent time researching the era she places her story in, giving it credibility. I can easily imagine this story taking place for real.
Ashlyn's characters drew me in from the start, and I couldn't put the book down after I picked it up. I will be recommending it to everyone who will listen, because if this book is any indication, this author is headed for greatness in the literary world. I can't wait to read her next book!
This was the epitomy of Historical Romance. The scandal, the love, bravery and bravado. There was no down point to this book. I enjoyed the whole thing. The slightest touch of intimacy heats this story up just right. I look forward to more from this author.
Julia and Sophia are sisters, whom continue to turn down proposals from potential suitors.
But, one scandal after another has the girls pinned to men they don't feel they can marry. Can Benedict and Highgate help these woman see they are a perfect match for them?
What a great read - Ashlyn Macnamara doesn't travel the well-trodden road but takes her romantic storylines on some wildly entertaining detours. Devoted sisters Julia and Sophia each have a story to tell and a life to get on with, after fruitless years on the marriage mart. Great romantic leads and a great story!
Loved it! The dynamic between sisters and then couples was wonderful. I loved how each man brought out the true woman in both Julia and Sophia. The only thing I'd change is that I want more. More Rufus more Benedict and more Upperton. I didn't want to put it down.
Want a hot historical romance that will leave you close to drooling between the pages and fanning yourself from excitement! Ashlyn is great! I loved Benedict the stubborn best friend that you will die for. Sometimes you don't realize when love is staring you in the face!
A Most Scandalous Proposal was not what I expected, it was better. Miss MacNamara has hit it out of the part with her debut novel. A stubborn, but loyal heroine, a passionate hero and a lecherous villain all come together to make a fast paced, spicy read with well developed characters and plot.