Eli's kiss tortured her senses. And the feel of his body pressed against hers created a ball of lust that gathered in her stomach and then surged upward and out.
Ugh. To me, that sounds like she's vomiting!
Jenna Ryan is very old-school, using lots of euphemisms in her romantic scenes and sex scenes so that sometimes they're indecipherable! Also, her dialogue is truly, truly terrible.
The Blume family and Bellam families that apparently solely populate Raven's Hollow have links to each other all over the place, going back hundreds of years, to the degree that I think the town is situated squarely in Incestville! I was uncomfortable with the thought that Sadie and Eli were linked not only by marriage, but blood as well!
Gratuitous dream sequences (a pet hate of mine) helped to drop some of the star rating, too.
But it's fast-paced, suspenseful in places, spooky in others, and I didn't spot the killer!