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260 pages, Paperback
First published July 1, 2013
Skylar is a teen detective wannabe, proud of her detective case and equipment passed down from her real detective grandfather. She loves adventure and mystery and getting her hands dirty.
When her parents lob her off to her aunt, uncle, and obnoxious, bullying cousin, she's fuming. But soon, the mystery of the Shadow Hills that are visible from her aunt and uncle's house keep her entertained. She starts to suspect evil goings-on up in those hills.People speak of shadows moving around in the dark of night, a circle of fire where witches cast spells, or even evil spirits dance around. Nothing good, whatever it is.
Having to deal with a new school—though granted, it's only temporary—and her unhelpful cousin being the only student she knows there, it's only the tip of the iceberg of her teenage dilemmas.
Witchcraft, mystery, a possibly possessed cousin, a possibly haunted attic, demonic spirits, human sacrifices, suspicions, new friends, old friends and resentment to parents all boil together in this cauldron bubble.
I wanted to read this book because the cover grabbed me straight away. I love this cover. Its sassy, bright, cosy mystery edge had me wanting to know what it was about. I love humorous mystery novels. The cosy kind that keep you entertained with feisty heroines and heroes and edge-of-your-seat suspense. The Scooby Doo of fiction, only slightly more mature.
This was good. But I was a little let down. It wasn't entirely what I was hoping for. Why?
Well, the main character Skylar is a little clueless at first. She's sweet, friendly, a little introvert. She doesn't really stand up for herself or know when to tell people to shove it. She's an easy target and gets pushed around a lot by her cousin, Gwendolyn, and then her 'friend' Kat. I mean, how long did it take her to realise Kat was a manipulative wench? I get that the author intends for Skylar to be clueless and a little slow on the uptake, so that she grows into herself. At the end, she does show her strength and does grow up and I was giving her a mental high five. But, boy, did it take some doing.
The novel itself is definitely better suited for a younger audience, but that's not to say I didn't enjoy it. I really did. Even being twenty-four years old. I found it unique and funny. It reminded me of books I used to read in my early teens. So, you can see what I mean about it not being exactly what I'd hoped.
I found the mystery intriguing but it wasn't quite used to its advantage. I wanted more mystery. More spookiness. I mean, she suspects there's a ghost in her attack and I was like, 'Ooooo goodie', but then it kind of dwindles off into nothing special or scary. A large chunk of the novel is spent following Kat and Skylar as they prepare 'spells' and do some gardening in their secret garden. I started to get a bit antsy because after several pages at once talking about witchcraft and the process of doing a spell, I thought, honestly, I really don't need the details. I want to know what happens next. The author has clearly paid a lot of attention to detail and done her homework. But, I don't need to know everything she knows. She could have cut out a lot of that and it would still have felt as real and interesting. More so, in fact.
As for certain events like the haunted attic, I found that they were left hanging. The family that lives nearby, and works for Gwendolyn's family, seem to know so much and yet don't tell us much.
Kat fancies the son, Carlos, and makes a love potion—well, that's not obsessive creepy—and Skylar does nothing to stop him drinking it. There's not much that happens after it. Skylar doesn't approve with Kat's love potion idea, but doesn't do much else to prevent it. It doesn't work anyway, but the knowledge of it not working is kind of just acknowledged with a—oh, yeah, it didn't work. I felt certain elements of the novel could have been done better, and when you add elements that are pretty interesting and creepy, but don't do much with them, it feels like it was just put in there to keep the plot going; to add a bit of intrigue but then not fulfill it.
I don't know. It was missing something. But, I still want to read the next books. Because the writing was good, it kept me hooked. The style, the idea of the teenage detective, was fun and quirky. I want to see Skylar grow. I want to see what other adventures she has. It's a decent read and is worth it if you like light mystery and teenage humour.
This author seems like a lovely woman, and I wish her all the best in writing. I'd love to read more about Skylar and her adventures. My rating...